Book 5: Two (ne) issues fixed:

1: site -> sight
8: cost you to 2 -> cost you 2

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        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-        <dd>Ryan Marshall</dd>
+        <dd>Ryan Marshall and Neil McGrory</dd>
       </dl>
 
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-      <p>It is early afternoon when the ramparts of the desert capital are first sighted on the horizon. You push your way through the cheering crew, and join the envoy at the prow of the ship. Beaming with pride, he hands you a telescope and invites you to view the land of his birth. The site is indeed breathtaking. You stare in fascination at the golden domes, minarets and green-tiled roofs shimmering beneath the desert sun, and marvel at the splendour of the Grand Palace, which dominates this magnificent city. Then you notice that from every golden turret of the palace flutters a long, black pennant. You ask the envoy of the meaning of the black flags. Horror floods across his face as he snatches the telescope from your hands. <quote>By the spirit of the Majhan! He is dead <ch.ellips/> The Zakhan is dead!</quote></p>
+      <p>It is early afternoon when the ramparts of the desert capital are first sighted on the horizon. You push your way through the cheering crew, and join the envoy at the prow of the ship. Beaming with pride, he hands you a telescope and invites you to view the land of his birth. The sight is indeed breathtaking. You stare in fascination at the golden domes, minarets and green-tiled roofs shimmering beneath the desert sun, and marvel at the splendour of the Grand Palace, which dominates this magnificent city. Then you notice that from every golden turret of the palace flutters a long, black pennant. You ask the envoy of the meaning of the black flags. Horror floods across his face as he snatches the telescope from your hands. <quote>By the spirit of the Majhan! He is dead <ch.ellips/> The Zakhan is dead!</quote></p>
       <p>As the bad news spreads through the ship, you pray that the peace treaty will be signed and honoured by the Zakhan<ch.apos/>s successor. However, the envoy is less than hopeful.</p>
       <p>The harbour of Barrakeesh is deserted save for a handful of citizens clad in black, and the only sound that greets you is the toll of a funeral bell, echoing through the harbour on this day of mourning. Then a horse-drawn carriage enters the harbour square, escorted by the cavalry of the Palace Guard. It halts, and a dour man in turquoise robes steps out to meet you.</p>
       <p><quote>A thousand greetings, Lone Wolf, I am Maouk, and I welcome you to our city on behalf of my master, his most sublime magnificence, Zakhan Kimah.</quote></p>
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      <meta><title>8</title></meta>
 
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-      <p>You channel all your Kai skill into detecting the number that will open the door; it is a strenuous task, and one that demands great concentration. Gradually, the image of two numbers<ch.emdash/>six and seven<ch.emdash/>begin to form in your mind. The image is hazy, and you<ch.apos/>re not sure if the number is sixty-seven or seventy-six. You are exhausted by your efforts, and they have cost you to 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. Deduct these from your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total before choosing between the two possibilities.</p>
+      <p>You channel all your Kai skill into detecting the number that will open the door; it is a strenuous task, and one that demands great concentration. Gradually, the image of two numbers<ch.emdash/>six and seven<ch.emdash/>begin to form in your mind. The image is hazy, and you<ch.apos/>re not sure if the number is sixty-seven or seventy-six. You are exhausted by your efforts, and they have cost you 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. Deduct these from your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total before choosing between the two possibilities.</p>
       <choice idref="sect67">If you decide to choose sixty-seven, <link-text>turn to 67</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect76">If you decide to choose seventy-six, <link-text>turn to 76</link-text>.</choice>
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