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+Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
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Revision 1.5 2007/06/30 16:30:03 Simon Osborne
Updated to 0.12. Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues.
<p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>half-way</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>bowstring and</quote> with <quote>bowstring, and</quote>, <quote>range and</quote> with <quote>range, and</quote>, and <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>efforts and</quote> with <quote>efforts, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>wire and</quote> with <quote>wire, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>appalling, and</quote> with <quote>appalling; and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>subside but</quote> with <quote>subside, but</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>suspiciously, but</quote> with <quote>suspiciously but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>reins, and</quote> with <quote>reins and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>reins, and</quote> with <quote>reins and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>market-place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>free but</quote> with <quote>free, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>oil</quote> with <quote>Oil</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Replaced <quote>climb; and</quote> with <quote>climb, and</quote>, and <quote>troops you</quote> with <quote>troops, you (awkward)</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>pain but</quote> with <quote>pain, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Jailer<ch.apos/> Keys</quote> with <quote>Gaoler<ch.apos/>s Keys</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>shot and</quote> with <quote>shot, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>unlocked and</quote> with <quote>unlocked, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>guard, and</quote> with <quote>guard and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>deep dark</quote> with <quote>deep, dark</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>crisscrossed</quote> with <quote>criss-crossed</quote>, <quote>free, and</quote> with <quote>free and</quote>, and <quote>greedily, and</quote> with <quote>greedily and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>Zakhans, and</quote> with <quote>Zakhans and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>overturned and</quote> with <quote>overturned, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>equipment, and</quote> with <quote>equipment and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>advice, and</quote> with <quote>advice and</quote>. Replaced <quote>water keeping</quote> with <quote>water, keeping</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>advice, and</quote> with <quote>advice and</quote>. Replaced <quote>water keeping</quote> with <quote>water, keeping</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>parched and</quote> with <quote>parched, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>swim but</quote> with <quote>swim, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>rib-cage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>Potion Alether</quote> with <quote>Potion of Alether</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Jailer<ch.apos/> Keys</quote> with <quote>Gaoler<ch.apos/>s Keys</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>body, and</quote> with <quote>body and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>guard<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>guards<ch.apos/></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>market-place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>strike and</quote> with <quote>strike, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>houses all</quote> with <quote>houses, all</quote> and <quote>first floor</quote> with <quote>first-floor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>swell and</quote> with <quote>swell, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>Jailer<ch.apos/> Keys</quote> with <quote>Gaoler<ch.apos/>s Keys</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/> Break</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>Break</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/> Break</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>Break</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>hall and</quote> with <quote>hall, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>slippery and</quote> with <quote>slippery, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Moved the Camouflage/Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>view and</quote> with <quote>view, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>may, or</quote> with <quote>may or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>corridor, and</quote> with <quote>corridor and</quote>. Replaced <quote>distance and</quote> with <quote>distance, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>strange luxuriant purple</quote> with <quote>strange, luxuriant, purple</quote>. Moved the Tracking/Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>grass, and</quote> with <quote>grass and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>door and</quote> with <quote>door, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>skin, that</quote> with <quote>skin that</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>leatherbound</quote> with <quote>leather-bound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>strange jelly-like</quote> with <quote>strange, jelly-like</quote> and <quote>sides and</quote> with <quote>sides, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-reaction</quote> with <quote>chain reaction</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-reaction</quote> with <quote>chain reaction</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>away and</quote> with <quote>away, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>shut and</quote> with <quote>shut, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>place and</quote> with <quote>place, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>gallery and</quote> with <quote>gallery, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>entrance, but</quote> with <quote>entrance but</quote> and <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>construction, and</quote> with <quote>construction and</quote> and <quote>Palace, that</quote> with <quote>Palace that</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>lungs; and</quote> with <quote>lungs, and</quote> and <quote>horrors for</quote> with <quote>horrors, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>lungs; and</quote> with <quote>lungs, and</quote> and <quote>horrors for</quote> with <quote>horrors, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>you, and</quote> with <quote>you and</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>door, and</quote> with <quote>door and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaults</quote> with <quote>somersaults</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Maouk who</quote> with <quote>Maouk, who</quote> and <quote>shadows, a dart</quote> with <quote>shadows<ch.emdash/>a dart</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>half-way</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>legs tearing</quote> with <quote>legs, tearing</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>long curved</quote> with <quote>long, curved</quote> and <quote>claws, its</quote> with <quote>claws<ch.emdash/>its</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>falls, but</quote> with <quote>falls but</quote> and <quote>indifference, and</quote> with <quote>indifference and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>bodies and</quote> with <quote>bodies, and</quote> and <quote>chest as</quote> with <quote>chest are as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>7-9</quote> with <quote>7-12</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>gold, but</quote> with <quote>gold but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkarim, and</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>wine, and</quote> with <quote>wine and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Vakar mountains</quote> with <quote>Vakar Mountains</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>town, and</quote> with <quote>town and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>town, and</quote> with <quote>town and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>ring, and</quote> with <quote>ring and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>tongues and</quote> with <quote>tongues, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>you, by</quote> with <quote>you by</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>sky but</quote> with <quote>sky, but</quote> and <quote>Main but</quote> with <quote>Main, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>small beady</quote> with <quote>small, beady</quote>. Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>blood and</quote> with <quote>blood, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>subsides; but</quote> with <quote>subsides, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>subsides; but</quote> with <quote>subsides, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Replaced <quote>battle-jerkins, pull</quote> with <quote>battle-jerkins pull</quote> and <quote>gratitude for</quote> with <quote>gratitude, for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>noise, and</quote> with <quote>noise and</quote>, <quote>death blow</quote> with <quote>death-blow</quote>, and <quote>terror but</quote> with <quote>terror, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>below, but</quote> with <quote>below but</quote>, <quote>blood, and</quote> with <quote>blood and</quote> and <quote>stiffen and</quote> with <quote>stiffen, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>market place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>face sending</quote> with <quote>face, sending</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>However for</quote> with <quote>However, for</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote> and <quote>muzzle-first</quote> with <quote>muzzle first</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote> and <quote>muzzle-first</quote> with <quote>muzzle first</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>surface and</quote> with <quote>surface, and</quote> and <quote>gutteral</quote> with <quote>guttural</quote>. Italicised <quote><onomatopoeia>crack</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a id="err295" idref="sect295">295</a>) Added the sentences, <quote>When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold. Your attack is silent and deadly.</quote> These are copied from 236. <quote>Turn to 236</quote> is now replaced with <quote>If you wish to search the guard<ch.apos/>s body, turn to 207. If you decide to ignore the body, hurry into the Itikar<ch.apos/>s pen and turn to 224.</quote> This retains the text for the Mind Over Matter option, while fixing the out-of-place wording if you never untied the guard<ch.apos/>s money pouch. (See also the <a idref="err236">errata for sections 236</a>, <a idref="err357">357</a>, and <a idref="err389">389</a>.) Perhaps Joe Dever originally intended for there to be a Random Number pick even when you used Mind Over Matter and then made Mind Over Matter an automatic victory against the sentry but he seems to have forgotten to change the wording for the Random Number pick.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>Zakhan, others</quote> with <quote>Zakhan. Others</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>behind, and</quote> with <quote>behind and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>out but</quote> with <quote>out, but</quote> and <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>half-way</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>obey, and</quote> with <quote>obey and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>obey, and</quote> with <quote>obey and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote>boomsail</quote> with <quote>boom-sail</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>collar bone</quote> with <quote>collarbone</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>surprise, their weapons</quote> with <quote>surprise; their weapons</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>blood but</quote> with <quote>blood, but</quote> and <quote>back-breaking</quote> with <quote>backbreaking</quote>. Replaced <quote>Koneshi mountains</quote> with <quote>Koneshi Mountains</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkarim but</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>market-place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Replaced <quote>craft, is</quote> with <quote>craft is</quote> and <quote>forward and</quote> with <quote>forward, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>half-way</quote> and <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>behind you but</quote> with <quote>behind you, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>behind you but</quote> with <quote>behind you, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>yellow and</quote> with <quote>yellow, and</quote> and <quote>herb, and</quote> with <quote>herb and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>below but</quote> with <quote>below, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect351">351</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circle</quote> with <quote>semicircle</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect352">352</a>) Replaced <quote>place, and</quote> with <quote>place and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect353">353</a>) Replaced <quote>Cryptspawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote> and <quote>fire but</quote> with <quote>fire, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect353">353</a>) Replaced <quote>Cryptspawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote> and <quote>fire but</quote> with <quote>fire, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect354">354</a>) Replaced <quote>deck but</quote> with <quote>deck, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a id="err357" idref="sect357">357</a>) Deleted the words <quote>forgets about his scattered gold and</quote> from the third sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect361">361</a>) Replaced <quote>boomsail</quote> with <quote>boom-sail</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect370">370</a>) Replaced <quote>stranger, and</quote> with <quote>stranger and</quote>. Replaced <quote>falls to zero</quote> with <quote>falls to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points to zero</quote> with <quote>points to zero or below</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect372">372</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect374">374</a>) Replaced <quote>happening, you</quote> with <quote>happening; you</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect375">375</a>) Replaced <quote>blow, and</quote> with <quote>blow and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect375">375</a>) Replaced <quote>blow, and</quote> with <quote>blow and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect376">376</a>) Replaced <quote>white-washed</quote> with <quote>whitewashed</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect380">380</a>) Replaced <quote>helm but</quote> with <quote>helm, but</quote> and <quote>bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect380">380</a>) Replaced <quote>helm but</quote> with <quote>helm, but</quote> and <quote>bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect382">382</a>) Replaced the choice at the end of this section to match those in <a idref="sect288">Section 288</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect385">385</a>) Replaced <quote>seering</quote> with <quote>searing</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a id="err389" idref="sect389">389</a>) Deleted the words <quote>forgets about his gold and</quote> from the second sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>pen, combat</quote> with <quote>pen; combat</quote> and <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect394">394</a>) Replaced <quote>madman, as</quote> with <quote>madman as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect395">395</a>) Replaced <quote>it, and</quote> with <quote>it and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect396">396</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>spirals stairs</quote> with <quote>spiral stairs</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect400">400</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect400">400</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote> and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.43 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
+
+Revision 1.42 2007/02/07 15:18:00 Simon Osborne
+Correctly credited Gary Chalk as the map illustrator (copy/paste error).
+
Revision 1.41 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne
Minor period omissions corrected.
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<illustration>
<meta>
- <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
+ <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
</meta>
<instance src="map.jpg" width="784" height="598" class="html"></instance>
<instance src="map.pdf" width="784" height="598" class="pdf"></instance>
<p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>table, and</quote> with <quote>table and</quote> and <quote>pulled and</quote> with <quote>pulled, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Reworded the sentence <quote>(Mark this as a Special Item<ch.ellips/>)</quote> to match the wording from <a idref="sect16">section 16</a>. The original wording is misleading. Replaced <quote>you but</quote> with <quote>you, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Capitalized each occurrence of the item <quote>Ticket</quote>. Replaced <quote>river boat</quote> with <quote>riverboat</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>siege works</quote> with <quote>siege-works</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>siege works</quote> with <quote>siege-works</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>body and, as</quote> with <quote>body, and as</quote>, <quote>presence and</quote> with <quote>presence, and</quote> and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>invocation and</quote> with <quote>invocation, and</quote>, <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>, and <quote>men but, as</quote> with <quote>men, but as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>vanished: the</quote> with <quote>vanished; the</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>pikeheads</quote> with <quote>pike heads</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>puddles and</quote> with <quote>puddles, and</quote>, <quote>large shiny</quote> with <quote>large, shiny</quote>, and <quote>rope you</quote> with <quote>rope, you</quote>. Moved the Nexus choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>. Replaced <quote>hand bells</quote> with <quote>hand-bells</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>. Replaced <quote>hand bells</quote> with <quote>hand-bells</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-wood</quote> with <quote>toa wood</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>, <quote>shortlived</quote> with <quote>short-lived</quote>, and <quote>resistance and</quote> with <quote>resistance, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>side and</quote> with <quote>side, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>bow for, in</quote> with <quote>bow, for in</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>heart and</quote> with <quote>heart, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>knuckleduster</quote> with <quote>knuckle-duster</quote> and <quote>knuckleduster and, judging</quote> with <quote>knuckleduster, and judging</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>knuckleduster</quote> with <quote>knuckle-duster</quote> and <quote>knuckleduster and, judging</quote> with <quote>knuckleduster, and judging</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Deleted a period in the middle of the second sentence.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) In the first choice, replaced <quote>Unless you have already done so, if you wish to approach the merchant<ch.ellips/></quote> with <quote>If you wish to approach the merchant<ch.ellips/></quote> It is actually impossible to have already approached the merchant at this point.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>old but</quote> with <quote>old, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>truth for</quote> with <quote>truth, for</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>forest of Eula</quote> with <quote>Forest of Eula</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>man and</quote> with <quote>man, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>man and</quote> with <quote>man, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Moved the Curing choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>. Altered list of items to initial capital letters.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>war horn</quote> with <quote>war-horn</quote> and <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>war horn</quote> with <quote>war-horn</quote> and <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>animal and</quote> with <quote>animal, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>merchants, but</quote> with <quote>merchants but</quote> and <quote>horses; not</quote> with <quote>horses: not</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>formula but</quote> with <quote>formula, but</quote>, <quote>heavy and</quote> with <quote>heavy, and</quote>, and <quote>awake but</quote> with <quote>awake, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>chainmail, strides</quote> with <quote>chainmail strides</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>QUARTERSTAFFS</quote> with <quote>QUARTERSTAVES</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>shock and</quote> with <quote>shock, and</quote>, <quote>pikeheads</quote> with <quote>pike heads</quote>, and <quote>breath but</quote> with <quote>breath, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>challenge and</quote> with <quote>challenge, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>challenge and</quote> with <quote>challenge, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>Soren and</quote> with <quote>Soren, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>Cyrilus<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Cyrilus<ch.apos/></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>cracked and</quote> with <quote>cracked, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>dead and</quote> with <quote>dead, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>lying and</quote> with <quote>lying, and</quote> and <quote>Chart, before</quote> with <quote>Chart before</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect114">114</a>) Replaced <quote>heart and, as</quote> with <quote>heart, and as</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>sunset you</quote> with <quote>sunset, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>forest of Eula</quote> with <quote>Forest of Eula</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>Rhem and</quote> with <quote>Rhem, and</quote> and <quote>found but</quote> with <quote>found, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-trees</quote> with <quote>toa-trees</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>Stornland<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Stornlands<ch.apos/></quote>, <quote>Sloats</quote> with <quote>sloats</quote>, <quote>companies and</quote> with <quote>companies, and</quote>, <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>, <quote>highway, and</quote> with <quote>highway and</quote>, and <quote>river-boat</quote> with <quote>riverboat</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>them, and</quote> with <quote>them and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>captain and</quote> with <quote>captain, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>interior but</quote> with <quote>interior, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>interior but</quote> with <quote>interior, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>lair and</quote> with <quote>lair, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>fatigue and</quote> with <quote>fatigue, and</quote> and <quote>body and</quote> with <quote>body, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>wheel but</quote> with <quote>wheel, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>behind and</quote> with <quote>behind, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>street and</quote> with <quote>street, and</quote> and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>Items, or</quote> with <quote>Items or</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Moved the choice regarding having been to the temple of Maaken into the first position. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Moved the choice regarding having been to the temple of Maaken into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>resistance</quote> with <quote>Resistance</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>unprepared and</quote> with <quote>unprepared, and</quote>, <quote>face, somersaulting</quote> with <quote>face somersaulting</quote>, and <quote>again you</quote> with <quote>again, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>crowd and</quote> with <quote>crowd, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>deterred and</quote> with <quote>deterred, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>time and</quote> with <quote>time, and</quote> and <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>time and</quote> with <quote>time, and</quote> and <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect165">121</a>) Replaced <quote>guild of city criers</quote> with <quote>Guild of City Criers</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>wagon but</quote> with <quote>wagon, but</quote> and <quote>bruised but</quote> with <quote>bruised, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>pirate and</quote> with <quote>pirate, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrate and</quote> with <quote>vibrate, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>pikehead</quote> with <quote>pike head</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Replaced <quote>ride but</quote> with <quote>ride, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>peril and</quote> with <quote>peril, and</quote> and <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>points), and</quote> with <quote>points) and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>Baknar or Kalkoth</quote> with <quote>baknar or kalkoth</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>stones but</quote> with <quote>stones, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>arena for</quote> with <quote>arena, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>arena for</quote> with <quote>arena, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Chart, before</quote> with <quote>Chart before</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>aid but</quote> with <quote>aid, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>archers and</quote> with <quote>archers, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>guardedness and</quote> with <quote>guardedness, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>small piggish</quote> with <quote>small, piggish</quote> and <quote>Chart), and</quote> with <quote>Chart) and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>small piggish</quote> with <quote>small, piggish</quote> and <quote>Chart), and</quote> with <quote>Chart) and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>aside and</quote> with <quote>aside, and</quote> and <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>dead and</quote> with <quote>dead, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>rest but</quote> with <quote>rest, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>hard unyielding</quote> with <quote>hard, unyielding</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>seconds but</quote> with <quote>seconds, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Moved the Divination choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>guildhouse</quote> with <quote>guild-house</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>bodyguards and</quote> with <quote>bodyguards, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Varettian plain</quote> with <quote>Varettian Plain</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Replaced <quote>competition and</quote> with <quote>competition, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>east and</quote> with <quote>east, and</quote>. Moved the Curing choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>..</quote> with <quote><ch.ellips/></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>warhammer and</quote> with <quote>warhammer, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>lightning fast</quote> with <quote>lightning-fast</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote>feet but</quote> with <quote>feet, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>doors and</quote> with <quote>doors, and</quote>, <quote>building and</quote> with <quote>building, and</quote>, and <quote>battle but, unlike</quote> with <quote>battle, but unlike</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>doors and</quote> with <quote>doors, and</quote>, <quote>building and</quote> with <quote>building, and</quote>, and <quote>battle but, unlike</quote> with <quote>battle, but unlike</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>power your</quote> with <quote>power, your</quote>, <quote>ground and</quote> with <quote>ground, and</quote>, <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>, and <quote>attack you</quote> with <quote>attack, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>huge fat-bellied</quote> with <quote>huge, fat-bellied</quote> and <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>cover and</quote> with <quote>cover, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>cover and</quote> with <quote>cover, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>here but</quote> with <quote>here, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>esteem for</quote> with <quote>esteem, for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>wineshops</quote> with <quote>wine shops</quote>. Replaced <quote>rivermen</quote> with <quote>river-men</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>Varetta and</quote> with <quote>Varetta, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>guard and</quote> with <quote>guard, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>workshop but</quote> with <quote>workshop, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>workshop but</quote> with <quote>workshop, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>fades and</quote> with <quote>fades, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>Chart), and</quote> with <quote>Chart) and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote> and <quote>wounded and</quote> with <quote>wounded, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>Swords and, as</quote> with <quote>Swords, and as</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>manouevre</quote> with <quote>manoeuvre</quote> and <quote>secure and</quote> with <quote>secure, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>spongy and</quote> with <quote>spongy, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>appears and</quote> with <quote>appears, and</quote>, <quote>fade you</quote> with <quote>fade, you</quote>, and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>appears and</quote> with <quote>appears, and</quote>, <quote>fade you</quote> with <quote>fade, you</quote>, and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote> and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.41 2007/02/07 15:18:00 Simon Osborne
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Revision 1.4 2007/07/01 22:50:07 Simon Osborne
Fixed Many Errata and non-errata issues. Updated to version 0.12.
<title>The Magiocracy of Dessi</title>
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- <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
+ <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
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<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>persistance</quote> with <quote>persistence</quote> and <quote>to bursting</quote> with <quote>to the bursting</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>view and, for</quote> with <quote>view, and for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote> and <quote>Lipo</quote> with <quote>Lio</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>flatstones</quote> with <quote>flagstones</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>flatstones</quote> with <quote>flagstones</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>Sweetdreams</quote> with <quote>Sweet dreams</quote> and <quote>ugly bearded</quote> with <quote>ugly, bearded</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>points), and</quote> with <quote>points) and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>fall but</quote> with <quote>fall, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>you but</quote> with <quote>you, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>fortess</quote> with <quote>fortress</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>Weaponskill</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>intact and</quote> with <quote>intact, and</quote>, <quote>cry and</quote> with <quote>cry, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>intact and</quote> with <quote>intact, and</quote>, <quote>cry and</quote> with <quote>cry, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>skull and</quote> with <quote>skull, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>warm and, as</quote> with <quote>warm, and as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>robes but, lying</quote> with <quote>robes, but lying</quote>, <quote>use and</quote> with <quote>use, and</quote>, <quote>chamber but, as</quote> with <quote>chamber, but as</quote> and <quote>helmet, and</quote> with <quote>helmet and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>louder but</quote> with <quote>louder, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>warm but</quote> with <quote>warm, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>Boari jungle</quote> with <quote>Boari Jungle</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Moved the Invisibility/Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>tracks, and</quote> with <quote>tracks and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>yards, when</quote> with <quote>yards when</quote> and <quote>light and</quote> with <quote>light, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>deeper but</quote> with <quote>deeper, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>points.)</quote> with <quote>points).</quote> and <quote>presence but</quote> with <quote>presence, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>arm and</quote> with <quote>arm, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber, but</quote> with <quote>chamber but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>chamber, but</quote> with <quote>chamber but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>deep and</quote> with <quote>deep, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai initiate</quote> with <quote>Kai Initiate</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced the second choice <quote>If you do not have a sword, you will have to abandon the door. Only the statue offers any hope of escape for you; <a idref="sect168">turn to 168</a>.</quote> with <quote>If you do not have a sword, <a idref="sect263">turn to 263</a>.</quote>. <a idref="sect168">Section 168</a> offers basically the same choice and is only forestalling the impending outcome in <a idref="sect263">Section 263</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>tunic but</quote> with <quote>tunic, but</quote>. Also deleted the <quote>(lose 2 <typ class="attributes">ENDURANCE</typ> points)</quote> since Nexus is supposed to prevent or reduce <typ class="attributes">ENDURANCE</typ> loss - not induce it. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>Kazan-Oud, they</quote> with <quote>Kazan-Oud; they</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>dagger and</quote> with <quote>dagger, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>scream but</quote> with <quote>scream, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>crossbow but</quote> with <quote>crossbow, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>lake and</quote> with <quote>lake, and</quote>, <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote> and <quote>storm but</quote> with <quote>storm, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>difficult that</quote> with <quote>difficult than</quote> and <quote>Sticky rope-like</quote> with <quote>Sticky, rope-like</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>Then gurgling</quote> with <quote>Then, gurgling</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>mouth and</quote> with <quote>mouth, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>wall but</quote> with <quote>wall, but</quote>, <quote>ceiling and</quote> with <quote>ceiling, and</quote> and <quote>has, and</quote> with <quote>has and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>wall but</quote> with <quote>wall, but</quote>, <quote>ceiling and</quote> with <quote>ceiling, and</quote> and <quote>has, and</quote> with <quote>has and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>accord and</quote> with <quote>accord, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Elzian, he</quote> with <quote>Elzian,<ch.apos/> he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>hand but</quote> with <quote>hand, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>envelopes</quote> with <quote>envelops</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>dim diffused</quote> with <quote>dim, diffused</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>pieces, and</quote> with <quote>pieces and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>sleep and</quote> with <quote>sleep, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>heard and</quote> with <quote>heard, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>undisturbed, not</quote> with <quote>undisturbed: not</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>go but, as</quote> with <quote>go, but as</quote> and <quote>mace but</quote> with <quote>mace, but</quote>. Moved the Lore-circle of the Spirit choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>hole and</quote> with <quote>hole, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>face, and</quote> with <quote>face and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>deserted and</quote> with <quote>deserted, and</quote> and <quote>beam but</quote> with <quote>beam, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>laughter and</quote> with <quote>laughter, and</quote>, <quote>distance and</quote> with <quote>distance, and</quote>, <quote>fever but</quote> with <quote>fever, but</quote> and <quote>two and</quote> with <quote>two, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>laughter and</quote> with <quote>laughter, and</quote>, <quote>distance and</quote> with <quote>distance, and</quote>, <quote>fever but</quote> with <quote>fever, but</quote> and <quote>two and</quote> with <quote>two, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>others and</quote> with <quote>others, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>narrow and, as</quote> with <quote>narrow, and as</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>staff but</quote> with <quote>staff, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>you and, in</quote> with <quote>you, and in</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>lake and</quote> with <quote>lake, and</quote> and <quote>weapon, as</quote> with <quote>weapon as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>helmet, and</quote> with <quote>helmet and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>more you</quote> with <quote>more, you</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>more you</quote> with <quote>more, you</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-mail</quote> with <quote>chainmail</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>crumbling and</quote> with <quote>crumbling, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>wall but</quote> with <quote>wall, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>crow and</quote> with <quote>crow, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect203">203</a>) Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>rope, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect203">203</a>) Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>rope, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>take but, as</quote> with <quote>take, but as</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline and</quote> with <quote>Discipline, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>feet and</quote> with <quote>feet, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>eyes and</quote> with <quote>eyes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="sect164">Turn to 164</a></quote> with <quote><a idref="sect165">Turn to 165</a></quote>. All other paths leading to <a idref="sect164">Section 164</a> came through <a idref="sect277">Section 277</a> which involves falling into a pit. All paths leading to <a idref="sect165">Section 165</a> involved getting ensnared in a booby trap similar to the trap in <a idref="sect223">Section 223</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>Weaponskill</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>blow and</quote> with <quote>blow, and</quote>. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>flood-next</quote> with <quote>flood - next</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>eyes and</quote> with <quote>eyes, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>staircase, and</quote> with <quote>staircase and</quote>. Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>hands and</quote> with <quote>hands, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>hands and</quote> with <quote>hands, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>Herdos and</quote> with <quote>Herdos, and</quote> and <quote>level, and</quote> with <quote>level and</quote>. Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Replaced <quote>now and</quote> with <quote>now, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>trunk and, after</quote> with <quote>trunk, and after</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<chendash/>8</quote> with <quote>3<ch.endash/>8</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>trunk and, after</quote> with <quote>trunk, and after</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>8</quote> with <quote>3<ch.endash/>8</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>spine and, to</quote> with <quote>spine, and to</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>advance but</quote> with <quote>advance, but</quote>, <quote>darkness and</quote> with <quote>darkness, and</quote> and <quote><a idref="sect186">turn to 186</a></quote> with <quote><a idref="sect289">turn to 289</a></quote>. Note that we chose <a idref="sect289">Section 289</a> instead of <a idref="sect49">Section 49</a> as noted in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Summer Special 1987</cite> newsletter.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>decay and, to</quote> with <quote>decay, and to</quote> and <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>deserted but</quote> with <quote>deserted, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>locked but</quote> with <quote>locked, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>sand and</quote> with <quote>sand, and</quote>, <quote>Psi-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Psi-surge and</quote> and <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>sand and</quote> with <quote>sand, and</quote>, <quote>Psi-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Psi-surge and</quote> and <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>rests, and</quote> with <quote>rests and</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>heavy and</quote> with <quote>heavy, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>statue and</quote> with <quote>statue, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>power-staves and</quote> with <quote>power-staves, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>to zero in</quote> with <quote>to zero or below in</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>to zero in</quote> with <quote>to zero or below in</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote><a idref="sect173">turn to 173</a></quote> with <quote><a idref="sect273">turn to 273</a></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>open and</quote> with <quote>open, and</quote>, <quote>mist and</quote> with <quote>mist, and</quote>, <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>, and <quote>darkness and</quote> with <quote>darkness, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>ahead but</quote> with <quote>ahead, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>combat for</quote> with <quote>combat, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>storm adds to</quote> with <quote>storm add to</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>storm adds to</quote> with <quote>storm add to</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>body and</quote> with <quote>body, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>them and</quote> with <quote>them, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote>click and</quote> with <quote>click, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Deleted the instruction to choose an unused random number.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>rapidly and</quote> with <quote>rapidly, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>rapidly and</quote> with <quote>rapidly, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>simultaneously and</quote> with <quote>simultaneously, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect318">318</a>) Replaced <quote>right and</quote> with <quote>right, and</quote> and <quote>ahead, and</quote> with <quote>ahead and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>maze but</quote> with <quote>maze, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect335">335</a>) Replaced <quote>hunch-backed</quote> with <quote>hunchbacked</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Replaced <quote>knees but</quote> with <quote>knees, but</quote> and <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>the pack are</quote> with <quote>the pack is</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>brighter and</quote> with <quote>brighter, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>presence but</quote> with <quote>presence, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>sound but</quote> with <quote>sound, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>light and</quote> with <quote>light, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>corridor the</quote> with <quote>corridor, the</quote>, <quote>back but</quote> with <quote>back, but</quote> and <quote>maze and</quote> with <quote>maze, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>trumpeteers</quote> with <quote>trumpeters</quote>, <quote>caravel and</quote> with <quote>caravel, and</quote> and <quote>impossible and</quote> with <quote>impossible, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series</quote> with <quote> <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>trumpeteers</quote> with <quote>trumpeters</quote>, <quote>caravel and</quote> with <quote>caravel, and</quote> and <quote>impossible and</quote> with <quote>impossible, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series</quote> with <quote> <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote> and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
+
Revision 1.5 2007/06/28 14:12:03 Simon Osborne
Updated to 0.12. Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues.
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>noon but</quote> with <quote>noon, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>blow but</quote> with <quote>blow, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Capitalised all Items on the list.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for each Meal missed</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>yellow-flanged</quote> with <quote>yellow-fanged</quote> and <quote>mercy but</quote> with <quote>mercy, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Altered list so that only the first letters of each item are capitalised.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>secure you</quote> with <quote>secure, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>narrow but</quote> with <quote>narrow, but</quote> and <quote>of milky</quote> with <quote>of a milky</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>life you</quote> with <quote>life, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>attack and</quote> with <quote>attack, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>despatched</quote> with <quote>dispatched</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>west bank</quote> with <quote>east bank</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Guildhouse</quote> with <quote>Guild-house</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>flames forcing</quote> with <quote>flames, forcing</quote>, <quote>creamy-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream-coloured</quote> and <quote>water and</quote> with <quote>water, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>years the</quote> with <quote>years, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>correct and</quote> with <quote>correct, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>stand and</quote> with <quote>stand, and</quote> and <quote>awful and</quote> with <quote>awful, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>above an</quote> with <quote>above, an</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>sight I<ch.apos/>ll</quote> with <quote>sight, I<ch.apos/>ll</quote> and <quote>that he</quote> with <quote>that, he</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>later it</quote> with <quote>later, it</quote> and <quote>freedom but</quote> with <quote>freedom, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>later it</quote> with <quote>later, it</quote> and <quote>freedom but</quote> with <quote>freedom, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>city and</quote> with <quote>city, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>attention they</quote> with <quote>attention, they</quote> and <quote>her and</quote> with <quote>her, and</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>female, she</quote> with <quote>female; she</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>fatigue your</quote> with <quote>fatigue, your</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>growl he</quote> with <quote>growl, he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>throat but</quote> with <quote>throat, but</quote> and <quote>You wish</quote> with <quote>If you wish</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) </p>
<p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>bow-strings</quote> with <quote>bowstrings</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>direction,</quote> with <quote>direction.</quote> and <quote>desperation one</quote> with <quote>desperation, one</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>hollow a</quote> with <quote>hollow, a</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>city but</quote> with <quote>city, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) </p>
<p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>skin but</quote> with <quote>skin, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>air but</quote> with <quote>air, but</quote> and <quote>punches but</quote> with <quote>punches, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>air but</quote> with <quote>air, but</quote> and <quote>punches but</quote> with <quote>punches, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai skill</quote> with <quote>Magnakai skill</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>fire but</quote> with <quote>fire, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>tunnel a</quote> with <quote>tunnel, a</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>tunnel a</quote> with <quote>tunnel, a</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>Kraan and</quote> with <quote>Kraan, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote> and <quote>bound you</quote> with <quote>bound, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>silently pillar by pillar until</quote> with <quote>silently, pillar by pillar, until</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>grass land</quote> with <quote>grassland</quote>, <quote>suprisingly</quote> with <quote>surprisingly</quote> and <quote>Guyuk the tavern owner greets</quote> with <quote>Guyuk, the tavern owner, greets</quote>. Replaced <quote>four Gold Crowns</quote> with <quote>three Gold Crowns</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>you seemingly</quote> with <quote>you, seemingly</quote>. Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>terror his</quote> with <quote>terror, his</quote> and <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>terror his</quote> with <quote>terror, his</quote> and <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>hunting</quote> with <quote>Hunting</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>TWO MEALS</quote> with <quote>2 Meals</quote> and capitalised all items on the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>exit but</quote> with <quote>exit, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Capitalised all Items on the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>suicidal and</quote> with <quote>suicidal, and </quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>them and</quote> with <quote>them, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Capitalised all Items on the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>on to the</quote> with <quote>on the</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>wall a</quote> with <quote>wall, a</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>Inside a</quote> with <quote>Inside, a</quote> and <quote>respond and</quote> with <quote>respond, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>Inside a</quote> with <quote>Inside, a</quote> and <quote>respond and</quote> with <quote>respond, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>condition you</quote> with <quote>condition, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>, <quote>pirazin</quote> with <quote>Pirazin</quote>, <quote>o<ch.apos/>here</quote> with <quote>o<ch.apos/> here</quote> and <quote>offer but</quote> with <quote>offer, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>grip and with a scream of anguish you</quote> with <quote>grip, and with a scream of anguish, you</quote> and <quote>cold wet</quote> with <quote>cold, wet</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>dismount and</quote> with <quote>dismount, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>narrow and</quote> with <quote>narrow, and</quote> and <quote>worse the</quote> with <quote>worse, the</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>special items</quote> with <quote>Special Items</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>key and</quote> with <quote>key, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>I and</quote> with <quote>I, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>plains farmer</quote> with <quote>plains farmers</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>life it</quote> with <quote>life, it</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced both instances of <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>exhausted and</quote> with <quote>exhausted, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>confusion you</quote> with <quote>confusion, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>descend you</quote> with <quote>descend, you</quote>, <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote> and <quote>or Divination</quote> with <quote>or of Divination</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>shaft and</quote> with <quote>shaft, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>identities but</quote> with <quote>identities, but</quote> and <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>silver and</quote> with <quote>silver, and</quote> and <quote>button a</quote> with <quote>button, a</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>here and</quote> with <quote>here, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>ante-chamber</quote> with <quote>antechamber</quote> and <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>ante-chamber</quote> with <quote>antechamber</quote> and <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>scalp but</quote> with <quote>scalp, but</quote>, <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>sight, as</quote> with <quote>sight as</quote> and <quote>stygian</quote> with <quote>Stygian</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>softens, as</quote> with <quote>softens as</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>discovered but</quote> with <quote>discovered, but</quote> and capitalised all Items on the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>yell he</quote> with <quote>yell, he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced both instances of <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>approach a</quote> with <quote>approach, a</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) </p>
<p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>cream-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream coloured</quote>, <quote>instantly but</quote> with <quote>instantly, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>you he</quote> with <quote>you, he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) </p>
<p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>arrest!</quote> with <quote>arrest,</quote> and <quote>spying.</quote> with <quote>spying!</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>Vanta</quote> with <quote>Varta</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>him he</quote> with <quote>him, he</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>finished the</quote> with <quote>finished, the</quote> and <quote>arches and</quote> with <quote>arches, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>finished the</quote> with <quote>finished, the</quote> and <quote>arches and</quote> with <quote>arches, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>mind stranger</quote> with <quote>mind, stranger</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>willingly and</quote> with <quote>willingly, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolf</quote> with <quote>Doomwolf</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond a</quote> with <quote>beyond, a</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>yells <ch.apos/>Take</quote> with <quote>yells, <ch.apos/>Take</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>You must deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote> with <quote>Make the proper adjustments to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>You must deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote> with <quote>Make the proper adjustments to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon.</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>as Special</quote> with <quote>as a Special</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>wrong-doers</quote> with <quote>wrongdoers</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>wrong-doers</quote> with <quote>wrongdoers</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>key<ch.apos/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote>key,<ch.apos/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) </p>
<p>(<a idref="sect335">335</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote> and <quote>direction you</quote> with <quote>direction, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>hill a</quote> with <quote>hill, a</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced both instances of <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
+
Revision 1.5 2007/06/28 10:51:28 Simon Osborne
Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues. Updated to version 0.12.
<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>mid-summer<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>midsummer<ch.apos/>s</quote> and <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Capitalised both occurrences of <quote>prince</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>battle smoke</quote> with <quote>battle-smoke</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hornet<ch.apos/>s nest</quote> with <quote>hornets<ch.apos/> nest</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>battle smoke</quote> with <quote>battle-smoke</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Placed the choice leading to <a idref="sect102">Section 102</a> first in the list.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Placed the choice leading to <a idref="sect14">Section 14</a> first in the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>shield wall</quote> with <quote>shield-wall</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>bonuses</quote> with <quote>missile bonuses</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.Placed the choice leading to <a idref="sect139">Section 139</a> first in the list.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>Elite</quote> with <quote><ch.Eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect114">114</a>) Replace <quote>crosslegged</quote> with <quote>cross-legged</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>horse<ch.apos/>s hooves</quote> with <quote>horses<ch.apos/> hooves</quote>. Replaced <quote>melee</quote> with <quote>m<ch.ecirc/>l<ch.eacute/>e</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Replaced <quote>creamy-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream-coloured</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Replaced <quote>creamy-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream-coloured</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zags</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>pack move</quote> with <quote>pack moves</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>pack move</quote> with <quote>pack moves</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>north a</quote> with <quote>north, a</quote> and <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Bolas</quote> with <quote>bolas</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Changed the list of items to initial capitals.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>battle smoke</quote> with <quote>battle-smoke</quote>, <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>, and <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>battle smoke</quote> with <quote>battle-smoke</quote>, <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>, and <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stains</quote> with <quote>bloodstains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Changed the list of items to initial capitals.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>water-course</quote> with <quote>watercourse</quote> and <quote>inky-black</quote> with <quote>inky black</quote>. Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Placed the choice leading to <a idref="sect302">Section 302</a> first in the list.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>the fight last</quote> with <quote>the fight lasts</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>the fight last</quote> with <quote>the fight lasts</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>Imposter!</quote> with <quote>Impostor!</quote>. Replaced <quote>hornet<ch.apos/>s nest</quote> with <quote>hornets<ch.apos/> nest</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>unmistakeable</quote> with <quote>unmistakable</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>battle frenzy</quote> with <quote>battle-frenzy</quote>, <quote>war horns</quote> with <quote>war-horns</quote>, and <quote>shield wall</quote> with <quote>shield-wall</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>lifeforce</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>you, he</quote> with <quote>you; he</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-lust</quote> with <quote>bloodlust</quote> and <quote>curled-up</quote> with <quote>curled up</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>forego</quote> with <quote>forgo</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>crosslegged</quote> with <quote>cross-legged</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>toll of your</quote> with <quote>toll on your</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect271">271</a>) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced <quote>their muscular bodies</quote> with <quote>his muscular body</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack items or weapons</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items or Weapons</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>war horn</quote> with <quote>war-horn</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>bonuses</quote> with <quote>missile bonuses</quote> and <quote>. If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery,</quote> with <quote>and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>Cenerese druids</quote> with <quote>Cenerese Druids</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druids</quote> with <quote>Cener Druids</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect317">317</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack and weapons</quote> with <quote>Backpack and Weapons</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Elite</quote> with <quote><ch.Eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>heads</quote> with <quote>tails</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zag</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>Zaggonozod</quote> with <quote>Zagganozod</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>Zaggonozod</quote> with <quote>Zagganozod</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>out-distance</quote> with <quote>outdistance</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote> and <quote>book 11</quote> with <quote>Book 11</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote> and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
+
Revision 1.5 2007/06/27 18:18:51 Simon Osborne
Fixed many Errata and Non-Errata issues. Updated to version 0.12.
<p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>handweapon</quote> with <quote>hand weapon</quote>. Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Changed the presentation of the candidate sequence completions to fit our technologies. This includes changing the label of each sequence completion from the corresponding section to a letter and adding choices below the illustration which read, for example, <quote>If you believe A completes the sequence, <a idref="sect216">turn to 216</a>.</quote></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>army are</quote> with <quote>army is</quote> and <quote>jubliant</quote> with <quote>jubilant</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>army are</quote> with <quote>army is</quote> and <quote>jubliant</quote> with <quote>jubilant</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>handrail</quote> with <quote>hand-rail</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>lances, then</quote> with <quote>lances; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>Discipline of</quote> with <quote>Disciplines of</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>dragon-mount</quote> with <quote>dragonmount</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced <quote>warrior, I</quote> with <quote>warrior; I</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign>en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect65">65</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>lurking ready</quote> with <quote>lurking, ready</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>prevent</quote> with <quote>prevents</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>re-united</quote> with <quote>reunited</quote>.Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>the skill</quote> with <quote>this skill</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>the skill</quote> with <quote>this skill</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>steps confident</quote> with <quote>steps, confident</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>village the</quote> with <quote>village, the</quote> and <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>co-ordinates</quote> with <quote>coordinates</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Since <a idref="sect332">Section 332</a> was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a>. Since <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a> involves a greater loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Italicised <quote><foreign>en route</foreign></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>monolith so</quote> with <quote>monolith, so</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>paws, then</quote> with <quote>paws. Then</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolts</quote> with <quote>bolts</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhenga</quote> with <quote>Zhengha</quote> and <quote><a idref="sect157">turn 157</a></quote> with <quote><a idref="sect157">turn to 157</a></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>symetrically</quote> with <quote>symmetrically</quote> and <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>guide, then</quote> with <quote>guide; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>birdsong</quote> with <quote>bird song</quote>, <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spread before</quote> with <quote>laid before</quote> in the Illustration caption. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>spread before</quote> with <quote>laid before</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>see illustration XIV</quote> with <quote>see the accompanying illustration</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>see illustration XIV</quote> with <quote>see the accompanying illustration</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>Zhamin plateau</quote> with <quote>Zhamin Plateau</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>parapet you</quote> with <quote>parapet, you</quote> and <quote>Lorestone but</quote> with <quote>Lorestone, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>cliff face</quote> with <quote>cliff-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>resist, the</quote> with <quote>resist; the</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorma</quote> with <quote>Ryl<ch.apos/>aan noorna</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect64">Section 64</a>).</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect266">266</a>) Since <a idref="sect332">Section 332</a> was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a>. Since <a idref="sect299">Section 299</a> involves a greater loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Capitalised the list of items.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>flag-stoned</quote> with <quote>flagstoned</quote> and <quote>hands and</quote> with <quote>hands, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>flag-stoned</quote> with <quote>flagstoned</quote> and <quote>hands and</quote> with <quote>hands, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>. Replaced <quote>monster, then</quote> with <quote>monster; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>borehole</quote> with <quote>bore-hole</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>much-improved</quote> with <quote>much improved</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>cheekbones</quote> with <quote>cheek-bones</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>cheekbones</quote> with <quote>cheek-bones</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Changed the presentation of the candidate sequence completions to fit our technologies. This includes changing the label of each sequence completion from the corresponding section to a letter and adding choices below the illustration which read, for example, <quote>If you believe A completes the sequence, <a idref="sect14">turn to 14</a>.</quote> Also replaced <quote>directly below</quote> with <quote>below</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>Discipline of Hunting</quote> with <quote>Discipline of Huntmastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>thunder, then</quote> with <quote>thunder; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Added <quote>as well as any other missile bonuses</quote> to the end of the second paragraph.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-mail</quote> with <quote>chainmail</quote>. Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>collosal</quote> with <quote>colossal</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>collosal</quote> with <quote>colossal</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank</quote> with <quote>rank</quote> and <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
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+Revision 1.52 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne
+Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency.
+
Revision 1.51 2007/07/01 22:50:07 Simon Osborne
A minor Erratum fixed.
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>shoulder, then</quote> with <quote>shoulder; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote> and <quote>three rounds or less</quote> with <quote>four rounds or less</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>this weapon</quote> with <quote>this Weapon</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd had</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd has</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>throughfares</quote> with <quote>thoroughfares</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>half-closed</quote> with <quote>half closed</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>Tok</quote> with <quote>tok</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Reordered the first and second choices at the end of the section.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>north-by-north west</quote> with <quote>north by northwest</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect29">14</a>) Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>boomsail</quote> with <quote>boom-sail</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>Discipline</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>crystalizes</quote> with <quote>crystallizes</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>crystalizes</quote> with <quote>crystallizes</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>bosun</quote> with <quote>bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Changed the option that lead to <a idref="sect97">Section 97</a> to lead to <a idref="sect297">297</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) Replaced <quote>side-stepping</quote> with <quote>sidestepping</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>awe-struck</quote> with <quote>awestruck</quote>, <quote>balista</quote> with <quote>ballista</quote>, and <quote>balistas</quote> with <quote>ballistas</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>awe-struck</quote> with <quote>awestruck</quote>, <quote>balista</quote> with <quote>ballista</quote>, and <quote>balistas</quote> with <quote>ballistas</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Bosun</quote> with <quote>Bo<ch.apos/>sun</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>boomsail</quote> with <quote>boom-sail</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>Aye!<ch.apos/></quote> with <quote>Aye!</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>Aye!<ch.apos/></quote> with <quote>Aye!</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>Dsicipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>nadziranim</quote> with <quote>Nadziranim</quote> and <quote>Helgenag</quote> with <quote>Helenag</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>nadziranim</quote> with <quote>Nadziranim</quote> and <quote>Helgenag</quote> with <quote>Helenag</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>deserted, then</quote> with <quote>deserted; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>Kaltese</quote> with <quote>Kaltesee</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replace <quote>Plain</quote> with <quote>Plane</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>war horn</quote> with <quote>war-horn</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>war horn</quote> with <quote>war-horn</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>disciplines</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dot got!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dok tot!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> as the original does not seem to make any sense.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-lust</quote> with <quote>bloodlust</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dot got!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dok tot!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> as the original does not seem to make any sense.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>youself</quote> with <quote>yourself</quote> and <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>gold braided</quote> with <quote>gold-braided</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>fireswept</quote> with <quote>fire-swept</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>wind-</quote> with <quote>wind</quote>. Replaced <quote>watertight</quote> with <quote>water tight</quote>. Replaced <quote>zig-zags</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>. Replaced <quote>god Kai</quote> with <quote>God Kai</quote>. Replaced <quote>freelands</quote> with <quote>Freelands</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>watertight</quote> with <quote>water tight</quote>. Replaced <quote>zig-zags</quote> with <quote>zigzags</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>sword, Helshezag, and</quote> with <quote>sword Helshezag and</quote> and <quote>Zejar-deluga</quote> with <quote>Zejar-dulaga</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>icy-cold</quote> with <quote>icy cold</quote> and <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>throughly</quote> with <quote>thoroughly</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>wavers, then</quote> with <quote>wavers; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Merged the second and third paragraph. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Replaced <quote>eventaully</quote> with <quote>eventually</quote>. Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Reordered the choices at the end of the section.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>Scion-kai or more</quote> with <quote>Scion-kai or higher</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dot got!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Shez dok tot!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote> as the original does not seem to make any sense.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>melee</quote> with <quote>m<ch.ecirc/>l<ch.eacute/>e</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>meet, then</quote> with <quote>meet; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>Archmaster or more</quote> with <quote>Archmaster</quote>, since this is the highest rank it is possible to be when attempting this adventure.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>Pathmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>swordbelt</quote> with <quote>sword belt</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>Shadow shapes</quote> with <quote>Shadow-shapes</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>queuing</quote> with <quote>queueing</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>queuing</quote> with <quote>queueing</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>north-western</quote> with <quote>northwestern</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">300</a>) Replaced <quote>north-western</quote> with <quote>northwestern</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>fatique</quote> with <quote>fatigue</quote> and <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>open, so</quote> with <quote>open; so</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>SPEAR</quote> with <quote>Spear</quote>. Replaced <quote>AXE</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>DAGGER</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. Replaced <quote>60 KIKA</quote> with <quote>60 Kika</quote>. Replaced <quote>BOTTLE OF WINE</quote> with <quote>Bottle of Wine</quote>. Replaced <quote>POUCH OF TOBACCO</quote> with <quote>Pouch of Tobacco</quote>. Replaced <quote>PIPE</quote> with <quote>Pipe</quote>. Replaced <quote>IRON KEY</quote> with <quote>Iron Key</quote>. Replaced <quote>ENOUGH FOOD FOR 1 MEAL</quote> with <quote>Enough food for 1 Meal</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect317">317</a>) Replaced <quote>3 SWORDS</quote> with <quote>3 Swords</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 AXES</quote> with <quote>2 Axes</quote>. Replaced <quote>2 DAGGERS</quote> with <quote>2 Daggers</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 BOW</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>4 ARROWS</quote> with <quote>4 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 ROPE</quote> with <quote>Rope</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 POUCH OF HERBS</quote> with <quote>Pouch of Herbs</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced <quote>freelands</quote> with <quote>Freelands</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>freelands</quote> with <quote>Freelands</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>side-stepping</quote> with <quote>sidestepping</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>bow string</quote> with <quote>bowstring</quote> and <quote>weapon skill</quote> with <quote>missile</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>clifff</quote> with <quote>cliff</quote>. Replaced <quote>Primate or more</quote> with <quote>Primate or higher</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>north-by-north west</quote> with <quote>north by northwest</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>creatures<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>creature<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
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