Very minor Caption issues in Grey Star Books 3 and 4

git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2448 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11

diff --git a/en/xml/03btng.xml b/en/xml/03btng.xml
index 794d061..00c1d50 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/03btng.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03btng.xml
@@ -1879,7 +1879,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
-         <description><quote>Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors</quote></description>
+         <description><quote>Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors.</quote></description>
         </meta>
         <instance class="html" src="ill9.png" width="386" height="644"  mime-type="image/png"/>
         <instance class="html-compatible" src="ill9.gif" width="386" height="644"  mime-type="image/gif"/>
@@ -5469,7 +5469,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Chaos-Master</quote> with <quote>Chaos-master</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>beasts and</quote> with <quote>beasts, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>elessin</quote> with <quote>Elessin</quote>. Replaced <quote>guards but</quote> with <quote>guards, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>west and</quote> with <quote>west, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Crabkey, is</quote> with <quote>Crabkey is</quote>. Replaced <quote>embarassed</quote> with <quote>embarrassed</quote>. Replaced <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you Crabkey</quote> with <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you, Crabkey</quote>. Replaced <quote>well<ch.ellips/>.</quote> with <quote>well<ch.ellips/></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Crabkey, is</quote> with <quote>Crabkey is</quote>. Replaced <quote>embarassed</quote> with <quote>embarrassed</quote>. Replaced <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you Crabkey</quote> with <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you, Crabkey</quote>. Replaced <quote>well<ch.ellips/>.</quote> with <quote>well<ch.ellips/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>strength and</quote> with <quote>strength, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>statue</quote> with <quote>Guardian</quote>.</p>

diff --git a/en/xml/04wotw.xml b/en/xml/04wotw.xml
index 17ad691..a8a1d11 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/04wotw.xml
+++ b/en/xml/04wotw.xml
@@ -2743,7 +2743,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
-         <description>Unsuspecting the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
+         <description>Unsuspecting, the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
         </meta>
         <instance class="html" src="ill10.png" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/png"/>
         <instance class="html-compatible" src="ill10.gif" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/gif"/>
@@ -5350,6 +5350,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>power of Physiurgy</quote> with <quote>Power of Physiurgy</quote>. Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>hills of Tilos</quote> with <quote>Hills of Tilos</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>Unsuspecting the</quote> with <quote>Unsuspecting, the</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>blows and</quote> with <quote>blows, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>pain, then</quote> with <quote>pain, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Replaced <quote>for, indeed, I hate you</quote> with <quote>for indeed I hate you</quote>. Replaced <quote>breathes, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>breathes. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>. Replaced <quote>represent; the</quote> with <quote>represent: the</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes; colourless</quote> with <quote>eyes, colourless</quote>. Replaced <quote>feeling; like</quote> with <quote>feeling, like</quote>. Replaced <quote>powerful, I am</quote> with <quote>powerful; I am</quote>.</p>