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In the northern land of Sommerlund, it has been the custom for many centuries to send the children of the Warrior Lords to the monastery of Kai. There they are taught the skills and disciplines of their noble fathers.

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In olden times, during the Age of the Black Moon, the Darklords waged war on Sommerlund. The conflict was a long and bitter trial of strength that ended in victory for the Sommlending at the great battle of Maakengorge. King Ulnar and the allies of Durenor broke the Darklord armies at the pass of Moytura and forced them back into the bottomless abyss of Maakengorge. Vashna, mightiest of the Darklords, was slain upon the sword of King Ulnar, called Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Since that age, the Darklords have vowed vengeance upon Sommerlund and the House of Ulnar.

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In olden times, during the Age of the Black Moon, the Darklords waged war on Sommerlund. The conflict was a long and bitter trial of strength that ended in victory for the Sommlending at the great battle of Maakengorge. King Ulnar and the allies of Durenor broke the Darkland armies at the pass of Moytura and forced them back into the bottomless abyss of Maakengorge. Vashna, mightiest of the Darklords, was slain upon the sword of King Ulnar, called Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Since that age, the Darklords have vowed vengeance upon Sommerlund and the House of Ulnar.

You are Lone Wolf, a young Kai initiate who was learning the secret skills of the Kai Lords. Two days ago, your peaceful country was plunged into war when a vast Darklord army suddenly invaded Sommerlund and completely destroyed the Kai Monastery. All the Kai Lords were in attendance for the feast of Fehmarn, and all were killed as the monastery was surrounded and destroyed, the walls collapsing in on the assembled company. You, the only Kai Lord to survive the massacre, vowed then to avenge their deaths. You knew your first task had to be to warn the King, for without the Kai Lords to lead her armies, your country, Sommerlund, would be unable to mobilize in time to drive the Darklords back.

Your journey to the capital was perilous indeed. The enemy had overrun much of the country and were marching upon Holmgard, the capital itself. But despite the many dangers, you fought your way through to the capital and delivered your warning to the Kings court. There you were greatly praised for your skill and bravery but told your mission was not complete: with the Kai Lords dead, there remained only one power in all of Magnamund that could save your people from the Darklordsthe Sommerswerd.

After the defeat of Vashna, the Sommerswerd had been bestowed upon the allies of Durenor as a mark of trust and allegiance that exists between the two kingdoms. In return, King Alin of Durenor gave Sommerlund a magnificent golden ring bearing the royal arms of Durenor. This ring is known as the Seal of Hammerdal. At that time, King Alin vowed that if ever the shadow of the west should rise again to threaten Sommerlund, Durenor would come to the aid of her ally.

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Food

You will need to eat regularly during your adventure. If you do not have any food when you are instructed to eat a Meal, you will lose 3 ENDURANCE points. If you have chosen the Kai Discipline of Hunting as one of your five skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.

Healing Potion
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This can restore 4 ENDURANCE points to your total when swallowed after combat. There is only enough for one dose. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be told then of their effect. All Healing Potions are Backpack Items.

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This can restore 4 ENDURANCE points to your total when swallowed after combat. It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat. There is only enough for one dose. If you discover any other potions during the adventure, you will be told then of their effect. All Healing Potions are Backpack Items.

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In the Mongoose Publishing edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.

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In the Collectors Edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.

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(Title Page) Replaced seastorms with sea-storms. Replaced FIRE ON THE WATER with Fire on the Water,.

(Dedication) Replaced Ryan and with Ryan, and.

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The Story so Far) Replaced Darklord armies with Darkland armies.

(The Game Rules) Replaced all occurrences of ie with i.e.. Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied. Split the last paragraph into two starting with Through your experiences. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced Chart. (you with Chart. (You. Replaced Items). with Items.). Replaced each occurrence of Action Chart. (ie with Action Chart (i.e.. Replaced 14.) with 14).. Replaced points.) with points).. Replaced ENDURANCE points and with ENDURANCE points, and.

(Kai Disciplines) Replaced Kai Discipline section with Kai Disciplines section. Capitalized all occurrences of discipline. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced food or with food, or. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced will be of use with may be of use.

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(Equipment) Removed the 1=, 2=, in the How to carry your equipment section. These were obviously carried over from Flight from the Darks random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced two weapons with two Weapons. Replaced slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise with slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise. Replaced to your total when swallowed with to your total, when swallowed. Added You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat. in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.

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(Equipment) Removed the 1=, 2=, in the How to carry your equipment section. These were obviously carried over from Flight from the Darks random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced two weapons with two Weapons. Replaced slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise with slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise. Replaced to your total when swallowed with to your total, when swallowed. Added You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat. in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Added It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat. in harmony with the Collectors Edition.

(Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of the book. Removed on the last page of the book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced reduced to zero with reduced to zero or below. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced. Replaced at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. with at which point that combatant is declared dead..

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(78) Replaced risk drowning with you will surely drown, the wording in the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced on to with onto.

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(78) Replaced risk drowning with you will surely drown in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced on to with onto.

(79) Replaced both occurrences of Kai lord with Kai Lord. Replaced enemies, eg Helghasts, in with enemies (e.g. Helghast) in. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Durenese or with Durenese, or. Replaced much preparation for with much to prepare for.

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(103) Added if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it after add this to your Action Chart based on a similar change in the Mongoose Publishing edition.

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(103) Added if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it after add this to your Action Chart based on a similar change in the Collectors Edition.

(106) Added (The Magic Spear is a weapon-like Special Item. Remember that you only get a Weaponskill bonus in this fight against the Helghast if you have Weaponskill with Spear. to the end of the second paragraph.

(113) Replaced magicians guild with Magicians Guild. Replaced overboard, and with overboard and.

(118) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Hammerdal range with Hammerdal Range.

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Replaced Hammerdal mountains with Hammerdal Mountains. Replaced Hammerdal range with Hammerdal Range. Replaced Spear, so with Spear so.

(300) Replaced Wanlo with wanlo.

(301) Replaced Daggers and with Daggers, and.

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(302) Replaced climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the with set about a quick search of these from the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced whatever Items with whatever items.

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(302) Replaced climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the with set about a quick search of these in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced whatever Items with whatever items.

(305) Replaced on to with onto.

(306) Replaced score reaches zero with score reaches zero or below. Replaced points to zero with points to zero or below. Replaced to try and with to try to.

(308) Replaced Each dice with Each die.

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(321) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord.

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(328) Replaced If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113 with If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, turn immediately to 113 based in part on the Mongoose Publishing edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to Section 204.

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(328) Replaced If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113 with If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, turn immediately to 113 based in part on the Collectors Edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to Section 204.

(331) Replaced Dagger and with Dagger, and. Replaced these Items with these items.

(332) Added This creature is immune to Mindblast. to the end of the final paragraph. Replaced forest, and with forest and.

(333) Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained.