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- <p><quote>I would be especially pleased if my granting of the rights to distribute my books in this way was seen as my <quote>millennium gift</quote> to all those devoted readers who have kept the Kai flag flying high, through all the good times, and the not-so-good. It would make me very proud indeed if this enterprise laid the foundations of a lasting legacy, securing the longevity of Lone Wolf by making my creation freely and readily accessible to current and future online generations. For them, for us, for Sommerlund and the Kai.<ch.ellips/></quote> <strong>Joe Dever</strong></p>
- <p>Project Aon would first like to thank Joe Dever for making this generous offering of the books that we have all loved from the beginning. We would also like to acknowledge the following members of Project Aon for their diligent work:</p>
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+ <line>An ornate pin appears to lock the door, but</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>A terrible apparition in red robes swoops down<br />from the sky on the back of a Kraan</description>
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+ <line>from the sky on the back of a Kraan.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The Giak leader orders five of his troops<br />to open fire at you with their bows</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The log wall has collapsed in several places<br />where the Darklords are attacking</description>
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+ <line>The log wall has collapsed in several places</line>
+ <line>where the Darklords are attacking.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The wild old man is screaming at you</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The clash of steel and the cries of men<br />and beasts echo through the forest</description>
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+ <line>The clash of steel and the cries of men</line>
+ <line>and beasts echo through the forest.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Perched on his outstretched arm is the<br />black raven that you saw earlier</description>
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+ <line>Perched on his outstretched arm is the</line>
+ <line>black raven that you saw earlier.</line>
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- <description>A young theurgist of the Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The herbalist offers you a selection of special potions</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>It is a Burrowcrawler and it is trying to strangle you</description>
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+ <line>It is a Burrowcrawler and it is trying to strangle you.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>You notice a large merchant<ch.apos/>s caravan<br />in the centre of the dusty turnpike</description>
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+ <line>You notice a large merchant<ch.apos/>s caravan</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>A tall man dressed in white robes stands<br />before you, a bowl of herbs in his hands</description>
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+ <line>A tall man dressed in white robes stands</line>
+ <line>before you, a bowl of herbs in his hands.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>He laughs menacingly and pulls<br />back the hood of his cloak. He is<br />a Drakkar and you must fight him</description>
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+ <line>He laughs menacingly and pulls</line>
+ <line>back the hood of his cloak. He is</line>
+ <line>a Drakkar and you must fight him.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Opening the bag, you find a message</description>
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+ <line>Opening the bag, you find a message.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Your passage through the Graveyard is not<br />easy, the ground is broken and<br />covered with thorny graveweed.</description>
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+ <line>Your passage through the Graveyard is not</line>
+ <line>easy, the ground is broken and</line>
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- <description>Pushing open the treehouse door,<br />you see an old hermit huddled in<br />the corner of the small cabin</description>
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+ <line>Pushing open the treehouse door,</line>
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- <description>You can see on the track above four soldiers and their<br />officer wearing the uniform of the King<ch.apos/>s army</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The guards do not believe your story<br />and refuse to let you enter</description>
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+ <line>The guards do not believe your story</line>
+ <line>and refuse to let you enter.</line>
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- <description>The faces of the King and his closest advisers<br />are lined with worry and concentration</description>
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+ <line>The faces of the King and his closest advisers</line>
+ <line>are lined with worry and concentration.</line>
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<p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Kai Wisdom</a>) Removed <quote>on the back cover of the book </quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerlund</quote> with <quote>Sommlending</quote> and made the last choice (about using Sixth Sense) the first.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Moved the last choice (about the Tracking Discipline) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Changed the last choice that led to <a idref="sect331">Section 331</a> to lead to <a idref="sect316">Section 316</a> instead in order to parallel <a idref="sect89">Section 89</a>. It doesn<ch.apos/>t make sense to skip the section describing the tumble downhill.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Moved the choice about the Camouflage Discipline into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Moved the choice about the Tracking Discipline into the first position and replaced <quote>Gallowbrush</quote> with <quote>gallowbrush</quote>: you can't pick it up.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote> and <quote>dagger</quote> with <quote>Dagger</quote>. The original versions of this book had this section lead to <a idref="sect272">Section 272</a>, which is incorrect. We are using the correct section, <a idref="sect273">273</a>, as used in more recent editions.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) The text is unchanged but we have concatenated some of the paragraphs for the dice rolls for clarification.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Added a comma after <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> in the first choice.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Reordered the choices. The choice that was originally first (about removing the pin) is now last. The choice about the Golden Key was originally last and is now first. Also added <quote>and wish to use it</quote> after <quote>Golden Key</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Reordered the choices. The choice that was originally first (about removing the pin) is now last. The choice about the Golden Key was originally last and is now first. Also added <quote>and wish to use it</quote> after <quote>Golden Key</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>unmistakeable</quote> with <quote>unmistakable</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Added a comma after <quote>4 or lower</quote> in the first choice.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Added a blank line before the decisions and reversed their order.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>woodsmoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Made the choice that led to <a idref="sect286">Section 286</a> to lead to <a idref="sect251">Section 251</a> instead. Many readers have realized that there was an error here but assumed that the original numbers for the choices should simply be reversed, giving Lone Wolf a chance at survival for hiding and certain death for riding on. Actually, there is no certain death possibility here. Hiding is supposed to grant you certain survival. The proof of this correction is that there is no other path to <a idref="sect251">Section 251</a>, and it works perfectly.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>crossbow had</quote> with <quote>crossbow has</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Made the choice that led to <a idref="sect140">Section 140</a> to lead to <a idref="sect252">Section 252</a> instead. If you read <a idref="sect222">Section 222</a>, you<ch.apos/>ll notice that the choice leading to <a idref="sect252">Section 252</a> is the east track. Indeed, only <a idref="sect140">Section 140</a> may lead you to the bear of which Tracking is supposed to warn you in this section.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>Gallowbrush</quote> with <quote>gallowbrush</quote>: you can't pick it up.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Added another <quote>s</quote> after <quote>posses</quote> in the last choice and moved that choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote> and <quote>skill,</quote> with <quote>skill or do not wish to use it,</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>cavemouth</quote> with <quote>cave mouth</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>Gallowbrush</quote> with <quote>gallowbrush</quote>: you can't pick it up.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Split the first sentence which was actually two independent clauses into two sentences to fix it.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Moved the last choice (about the Tracking Discipline) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-134226-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>border ranger</quote> with <quote>Border Ranger</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-134226-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-137630-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magicians Guild of Toran</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-137630-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added <quote> or if you have no Backpack Items</quote> to the second paragraph.<!--ERRTAG-RE-149741-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>one Item is stolen</quote> with <quote>one item is stolen</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-149741-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added <quote> or if you have no Backpack Items</quote> to the second paragraph.<!--ERRTAG-RE-149741-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>one Item is stolen</quote> with <quote>one item is stolen</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-149741-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Added <quote>If you wish to remove the pin, turn to 337.</quote> This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as <quote>If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands,</quote> but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from <a idref="sect23">Section 23</a>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-169126-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>tortuous</quote> with <quote>torturous</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169126-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Moved the second choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Moved the last choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-176294-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>border rangers</quote> with <quote>Border Rangers</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-176294-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Deleted a superfluous space after the word <quote>wish</quote> at the very end of the second sentence.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Reversed the order of the choices.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Reversed the order of the choices. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Changed the choice that led to <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> to lead to <a idref="sect15">Section 15</a> instead. The original choice appears to make sense, but does not work out in a map. The indication that the correct section is really <a idref="sect15">15</a> is the fact that it is not otherwise accessible (though <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> is) and <a idref="sect15">15</a> leads back to <a idref="sect201">Section 201</a> when taking the opposite direction.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Moved the second choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>war cries</quote> with <quote>war-cries</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>rough hewn</quote> with <quote>rough-hewn</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Capitalized <quote>message</quote> in the second sentence of the second paragraph, since that is how retrievable items are supposed to be represented, and to be consistent with the first time the item is mentioned in this section.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Capitalized <quote>message</quote> in the second sentence of the second paragraph, since that is how retrievable items are supposed to be represented, and to be consistent with the first time the item is mentioned in this section. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>wary</quote> with <quote>weary</quote>. We hardly think Lone Wolf would be wary among the King<ch.apos/>s soldiers.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>wood-smoke</quote> with <quote>wood smoke</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-249381-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>tortuous</quote> with <quote>torturous</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-249381-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote><a idref="sect113">Turn 113</a></quote> to <quote><a idref="sect113">Turn to 113</a>.</quote></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Moved the last choice (about Camouflage) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>, <quote>fnd</quote> with <quote>find</quote>, and <quote>half way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Graveweed</quote> with <quote>graveweed</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-294191-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>tortuous</quote> with <quote>torturous</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-294191-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position, and move the first choice (that leads to <a idref="sect162">Section 162</a>) into the last position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position, and move the first choice (that leads to <a idref="sect162">Section 162</a>) into the last position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-296725-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>unsheath</quote> with <quote>unsheathe</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-296725-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-301862-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bloods</quote> with <quote>blood</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-301862-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) <quote>Vonatar,</quote> from the seventh paragraph, is spelled <quote>Vonotar</quote> in later Lone Wolf books.<!--ERRTAG-RE-306915-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild of Toran</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-306915-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-316950-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>fall to 0 or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-316950-ITEM--></p>
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- <line>The King<ch.apos/>s Tower, a magnificent</line>
- <line>structure of glass and stone</line>
+ <line>The King<ch.apos/>s Tower, a magnificent</line><line>structure of glass and stone.</line>
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<meta>
<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
- <line>Twisted and disfigured though he is,</line>
- <line>you recognize Captain Kelman</line>
+ <line>Twisted and disfigured though he is,</line><line>you recognize Captain Kelman.</line>
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- <description>Inside the coach, it is warm and dry</description>
+ <description>Inside the coach, it is warm and dry.</description>
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- <p><quote><ch.apos/>Tis a fine blade, wrought of Durenese steel. It can be yours for only 12 Gold Crowns.</quote></p>
+ <p><quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>Tis a fine blade, wrought of Durenese steel. It can be yours for only 12 Gold Crowns.</quote></p>
<p>If you wish to purchase this Broadsword, mark it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
<choice idref="sect347">If you leave this shop by the front door, <link-text>turn to 347</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect3">If you leave by the rear door, <link-text>turn to 3</link-text>.</choice>
<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff</line>
- <line>and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip</line>
+ <line>and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>At that moment the true power of the</line>
- <line>Sommerswerd is revealed to you</line>
+ <line>Sommerswerd is revealed to you.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you,</line>
- <line>a huge ram protruding from its black prow</line>
+ <line>a huge ram protruding from its black prow.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The strange creature is wearing a splendid</line>
- <line>jacket of patched leather and carrying</line>
- <line>what appears to be a spear</line>
+ <line>jacket of patched leather and carrying</line>
+ <line>what appears to be a spear.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>You find yourself staring into the</line>
- <line>glowing eyes of a Helghast</line>
+ <line>glowing eyes of a Helghast.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured</line>
- <line>cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you</line>
+ <line>cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>Soldiers leap from the deck, their</line>
- <line>clothes and hair in flames</line>
+ <line>clothes and hair in flames.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they</line>
- <line>let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch</line>
+ <line>let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The others are all seated at a large table</line>
- <line>awaiting your appearance</line>
+ <line>waiting your appearance.</line>
</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and</line>
- <line>a large charred earthenware jug drops out</line>
+ <line>a large charred earthenware jug drops out.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>An attractive young woman spins a black dish</line>
- <line>divided into ten sections marked 0<ch.endash/>9</line>
+ <line>divided into ten sections marked 0<ch.endash/>9.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>You chat with your fellow travellers</line>
- <line>and learn about their backgrounds</line>
+ <line>and learn about their backgrounds.</line>
</description>
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<instance class="html" src="ill15.gif" width="386" height="680" />
<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>You turn to see three harbour thugs</line>
- <line>advancing towards you</line>
+ <line>advancing towards you.</line>
</description>
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<instance class="html" src="ill16.gif" width="386" height="675" />
<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander</line>
- <line>of King Alin<ch.apos/>s personal bodyguard</line>
+ <line>of King Alin<ch.apos/>s personal bodyguard.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The innkeeper, a thin old man with only</line>
- <line>one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food</line>
+ <line>one eye, is is carrying a tray of hot food.</line>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior</line>
- <line>is advancing towards you, a large</line>
- <line>broadsword raised</line>
+ <line>is advancing towards you, a large</line>
+ <line>broadsword raised.</line>
</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
<description>
<line>There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword</line>
- <line>is unleashed in a searing white beam</line>
+ <line>is unleashed in a searing white beam.</line>
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<p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Kai Training</a>) The Levels of Kai Training section did not originally appear in this book, but has been added for the reader<ch.apos/>s information.</p>
<p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Kai Wisdom</a>) Removed <quote> on the back cover of the book</quote> and replaced <quote>LONE WOLF</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>Sandsnake</quote> with <quote>sandsnake</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-48175-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>agreeing a wager</quote> with <quote>agreeing to a wager</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-48175-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>Fox He</quote> with <quote>Fox. He</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Capitalized <quote>wildlands</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>. Replaced <quote>lord-lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-68919-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68919-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>rib-cage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced the first word <quote>The</quote> with <quote>A</quote>. This is the first time you meet the priest<ch.emdash/>the introduction to the other coach members comes later.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>it, their</quote> with <quote>it. Their</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>staffbearer</quote> with <quote>staff-bearer</quote> and <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>staffbearer</quote> with <quote>staff-bearer</quote> and <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-102954-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Sir, requires</quote> with <quote>Sir requires</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-102954-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-106008-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-106008-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>, and <quote>enemies, eg Helghasts, in</quote> with <quote>enemies (e.g. Helghast) in</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>, and <quote>enemies, eg Helghasts, in</quote> with <quote>enemies (e.g. Helghast) in</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>leatherbound</quote> with <quote>leather-bound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Moved the choice to heal the wounded man into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-126686-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-126686-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-126686-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-126686-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position and replaced <quote>Pick</quote> with <quote>If not, pick</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>king<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>Vonatar</quote> with <quote>Vonotar</quote>, and <quote>jail</quote> with <quote>gaol</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>If you have no Weapon, deduct</quote> with <quote>Deduct</quote> since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Moved the paragraph about keeping the Magic Spear before the choices.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>well-known</quote> with <quote>well known</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-165537-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-165537-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-172186-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-172186-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>marshbird</quote> with <quote>marsh-bird</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>succesful</quote> with <quote>successful</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>warfleet</quote> with <quote>war fleet</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>gaming house</quote> with <quote>gaming-house</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>despatch</quote> with <quote>dispatch</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>, and <quote>king<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>despatch</quote> with <quote>dispatch</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>, and <quote>king<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) <quote>Useful</quote> in the last sentence of the first paragraph didn<ch.apos/>t need to be capitalized.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaults</quote> with <quote>somersaults</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>ill-omen</quote> with <quote>ill omen</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-216376-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-216376-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect203">203</a>) Replaced <quote>housemice</quote> with <quote>house mice</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>king<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s</quote> and <quote>Lord-Lieutenant</quote> with <quote>Lord-lieutenant</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>assasinates</quote> with <quote>assassinates</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>says in a cynical voice.</quote> with <quote>says in a cynical voice:</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-242228-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-242228-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-242228-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-242228-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) There was a superfluous comma between <quote>dreadful</quote> and <quote>significance</quote> in the first paragraph.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-250221-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>distance to left</quote> with <quote>distance to the left</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-250221-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-252737-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-252737-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-255863-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-255863-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-258314-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-258314-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) <quote>he</quote> has now been capitalized.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>weaponskill</quote> with <quote>Weaponskill</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-281741-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>person</quote> with <quote>people</quote> to agree in number to the second choice.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-281741-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>warfleet</quote> with <quote>war fleet</quote>. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-288964-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-288964-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect274">274</a>) Replaced <quote>first floor</quote> with <quote>first-floor</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) It makes sense to restore your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to the total you had before the match regardless of whether you win or lose. We changed this to be more clear. The original read:</p>
<blockquote>
</blockquote>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>staffbearer</quote> with <quote>staff-bearer</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-306625-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>seal</quote> with <quote>Seal</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-306625-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>If you do not have a Weapon, you</quote> with <quote>You</quote> since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect299">Section 299</a>) The original edition of this book reads: <quote>If you wish to give him your Magic Spear, so that he can defend the tunnel entrance, <a idref="sect102">turn to 102</a>. If you do not possess a Magic Spear, or do not wish to give it to Rhygar, <a idref="sect118">turn to 118</a>.</quote> Later editions came out reversing these two choices (i.e. the first choice leads to <a idref="sect118">Section 118</a>, the second choice to <a idref="sect102">Section 102</a>). Both of these versions are very problematic to game flow and inspired a controversy among the members of Project Aon. The version that you see in our text is a mixed scenario intended to most closely match the author<ch.apos/>s surmised original intention, even though it does not appear in either previously published version.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-325953-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>score reaches zero</quote> with <quote>score reaches zero or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-325953-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-326475-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>points to zero</quote> with <quote>points to zero or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-326475-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-325241-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Each dice</quote> with <quote>Each die</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-325241-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote>rainswept</quote> with <quote>rain-swept</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-330010-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-330010-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Moved the Mind Over Matter choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>This creature is immune to Mindblast.</quote> to the end of the final paragraph.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>pot-holes</quote> with <quote>potholes</quote></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>air, continually</quote> with <quote>air continually</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>air, continually</quote> with <quote>air continually</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-373801-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>fall to 0 or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-373801-ITEM--></p>
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Revision 1.11 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne
A couple of minor Errata fixed.
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>His grip falters and he plummets backwards into the gaping void</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The statue rises slowly from the altar and advances
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><quote>My name is Loi-Kymar. I am an elder of the Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran,</quote></description>
+ <description><line><ch.lsquot/>My name is Loi-Kymar. I am an elder</line><line>of the Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran.<ch.rsquot/></line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>A shadow to your right betrays the Baknar as it lopes
-towards you</description>
+ <description><line>A shadow to your right betrays the</line><line>Baknar as it lopes towards you.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The two-headed serpent slithers along the ledge</description>
+ <description><line>The two-headed serpent</line><line>slithers along the ledge.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The three Baknar jump from the ice wall and land with a
-crash on the sledges</description>
+ <description><line>The three Baknar jump from the</line><line>ice wall and land with a</line><line>crash on the sledges.</line></description>
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<p>The gale dies away during the night and dawn arrives calm and still. On the horizon to the far north, you can see Ikaya, the ice fortress. The huge crystal-towered stronghold is a wondrous sight, made all the more marvellous because it appears to hover upside down upon a large cloud. <quote>Kalte mirage,</quote> says Dyce. <quote>There<ch.apos/>s no dust in the air here<ch.emdash/>the land is reflected in the clouds. That<ch.apos/>s Ikaya, but the real fortress is over the horizon. It cannot be more than forty miles away now.</quote> Dyce grabs a spade and starts to dig out the Kanu-dogs that have been buried by snow. You wake the others and eat a Meal before setting off once more.</p>
<p>It is midday when you reach the edge of a deep gorge. It is over forty feet wide, and there appears to be no way of crossing it. You are forced to travel along the gorge to the east. Eventually, after three miles, you discover a narrow ice bridge. However, the centre of the bridge is frighteningly thin and narrow: it looks incapable of supporting the weight of a loaded sledge.</p>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Suddenly you see a large black shape pass close to the
-surface of the ice</description>
+ <description><line>Suddenly you see a large black</line><line>shape pass close to the</line><line>surface of the ice.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>At the foot of the stairs, still upright and in armour,
-are the skeletal remains of an ancient tomb keeper</description>
+ <description><line>At the foot of the stairs, still</line><line>upright and in armour, are the skeletal</line><line>remains of an ancient tomb keeper.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>You have released an Ice Demon and it is intent on your
-destruction</description>
+ <description><line>You have released an Ice Demon and</line><line>it is intent on your destruction.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>From out of the dark slithers a huge ghoulish green
-monster over which Vonotar has control</description>
+ <description><line>From out of the dark slithers a huge</line><line>ghoulish green monster over</line><line>which Vonotar has control.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Each Ice Barbarian scout is carrying a backpack
-containing a child armed with a bone bow</description>
+ <description><line>Each Ice Barbarian scout is</line><line>carrying a backpack containing a</line><line>child armed with a bone bow.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>You arrive at a massive ice hall full of crystal
-stalagmites and stalactites</description>
+ <description><line>You arrive at a massive ice</line><line>hall full of crystal stalagmites</line><line>and stalactites.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>In an instant, the hunchback wizard is engulfed in a
-tangle of vines</description>
+ <description><line>In an instant, the hunchback</line><line>wizard is engulfed in a tangle</line><line>of vines.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>This strange creature is a Crystal Frostwyrm and you must
-fight it to the death</description>
+ <description><line>This strange creature is a</line><line>Crystal Frostwyrm and you must fight</line><line>it to the death.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>This hall is a place of great evil, a nightmare
-laboratory</description>
+ <description><line>This hall is a place of great evil,</line><line>a nightmare laboratory.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>They have already started to skin the dead Baknar</description>
+ <description><line>They have already started to</line><line>skin the dead Baknar.</line></description>
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<meta>
<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The Ice Barbarians circle around you but they dare not
-attack while you hold one of their children as hostage</description>
+ <description><line>The Ice Barbarians circle around you</line><line>but they dare not attack while you</line><line>hold one of their children as hostage.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>A hidden panel opens near the right stave and inside is a
-beautiful glowing crystal</description>
+ <description><line>A hidden panel opens near the</line><line>right stave and inside is a</line><line>beautiful glowing crystal.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Vonotar is led away to the deepest chamber of the Guildhall wherein lies the Daziarn: the door of an eternal prison from which there can be no escape</description>
+ <description><line>Vonotar is led away to the deepest chamber</line><line>of the Guildhall wherein lies the Daziarn:</line><line>the door of an eternal prison from which</line><line>there can be no escape.</line></description>
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<p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Kai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>LONE WOLF</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Kai Wisdom</a>) Removed <quote> at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>ice-fortress</quote> with <quote>ice fortress</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>pack ice</quote> with <quote>pack-ice</quote>. Replaced the word <quote>becoming</quote> with <quote>become</quote> in the fourth paragraph. Removed <quote> at the front of the book</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-38180-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-38180-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-59623-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-59623-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-70145-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-70145-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>cretaure</quote> with <quote>creature</quote> and <quote>home-coming</quote> with <quote>homecoming</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-81998-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>mystery to me, I have</quote> with <quote>mystery to me. I have</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-81998-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>ice-creature</quote> with <quote>ice creature</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML.<!--ERRTAG-RE-93667-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-93667-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-94585-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>wretch is responsible</quote> with <quote>wretch, is responsible</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-94585-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML.<!--ERRTAG-RE-93667-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-93667-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-94585-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>wretch is responsible</quote> with <quote>wretch, is responsible</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-94585-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-97798-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-97798-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-98307-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-98307-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Made the last sentence its own paragraph to better fit our format for the choices.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>firesphere</quote> with <quote>Firesphere</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Split the word <quote>anytime</quote> into <quote>any time</quote> in the fourth paragraph.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Split the word <quote>anytime</quote> into <quote>any time</quote> in the fourth paragraph. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>dimly-lit</quote> with <quote>dimly lit</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect114">114</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-149229-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Vial of Laumspur</quote> with <quote>vial of Laumspur</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-149229-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-149114-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-149114-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-168665-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-168665-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-178113-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>as crevasse</quote> with <quote>as the crevasse</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-178113-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>death blow</quote> with <quote>death-blow</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>rock face</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Moved the choice regarding leaving the tent into the last position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-191812-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>breed are</quote> with <quote>breed is</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-191812-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-200920-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-200920-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-201948-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>My thanks Kai Lord</quote> with <quote>My thanks, Kai Lord</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-201948-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Switched the order of the choices.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>ice-wall</quote> with <quote>ice wall</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>out distance</quote> with <quote>outdistance</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Added <quote>the</quote> before <quote>Kai Discipline</quote> in the first link.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-237434-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>-3 to 3</quote> with <quote>-3<ch.endash/>3</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-237434-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-246372-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-246372-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>much-deserved</quote> with <quote>much deserved</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>pack ice</quote> with <quote>pack-ice</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>pack ice</quote> with <quote>pack-ice</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>matts</quote> with <quote>mats</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-272490-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>visited the Graveyard of the Ancients</quote> with <quote>visited the Graveyard of the Ancients and survived</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-272490-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Split the first paragraph into two paragraphs and moved the Sixth Sense choice between the two. Replaced <quote>posses</quote> with <quote>possess</quote> and <quote>Pick</quote> with <quote>Otherwise, pick</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Moved the choice regarding lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-292685-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>its tip</quote> with <quote>the rod<ch.apos/>s tip</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-292685-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>well-suited</quote> with <quote>well suited</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-293810-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>breed are</quote> with <quote>breed is</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-293810-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Moved the Hunting or Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>fast flowing</quote> with <quote>fast-flowing</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>fingerbones</quote> with <quote>finger-bones</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-320442-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-320442-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Added the choice <quote>If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, <a idref="sect127">turn to 127</a>,</quote> to parallel the same situation in <a idref="sect326">Section 326</a>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Added the choice <quote>If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, <a idref="sect127">turn to 127</a></quote>, to parallel the same situation in <a idref="sect326">Section 326</a>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>something- </quote> with <quote>something<ch.emdash/></quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>something- </quote> with <quote>something<ch.emdash/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>warlike</quote> with <quote>war-like</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-343205-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-343205-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense or Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect335">335</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Replaced <quote>dirt encrusted</quote> with <quote>dirt-encrusted</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Replaced <quote>vicious looking</quote> with <quote>vicious-looking</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Removed <quote> at the front of the book</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>LONE WOLF</quote> of the last paragraph with <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> and replaced both occurrences of <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-365765-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-365765-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367580-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>his crimes and it is you</quote> with <quote>his crimes, and it is you</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367580-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-366739-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Vonotar the traitor</quote> with <quote>Vonotar the Traitor</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-366739-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367210-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367210-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367698-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367698-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>LONE WOLF</quote> of the last paragraph with <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> and replaced both occurrences of <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-365765-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magician<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-365765-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367580-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>his crimes and it is you</quote> with <quote>his crimes, and it is you</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367580-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-366739-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Vonotar the traitor</quote> with <quote>Vonotar the Traitor</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-366739-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367210-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367210-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-367698-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Anskavern</quote> with <quote>Anskaven</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-367698-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-373958-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>fall to 0 or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-373958-ITEM--></p>
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A couple of minor Errata fixed.
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- <description>Your target is a formidable Bandit Warrior</description>
+ <description>Your target is a formidable Bandit Warrior.</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The Stoneworm slithers towards you</line><line>at a terrifying pace</line></description>
+ <description><line>The Stoneworm slithers towards you</line><line>at a terrifying pace.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The little fat man spins around</line><line> and tumbles to the ground</line></description>
+ <description><line>The little fat man spins around</line><line>and tumbles to the ground.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>Razor-sharp discs of steel whistle</line><line> down to claim their victims</line></description>
+ <description><line>Razor-sharp discs of steel whistle</line><line>down to claim their victims.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The stars foretold our meeting</line><line> long ago, Lone Wolf</line></description>
+ <description><line><ch.lsquot/>The stars foretold our meeting</line><line>long ago, Lone Wolf.<ch.rsquot/></line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>A procession of red-cloaked priests</line><line>enter the temple</line></description>
+ <description><line>A procession of red-cloaked priests</line><line>enter the temple.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>A mantlet is being pushed across the</line><line> battleground towards the barricade</line></description>
+ <description><line>A mantlet is being pushed across the</line><line>battleground towards the barricade.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The crypt door is guarded by</line><line> two Vassagonian warriors</line></description>
+ <description><line>The crypt door is guarded by</line><line>two Vassagonian warriors.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>A Vassagonian herald breaks free from</line><line> the battle and sounds the retreat</line></description>
+ <description><line>A Vassagonian herald breaks free from</line><line>the battle and sounds the retreat.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Dull, satanic eyes follow your every move </description>
+ <description>Dull, satanic eyes follow your every move.</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>The snarling Warhounds bound towards the barricade </description>
+ <description>The snarling Warhounds bound towards the barricade.</description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>He spits out his battle-cry and</line><line> spurs his horse towards you once more</line></description>
+ <description><line>He spits out his battle-cry and</line><line>spurs his horse towards you once more.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>Astride the creature sits a warrior</line><line> wreathed in iron and steel</line></description>
+ <description><line>Astride the creature sits a warrior</line><line>wreathed in iron and steel.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>You have spotted the leader of</line><line> the bandit cavalry</line></description>
+ <description><line>You have spotted the leader of</line><line>the bandit cavalry.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The bandits are wandering idly up</line><line> the track towards you</line></description>
+ <description><line>The bandits are wandering idly up</line><line>the track towards you.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>You see a group of wagons on</line><line> the highway ahead</line></description>
+ <description><line>You see a group of wagons on</line><line>the highway ahead.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>You stare in horror as a deluge</line><line> of blazing oil rains down</line></description>
+ <description><line>You stare in horror as a deluge</line><line>of blazing oil rains down.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>A loud hissing fills your ears,</line><line>like steam escaping from a geyser</line></description>
+ <description><line>A loud hissing fills your ears,</line><line>like steam escaping from a geyser.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><quote>He has lost everything<ch.ellips/>his castle, his land, his town and his family...</quote> </description>
+ <description><line><ch.lsquot/>He has lost everything<ch.ellips/></line><line>his castle, his land, his town,</line><line>and his family...<ch.rsquot/></line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description><line>The rangers are dragged down</line><line> into the bubbling depths</line></description>
+ <description><line>The rangers are dragged down</line><line>into the bubbling depths.</line></description>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
- <description>Barraka<ch.apos/>s men flee from King Ulnar and the army of Sommerlund </description>
+ <description><line>Barraka<ch.apos/>s men flee from King Ulnar</line><line>and the army of</line><line>Sommerlund</line></description>
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<p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote> and <quote>saddle and</quote> with <quote>saddle, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>mission for</quote> with <quote>mission, for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>tracks and</quote> with <quote>tracks, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>You reach the barricade and a wagon is pulled aside and you are carried in through the gap.<ch.ellips/></quote> with <quote>You reach the barricade, a wagon is pulled aside, and you are carried in through the gap.<ch.ellips/></quote> and <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-58349-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-58349-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>feet away, and</quote> with <quote>feet away and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>feet away, and</quote> with <quote>feet away and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Added a period to the end of the first paragraph.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>river, is</quote> with <quote>river is</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-64952-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>now your brave company</quote> with <quote>now that your brave company</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-64952-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>ahead, and</quote> with <quote>ahead and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Changed the choice which led to <a idref="sect270">Section 270</a> to point to <a idref="sect183">Section 183</a>. <a idref="sect270">Section 270</a> is further back in the story than <a idref="sect34">Section 34</a>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>force, that</quote> with <quote>force that</quote>, <quote>Eshnar but</quote> with <quote>Eshnar, but</quote>, and <quote>dancing.</quote> with <quote>dancing.<ch.apos/></quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>force, that</quote> with <quote>force that</quote>, <quote>Eshnar but</quote> with <quote>Eshnar, but</quote>, and <quote>dancing.</quote> with <quote>dancing.<ch.apos/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>black and</quote> with <quote>black, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>Tracking and</quote> with <quote>Tracking, and</quote>. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Replaced <quote>Gnadurn</quote> with <quote>gnadurn</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>side-step</quote> with <quote>sidestep</quote> and <quote>foot and</quote> with <quote>foot, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>down but</quote> with <quote>down, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-charge</quote> with <quote>countercharge</quote> and <quote>mid-air and</quote> with <quote>mid-air, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>razor sharp</quote> with <quote>razor-sharp</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect69">69</a>) Replaced <quote>away and</quote> with <quote>away, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced the middle choice <quote>If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide,</quote> with <quote>If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by <a idref="sect159">turning to 159</a>.</quote> and moved it to the bottom. Also changed <quote>duties and</quote> with <quote>duties, and</quote> and <quote>tracks and</quote> <quote>tracks, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-100596-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-100596-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>him, than</quote> with <quote>him than</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>neckchains</quote> with <quote>neck-chains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>excavation and</quote> with <quote>excavation, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>interior you</quote> with <quote>interior, you</quote> and <quote>robe and</quote> with <quote>robe, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>interior you</quote> with <quote>interior, you</quote> and <quote>robe and</quote> with <quote>robe, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon but</quote> with <quote>weapon, but</quote> and <quote>hard unyielding</quote> with <quote>hard, unyielding</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>Ruanon, and</quote> with <quote>Ruanon and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-115516-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-115516-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense or Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>town, and</quote> with <quote>town and</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of automatic formatting.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>river and</quote> with <quote>river, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>stamina you</quote> with <quote>stamina, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>out and</quote> with <quote>out, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>locked. But</quote> with <quote>locked, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>stolid but</quote> with <quote>stolid, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>dreams but</quote> with <quote>dreams, but</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>Pike and</quote> with <quote>Pike, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>trapdoor but</quote> with <quote>trapdoor, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Split the two sentences of the last paragraph into separate paragraphs for the sake of automatic formatting.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>action; for</quote> with <quote>action, for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>foe but</quote> with <quote>foe, but</quote>, <quote>Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>, and both occurrences of <quote>Captain</quote> when not part of Captain D<ch.apos/>Val<ch.apos/>s name with <quote>captain</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>action; for</quote> with <quote>action, for</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>, <quote>rainswept</quote> with <quote>rain-swept</quote>, <quote>warriors, and</quote> with <quote>warriors and</quote>, and <quote>possibilities; a crypt</quote> with <quote>possibilities: a crypt</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>, <quote>rainswept</quote> with <quote>rain-swept</quote>, <quote>warriors, and</quote> with <quote>warriors and</quote>, and <quote>possibilities; a crypt</quote> with <quote>possibilities: a crypt</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>floor and</quote> with <quote>floor, and</quote></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>leader; but</quote> with <quote>leader, but</quote>, <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote> and <quote>bow but</quote> with <quote>bow, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>battle, the</quote> with <quote>battle; the</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>Vassagonian, but</quote> with <quote>Vassagonian but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>here, and</quote> with <quote>here and</quote> and <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Made the last paragraph its own sentence for the sake of automatic formatting.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>Dull satanic</quote> with <quote>Dull, satanic</quote> and <quote>move and</quote> with <quote>move, and</quote></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>Dull satanic</quote> with <quote>Dull, satanic</quote> and <quote>move and</quote> with <quote>move, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>him and</quote> with <quote>him, and</quote> and <quote>long curved</quote> with <quote>long, curved</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-191298-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-191298-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>mile you</quote> with <quote>mile, you</quote> and <quote>journey, and</quote> with <quote>journey and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-193043-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-193043-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond and</quote> with <quote>beyond, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>back and</quote> with <quote>back, and</quote>, <quote>oily black</quote> with <quote>oily, black</quote> and <quote>head, leaps</quote> with <quote>head leaps</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-207197-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-207197-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>the ranger</quote> with <quote>a ranger</quote> in the second sentence. At this point, there are still several rangers left in the company. Also replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect192">192</a>) Replaced <quote>serated</quote> with <quote>serrated</quote> and <quote>chest and</quote> with <quote>chest, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Added <quote>or if you have won in the first two rounds, </quote> to the choice. Also replaced <quote>risen you</quote> with <quote>risen, you</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Added <quote>or if you have won in the first two rounds, </quote> to the choice. Also replaced <quote>risen you</quote> with <quote>risen, you</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>back and</quote> with <quote>back, and</quote>, <quote>horses and</quote> with <quote>horses, and</quote>, <quote>shutters and</quote> with <quote>shutters, and</quote> and <quote>tonight, and</quote> with <quote>tonight and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-216359-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-216359-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>gasp and</quote> with <quote>gasp, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>returned and</quote> with <quote>returned, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect207">207</a>) Replaced <quote>wall, and</quote> with <quote>wall and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>, <quote>dead-end</quote> with <quote>dead end</quote>, <quote>tunnel; a</quote> with <quote>tunnel<ch.emdash/>a</quote> and <quote>excavated and</quote> with <quote>excavated, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote> in the illustration caption.<!--ERRTAG-RE-228193-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-228193-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote> in the illustration caption.<!--ERRTAG-RE-228193-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-228193-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-229695-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-229695-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>well for</quote> with <quote>well, for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>lights, make</quote> with <quote>lights make</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>effort, do</quote> with <quote>effort do</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-236493-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>shute</quote> with <quote>chute</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-236493-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>here and</quote> with <quote>here, and</quote> and <quote>stairs, by</quote> with <quote>stairs by</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-240849-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-240849-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-240849-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-240849-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>burst but</quote> with <quote>burst, but</quote>, <quote>sweat and</quote> with <quote>sweat, and</quote>, <quote>small pink</quote> with <quote>small pink</quote> and <quote>leg and</quote> with <quote>leg, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>tree-trunks</quote> with <quote>tree trunks</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-charge, and</quote> with <quote>countercharge and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>dull satanic</quote> with <quote>dull, satanic</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>, <quote>highway and</quote> with <quote>highway, and</quote>, <quote>firewood and</quote> with <quote>firewood, and</quote> and <quote>incident and</quote> with <quote>incident, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>thin chiselled</quote> with <quote>thin, chiselled</quote>, <quote>cavalry; a tall</quote> with <quote>cavalry<ch.emdash/>a tall</quote> and <quote>tall dark-skinned</quote> with <quote>tall, dark-skinned</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>thin chiselled</quote> with <quote>thin, chiselled</quote>, <quote>cavalry; a tall</quote> with <quote>cavalry<ch.emdash/>a tall</quote> and <quote>tall dark-skinned</quote> with <quote>tall, dark-skinned</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>them and</quote> with <quote>them, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Replaced <quote>scouts but</quote> with <quote>scouts, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>Captain, and</quote> with <quote>captain and</quote> and <quote>Ruanon, and</quote> with <quote>Ruanon and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>bridge, but</quote> with <quote>bridge but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced the middle choice <quote>If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, </quote> with <quote>If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by <a idref="sect159">turning to 159</a>. </quote> and moved it to the bottom. Also replaced <quote>crops you</quote> with <quote>crops, you</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced the middle choice <quote>If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, </quote> with <quote>If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by <a idref="sect159">turning to 159</a>. </quote> and moved it to the bottom. Also replaced <quote>crops you</quote> with <quote>crops, you</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Added <quote>or if you have won in the first three rounds, </quote> to the choice.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>strike but</quote> with <quote>strike, but</quote> and <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>trees you</quote> with <quote>trees, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect270">270</a>) Replaced <quote>approach and</quote> with <quote>approach, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>sommersaulted</quote> with <quote>somersaulted</quote> and <quote>wounds, and</quote> with <quote>wounds and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>ground and</quote> with <quote>ground, and</quote> and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>Stoneworm and</quote> with <quote>Stoneworm, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>pounce and</quote> with <quote>pounce, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>stiff but</quote> with <quote>stiff, but</quote>, <quote>gives and</quote> with <quote>gives, and</quote> and <quote>terror into</quote> with <quote>terror, into</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>face and</quote> with <quote>face, and</quote> and <quote>fire and</quote> with <quote>fire, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>bolts and</quote> with <quote>bolts, and</quote> and <quote>bolts and</quote> with <quote>bolts, and</quote>..</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>deluge and</quote> with <quote>deluge, and</quote>, <quote>Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>, <quote>help the Captain</quote> with <quote>help the captain</quote>, and <quote>ablaze and</quote> with <quote>ablaze, and</quote>. Moved the Warmarn choice into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-302201-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-302201-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>deluge and</quote> with <quote>deluge, and</quote>, <quote>Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>, <quote>help the Captain</quote> with <quote>help the captain</quote>, and <quote>ablaze and</quote> with <quote>ablaze, and</quote>. Moved the Warmarn choice into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-302201-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-302201-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>blade and the semi-circles</quote> with <quote>blade, and the semicircles</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>gantry and</quote> with <quote>gantry, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Took out the second choice, which read <quote>If you have a Flask of Holy Water, <a idref="sect283">turn to 283</a>.</quote> and replaced the bottom choice <quote>If you do not possess either,<ch.ellips/></quote> with <quote>If you do not possess this Special Item,<ch.ellips/></quote>. With this choice removed, <a idref="sect274">Section 274</a> is no longer redundant.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>slovenlinesss</quote> with <quote>slovenliness</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>voice and</quote> with <quote>voice, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>pace and</quote> with <quote>pace, and</quote> and <quote>Ruanon but</quote> with <quote>Ruanon, but</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>ground, its</quote> with <quote>ground; its</quote> and <quote>combat and</quote> with <quote>combat, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>ground, its</quote> with <quote>ground; its</quote> and <quote>combat and</quote> with <quote>combat, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>minutes you</quote> with <quote>minutes, you</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-322208-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>each of the ramps are guarded</quote> with <quote>each of the ramps is guarded</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-322208-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>spear-haft</quote> with <quote>spear haft</quote> and <quote>thrust, and</quote> with <quote>thrust and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote>horses and</quote> with <quote>horses, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Replaced <quote>leg, and</quote> with <quote>leg and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>duties and</quote> with <quote>duties, and</quote> and <quote>window and</quote> with <quote>window, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>damp and</quote> with <quote>damp, and</quote>. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect318">318</a>) Replaced <quote>war-lord</quote> with <quote>warlord</quote> and <quote>dead and</quote> with <quote>dead, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect318">318</a>) Replaced <quote>war-lord</quote> with <quote>warlord</quote> and <quote>dead and</quote> with <quote>dead, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>town and</quote> with <quote>town, and</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>Torch you</quote> with <quote>Torch, you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow and</quote> with <quote>arrow, and</quote> and <quote>bandit-leader</quote> with <quote>Bandit Leader</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>first floor</quote> with <quote>first-floor</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-338009-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-338009-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>spin and</quote> with <quote>spin, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>clean and</quote> with <quote>clean, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>teeth you</quote> with <quote>teeth, you</quote>, <quote>hard unyielding</quote> with <quote>hard, unyielding</quote>, <quote>floor you</quote> with <quote>floor, you</quote>, and <quote>discard it or</quote> with <quote>discard it, or</quote>. Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of automatic formatting.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>left hand</quote> with <quote>left-hand</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>escape but</quote> with <quote>escape, but</quote>, <quote>trapdoor, desperately</quote> with <quote>trapdoor desperately</quote> and <quote>back; but</quote> with <quote>back, but</quote>..</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-356709-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>the the</quote> with <quote>the</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-356709-ITEM--></p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Maakengorge; for</quote> with <quote>Maakengorge, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series </quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Maakengorge; for</quote> with <quote>Maakengorge, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series </quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote> and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>.</p>
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