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+Revision 2.1  2007/06/26 13:03:25  Simon Osborne
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   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
   <date class="publication"><year>2005</year><month>3</month><day>12</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
-   <p>You are Lone Wolf&emdash;Kai Grand Master of Sommerlund. The spirit of Vashna, greatest of all the Darklords, is imprisoned deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. For centuries, servants of darkness have tried to summon him to do their bidding but always they have failed&ellips; until now!</p>
-   <p>In <cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite>, you must locate and defeat the Darklord&apos;s minions before they can complete the resurrection of their master&emdash;the most powerful Lord of Evil your world has ever known. Will you succeed in your quest? Or will you and your fragile world perish in the wrath of Vashna?</p>
+   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Kai Grand Master of Sommerlund. The spirit of Vashna, greatest of all the Darklords, is imprisoned deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. For centuries, servants of darkness have tried to summon him to do their bidding but always they have failed<ch.ellips/> until now!</p>
+   <p>In <cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite>, you must locate and defeat the Darklord<ch.apos/>s minions before they can complete the resurrection of their master<ch.emdash/>the most powerful Lord of Evil your world has ever known. Will you succeed in your quest? Or will you and your fragile world perish in the wrath of Vashna?</p>
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   <description class="publication">
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
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-  <rights class="copyrights">Text copyright &copy; 1991 Joe Dever.<br />Illustrations copyright &copy; 1991 Brian Williams.</rights>
+  <rights class="copyrights">Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever.<br />Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.</rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>Text copyright &copy; 1991 Joe Dever.<br />Illustrations copyright &copy; 1991 Brian Williams.<br />Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
+   <p>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Joe Dever.<br />Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1991 Brian Williams.<br />Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
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-     <p><quote>I would be especially pleased if my granting of the rights to distribute my books in this way was seen as my <quote>millennium gift</quote> to all those devoted readers who have kept the Kai flag flying high, through all the good times, and the not-so-good. It would make me very proud indeed if this enterprise laid the foundations of a lasting legacy, securing the longevity of Lone Wolf by making my creation freely and readily accessible to current and future online generations. For them, for us, for Sommerlund and the Kai.&ellips;</quote> <strong>Joe Dever</strong></p>
-     <p>Project Aon would first like to thank Joe Dever for making this generous offering of the books that we have all loved from the beginning. We would also like to acknowledge the following members of Project Aon for their diligent work:</p>
+     &inclusion.joe.dever.endowment;
 
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          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
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-         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
+         <dd>Jonathan Blake<br/>Simon Osborne</dd>
         <dt>Action Charts</dt>
          <dd>JC Alvarez<br />Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Proofreading</dt>
-         <dd>Michael Davies (Sections 71&endash;140)<br/>Jeff Dougan (Frontmatter)<br/>Markus Eisensehr (Sections 141&endash;210)<br/>Brett Taylor (Sections 1&endash;70, 211&endash;350)</dd>
+         <dd>Michael Davies (Sections 71<ch.endash/>140)<br/>Jeff Dougan (Frontmatter)<br/>Markus Eisensehr (Sections 141<ch.endash/>210)<br/>Brett Taylor (Sections 1<ch.endash/>70, 211<ch.endash/>350)</dd>
         <dt>Editing</dt>
-          <dd>David Davis<br/>Ingo Kl&ouml;cker<br/>Chris Lundgren<br/>Neil McGrory<br/>Timothy Pederick<br/>Simon Osborne<br/>Keith Sheldon<br/>Jennifer Sigman</dd>
+          <dd>David Davis<br/>Ingo Kl<ch.ouml/>cker<br/>Chris Lundgren<br/>Neil McGrory<br/>Timothy Pederick<br/>Simon Osborne<br/>Keith Sheldon<br/>Jennifer Sigman</dd>
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          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
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-     <title>The Story So Far&ellips;</title>
+     <title>The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></title>
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-     <p>You are Grand Master Lone Wolf, last of the Kai Lords of Sommerlund and sole survivor of a massacre that wiped out the First Order of your &eacute;lite warrior caste.</p>
-     <p>It is the year MS 5077 and twenty-seven years have passed since your brave kinsmen perished at the hands of the Darklords of Helgedad. These champions of evil, who were sent forth by Naar, the King of the Darkness, to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund have themselves since been destroyed. You vowed to avenge the murder of the Kai and you kept your pledge, for it was you who brought about their downfall when alone you infiltrated their foul domain&emdash;the Darklands&emdash;and caused the destruction of their leader, Archlord Gnaag, and the seat of his power that was the infernal city of Helgedad.</p>
+     <p>You are Grand Master Lone Wolf, last of the Kai Lords of Sommerlund and sole survivor of a massacre that wiped out the First Order of your <ch.eacute/>lite warrior caste.</p>
+     <p>It is the year MS 5077 and twenty-seven years have passed since your brave kinsmen perished at the hands of the Darklords of Helgedad. These champions of evil, who were sent forth by Naar, the King of the Darkness, to destroy the fertile world of Magnamund have themselves since been destroyed. You vowed to avenge the murder of the Kai and you kept your pledge, for it was you who brought about their downfall when alone you infiltrated their foul domain<ch.emdash/>the Darklands<ch.emdash/>and caused the destruction of their leader, Archlord Gnaag, and the seat of his power that was the infernal city of Helgedad.</p>
      <p>In the wake of their destruction, chaos befell the Darkland armies who, until then, had been poised to conquer all of Magnamund. Some factions which comprised this huge army, most notably the barbaric Drakkarim, began to fight with the others for control. This disorder quickly escalated into an all-out civil war, which allowed the Freeland armies of Magnamund time in which to recover and launch a counter-offensive. Skilfully their commanders exploited the chaos and secured a swift and total victory over an enemy far superior in numbers.</p>
-     <p>For seven years now peace has reigned in Sommerlund. Under your direction, the once-ruined monastery of the Kai has been thoroughly rebuilt and restored to its former glory, and the task of teaching a Second Order of Kai warriors the skills and proud traditions of your ancestors is also well under way. The new generation of Kai recruits, all of whom were born during the era of war against the Darklords, possess latent Kai skills and show exceptional promise. These skills will be nurtured and honed to perfection during their time at the Monastery so that they may teach and inspire future generations, thereby ensuring the continued security of your homeland in future years.</p>
-     <p>Your attainment of the rank of Kai Grand Master brought with it great rewards. Some, such as the restoration of the Kai and the undying gratitude of your fellow Sommlending, could have been anticipated. Yet there have also been rewards which you could not possibly have foreseen. The discovery that within you lay the potential to develop Kai Disciplines beyond those of the Magnakai, which, until now, were thought to be the ultimate that a Kai Master could aspire to, was truly a revelation. Your discovery has inspired you to set out upon a new and previously unknown path in search of the wisdom and power that no Kai Lord before you has ever possessed. In the name of your creator, the God Kai, and for the greater glory of Sommerlund and the Goddess Ishir, you have vowed to reach the very pinnacle of Kai perfection&emdash;to attain all of the Grand Master Disciplines and become the first Kai Supreme Master.</p>
+     <p>For seven years now peace has reigned in Sommerlund. Under your direction, the once-ruined Monastery of the Kai has been thoroughly rebuilt and restored to its former glory, and the task of teaching a Second Order of Kai warriors the skills and proud traditions of your ancestors is also well under way. The new generation of Kai recruits, all of whom were born during the era of war against the Darklords, possess latent Kai skills and show exceptional promise. These skills will be nurtured and honed to perfection during their time at the monastery so that they may teach and inspire future generations, thereby ensuring the continued security of your homeland in future years.</p>
+     <p>Your attainment of the rank of Kai Grand Master brought with it great rewards. Some, such as the restoration of the Kai and the undying gratitude of your fellow Sommlending, could have been anticipated. Yet there have also been rewards which you could not possibly have foreseen. The discovery that within you lay the potential to develop Kai Disciplines beyond those of the Magnakai, which, until now, were thought to be the ultimate that a Kai Master could aspire to, was truly a revelation. Your discovery has inspired you to set out upon a new and previously unknown path in search of the wisdom and power that no Kai Lord before you has ever possessed. In the name of your creator, the God Kai, and for the greater glory of Sommerlund and the Goddess Ishir, you have vowed to reach the very pinnacle of Kai perfection<ch.emdash/>to attain all of the Grand Master Disciplines and become the first Kai Supreme Master.</p>
      <p>With diligence and determination you set about the restoration of the Kai Monastery and organized the training of the Second Order recruits. Your efforts were soon rewarded and, within the space of two short years, the first raw recruits had graduated to become a cadre of gifted Kai Masters who, in turn, were able to commence the teaching of their skills to subsequent intakes of Kai novices. Readily the Kai Masters rose to their newfound responsibilities, leaving you free to devote more of your time to the pursuit and perfection of the Grand Master Disciplines. During this period you also received expert tutelage in the ways of magic from two of your most trusted friends and advisors: Guildmaster Banedon, leader of the Brotherhood of the Crystal Star, and Lord Rimoah, speaker for the High Council of the Elder Magi.</p>
-     <p>In the deepest subterranean level of the Monastery, a hundred feet below the Tower of the Sun, you ordered the excavation and construction of a special vault. In this magnificent chamber wrought of granite and gold, you placed the seven Lorestones of Nyxator, the gems of Kai power which you had recovered during your quest for the Magnakai. It was here, bathed in the golden light of those radiant gems, that you spent countless hours in pursuit of perfection. Sometimes alone, sometimes in the company of your two able advisors&emdash;Banedon and Rimoah&emdash;you worked hard to develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp the fundamental secrets of Left-handed and Old Kingdom magic. During this time you noticed many remarkable changes taking place within your body: you became physically and mentally stronger, your five primary senses sharpened beyond all that you had experienced before, and, perhaps most remarkably, your body began to age at a much slower rate. Now, for every five years that elapse you age but one year.</p>
+     <p>In the deepest subterranean level of the monastery, a hundred feet below the Tower of the Sun, you ordered the excavation and construction of a special vault. In this magnificent chamber wrought of granite and gold you placed the seven Lorestones of Nyxator, the gems of Kai power which you had recovered during your quest for the Magnakai. It was here, bathed in the golden light of those radiant gems, that you spent countless hours in pursuit of perfection. Sometimes alone, sometimes in the company of your two able advisors<ch.emdash/>Banedon and Rimoah<ch.emdash/>you worked hard to develop your innate Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp the fundamental secrets of Left-handed and Old Kingdom magic. During this time you noticed many remarkable changes taking place within your body: you became physically and mentally stronger, your five primary senses sharpened beyond all that you had experienced before, and, perhaps most remarkably, your body began to age at a much slower rate. Now, for every five years that elapse you age but one year.</p>
      <p>At this time many changes were occurring beyond the borders of Sommerlund. In the regions to the northeast of Magador and the Maakengorge, the Elder Magi of Dessi and the Herbwardens of Bautar were working together in an effort to restore the dusty volcanic wasteland to its former fertile state. It was the first tentative step towards the reclamation of all the Darklands. However, their progress was painfully slow, and both parties were resigned to the fact that their efforts to undo the damage caused by the Darklords would take centuries to complete.</p>
-     <p>Following the destruction of the Darklords of Helgedad, the Giaks, the most numerous of all Gnaag&apos;s troops, fled into the Darklands and sought refuge in the gigantic city-fortresses of Nadgazad, Aarnak, Gournen, Akagazad and Kaag. Within each of these hellish strongholds, fierce fighting broke out as remnants of the Xaghash (lesser Darklords) and the Nadziranim (evil practitioners of Right-handed magic who once aided individual Darklord masters) fought for control. It is widely believed that by the time the Elder Magi and the Herbwardens reach the walls of these strongholds they will encounter no resistance; the occupants will have long since brought about their own extinction.</p>
+     <p>Following the destruction of the Darklords of Helgedad, the Giaks, the most numerous of all Gnaag<ch.apos/>s troops, fled into the Darklands and sought refuge in the gigantic city-fortresses of Nadgazad, Aarnak, Gournen, Akagazad, and Kaag. Within each of these hellish strongholds, fierce fighting broke out as remnants of the Xaghash (lesser Darklords) and the Nadziranim (evil practitioners of Right-handed magic who once aided individual Darklord masters) fought for control. It is widely believed that by the time the Elder Magi and the Herbwardens reach the walls of these strongholds they will encounter no resistance; the occupants will have long since brought about their own extinction.</p>
      <p>Elsewhere, throughout Northern Magnamund, peace reigns victorious and the peoples of the Free Kingdoms rejoice in the knowledge that the age of the Darklords has finally come to an end. Readily men have exchanged their swords for hoes and their shields for ploughs, and now the only marching they do is along the ruts of their freshly furrowed fields. Few are the watchful eyes that scan the distant horizon in fear of what may appear, although there are still those who maintain their vigilance, for the agents of Naar come in many guises and there are those in Magnamund who wait quietly in the shadows for the chance to do his evil bidding.</p>
-     <p>Already your newfound skills have been tested against Naar&apos;s agents and you have, on each such occasion, acquitted yourself admirably. But your continuing victories against his minions have enraged the Dark God, and rarely has his lust for vengeance been greater than it is at present. Recently, Lord Rimoah has counselled you to be extra vigilant, for he fears that Naar is getting ready to strike at Sommerlund anew. The Elder Magi have received warnings from President Kadharian of Magador that something strange is taking place in the north of his country, in the mountainous territory which borders upon the Maakengorge. Freak storms and unseasonal weather have swept this remote region, and the night skies over Lake Vorndarol have, for several weeks now, been illuminated by eerie, inexplicable lights.</p>
-     <p>Lord Rimoah fears that Naar is plotting to revive Vashna, the greatest of all the Darklords, whose spirit is trapped deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. It has remained there, in uneasy entombment, ever since the day the Darklord was defeated in battle by King Ulnar I of Sommerlund. Vashna&apos;s body, along with those of his loathsome troops, was hurled into the abyss, hopefully never to be seen again. Legend has it that the Darklord&apos;s body was destroyed but his spirit still lives on. He is said to be awaiting the day when he shall be made to rise, at the head of a vast army of undead warriors, and set loose to wreak his revenge upon Sommerlund and the house of Ulnar.</p>
-     <p><quote>If it is Naar&apos;s intention to resurrect Vashna and his army from the depths of the Maakengorge,</quote> said an anxious Lord Rimoah, as you and he discussed the situation in the secure privacy of your vault below the Kai Monastery, <quote>then no free realm upon the face of Magnamund will be safe. It has always been Sommerlund&apos;s misfortune that Ulnar&apos;s victory over Vashna was never total. I have always feared that the legacy of the Maakengorge would one day awaken and confront us&ellips; and I fear, unless we act swiftly, that that day is about to dawn.</quote></p>
+     <p>Already your newfound skills have been tested against Naar<ch.apos/>s agents and you have, on each such occasion, acquitted yourself admirably. But your continuing victories against his minions have enraged the Dark God, and rarely has his lust for vengeance been greater than it is at present. Recently, Lord Rimoah has counselled you to be extra vigilant, for he fears that Naar is getting ready to strike at Sommerlund anew. The Elder Magi have received warnings from President Kadharian of Magador that something strange is taking place in the north of his country, in the mountainous territory which borders upon the Maakengorge. Freak storms and unseasonal weather have swept this remote region, and the night skies over Lake Vorndarol have, for several weeks now, been illuminated by eerie, inexplicable lights.</p>
+     <p>Lord Rimoah fears that Naar is plotting to revive Vashna, the greatest of all the Darklords, whose spirit is trapped deep within the fathomless reaches of the Maakengorge. It has remained there, in uneasy entombment, ever since the day the Darklord was defeated in battle by King Ulnar I of Sommerlund. Vashna<ch.apos/>s body, along with those of his loathsome troops, was hurled into the abyss, hopefully never to be seen again. Legend has it that the Darklord<ch.apos/>s body was destroyed but his spirit still lives on. He is said to be awaiting the day when he shall be made to rise, at the head of a vast army of undead warriors, and set loose to wreak his revenge upon Sommerlund and the house of Ulnar.</p>
+     <p><quote>If it is Naar<ch.apos/>s intention to resurrect Vashna and his army from the depths of the Maakengorge,</quote> said an anxious Lord Rimoah, as you and he discussed the situation in the secure privacy of your vault below the Kai Monastery, <quote>then no free realm upon the face of Magnamund will be safe. It has always been Sommerlund<ch.apos/>s misfortune that Ulnar<ch.apos/>s victory over Vashna was never total. I have always feared that the legacy of the Maakengorge would one day awaken and confront us<ch.ellips/> and I fear, unless we act swiftly, that that day is about to dawn.</quote></p>
      <p>For several hours, you and your learned advisor deliberated what could be done to prevent such a catastrophe. You decided that the exact nature of the threat had first to be determined if you were to combat it effectively. You were confident that your Grand Master Disciplines would enable you to unravel this mystery quickly, and so you volunteered to journey to northern Magador and investigate the strange incidents at first hand. After all, there could be a perfectly innocent explanation for them.</p>
      <p><quote>Let us hope it is so, Grand Master,</quote> said Lord Rimoah, earnestly, <quote>but, nevertheless, do not forget what could confront you there. I shall pray to Kai and Ishir to watch over and guide you on the journey ahead, Lone Wolf, and bring you home, swiftly, safely and victoriously.</quote></p>
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-      <p>The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the <a href="&link.rh;">Rules Handbook</a> for details.</p>
+      <p>The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the <a href="&link.rh;">Readers<ch.apos/> Handbook</a> for details.</p>
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      <footnote id="gamerulz-2-foot" idref="gamerulz-2">
-      <p>Note that this list is not identical to the one used in <cite><a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a></cite>: this list is missing the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard. These items are restored to the list of permissible items from the Kai and Magnakai series again in <cite><a href="&link.17tdoi;">The Deathlord of Ixia</a></cite>. Presumably, therefore, it should be permissible to leave the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard in safekeeping at the monastery during the intervening books and retrieve them at the outset of <cite><a href="&link.17tdoi;">The Deathlord of Ixia</a></cite>.</p>
+      <p>Note that this list is not identical to the one used in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref>: this list is missing the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard. These items are restored to the list of permissible items from the Kai and Magnakai series again in <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref>. Presumably, therefore, it should be permissible to leave the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard in safekeeping at the monastery during the intervening books and retrieve them at the outset of <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref>.</p>
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      <p>You keep a record of your adventure on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
-     <p>For more than six years, ever since the demise of the Darklords of Helgedad, you have devoted yourself to developing further your fighting prowess&emdash;<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>&emdash;and physical stamina&emdash;<typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>. Before you begin your first Grand Master adventure you need to measure how effective your training has been. To do this take a pencil and, with your eyes closed, point with the blunt end of it on to the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you pick a 0 it counts as zero.</p>
+     <p>For more than six years, ever since the demise of the Darklords of Helgedad, you have devoted yourself to developing further your fighting prowess<ch.emdash/><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ><ch.emdash/>and physical stamina<ch.emdash/><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>. Before you begin your first Grand Master adventure you need to measure how effective your training has been. To do this take a pencil and, with your eyes closed, point with the blunt end of it on to the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you pick a 0 it counts as zero.</p>
      <p>The first number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> in this way represents your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Add 25 to the number you picked and write the total in the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (i.e., if your pencil fell on the number 6 in the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> you would write in a <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of 31). When you fight, your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> will be pitted against that of your enemy. A high score in this section is therefore very desirable.</p>
      <p>The second number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> represents your powers of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>. Add 30 to this number and write the total in the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (i.e., if your pencil fell on the number 7 on the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> you would have 37 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points).</p>
-     <p>If you are wounded in combat you will lose <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If at any time your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points fall to zero, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can never rise above the number you have when you start an adventure.</p>
-     <p>If you have successfully completed any of the previous adventures in the Lone Wolf series (Books 1&endash;15), you can carry your current scores of <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points over to Book 16. These scores may include Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses obtained upon completion of Lone Wolf Kai (Books 1&endash;5) or Magnakai (Books 6&endash;12) adventures.<a id="gamerulz-1" idref="gamerulz-1-foot" class="footnote" /> Only if you have completed these previous adventures will you benefit from the appropriate bonuses in the course of the Grand Master series. You may also carry over any Weapons and Backpack Items you had in your possession at the end of your last adventure, and these should be entered on your new Grand Master <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (you are still limited to two Weapons, but you may now carry up to ten Backpack Items).</p>
-     <p>However, only the following Special Items may be carried over from the Lone Wolf Kai (Books 1&endash;5) and Magnakai (Books 6&endash;12) series to the Lone Wolf Grand Master series (Books 13-onwards):<a id="gamerulz-2" idref="gamerulz-2-foot" class="footnote"/></p>
+     <p>If you are wounded in combat you will lose <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If at any time your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points fall to zero or below, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can never rise above the number you have when you start an adventure.</p>
+     <p>If you have successfully completed any of the previous adventures in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series (Books 1<ch.endash/>15), you can carry your current scores of <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points over to Book 16. These scores may include Weaponmastery, Curing, and Psi-surge bonuses obtained upon completion of <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Kai (Books 1<ch.endash/>5) or Magnakai (Books 6<ch.endash/>12) adventures.<a id="gamerulz-1" idref="gamerulz-1-foot" class="footnote" /> Only if you have completed these previous adventures will you benefit from the appropriate bonuses in the course of the Grand Master series. You may also carry over any Weapons and Backpack Items you had in your possession at the end of your last adventure, and these should be entered on your new Grand Master <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (you are still limited to two Weapons, but you may now carry up to ten Backpack Items).</p>
+     <p>However, only the following Special Items may be carried over from the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Kai (Books 1<ch.endash/>5) and Magnakai (Books 6<ch.endash/>12) series to the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master series (Books 13-onwards):<a id="gamerulz-2" idref="gamerulz-2-foot" class="footnote"/></p>
      <ul>
       <li>Crystal Star Pendant</li>
       <li>Sommerswerd</li>
@@ -225,7 +232,7 @@ Initial revision
 
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
-        <p>The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6&endash;12) and the fact that the <quote>rank of Kai Grand Defender&ellips; means you are skilled in two&ellips; weapons</quote> imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13&endash;20), you will gain mastery of an additional Kai weapon. E.g. if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have Mastery of.</p>
+        <p>The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6<ch.endash/>12) and the fact that the <quote>rank of Kai Grand Defender<ch.ellips/> means you are skilled in two<ch.ellips/> weapons</quote> imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional Weapon. E.g. if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have mastery of.</p>
        </footnote>
       </footnotes>
 
@@ -243,9 +250,9 @@ Initial revision
           <dt>Weaponmastery</dt>
            <dd>Proficiency with all close combat and missile weapons. Master of unarmed combat; no <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> loss when fighting bare-handed.</dd>
           <dt>Animal Control</dt>
-           <dd>Communication with most animals; limited control over hostile creatures. Can use woodland animals as guides and can block a non-sentient creature&apos;s sense of taste and smell.</dd>
+           <dd>Communication with most animals; limited control over hostile creatures. Can use woodland animals as guides and can block a non-sentient creature<ch.apos/>s sense of taste and smell.</dd>
           <dt>Curing</dt>
-           <dd>Steady restoration of lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points (to self and others) as a result of combat wounds. Neutralization of poisons, venoms and toxins. Repair of serious battle wounds.</dd>
+           <dd>Steady restoration of lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points (to self and others) as a result of combat wounds. Neutralization of poisons, venoms, and toxins. Repair of serious battle wounds.</dd>
           <dt>Invisibility</dt>
            <dd>Mask body heat and scent; hide effectively; mask sounds during movement; minor alterations of physical appearance.</dd>
           <dt>Huntmastery</dt>
@@ -334,7 +341,7 @@ Initial revision
        <section class="frontmatter" id="kaisurge">
         <meta><title>Kai-surge</title></meta>
         <data>
-         <p>When using their psychic ability to attack an enemy, Grand Masters may add 8 points to their <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. For every round in which Kai-surge is used, Grand Masters need only deduct 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point. When using the weaker psychic attack&emdash;Mindblast&emdash;they may add 4 points without loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. (Kai-surge, Psi-surge, and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</p>
+         <p>When using their psychic ability to attack an enemy, Grand Masters may add 8 points to their <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. For every round in which Kai-surge is used, Grand Masters need only deduct 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point. When using the weaker psychic attack<ch.emdash/>Mindblast<ch.emdash/>they may add 4 points without loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. (Kai-surge, Psi-surge, and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</p>
          <p>Grand Masters cannot use Kai-surge if their <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score falls to 6 points or below.</p>
         </data>
        </section>
@@ -363,20 +370,20 @@ Initial revision
        <section class="frontmatter" id="magi">
         <meta><title>Magi-magic</title></meta>
         <data>
-         <p>Under the tutelage of Lord Rimoah, you have been able to master the rudimentary skills of battle magic, as taught to the Vakeros&emdash;the native warriors of Dessi. As you advance in rank, so will your knowledge and mastery of Old Kingdom magic increase.</p>
+         <p>Under the tutelage of Lord Rimoah, you have been able to master the rudimentary skills of battle-magic, as taught to the Vakeros<ch.emdash/>the native warriors of Dessi. As you advance in rank, so will your knowledge and mastery of Old Kingdom magic increase.</p>
         </data>
        </section>
 
        <section class="frontmatter" id="alchemy">
         <meta><title>Kai-alchemy</title></meta>
         <data>
-         <p>Under the tutelage of Guildmaster Banedon, you have mastered the elementary spells of Left-handed magic, as practised by the Brotherhood of the Crystal Star. As you advance in rank, so will your knowledge and mastery of Left-handed magic increase, enabling you to craft new Kai weapons and artifacts.</p>
+         <p>Under the tutelage of Guildmaster Banedon, you have mastered the elementary spells of Left-handed magic, as practised by the Brotherhood of the Crystal Star. As you advance in rank, so will your knowledge and mastery of Left-handed magic increase, enabling you to craft new Kai weapons and artefacts.</p>
         </data>
        </section>
 
-       <p>If you successfully complete the mission as set in this, the fourth of the Lone Wolf Grand Master series, you may add a further Grand Master Discipline of your choice to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> in <a href="&link.17tdoi;">Book 17</a>.</p>
+       <p>If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 16 of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master series, you may add a further Grand Master Discipline of your choice to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> in <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi">Book 17</bookref>.</p>
 
-       <p>For every Grand Master Discipline you possess, in excess of the original four Disciplines you begin with, you may add 1 point to your basic <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> score and 2 points to your basic <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score. These bonus points, together with your extra Grand Master Discipline(s), your original four Grand Master Disciplines, and any Special Items that you have found and been able to keep during your adventures, may then be carried over and used in the next Grand Master adventure, which is called <a href="&link.17tdoi;"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite>.</a></p>
+       <p>For every Grand Master Discipline you possess, in excess of the original four Disciplines you begin with, you may add 1 point to your basic <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> score and 2 points to your basic <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score. These bonus points, together with your extra Grand Master Discipline(s), your original four Grand Master Disciplines, and any Special Items that you have found and been able to keep during your adventures, may then be carried over and used in the next Grand Master adventure, which is called <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref>.</p>
       </data>
      </section>
 
@@ -389,7 +396,7 @@ Initial revision
 
       <data>
        <p>Before you set off on your long journey to Magador, you take with you a <a idref="map">map of the Maakengorge and surrounding territories</a> and a pouch of gold. To find out how much gold is in the pouch, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> and add 20 to the number you have picked. The total equals the number of Gold Crowns inside the pouch, and you should now enter this number in the <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
-      <p>If you have successfully completed any of the previous Lone Wolf adventures (Books 1&endash;15), you may add this sum to the total sum of Crowns you already possess. Fifty Crowns is the maximum you can carry, but additional Crowns can be left in safekeeping at your monastery.</p>
+      <p>If you have successfully completed any of the previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures (Books 1<ch.endash/>15), you may add this sum to the total sum of Crowns you already possess. Fifty Crowns is the maximum you can carry, but additional Crowns can be left in safekeeping at your monastery.</p>
       <p>You can take four items from the list below, again adding to these, if necessary, any you may already possess from previous adventures (remember, you are still limited to two Weapons, but you may now carry a maximum of ten Backpack Items).</p>
       <ul class="paragraphed">
        <li><p>Sword (Weapons)</p></li>
@@ -461,8 +468,8 @@ Initial revision
           <dd><p>The maximum number of weapons that you can carry is two. Weapons aid you in combat. If you have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery and a correct weapon, it adds 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. If you find a weapon during your adventure, you may pick it up and use it.</p></dd>
          <dt>Bows and Arrows</dt>
           <dd>
-           <p>During your adventure there will be opportunities to use a Bow and Arrow. If you equip yourself with this weapon, and you possess at least one Arrow, you may use it when the text of a particular section allows you to do so. The Bow is a useful weapon, for it enables you to hit an enemy at a distance. However, a Bow cannot be used in hand-to-hand combat, therefore it is strongly recommended that you also equip yourself with a close combat weapon, such as a sword or axe.</p>
-           <p>In order to use a Bow you must possess a quiver and at least one Arrow. Each time the Bow is used, erase an Arrow from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. A Bow cannot, of course, be used if you exhaust your supply of Arrows, but the opportunity may arise during your adventure for you to replenish your stock of Arrows.</p>
+           <p>During your adventure there will be opportunities to use a Bow and Arrow. If you equip yourself with this weapon, and you possess at least one Arrow, you may use it when the text of a particular section allows you to do so. The Bow is a useful weapon, for it enables you to hit an enemy at a distance. However, a Bow cannot be used in hand-to-hand combat; therefore it is strongly recommended that you also equip yourself with a close combat weapon, such as a sword or axe.</p>
+           <p>In order to use a Bow you must possess a Quiver and at least one Arrow. Each time the Bow is used, erase an Arrow from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. A Bow cannot, of course, be used if you exhaust your supply of Arrows, but the opportunity may arise during your adventure for you to replenish your stock of Arrows.</p>
            <p>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</p>
           </dd>
          <dt>Backpack Items</dt>
@@ -496,15 +503,15 @@ Initial revision
      </meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>There will be occasions during your adventure when you have to fight an enemy. The enemy&apos;s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points are given in the text. Lone Wolf&apos;s aim in the combat is to kill the enemy by reducing his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to zero while losing as few <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points as possible himself.</p>
-      <p>At the start of a combat, enter Lone Wolf&apos;s and the enemy&apos;s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points in the appropriate boxes on the Combat Record section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. The sequence for combat is as follows:</p>
+      <p>There will be occasions during your adventure when you have to fight an enemy. The enemy<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points are given in the text. Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s aim in the combat is to kill the enemy by reducing his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to zero while losing as few <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points as possible himself.</p>
+      <p>At the start of a combat, enter Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s and the enemy<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points in the appropriate boxes on the Combat Record section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. The sequence for combat is as follows:</p>
       <ol class="paragraphed"> 
        <li><p>Add any extra points gained through your Grand Master Disciplines and Special Items to your current <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> total.</p></li>
        <li>
         <p>Subtract the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of your enemy from this total. The result is your Combat Ratio. Enter it on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
         <p>Example</p>
         <p>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27) is attacked by a pack of Doomwolves (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 30). He is taken by surprise and is not given the opportunity of evading their attack. Lone Wolf has the Grand Master Discipline of Kai-surge to which the Doomwolves are not immune, so Lone Wolf adds 8 points to his <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>, giving him a total <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of 35.</p>
-        <p>He subtracts the Doomwolf pack&apos;s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> from his own, giving a Combat Ratio of +5. (35&minus;30 = +5). +5 is noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as the Combat Ratio.</p>
+        <p>He subtracts the Doomwolf pack<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> from his own, giving a Combat Ratio of +5. (35<ch.minus/>30 = +5). +5 is noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as the Combat Ratio.</p>
        </li>
        <li><p><a id="stage3">When you have your Combat Ratio</a>, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p></li>
        <li>
@@ -521,7 +528,7 @@ Initial revision
        <li><p>Repeat the sequence from <a idref="stage3">Stage 3.</a></p></li>
       </ol>
 
-      <p>This process of combat continues until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points reduced.</p>
+      <p>This process of combat continues until <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points possibly reduced.</p>
       <p>A <a idref="crsumary">summary of Combat Rules</a> appears in the back of this book.</p>
 
       <section class="frontmatter" id="evasion">
@@ -542,13 +549,13 @@ Initial revision
      </meta>
      <data>
 
-      <p>The following table is a guide to the rank and titles you can achieve at each stage of your journey along the road of Kai Grand Mastership. As you successfully complete each adventure in the Lone Wolf Grand Master series, you will gain an additional Grand Master Discipline and progress towards the pinnacle of Kai perfection&emdash;to become a Kai Supreme Master.</p>
+      <p>The following table is a guide to the rank and titles you can achieve at each stage of your journey along the road of Kai Grand Mastership. As you successfully complete each adventure in the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master series, you will gain an additional Grand Master Discipline and progress towards the pinnacle of Kai perfection<ch.emdash/>to become a Kai Supreme Master.</p>
 
       <ol>
        <li>Kai Grand Master Senior</li> 
        <li>Kai Grand Master Superior</li>
        <li>Kai Grand Sentinel</li>
-       <li>Kai Grand Defender&emdash;<em>You begin the Lone Wolf Grand Master adventures at this level of Mastery</em></li>
+       <li>Kai Grand Defender<ch.emdash/><em>You begin the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master adventures at this level of Mastery</em></li>
        <li>Kai Grand Guardian</li>
        <li>Sun Knight</li>
        <li>Sun Lord</li>
@@ -583,7 +590,7 @@ Initial revision
         <p>If you are a Grand Master who has reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian (5 Disciplines), you will now benefit from improvements to the following Grand Master Disciplines:</p>
         <dl class="paragraphed">
          <dt>Animal Mastery</dt>
-          <dd><p>Kai Grand Guardians with this Discipline are able to  summon a limited number of forest animals to their location. The creatures so summoned will become loyal and willing allies, willing to do the Kai Grand Guardian&apos;s bidding. This ability can only be used in an outdoor setting.</p></dd>
+          <dd><p>Kai Grand Guardians with this Discipline are able to  summon a limited number of forest animals to their location. The creatures so summoned will become loyal and willing allies, willing to do the Kai Grand Guardian<ch.apos/>s bidding. This ability can only be used in an outdoor setting.</p></dd>
          <dt>Assimilance</dt>
           <dd><p>Kai Grand Guardians who possess this skill are able to create a cloud of fog-like vapour within 15 yards of their location. This fog will obscure both normal and infravision. The duration of the fog increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
          <dt>Grand Huntmastery</dt>
@@ -596,8 +603,8 @@ Initial revision
           <dd>
            <p>Grand Masters who have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian are able to use the following battle-spells of the Elder Magi:</p>
            <ul>
-            <li><spell>Splinter</spell>&emdash;This causes breakable items such as bottles, jugs, mirrors, windows, etc., to shatter to pieces. The range of this spell increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</li>
-            <li><spell>Flameshaft</spell>&emdash;This causes the tip of any Arrow or Arrow-like missile, to burn fiercely with a magical flame which cannot readily be extinguished by normal means.</li>
+            <li><spell>Splinter</spell><ch.emdash/>This causes breakable items such as bottles, jugs, mirrors, windows, etc., to shatter to pieces. The range of this spell increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</li>
+            <li><spell>Flameshaft</spell><ch.emdash/>This causes the tip of any Arrow or Arrow-like missile, to burn fiercely with a magical flame which cannot readily be extinguished by normal means.</li>
            </ul>
           </dd>
         </dl>
@@ -612,7 +619,7 @@ Initial revision
          <dt>Grand Weaponmastery</dt>
           <dd><p>Sun Knights with this Discipline are able to wield two-handed weapons (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear) with full effect, using only one hand.</p></dd>
          <dt>Deliverance</dt>
-          <dd><p>Sun Knights who possess this skill are able to repair serious wounds sustained by creatures other than themselves. By the laying of hands upon the affected creature&apos;s body, a Sun Knight can cause an open wound (or other serious injury) to mend itself. The speed at which this healing takes place increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
+          <dd><p>Sun Knights who possess this skill are able to repair serious wounds sustained by creatures other than themselves. By the laying of hands upon the affected creature<ch.apos/>s body, a Sun Knight can cause an open wound (or other serious injury) to mend itself. The speed at which this healing takes place increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
          <dt>Grand Pathsmanship</dt>
           <dd><p>Kai Sun Knights with this skill are able to repel at will all normal-sized insects within a radius of three yards. The range and numbers of insects so affected increases considerably as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
          <dt>Grand Nexus</dt>
@@ -623,8 +630,8 @@ Initial revision
           <dd>
            <p>Grand Masters who have reached the rank of Sun Knight are able to use the following Brotherhood spells:</p>
            <ul>
-            <li><spell>Halt Missile</spell>&emdash;This causes any projected or hurled missile (i.e. Arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc.) which may pose an immediate threat to the life of a Sun Knight, to cease its flight and remain stationary in mid-air. The effect of the spell lasts for 2&endash;3 seconds, allowing the Sun Knight sufficient time to move away from its line of flight. Initially only one missile can be affected by this spell, but the number increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</li>
-            <li><spell>Strength</spell>&emdash;By casting this spell, a Sun Knight is able to greatly increase his or her physical strength for a short duration. It can be used to lift or move heavy objects, or to effect a temporary increase in <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> scores whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat.<a id="imprvdsc-1" idref="imprvdsc-1-foot" class="footnote" /></li>
+            <li><spell>Halt Missile</spell><ch.emdash/>This causes any projected or hurled missile (i.e. Arrows, axes, crossbow bolts etc.) which may pose an immediate threat to the life of a Sun Knight, to cease its flight and remain stationary in mid-air. The effect of the spell lasts for 2<ch.endash/>3 seconds, allowing the Sun Knight sufficient time to move away from its line of flight. Initially only one missile can be affected by this spell, but the number increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</li>
+            <li><spell>Strength</spell><ch.emdash/>By casting this spell, a Sun Knight is able to greatly increase his or her physical strength for a short duration. It can be used to lift or move heavy objects, or to effect a temporary increase in <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> scores whilst fighting an enemy in unarmed combat.<a id="imprvdsc-1" idref="imprvdsc-1-foot" class="footnote" /></li>
            </ul>
           </dd>
         </dl>
@@ -643,15 +650,15 @@ Initial revision
           <dt>Grand Huntmastery</dt>
            <dd><p>Kai Sun Lords with this skill are able to see, with acute accuracy, light in the infrared spectrum, i.e. they can see complex patterns generated by heat in near or total darkness. They can also see light in the ultraviolet spectrum.</p></dd>
           <dt>Kai-surge</dt>
-           <dd><p>Sun Lords who possess mastery of this Discipline are able to launch a Kai-blast&emdash;a pulse of intense psychic energy which is capable of affecting both psychically active and inactive enemies. This form of psychic attack is very effective, more so than a usual Kai-surge, Psi-surge or Mindblast. It can cause an enemy to lose between 2 and 18 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points in one attack. A Kai Sun Lord using Kai-blast determines the damage inflicted on an enemy by picking two numbers from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. These numbers should be added together (a <quote>0</quote> = 1) and the resultant total equals the damage inflicted. However, use of a Kai-blast will reduce a Sun Lord&apos;s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total by 4. It cannot be used in conjunction with any other form of psychic attack.</p></dd>
+           <dd><p>Sun Lords who possess mastery of this Discipline are able to launch a Kai-blast<ch.emdash/>a pulse of intense psychic energy which is capable of affecting both psychically active and inactive enemies. This form of psychic attack is very effective, more so than a usual Kai-surge, Psi-surge or Mindblast. It can cause an enemy to lose between 2 and 18 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points in one attack. A Kai Sun Lord using Kai-blast determines the damage inflicted on an enemy by picking two numbers from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. These numbers should be added together (a <quote>0</quote> = 1) and the resultant total equals the damage inflicted. However, use of a Kai-blast will reduce a Sun Lord<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total by 4. It cannot be used in conjunction with any other form of psychic attack.</p></dd>
           <dt>Telegnosis</dt>
            <dd><p>Sun Lords who possess this Discipline are able to alter their body weight in order to walk successfully upon different kinds of surfaces, e.g. water, mud, lava, and quicksand. Time duration and degree of surface difficulty increases as a Grand Master rises in rank.</p></dd>
           <dt>Magi-magic</dt>
            <dd>
             <p>Grand Masters who have reached the rank of Sun Lord are able to use the following battle-spells of the Elder Magi:</p>
             <ul>
-             <li><spell>Penetrate</spell>&emdash;This increases the penetrative energy of any Arrow or Arrow-like missile, launched by a Sun Lord.</li>
-             <li><spell>Energy Grasp</spell>&emdash;This spell enables a Sun Lord to discharge a powerful electrical force into anything he or she touches. It is similar in effect to the Brotherhood spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, but differs in that it is easier to control and channel the resulting energy. It also requires the actual touching of an object or an enemy to effect the spell.</li>
+             <li><spell>Penetrate</spell><ch.emdash/>This increases the penetrative energy of any Arrow or Arrow-like missile, launched by a Sun Lord.</li>
+             <li><spell>Energy Grasp</spell><ch.emdash/>This spell enables a Sun Lord to discharge a powerful electrical force into anything he or she touches. It is similar in effect to the Brotherhood spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, but differs in that it is easier to control and channel the resulting energy. It also requires the actual touching of an object or an enemy to effect the spell.</li>
             </ul>
            </dd>
          </dl>
@@ -660,22 +667,22 @@ Initial revision
 
       </data>
      </section>
-     <p>The nature of any additional improvements and how they affect your Grand Master Disciplines will be noted in the Improved Grand Master Disciplines section of future Lone Wolf books.</p>
+     <p>The nature of any additional improvements and how they affect your Grand Master Disciplines will be noted in the Improved Grand Master Disciplines section of future <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books.</p>
 
     </data>
    </section>
 
    <section class="frontmatter" id="kaiwisdm">
     <meta>
-     <title>Grand Master&apos;s Wisdom</title>
+     <title>Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</title>
      <link class="prev" idref="imprvdsc" />
      <link class="next" idref="sect1" />
     </meta>
 
     <data>
      <p>Northern Magador, which borders upon the Maakengorge, is a notoriously wild and treacherous region. Be wary and on your guard at all times, for you can expect little help from the outlaws and fell creatures who dwell in this area.</p>
-     <p>Some of the things that you will encounter during your mission will be of use to you in this and future Lone Wolf books, while others may be red herrings of no real value at all. If you discover any items, be selective in what you choose to keep.</p>
-     <p>Pick your four Grand Master Disciplines with care, for a wise choice will enable any player to complete the mission, no matter how weak their initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> scores may be. Successful completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures, although an advantage, is not essential for the completion of this Grand Master adventure.</p>
+     <p>Some of the things that you will encounter during your mission will be of use to you in this and future <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books, while others may be red herrings of no real value at all. If you discover any items, be selective in what you choose to keep.</p>
+     <p>Pick your four Grand Master Disciplines with care, for a wise choice will enable any player to complete the mission, no matter how weak their initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> scores may be. Successful completion of previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures, although an advantage, is not essential for the completion of this Grand Master adventure.</p>
      <p>May the light of Kai and Ishir be your guide as you venture into the unknown.</p>
      <p>For Sommerlund and the Kai!</p>
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-        <p>Note this Scroll as a Special Item that doesn&apos;t take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
+        <p>Note this Scroll as a Special Item that doesn<ch.apos/>t take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
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-       <p>The hours leading up to your departure from the Kai Monastery are spent in the company of your able advisor, Lord Rimoah. Having discussed the mission at great length, you busy yourself now with the practical preparations for your long journey to Magador. He gives you a Scroll which contains a written invitation from President Kadharian to attend his senate to <quote>discuss trade between Sommerlund and Magador</quote>.<a id="sect1-1" idref="sect1-1-foot" class="footnote" /> It will provide a cover for you should the need arise to justify your journey. Also, in the interests of secrecy, you decide it best to discard your formal Kai robes in favour of less conspicuous garments, and you choose instead to wear the simple clothes of a guildsman&emdash;woollen breeches, leather tunic, and a cloak. Dressed thus, and aided by your innate Kai skills of invisibility, you feel confident you will be able to travel the road to Helgor, the Magadorian capital, without drawing undue attention to yourself or your purpose.</p>
-       <p>By horse, the journey to Helgor could be expected to take five weeks. Your initial thought had been to send word to your friend, Guildmaster Banedon, requesting that he allow you use of his magical skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite>. However, on this occasion you will have to forego the speedy comfort of his wondrous craft, for Banedon is using it himself on a quest to the distant land of Bhanar in southern Magnamund, and he is not expected to return to Sommerlund before the year&apos;s end.</p>
-       <p>Your second choice was also to prove unsuitable. Having resigned yourself to a long journey on horseback, you immediately sent an order to the monastery stables for your horse, Storm, to be saddled and made ready. This fine Slovarian stallion had been a gift to you from Elector Manatine of Palmyrion, in gratitude for the crucial part you played in the victory over the evil Cener Druids of Ruel. His strength, intelligence, and indomitable spirit had reminded you so much of your old Kai tutor&emdash;Storm Hawk&emdash;that you chose to name the horse Storm in his memory. But, as Rimoah quickly pointed out, such a magnificent horse would be sure to attract suspicion, especially if it was ridden by what appeared to be a humble guildsman. And so, albeit reluctantly, you had the stables prepare you another horse, a strong but less exceptional mount called Bracer.</p>
+       <p>The hours leading up to your departure from the Kai Monastery are spent in the company of your able advisor, Lord Rimoah. Having discussed the mission at great length, you busy yourself now with the practical preparations for your long journey to Magador. He gives you a Scroll which contains a written invitation from President Kadharian to attend his senate to <quote>discuss trade between Sommerlund and Magador</quote>.<a id="sect1-1" idref="sect1-1-foot" class="footnote" /> It will provide a cover for you should the need arise to justify your journey. Also, in the interests of secrecy, you decide it best to discard your formal Kai robes in favour of less conspicuous garments, and you choose instead to wear the simple clothes of a guildsman<ch.emdash/>woollen breeches, leather tunic, and a cloak. Dressed thus, and aided by your innate Kai skills of Invisibility, you feel confident you will be able to travel the road to Helgor, the Magadorian capital, without drawing undue attention to yourself or your purpose.</p>
+       <p>By horse, the journey to Helgor could be expected to take five weeks. Your initial thought had been to send word to your friend, Guildmaster Banedon, requesting that he allow you use of his magical skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite>. However, on this occasion you will have to forego the speedy comfort of his wondrous craft, for Banedon is using it himself on a quest to the distant land of Bhanar in southern Magnamund, and he is not expected to return to Sommerlund before the year<ch.apos/>s end.</p>
+       <p>Your second choice was also to prove unsuitable. Having resigned yourself to a long journey on horseback, you immediately sent an order to the monastery stables for your horse, Storm, to be saddled and made ready. This fine Slovarian stallion had been a gift to you from Elector Manatine of Palmyrion, in gratitude for the crucial part you played in the victory over the evil Cener Druids of Ruel. His strength, intelligence, and indomitable spirit had reminded you so much of your old Kai tutor<ch.emdash/>Storm Hawk<ch.emdash/>that you chose to name the horse Storm in his memory. But, as Rimoah quickly pointed out, such a magnificent horse would be sure to attract suspicion, especially if it was ridden by what appeared to be a humble guildsman. And so, albeit reluctantly, you had the stables prepare you another horse, a strong but less exceptional mount called Bracer.</p>
        <choice idref="sect105"><link-text>Turn to 105</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The moment you slay the first two of these strange creatures, their bodies dissolve into a swirling cloud of steamy vapour. Now, upon the death of the third beast, the vapours unite and expand with breathtaking speed until the basalt island and the entire fiery plain beyond are engulfed by a thickening grey fog.</p>
        <p>You walk through this sea of mist for what seems like an eternity until your senses detect that something is circling high above you. At first you suspect that more of the golden-winged creatures have come hunting for you, but then you detect that it is something completely different. There is only one creature, and you sense that it is using a highly-developed psychic probe in order to seek you out.</p>
        <choice idref="sect31">If you possess Grand Nexus and have reached the Kai rank of Sun Knight or higher, <link-text>turn to 31</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect106">If you do not possess this skill, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 106</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect106">If you do not possess this skill, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 106</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You reach the cover of a dense pine copse and quickly dismount. Having secured Bracer&apos;s reins to a tree, you move to the edge of the copse to try to catch a glimpse of your attackers. You have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, armed with crossbows and swords, are rushing through the undergrowth towards your hiding place.</p>
+       <p>You reach the cover of a dense pine copse and quickly dismount. Having secured Bracer<ch.apos/>s reins to a tree, you move to the edge of the copse to try to catch a glimpse of your attackers. You have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, armed with crossbows and swords, are rushing through the undergrowth towards your hiding place.</p>
        <choice idref="sect330">If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 330</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect136">If you do not, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The instant you correctly complete the sequence, a deep hum resonates from inside the upper tier, and slowly it opens to reveal a hexagonal crystal plinth with a circular hole at its centre.<a id="sect6-1" idref="sect6-1-foot" class="footnote" /> Your Kai senses inform you that by inserting the tip of the Deathstaff into the hole, you will cause the Shadow Gate beneath the great arch to close.</p>
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        <p>Trembling with fear and exhilaration, you raise the Deathstaff above your head and bring it down with one mighty thrust, driving it deep into the hole.</p>
        <choice idref="sect246"><link-text>Turn to 246</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You have ridden to within five miles of the hamlet when you are forced to leave the trail and take cover. Ahead, you see a group of Vakovarian bandits encamped on a bridge which carries the trail across a fast-flowing stream. Rather than risk a confrontation, you follow this tributary of the River Storn a mile downstream until you happen upon a shallow bend where the water is fordable on horseback. You cross here, make a wide detour, and then return to the trail a mile beyond the Vakovarian&apos;s encampment.</p>
+       <p>You have ridden to within five miles of the hamlet when you are forced to leave the trail and take cover. Ahead, you see a group of Vakovarian bandits encamped on a bridge which carries the trail across a fast-flowing stream. Rather than risk a confrontation, you follow this tributary of the River Storn a mile downstream until you happen upon a shallow bend where the water is fordable on horseback. You cross here, make a wide detour, and then return to the trail a mile beyond the Vakovarian<ch.apos/>s encampment.</p>
        <p>The trail gradually descends towards the burnt and derelict hovels of Vorn, clustered in squalid disarray around a greystone quay. Vakovarian bandits occupy the ruined hamlet and you decide it wise to leave the trail in case they have posted a lookout. A copse of stunted firs offers you a good hiding place for your horse. You tether him here, then gather some grasses and roots for him to eat while you are away scouting the hamlet.</p>
        <p>You have no difficulty entering Vorn unseen. From the first-floor ruins of a burnt-out inn on the outskirts of the hamlet you make a careful observation of the Vakovarians. They seem to be systematically looting the ruins and transporting their ill-gotten booty to a fishing boat which is moored at the quay. You are watching this boat closely when suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of a yapping dog.</p>
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        <choice idref="sect281">If you possess Animal Mastery, <link-text>turn to 281</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect2">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 2</link-text>.</choice>
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-        <p>This is the correct answer to Shamath&apos;s riddle in <a idref="sect189">Section 189</a>.</p>
+        <p>This is the correct answer to Shamath<ch.apos/>s riddle in <a idref="sect189">Section 189</a>.</p>
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        <p>Cautiously you approach the circle of boulders, leading your frozen horse by the reins. Through a gap in the boulders you see a pack of eight ridge-backed Jackals feeding on the carcass of a Durncrag Scavenger, a vulture-like bird of prey. They are engrossed with their meal until they suddenly detect the scent of their most favoured food: live horsemeat.</p>
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-         <description>With a frenzied howl the wild Jackals abandon the feathery carcass and come streaming through the gap in the boulders.</description>
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        <p>With a frenzied howl the wild Jackals abandon the feathery carcass and come streaming through the gap in the boulders, drawn by the scent of your horse. They seem to know that he is in a weakened state, and this fuels their fury. Your horse takes fright and tries to pull away, his hooves flailing the air perilously close to your skull, and as the first of the Jackals makes its attack, you find yourself struggling to hold on to the reins with one hand and fight them off with the other.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Vorndarol Jackals</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">42</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">38</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>Unless you possess Grand Weaponmastery and have reached the rank of Sun Knight or higher, you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 5 for the duration of this combat.</p>
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        <p>The first light of dawn brings with it a dramatic change in the weather. The storm has ended and the sky is now bright and clear, but on the distant horizon you can still see flashes of lightning and hear thunder rumbling in the mountains.</p>
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        <p>After drying out your equipment and tending to the minor cuts and abrasions that Bracer sustained last night, you climb into the saddle and set off along the muddy track, most of which you discover has been washed away by the flood. The damp earth is steaming in the unusual heat of the morning sun, and the air crackles with an eerie residue of static electricity.</p>
        <p>You continue your ride through the hills without stopping until, shortly after midday, you come to a derelict hovel which stands at the edge of a marshy peat bog. Your Kai senses inform you that there is somebody inside and, spurred on by curiosity, you resolve to find out who they are. You dismount and leave Bracer to feed on the marsh grass while you go forward to investigate the hovel on foot. You are six metres away from its rotting wooden door when suddenly it creaks open and you see an old man standing in the doorway. He is smiling at you.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect220">If you have ever visited the city of Varetta, the city of Tahou, or a hut on the Ruanon Pike in a previous Lone Wolf adventure, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect220">If you have ever visited the city of Varetta, the city of Tahou, or a hut on the Ruanon Pike in a previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventure, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect53">If you have never visited any of these places, <link-text>turn to 53</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The man makes a slow, sure-footed descent to within three metres of where you are standing, during which time his weapon&apos;s sights never leave your chest. You can tell immediately that he is a skilled hunter and, judging by his furs and his beautifully crafted crossbow, he is a successful one too.</p>
+       <p>The man makes a slow, sure-footed descent to within three metres of where you are standing, during which time his weapon<ch.apos/>s sights never leave your chest. You can tell immediately that he is a skilled hunter and, judging by his furs and his beautifully crafted crossbow, he is a successful one too.</p>
        <p>Your muscles are tense and coiled like springs, ready to propel you out of the path of his crossbow bolt in case he fires. But then he says something which makes you realize that, maybe, he has no intentions of killing you after all.</p>
        <choice idref="sect340"><link-text>Turn to 340</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Using your Kai mastery, you attempt to stop the creature dead in its tracks with a sharp psychic command. The beast shudders, its instincts confused, but it possesses an unusually strong will, and you can sense that it may overcome your mental suggestion.</p>
+       <p>Using your Kai Mastery, you attempt to stop the creature dead in its tracks with a sharp psychic command. The beast shudders, its instincts confused, but it possesses an unusually strong will, and you can sense that it may overcome your mental suggestion.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. For every Grand Master rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Defender, add 1 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect336">If your total score is now 5 or less, <link-text>turn to 336</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect306">If it is 6 or more, <link-text>turn to 306</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You flick your heel against Bracer&apos;s flank and urge him towards the dingy street. Here, only a few houses show any light, and this through the knotholes and cracks of their bolted shutters. At length you come to a junction illuminated by a solitary street lantern. You are trying to decide which way to turn when your eye is distracted by something moving in the shadows. From out of a darkened doorway steps a pale-skinned woman wrapped in a black velvet cloak, edged with scarlet silk.</p>
-       <p><quote>&thinspace;&apos;Tis no night to be out ridin&apos;,</quote> she says, her voice syrupy and seductive, <quote>not &apos;less you be lookin&apos; for company.</quote></p>
-       <p>You tell her you have no need for her company and turn your horse to leave, but suddenly you find yourself transfixed by the woman&apos;s eyes and unable to move. They seem unnaturally vibrant, as if filled with a flickering green fire; she is using magic in an attempt to charm you. Instinctively, you draw on your innate psychic Kai powers to try to dispel the charm, but her magic is unusually strong.</p>
+       <p>You flick your heel against Bracer<ch.apos/>s flank and urge him towards the dingy street. Here, only a few houses show any light, and this through the knotholes and cracks of their bolted shutters. At length you come to a junction illuminated by a solitary street lantern. You are trying to decide which way to turn when your eye is distracted by something moving in the shadows. From out of a darkened doorway steps a pale-skinned woman wrapped in a black velvet cloak, edged with scarlet silk.</p>
+       <p><quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>Tis no night to be out ridin<ch.apos/>,</quote> she says, her voice syrupy and seductive, <quote>not <ch.apos/>less you be lookin<ch.apos/> for company.</quote></p>
+       <p>You tell her you have no need for her company and turn your horse to leave, but suddenly you find yourself transfixed by the woman<ch.apos/>s eyes and unable to move. They seem unnaturally vibrant, as if filled with a flickering green fire; she is using magic in an attempt to charm you. Instinctively, you draw on your innate psychic Kai powers to try to dispel the charm, but her magic is unusually strong.</p>
        <choice idref="sect346">If you possess the Grand Master Discipline of Kai-screen, <link-text>turn to 346</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect290">If you do not possess this skill, <link-text>turn to 290</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You make a slow descent to the clearing, trusting to your camouflage skills to keep you hidden as you move from one boulder to the next. You are less than ten metres from the carcass when you hear the faint scrape of leather on stone. You turn to look and a man&apos;s voice growls, <quote>Don&apos;t move!</quote></p>
+       <p>You make a slow descent to the clearing, trusting to your camouflage skills to keep you hidden as you move from one boulder to the next. You are less than ten metres from the carcass when you hear the faint scrape of leather on stone. You turn to look and a man<ch.apos/>s voice growls, <quote>Don<ch.apos/>t move!</quote></p>
        <p>Standing between two boulders away to your left is a grey-bearded man, clad in furs and clutching a loaded crossbow. The weapon is pointing at your heart.</p>
        <choice idref="sect201">If you possess the Discipline of Telegnosis, and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect280">If you do not possess this skill, or choose not to use it, <link-text>turn to 280</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The instant you step through the archway you feel an electrifying jolt run through your body, and snake-like tendrils of blue-white energy writhe from the rim of the arch to the hilt of Vashna&apos;s Dagger. A gasp of astonishment arises from the acolytes, audible even above the howling wind.</p>
-       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard&apos;s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the dagger free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the dark blade&apos;s unholy energy, but then the tip of Cadak&apos;s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
+       <p>The instant you step through the archway you feel an electrifying jolt run through your body, and snake-like tendrils of blue-white energy writhe from the rim of the arch to the hilt of Vashna<ch.apos/>s Dagger. A gasp of astonishment arises from the acolytes, audible even above the howling wind.</p>
+       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard<ch.apos/>s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the dagger free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the dark blade<ch.apos/>s unholy energy, but then the tip of Cadak<ch.apos/>s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
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-       <p>You enter the open doorway, and the hubbub of laughter and conversation dies momentarily as all eyes turn to stare in your direction. They consider you for a few moments, then the chatter and noise begin anew and the eyes return to other matters. After descending a flight of steps to the sunken floor of the taproom, you make your way through the noisy crowd to the beer-soaked counter. A husky serving wench thuds a pewter tankard down on the bar before you and fills it with frothing ale.</p>
+       <p>You enter the open doorway, and the hubbub of laughter and conversation dies momentarily as all eyes turn to stare in your direction. They consider you for a few moments; then the chatter and noise begin anew and the eyes return to other matters. After descending a flight of steps to the sunken floor of the taproom, you make your way through the noisy crowd to the beer-soaked counter. A husky serving wench thuds a pewter tankard down on the bar before you and fills it with frothing ale.</p>
+
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-       <p><quote>First one&apos;s on the &apos;ouse,</quote> she says, with a snarl, <quote>the rest y&apos; pays for, understand?</quote> You nod your reply and, as you sip the watery brew, you take stock of the inn&apos;s villainous clientele. They are not a pretty crowd. The Crooked Sage is a tavern with an ill reputation, even in the brawling turmoil of Helgor&apos;s north quarter. The city guard never patrol here; a weekly donation to the guard captain guarantees that they are always somewhere else. Order, and what passes for law, is kept by Chegga, the owner of the inn, and his two brutish sons&emdash;Zhola and Gorgan.</p>
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+       <p><quote>First one<ch.apos/>s on the <ch.apos/>ouse,</quote> she says, with a snarl, <quote>the rest y<ch.apos/> pays for, understand?</quote> You nod your reply and, as you sip the watery brew, you take stock of the inn<ch.apos/>s villainous clientele. They are not a pretty crowd. The Crooked Sage is a tavern with an ill reputation, even in the brawling turmoil of Helgor<ch.apos/>s north quarter. The city guard never patrol here; a weekly donation to the guard captain guarantees that they are always somewhere else. Order, and what passes for law, is kept by Chegga, the owner of the inn, and his two brutish sons<ch.emdash/>Zhola and Gorgan.</p>
        <p>You finish your ale and the serving wench returns to refill your tankard.</p>
-       <p><quote>That&apos;ll be one Gold Crown,</quote> she says, thrusting out a calloused palm. You place the crown on the bar and, as she goes to pick it up, you take hold of her wrist to prevent her from moving away.<a id="sect21-1" idref="sect21-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
-       <p><quote>Where&apos;s Smudd? Is he here tonight?</quote> you ask.</p>
-       <p><quote>Over there,</quote> she growls, pointing to a shadowy alcove at the rear of the taproom, <quote>now let go o&apos; me or I&apos;ll call Chegga.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>That<ch.apos/>ll be one Gold Crown,</quote> she says, thrusting out a calloused palm. You place the crown on the bar and, as she goes to pick it up, you take hold of her wrist to prevent her from moving away.<a id="sect21-1" idref="sect21-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
+       <p><quote>Where<ch.apos/>s Smudd? Is he here tonight?</quote> you ask.</p>
+       <p><quote>Over there,</quote> she growls, pointing to a shadowy alcove at the rear of the taproom. <quote>Now let go o<ch.apos/> me or I<ch.apos/>ll call Chegga.</quote></p>
        <p>Calmly you release her, take up your ale, and walk slowly towards the place where Smudd is seated. He is in the company of a giggling bar-girl and does not notice that you are standing beside him until you thump your tankard down on his table. The sound startles him and immediately he reaches for his sword.</p>
        <p>He has a desperate look about him which reminds you of a cornered rat. If you are to avoid a confrontation, you must do or say something to assuage his fear.</p>
        <choice idref="sect294">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 294</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The Elder&apos;s suspicion swiftly turns to anger. He grabs your robe and pulls it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
+       <p>The Elder<ch.apos/>s suspicion swiftly turns to anger. He grabs your robe and pulls it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
        <choice idref="sect314"><link-text>Turn to 314</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The brigand captain screams aloud and clutches at the fatal wound you have dealt him. His eyes glaze over, and as he falls dead at your feet, you see some of his men emerging from the surrounding pines. Rather than fight them, you decide it better to escape whilst you still can. You take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up the captain&apos;s satchel as you leave. The brigands give chase, but they soon lose you among the dense pines and give up the pursuit.</p>
+       <p>The brigand captain screams aloud and clutches at the fatal wound you have dealt him. His eyes glaze over, and as he falls dead at your feet, you see some of his men emerging from the surrounding pines. Rather than fight them, you decide it better to escape whilst you still can. You take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up the captain<ch.apos/>s satchel as you leave. The brigands give chase, but they soon lose you among the dense pines and give up the pursuit.</p>
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-       <p>The alley is pitch dark but this causes you little difficulty. Using your Magnakai skill of Huntmastery, you can pick out the way ahead with ease. Your horse is not so gifted, but he trusts to your guiding hand to avoid the stinking debris and broken glass which lie strewn across the cobblestones. You are nearing a street at the alley&apos;s end when you hear the click of a door latch. You halt, and from an archway to your left you see two men emerge. One is a wiry figure, partially bald; the other, a swarthy-faced villain with ragged ears and greasy blond hair. Daggers gleam dully in their hands as they advance towards you with murder in their eyes.</p>
+       <p>The alley is pitch dark but this causes you little difficulty. Using your Magnakai skill of Huntmastery, you can pick out the way ahead with ease. Your horse is not so gifted, but he trusts to your guiding hand to avoid the stinking debris and broken glass which lie strewn across the cobblestones. You are nearing a street at the alley<ch.apos/>s end when you hear the click of a door latch. You halt, and from an archway to your left you see two men emerge. One is a wiry figure, partially bald; the other, a swarthy-faced villain with ragged ears and greasy blond hair. Daggers gleam dully in their hands as they advance towards you with murder in their eyes.</p>
        <p>Silently you unsheathe your weapon. A few moments later, when you re-sheathe it, it is slick with the blood of these two footpads. A search of their pockets nets you six Gold Crowns and enough food for one Meal. (Remember to adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly.)</p>
        <p>Anxious to leave, you remount your horse and turn him to face the street at the end of the alley.</p>
        <choice idref="sect16"><link-text>Turn to 16</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Swiftly you sidestep the oncoming wave of automatons and leave them hacking uselessly at the air with their swords. The Demoness is putting on an armoured breastplate of varnished black steel, and she is kneeling to allow her attendants to fasten the straps. They are clumsy, and she is distracted and does not see you approaching dangerously close to the dais and the Deathstaff until it is too late. You grab the staff&apos;s cold, metallic haft and instantly you feel the terrible power that is locked within its core.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect94">If you possess Helshezag&emdash;the sword of Darklord Kraagensk&ucirc;l, <link-text>turn to 94</link-text>.</choice>
+       <p>Swiftly you sidestep the oncoming wave of automatons and leave them hacking uselessly at the air with their swords. The Demoness is putting on an armoured breastplate of varnished black steel, and she is kneeling to allow her attendants to fasten the straps. They are clumsy, and she is distracted and does not see you approaching dangerously close to the dais and the Deathstaff until it is too late. You grab the staff<ch.apos/>s cold, metallic haft and instantly you feel the terrible power that is locked within its core.</p>
+       <choice idref="sect94">If you possess Helshezag<ch.emdash/>the sword of Darklord Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l, <link-text>turn to 94</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect225">If you do not possess this Special Item, <link-text>turn to 225</link-text>.</choice>
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       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect36-1-foot" idref="sect36-1">
-        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
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        <p>In your desperation to prevent the Elder from sounding the alarm, you lash out with your clenched fist and punch him squarely on the jaw.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect333">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;4, <link-text>turn to 333</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect134">If it is 5&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 134</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect333">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>4, <link-text>turn to 333</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect134">If it is 5<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 134</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You survive the fall to the street without breaking any bones, but you are knocked unconscious when your head strikes the wet cobblestones. For more than an hour you lie there until you regain consciousness. Bruised, bloodied, and with a sorely aching head, you are further dismayed to discover that while you have been lying in the street, you have also been robbed.</p>
-       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have picked is equal to the number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points lost as a result of the fall. It is also equal to the number of Gold Crowns which have been stolen from your belt pouch, and the number of items which have gone missing from your Backpack (adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly).</p>
+       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have picked is equal to the number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points lost as a result of the fall. It is also equal to the number of Gold Crowns which have been stolen from your Belt Pouch, and the number of items which have gone missing from your Backpack (adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly).</p>
        <p>Cursing your luck and the thieves of this foul city, you wearily retrace your steps back to the stables of the Crooked Sage in order to collect your horse.</p>
        <choice idref="sect341"><link-text>Turn to 341</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You sheathe your weapon, run to the edge of the warehouse, and launch yourself towards the roof of the building opposite.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Grand Huntmastery <em>and</em> have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, add 3 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect154">If your total score is now 3 or less, <link-text>turn to 154</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect310">If it is 4&endash;7, <link-text>turn to 310</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect310">If it is 4<ch.endash/>7, <link-text>turn to 310</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect70">If it is 8 or higher, <link-text>turn to 70</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The Elder&apos;s probe breaks through your mind shield and he suddenly realizes that you are an intruder. He pulls at your robe and tears it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
+       <p>The Elder<ch.apos/>s probe breaks through your mind shield and he suddenly realizes that you are an intruder. He pulls at your robe and tears it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
        <p><quote>Seize him!</quote> he bellows, and a score of acolytes turn around and run forward to obey the command. You draw your weapon and fight them with breathtaking skill and valour, but eventually you are overcome by their numbers. By the time they have disarmed you and pinned you to the rocky ground, more than thirty of them lie slain or seriously injured in a heaped circle around where you lie.</p>
        <p>You stare back defiantly at the ring of grim torchlit faces that loom over you. Then the face of the Elder comes into view and he sneers with disdain. He places the tip of a glowing wand to your forehead and suddenly there is an explosion of white light. Sadly for you, it is the last sensation you will ever experience.</p>
        <p>Your life and your quest end here, on the trail to the Maakengorge.</p>
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        <p>You are standing inside a mountain of ice. A dim, blue vista stretches away in every direction, and here the light appears bent and fractured by the myriad frozen facets of the water. You are encased yet you can still move; you are able to stride forwards through the seemingly solid walls as if you are moving through air.</p>
-       <p>Confidently you walk through the strange and terrible beauty of this crystal world, striding on towards the distant dim, twinkling light that first drew you to the mountains. Slowly the icy vastness begins to change and you see new wonders. There are treasures&emdash;veins of gold, raw gemstones, chests of coins, pearls, and rubies. And there are graves and lost tombs, where corpses watch your passing with burning eyes. Their ghastly stares bleed the warmth from your body and leave you shivering with psychic shock: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Confidently you walk through the strange and terrible beauty of this crystal world, striding on towards the distant dim, twinkling light that first drew you to the mountains. Slowly the icy vastness begins to change and you see new wonders. There are treasures<ch.emdash/>veins of gold, raw gemstones, chests of coins, pearls, and rubies. And there are graves and lost tombs, where corpses watch your passing with burning eyes. Their ghastly stares bleed the warmth from your body and leave you shivering with psychic shock: lose 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <p>At length you pass beyond the ice and emerge into the shadowy recesses of a vast cavern. Here you discover the source of the light, and in its dim glow, you witness a scene that makes you tremble with fear.</p>
        <choice idref="sect327"><link-text>Turn to 327</link-text>.</choice>
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       <data>
-       <p>Gwynian opens his envelope and removes a time-yellowed parchment which he spreads upon the smooth stone table: it is a map of northern Magador. He points to Lake Vorndarol and tells you that the eye of the strange storms which have swept this region has been calculated to be within a few miles of the lake&apos;s eastern shore, close to the Maakengorge. The hamlet of Vorn, or what is left of it, is located on the southern shore, near to a tributary of the River Storn. He counsels you to be on your guard at all times and, to help you succeed, he gives you an amulet of his own.</p>
+       <p>Gwynian opens his envelope and removes a time-yellowed parchment which he spreads upon the smooth stone table: it is a map of northern Magador. He points to Lake Vorndarol and tells you that the eye of the strange storms which have swept this region has been calculated to be within a few miles of the lake<ch.apos/>s eastern shore, close to the Maakengorge. The hamlet of Vorn, or what is left of it, is located on the southern shore, near to a tributary of the River Storn. He counsels you to be on your guard at all times and, to help you succeed, he gives you an amulet of his own.</p>
        <p><quote>Wear this, Grand Master,</quote> he says as he places the corded platinum disc around your neck. <quote>It will keep you safe from some of the perils that may await you at the Maakengorge.</quote></p>
        <p>(Record this Platinum Amulet, which you wear on a cord around your neck, as a Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You need not discard another item in its favour if you are already carrying the maximum number permissible.)</p>
        <choice idref="sect297"><link-text>Turn to 297</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The creature roars with pain as your Arrow clips its shoulder. Unfortunately, it is just a flesh wound and it does not stop the beast from advancing. You shoulder your Bow and draw your weapon, bringing your horse about with your knees as you get ready to face the beast. But the instant he sees the creature, he panics and rears up on his hind legs, neighing with fright, his hooves scrabbling frantically at the air. You bring him under control using your innate Kai skills, but in doing so your attention is diverted momentarily from the attacking beast as it moves in and swipes at you with its clawed paw.</p>
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+       <illustration class="float">
+        <meta>
+         <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
+         <description><line>The creature roars with pain as your Arrow clips its</line><line>shoulder.</line></description>
+        </meta>
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+
        <combat><enemy>Black Corvayl</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">52</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>Reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 10 for the first round of this fight only.</p>
        <choice idref="sect210">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 210</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You are left stunned and smouldering by the impact of the lightning ball. Drunkenly, you stagger to your feet and use your Magnakai Discipline of Nexus to extinguish those parts of your cloak and tunic ignited by the blast. Then you draw the Sommerswerd and examine the hilt, but to your amazement, there is no sign of any damage whatsoever.</p>
-       <p>Your terrified horse has halted at the river&apos;s edge and you call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear. He responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
+       <p>Your terrified horse has halted at the river<ch.apos/>s edge and you call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear. He responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
        <choice idref="sect80"><link-text>Turn to 80</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Suddenly they flicker and disappear altogether from view. Frantically, you scan the brooding sky for some sign of where the creatures have gone, but it is not until you use your psychic abilities that you detect them.</p>
-       <p>With your eyes closed you can picture them in your mind&apos;s eye. You see them circling their lair, then they break away and come swooping down to attack you.</p>
+       <p>With your eyes closed you can picture them in your mind<ch.apos/>s eye. You see them circling their lair; then they break away and come swooping down to attack you.</p>
        <p>You draw your weapon and detect that an aura of protection is sheathing it from the extreme temperatures of this domain. Then a hideous shriek splits the air, and you find yourself fighting the urge to open your eyes as the first of the beasts dives upon you.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Lavas</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">48</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">42</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect276">You may evade this combat after six rounds by <link-text>turning to 276</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p><quote>Welcome, Grand Master. I am Gwynian of Varetta,</quote> says the grey-haired old man, in a clear voice which belies his age. <quote>Come and talk with me a while. Your purpose is known to me and I have something which will help your quest. Come, do not be afraid. I am a friend.</quote></p>
+
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+
        <p>You are shocked that he knows your true identity, but your Kai senses confirm that he is no threat to your safety. He speaks the truth.</p>
        <choice idref="sect178"><link-text>Turn to 178</link-text>.</choice>
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       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="sect54-1-foot" idref="sect54-1">
-        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
        </footnote>
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       <data>
-       <p>You show the Runic Disc and immediately the Elder&apos;s temper cools. He recognizes it to be the mark of the Guild of Rhem, the most feared brotherhood of assassins in all of northern Magnamund. He is aware that some guild assassins have been employed as agents to carry out missions for the acolytes, and he assumes at once that you are such an agent.</p>
+       <p>You show the Runic Disc and immediately the Elder<ch.apos/>s temper cools. He recognizes it to be the mark of the Guild of Rhem, the most feared brotherhood of assassins in all of northern Magnamund. He is aware that some guild assassins have been employed as agents to carry out missions for the acolytes, and he assumes at once that you are such an agent.</p>
        <p>He backs away a few paces, bows his head, and leaves to attend to other matters at the bow of the boat. Those seated around you have now become uncomfortably curious. To avoid their attentions, you get up and move to the stern where a score of acolytes are kneeling in prayer.</p>
        <choice idref="sect124"><link-text>Turn to 124</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>For countless minutes you hurtle into a whirling abyss of darkness and howling gales, torn by freezing winds that cut to the marrow despite your Magnakai protections. Then, as if waking from a dream, the sensation of falling abruptly ceases and you find yourself standing on a plateau of black volcanic rock, cratered and split by rivers of blazing lava. You take a tentative step forwards and feel the ground sag beneath your feet. The thin crust of cooled lava wrinkles and tears, and a jet of flickering yellow flame shoots upwards to engulf your legs.</p>
        <p>Your Nexus skills are sufficiently developed to protect you from the flames and hellish temperature, but you are amazed that your boots and clothing have not ignited. Then you sense that your entirety is being protected by a field of energy radiating from the Platinum Amulet given you by Gwynian the Sage. Silently you thank him for his gift, for you suspect now that even your Kai skills would be hard-pressed to keep you safe in this alien domain.</p>
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-       <meta>
-        <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
-        <description>Suddenly, a trio of horny-skinned creatures emerge from the dark hollow.</description>
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-       <p>With difficulty you cross the semi-molten terrain and reach an island of blue-grey basalt rock, strewn with cubes of obsidian and jet. At the island&apos;s centre you discover a huge, untidy pile of cubes which make a crude temple. There is a yawning hollow at its base and, as you draw closer, you sense something is lurking there. Suddenly, a trio of horny-skinned creatures emerge from the dark hollow and take to the air on wings that glimmer like burnished gold. You watch them ascend, but you have difficulty following their flight when their bodies begin to flicker in and out of existence.</p>
+
+       <illustration class="float">
+        <meta>
+         <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
+         <description><line>Suddenly, a trio of horny-skinned creatures emerge</line><line>from the dark hollow.</line></description>
+        </meta>
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+       <p>With difficulty you cross the semi-molten terrain and reach an island of blue-grey basalt rock, strewn with cubes of obsidian and jet. At the island<ch.apos/>s centre you discover a huge, untidy pile of cubes which make a crude temple. There is a yawning hollow at its base and, as you draw closer, you sense something is lurking there. Suddenly, a trio of horny-skinned creatures emerge from the dark hollow and take to the air on wings that glimmer like burnished gold. You watch them ascend, but you have difficulty following their flight when their bodies begin to flicker in and out of existence.</p>
        <choice idref="sect158">If you possess Grand Huntmastery, and have reached the rank of Sun Lord, <link-text>turn to 158</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect52">If you do not possess this Discipline, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank, <link-text>turn to 52</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
@@ -1450,10 +1473,17 @@ Initial revision
      <section class="numbered" id="sect62">
       <meta><title>62</title></meta>
 
+      <footnotes>
+       <footnote id="sect62-1-foot" idref="sect62-1">
+        <p>If you have already spent all of your money, you have a choice: you may either give him an item of comparable or greater value, or you may simply disregard this cost.</p>
+       </footnote>
+      </footnotes>
+
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-       <p>The fat drunkard can hardly believe his luck when you reach to your belt pouch and count out ten Gold Crowns into his grubby hand.</p>
-       <p><quote>May the Gods bless y&apos; boots, sir!</quote> he cackles, as he stuffs the gleaming crowns into his pocket. <quote>If it&apos;s the Crooked Sage you be a&apos;wantin&apos; to visit, you be needin&apos; Tavern Lane, o&apos;er there,</quote> he says, enthusiastically pointing to the street which leads off to the east.</p>
-       <p>With the drunkard&apos;s gleeful laughter echoing in your ears, you spur Bracer to a canter and enter this foul-smelling street. Clamped against the walls of the surrounding buildings are oil-soaked torches which serve to illuminate the signs of wine shops and taverns. They are crudely painted with emblems&emdash;a bloodied battle-axe, a winged horse, a watery sun rising from a broken skull. There is not one which resembles a crooked sage and you are beginning to suspect you have been duped, when suddenly you hear the sound of drunken revelry coming from a two-storey building at the end of the street. Its oaken doors hang open and the vivid orange glare of its roaring hearth spills invitingly into the dank night gloom. Although it has no painted emblem, you sense at once that you have come to the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
+       <p>The fat drunkard can hardly believe his luck when you reach to your Belt Pouch and count out ten Gold Crowns into his grubby hand.</p>
+       <p><quote>May the Gods bless y<ch.apos/> boots, sir!</quote> he cackles, as he stuffs the gleaming crowns into his pocket. <quote>If it<ch.apos/>s the Crooked Sage you be a<ch.apos/>wantin<ch.apos/> to visit, you be needin<ch.apos/> Tavern Lane, o<ch.apos/>er there,</quote> he says, enthusiastically pointing to the street which leads off to the east.</p>
+       <p>With the drunkard<ch.apos/>s gleeful laughter echoing in your ears, you spur Bracer to a canter and enter this foul-smelling street. Clamped against the walls of the surrounding buildings are oil-soaked torches which serve to illuminate the signs of wine shops and taverns. They are crudely painted with emblems<ch.emdash/>a bloodied battle-axe, a winged horse, a watery sun rising from a broken skull. There is not one which resembles a crooked sage and you are beginning to suspect you have been duped, when suddenly you hear the sound of drunken revelry coming from a two-storey building at the end of the street. Its oaken doors hang open and the vivid orange glare of its roaring hearth spills invitingly into the dank night gloom. Although it has no painted emblem, you sense at once that you have come to the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
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-       <p>At your approach, a sallow-faced stable boy limps from a wooden hut which is leaning precariously against the side of the tavern wall. For a Gold Crown (erase this from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>), he takes charge of your horse and shows you to the taproom door.</p>
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+       <p>At your approach, a sallow-faced stable boy limps from a wooden hut which is leaning precariously against the side of the tavern wall. For a Gold Crown (erase this from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>), he takes charge of your horse and shows you to the taproom door.<a id="sect62-1" idref="sect62-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
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        <p>You look towards the dais and see a staff of twisted black metal. Its two-metre length looks insignificant lying beside the huge, booted foot of the Demoness.</p>
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        <p><quote>The time has nearly come for the transference,</quote> says the young woman. <quote>Shamath must be stopped, and only you can stop her.</quote></p>
        <p><quote>But how?</quote> you reply, bemused.</p>
-       <p><quote>Simple! You must steal the Deathstaff and enter the Shadow Gate before her. Use the staff to destroy Cadak&apos;s crystal dais&emdash;this will close the gate and prevent the Demoness from entering Magnamund. But I warn you, Lone Wolf. You will have precious little time to accomplish this, so do not delay once you return to your world. You must destroy Cadak&apos;s dais as quickly as possible or Shamath will get through. She has great strength and power here, but on Magnamund her powers would make her invincible.</quote></p>
-       <p>The young woman looks over her shoulder, as if she is being pursued by some invisible hunter. <quote>I wish I could help you more, Lone Wolf,</quote> she says, anxiously, <quote>but I have my own battle to fight. Be brave, Grand Master, but most of all&emdash;be swift!</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Simple! You must steal the Deathstaff and enter the Shadow Gate before her. Use the staff to destroy Cadak<ch.apos/>s crystal dais<ch.emdash/>this will close the gate and prevent the Demoness from entering Magnamund. But I warn you, Lone Wolf. You will have precious little time to accomplish this, so do not delay once you return to your world. You must destroy Cadak<ch.apos/>s dais as quickly as possible or Shamath will get through. She has great strength and power here, but on Magnamund her powers would make her invincible.</quote></p>
+       <p>The young woman looks over her shoulder, as if she is being pursued by some invisible hunter. <quote>I wish I could help you more, Lone Wolf,</quote> she says, anxiously, <quote>but I have my own battle to fight. Be brave, Grand Master, but most of all<ch.emdash/>be swift!</quote></p>
        <p>And with these words she begins to fade before your eyes. The moment she vanishes completely, the cavern echoes to a deafening roar. It is the angry cry of Shamath. She has seen you!</p>
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        <p>You strike camp and set off shortly after dawn. Come mid-morning, you arrive at a high pass from where you see Lake Vorndarol for the first time. You call on your Magnakai skill of Huntmastery to intensify your vision and, as your view of the lake grows sharper and clearer, you make out the ruins of Vorn on the southern shore. The hamlet is blackened and desolate, but it is not without signs of life. There are men moving around in the streets, and a square-rigged boat is moored at the quay.</p>
-       <p>Bayan is anxious for his family&apos;s safety and keen to return to them now that he has guided you to within sight of Vorn. You thank him for his help and offer him some money which he gratefully accepts. Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have chosen is equal to the number of Gold Crowns you give to Bayan. If you have insufficient money, you must give him all the Gold Crowns you have, plus an item from your Backpack.</p>
+       <p>Bayan is anxious for his family<ch.apos/>s safety and keen to return to them now that he has guided you to within sight of Vorn. You thank him for his help and offer him some money which he gratefully accepts. Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have chosen is equal to the number of Gold Crowns you give to Bayan. If you have insufficient money, you must give him all the Gold Crowns you have, plus an item from your Backpack.</p>
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        <p>You awake shortly after dawn to the smell of freshly-brewed jala. Fyrad has already risen and is busy preparing breakfast. He hands you a steaming mug and you look out over the damp hillside, contemplating the quest whilst sipping this delicious beverage.</p>
-       <p>After breakfast, Fyrad tells you of a pass which leads directly to the east shore, then he gathers his equipment and furs and loads them on to his mule. He is tired of dodging brigands and storms and has decided to strike camp and abandon his hunt in the mountains. You bid each other good luck before saying your final farewells. On leaving the cave, you turn to the east and Fyrad to the south.</p>
-       <p>The hunter&apos;s directions are accurate and useful. You find the pass and by noon you have reached a chalky plateau on the far side, which is covered with dense scrub. Small groups of ragged-looking birds are perched on this foliage, feeding on its brightly coloured blooms. As you pass by, you reach out and grab a handful of these yellow flowers which smell sickly-sweet.</p>
+       <p>After breakfast, Fyrad tells you of a pass which leads directly to the east shore; then he gathers his equipment and furs and loads them on to his mule. He is tired of dodging brigands and storms and has decided to strike camp and abandon his hunt in the mountains. You bid each other good luck before saying your final farewells. On leaving the cave, you turn to the east and Fyrad to the south.</p>
+       <p>The hunter<ch.apos/>s directions are accurate and useful. You find the pass and by noon you have reached a chalky plateau on the far side, which is covered with dense scrub. Small groups of ragged-looking birds are perched on this foliage, feeding on its brightly coloured blooms. As you pass by, you reach out and grab a handful of these yellow flowers which smell sickly-sweet.</p>
        <choice idref="sect293">If you wish to taste these blooms, <link-text>turn to 293</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect18">If you decide to discard them and continue your ride, <link-text>turn to 18</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The muddy track climbs to the peak of a ridge and then makes a twisting descent to a copse of sickly-looking trees clustered at the base of a gully. You have noticed that the night wind has gradually been getting warmer and, as you reach the copse, a few drops of rain begin to spatter the shoulders of your cloak. Within minutes this gentle shower is transformed into a torrential downpour. Suddenly, thunder booms overhead and forks of white lightning streak down to explode among the surrounding trees, setting them on fire. Fearful of the danger, you peer through the wall of rain in search of safer shelter.</p>
-       <p>Aided by your Kai senses, you detect two possible refuges from the storm: an overhanging ledge of rock, and the entrance to an old mineshaft.</p>
+       <p>Aided by your Kai senses, you detect two possible refuges from the storm: an overhanging ledge of rock, and the entrance to an old mine shaft.</p>
        <choice idref="sect209">If you wish to take shelter under the ledge, <link-text>turn to 209</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect128">If you decide to seek shelter in the old mineshaft <link-text>turn to 128</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect128">If you decide to seek shelter in the old mine shaft <link-text>turn to 128</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The unexpected sight of your dead brother&apos;s face leaves you dry-mouthed and shaking, but fortunately your Kai mastery of psychic defence protects your mind from the full effects of this psychic shock: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>The unexpected sight of your dead brother<ch.apos/>s face leaves you dry-mouthed and shaking, but fortunately your Kai Mastery of psychic defence protects your mind from the full effects of this psychic shock: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
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-       <p>You dig your heels into Bracer&apos;s flanks to make him gallop along the track, away from the rocky ledge and the onrushing wall of water which threatens to drown you both. Unfortunately, you have covered no further than a few dozen metres when you are caught and overrun by the raging flood.</p>
+       <p>You dig your heels into Bracer<ch.apos/>s flanks to make him gallop along the track, away from the rocky ledge and the onrushing wall of water which threatens to drown you both. Unfortunately, you have covered no further than a few dozen metres when you are caught and overrun by the raging flood.</p>
        <p>For countless minutes you hurtle along the gully, propelled by the torrential flood waters. Your terrifying experience comes to an end when you are deposited on a tiny island of rock in the centre of the raging flow. A few minutes later you catch sight of Bracer; he is standing on a ridge of high ground near the edge of the gully. He is clearly frightened but he looks to be physically unharmed by his ordeal. You spend a long and miserable night on this rock, waiting for the flood waters to subside. Due to injuries sustained in the flood, you lose 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
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-       <p>You draw on your Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen to keep safe your identity from the Elder&apos;s mind probe. You sense that his psychic power is strong, and you fear that your defences may not be sufficient to repel him.</p>
+       <p>You draw on your Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen to keep safe your identity from the Elder<ch.apos/>s mind probe. You sense that his psychic power is strong, and you fear that your defences may not be sufficient to repel him.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Assimilance, add 3 to the number you have picked. Also, if you possess Grand Nexus, add 3; and if you possess Kai-alchemy, add 2.</p>
        <choice idref="sect43">If your total score is now 9 or less, <link-text>turn to 43</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect258">If it is 10 or more, <link-text>turn to 258</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You hold the brigand in a vice-tight armlock and demand to know who sent him here to ambush you.</p>
-       <p><quote>No one sent me,</quote> he pleads, <quote>no one&ellips; no one at all. I was plannin&apos; on robbin&apos; me a few acolytes, that&apos;s all. Some of &apos;em has gold and trinkets that&apos;s worth cash in Vakovar. This trail&apos;s been good to me. It&apos;s netted me some rich pickin&apos;s in the past month or so. We wern&apos;t after you in partic&apos;lar&ellips; no, you jus&apos; happened to come ridin&apos; past, that&apos;s all.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>No one sent me,</quote> he pleads, <quote>no one<ch.ellips/> no one at all. I was plannin<ch.apos/> on robbin<ch.apos/> me a few acolytes, that<ch.apos/>s all. Some of <ch.apos/>em has gold and trinkets that<ch.apos/>s worth cash in Vakovar. This trail<ch.apos/>s been good to me. It<ch.apos/>s netted me some rich pickin<ch.apos/>s in the past month or so. We wern<ch.apos/>t after you in partic<ch.apos/>lar<ch.ellips/> No, you jus<ch.apos/> happened to come ridin<ch.apos/> past, that<ch.apos/>s all.</quote></p>
        <p>Your Kai senses inform you that he is speaking the truth. He and his band of robbers have been waylaying Acolytes of Vashna who have travelled this route over the past few weeks. Without slackening your grip, you ask him what he knows about them.</p>
-       <p><quote>They been preparin&apos; something, over on the&ellips;</quote> he says, but he ceases to speak the moment he sees a group of his men emerge from the surrounding pines.</p>
-       <p><quote>You&apos;re in for it now,</quote> he hisses, <quote>my men are goin&apos; to do for you good an&apos; proper.</quote></p>
-       <p>Another six of the captain&apos;s men step from out of the trees and begin to move towards you, their swords held ready to strike. Rather than stay and fight them, you shove the captain away and take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up his satchel as you make your escape.</p>
+       <p><quote>They been preparin<ch.apos/> something, over on the<ch.ellips/></quote> he says, but he ceases to speak the moment he sees a group of his men emerge from the surrounding pines.</p>
+       <p><quote>You<ch.apos/>re in for it now,</quote> he hisses. <quote>My men are goin<ch.apos/> to do for you good an<ch.apos/> proper.</quote></p>
+       <p>Another six of the captain<ch.apos/>s men step from out of the trees and begin to move towards you, their swords held ready to strike. Rather than stay and fight them, you shove the captain away and take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up his satchel as you make your escape.</p>
        <p>Screaming curses and promising you a slow death, the captain scrambles to his feet and leads his men in a chase, but you are soon lost among the dense pines and, reluctantly, he orders his henchmen to give up the pursuit.</p>
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-       <p>You leave the furriers&apos; shop and remount your horse to continue your search for the Crooked Sage Inn. You have ridden less than twenty metres when a sudden gust of wind thins out the cloying fog, revealing the dark entrance to an alleyway off to your right.</p>
+       <p>You leave the furriers<ch.apos/> shop and remount your horse to continue your search for the Crooked Sage Inn. You have ridden less than twenty metres when a sudden gust of wind thins out the cloying fog, revealing the dark entrance to an alleyway off to your right.</p>
        <choice idref="sect33">If you wish to explore this alley, <link-text>turn to 33</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect147">If you decide to ignore it and continue on your way along this street, <link-text>turn to 147</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Drawing on your mastery of psychic defence, you are able to construct a fortress wall around your mind which absorbs the Elder&apos;s probe. He learns nothing from his attempt to read your psyche and, rather than admit to failure, he dismisses you as an empty-headed cretin.</p>
+       <p>Drawing on your mastery of psychic defence, you are able to construct a fortress wall around your mind which absorbs the Elder<ch.apos/>s probe. He learns nothing from his attempt to read your psyche and, rather than admit to failure, he dismisses you as an empty-headed cretin.</p>
        <p>With a growl of disdain, he orders you to rejoin the procession and pushes you out of his way as he strides back to his position beside the altar.</p>
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        <p>The rumble and crack of repeated lightning ball strikes echo in your wake as you make your hurried escape along the river trail. It is not until you traverse a high pass, where the River Storn flows through the mountain foothills, that the sound eventually disappears. Your senses tingle with the conviction that the storm was no accident; you feel sure that a malevolent elemental force is at work here.</p>
-       <p>Shortly before dusk, you emerge from the pass and see Lake Vorndarol for the first time. You call on your Magnakai skill of Huntmastery to intensify your vision and, as your view of the lake grows sharper and clearer, you make out the ruins of Vorn on the southern shore. The hamlet is blackened and desolate, but it is not without signs of life. There are several pinpoints of light, camp fires judging by their colour, and you can see a square-rigged mainsail: there is a boat moored at the quay.</p>
+       <p>Shortly before dusk, you emerge from the pass and see Lake Vorndarol for the first time. You call on your Magnakai skill of Huntmastery to intensify your vision and, as your view of the lake grows sharper and clearer, you make out the ruins of Vorn on the southern shore. The hamlet is blackened and desolate, but it is not without signs of life. There are several pinpoints of light, campfires judging by their colour, and you can see a square-rigged mainsail: there is a boat moored at the quay.</p>
        <choice idref="sect203">If you wish to attempt to reach Vorn before nightfall, <link-text>turn to 203</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The instant you step through the archway you feel an electrifying jolt run through your body, and a writhing snake of blue-white energy arcs from the rim of the arch to the hilt of the sword Helshezag. A gasp of astonishment arises from the acolytes, audible even above the howling wind.</p>
-       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard&apos;s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the sword free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the dark energy of Helshezag, but then the tip of Cadak&apos;s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
+       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard<ch.apos/>s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the sword free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the dark energy of Helshezag, but then the tip of Cadak<ch.apos/>s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
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-       <p>The Elder becomes angry. He scolds you for taking a <quote>forbidden</quote> weapon and he orders you to hand it over to him at once. Aware that most of the acolytes in this section of the boat are watching you, and that any resistance would be sure to lead to the revealing of your true identity, you reach inside your robe and undo the buckle of your weapon&apos;s belt. It clatters to the deck, and the Elder snatches it up and hurls it into the lake. (Erase from your Weapons List any hand weapons you possess. If you have a Bow, you may still keep it.)</p>
+       <p>The Elder becomes angry. He scolds you for taking a <quote>forbidden</quote> weapon and he orders you to hand it over to him at once. Aware that most of the acolytes in this section of the boat are watching you, and that any resistance would be sure to lead to the revealing of your true identity, you reach inside your robe and undo the buckle of your weapon<ch.apos/>s belt. It clatters to the deck, and the Elder snatches it up and hurls it into the lake. (Erase from your Weapons List any hand weapons you possess. If you have a Bow, you may still keep it.)</p>
        <p>Still fuming, the Elder orders you to go to the rear of the ship where a score of acolytes are kneeling in prayer, and plead to the spirit of Vashna for forgiveness.</p>
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        <p>Lashed by the wind and the rain, you steel yourself as the screaming phantoms come swooping down to attack.</p>
        <choice idref="sect103">If you possess Assimilance, and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 103</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect36">If you possess Kai-screen, and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 36</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect144">If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 144</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect144">If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 144</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p><quote>Do you mind if I keep this?</quote> you ask, motioning to the amulet.</p>
-       <p><quote>I&apos;ve no objection,</quote> replies Kadharian. <quote>I hope it helps you to discover what is truly going on in the north.</quote></p>
-       <p>Carefully you rewrap the talisman and slip it into the pocket of your tunic (record this Black Amulet as a Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>&emdash;you need not discard another item in its favour if you already possess the maximum allowed). Then, after a meal and a soothingly hot bath, you bid farewell to the President and take your leave of the palace by way of the stables.</p>
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-       <p>Night has thickened the blanket of mist which lines the narrow streets and alleys of Helgor. Guided by your Kai instincts, you set off northwards, but soon you have cause to regret not having thought of asking Kadharian for directions to the Crooked Sage Inn. Helgor is an old city and its chaotic streets follow no logical plan. After several wrong turns you come upon a square where the vanes of a rotting signpost point to three exits. Slumped at its base there sits a dishevelled fat man with a yellow streaked beard, who is gulping mouthfuls of cheap ale from a filthy stone pitcher. You attempt to use your Kai Pathsmanship skill to read the signpost but with no success&emdash;it is completely illegible.</p>
+       <p><quote>I<ch.apos/>ve no objection,</quote> replies Kadharian. <quote>I hope it helps you to discover what is truly going on in the north.</quote></p>
+       <p>Carefully you re-wrap the talisman and slip it into the pocket of your tunic (record this Black Amulet as a Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a><ch.emdash/>you need not discard another item in its favour if you already possess the maximum allowed). Then, after a meal and a soothingly hot bath, you bid farewell to the President and take your leave of the palace by way of the stables.</p>
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+       <p>Night has thickened the blanket of mist which lines the narrow streets and alleys of Helgor. Guided by your Kai instincts, you set off northwards, but soon you have cause to regret not having thought of asking Kadharian for directions to the Crooked Sage Inn. Helgor is an old city and its chaotic streets follow no logical plan. After several wrong turns you come upon a square where the vanes of a rotting signpost point to three exits. Slumped at its base there sits a dishevelled fat man with a yellow streaked beard, who is gulping mouthfuls of cheap ale from a filthy stone pitcher. You attempt to use your Kai Pathsmanship skill to read the signpost but with no success<ch.emdash/>it is completely illegible.</p>
        <choice idref="sect16">If you wish to leave the square by the north exit, <link-text>turn to 16</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect332">If you wish to leave the square by the east exit, <link-text>turn to 332</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>At Shamath&apos;s command, the attendants draw slivers of steel and come rushing to hack you down. You essay a wide sweep of the sword and scythe the front rank down as easily as if they were ripened corn. Your sword strokes feel effortless; it is as if you are merely holding the Sommerswerd and the blade itself is fighting of its own accord. Within the space of a few minutes you have slain every last one of Shamath&apos;s attendants, over a hundred in number.</p>
+       <p>At Shamath<ch.apos/>s command, the attendants draw slivers of steel and come rushing to hack you down. You essay a wide sweep of the sword and scythe the front rank down as easily as if they were ripened corn. Your sword strokes feel effortless; it is as if you are merely holding the Sommerswerd and the blade itself is fighting of its own accord. Within the space of a few minutes you have slain every last one of Shamath<ch.apos/>s attendants, over a hundred in number.</p>
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        <p>Using the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Sense Evil</spell> you determine that the token is a cursed relic which has been activated by its proximity to the pool of stagnant water. The closer you get to the pool, the hotter the relic becomes. Another few steps and it will explode. Desperately, you fumble to retrieve it from the smoking pocket of your tunic, and hurl it away.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;3, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 4&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>3, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 4<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You are nearing the middle of the river when your acute hearing detects the cawing of birds in the far distance. At first you dismiss the sounds, thinking they are probably birds of prey feeding somewhere high in the mountains, but when the cawing rapidly grows louder you look upwards to try to detect where it is coming from. You do not have to look very far.</p>
        <p>Three hundred metres above you, a flock of ugly black birds are cawing excitedly as they ride a thermal air current. You recognize them to be Durncrag Scavengers, cruel predators native only to these mountains. Then, with an awful suddenness, they come diving towards you, screeching like demons as they prepare to strike with beak and claw.</p>
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        <choice idref="sect249">If you possess Animal Mastery and have reached the rank of Sun Knight or higher, <link-text>turn to 249</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect180">If you do not possess this Discipline, or if you have yet to attain this level of Grand Mastery, <link-text>turn to 180</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You utilize your powers to subdue the growling wolf and immediately he becomes calm and docile. Within a few minutes you exact a transformation that turns this creature from a wild animal into a loyal and friendly ally.</p>
-       <p>While you settle down to rest, the wolf watches over you and Bracer, attentively standing guard at the entrance to the mineshaft.</p>
+       <p>While you settle down to rest, the wolf watches over you and Bracer, attentively standing guard at the entrance to the mine shaft.</p>
        <choice idref="sect279">Restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points and <link-text>turn to 279</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The great winged beast ekes out its death throes for several minutes after you strike the fatal blow. Aching with the fatigue of your combat, you stagger away from its carcass and stumble blindly through the fog. Soon you sense the temperature beginning to drop, and the great grey wall of fog gradually condenses and falls as rain. This rain freezes and you quickly find yourself surrounded by a wall of glittering ice which stretches like a range of jagged glass mountains from horizon to horizon.</p>
+       <p>The great winged beast ekes out its death-throes for several minutes after you strike the fatal blow. Aching with the fatigue of your combat, you stagger away from its carcass and stumble blindly through the fog. Soon you sense the temperature beginning to drop, and the great grey wall of fog gradually condenses and falls as rain. This rain freezes and you quickly find yourself surrounded by a wall of glittering ice which stretches like a range of jagged glass mountains from horizon to horizon.</p>
        <choice idref="sect187"><link-text>Turn to 187</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The hollow is damp and draughty and offers poor protection against the elements. There is little foliage on which to feed your mount and the incessant storm winds howl through the gaps in the rocks, making it impossible for you to sleep. During this long and uncomfortable night, unless you possess Grand Huntmastery you must eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
-       <p>Shortly before dawn, the storm dies down and you are able to snatch an hour&apos;s sleep. Unfortunately, it is insufficient rest to refresh you fully: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Shortly before dawn, the storm dies down and you are able to snatch an hour<ch.apos/>s sleep. Unfortunately, it is insufficient rest to refresh you fully: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect285">To continue, <link-text>turn to 285</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>With the returning acolytes aboard, an Elder gives the order that the grappling lines and planks&emdash;which hold the longboat secure to the Vakovarian ship&emdash;be cut and tossed into the lake. The moment this is done, the three Elders raise their glowing wands of power and touch them together to form a triangle.</p>
+       <p>With the returning acolytes aboard, an Elder gives the order that the grappling lines and planks<ch.emdash/>which hold the longboat secure to the Vakovarian ship<ch.emdash/>be cut and tossed into the lake. The moment this is done, the three Elders raise their glowing wands of power and touch them together to form a triangle.</p>
        <p>There is a flash of greenish light and a swirling cone of vapour coils into the sky, pouring from the tip of this triangle. It creates a howling wind which fills the sails and catapults the longboat away from the quayside at tremendous speed. It takes just a few minutes for the ruins of Vorn to disappear over the horizon.</p>
        <p>Aboard the longboat the victorious acolytes busy themselves as the cold waters of Lake Vorndarol speed by beneath the keel. Some are attending to those who were wounded in the battle; others are chanting a sombre dirge or sitting quietly with their heads bowed, lost in unholy prayer; the remainder clean their weapons or stare vacantly at the distant mountains.</p>
        <p>You keep your head bowed and pretend to be praying. The deception seems to be working until a hand suddenly grips your shoulder and you hear a gruff voice bark a command in a language you do not readily understand.</p>
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        <p>There is a thunderous <onomatopoeia>crack!</onomatopoeia> as a bolt of white lightning leaps from the Deathstaff and connects with the hilt of Helshezag. You feel an agonizing pain wrack your body from skull to toe: lose 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. Then, with a breathtaking suddenness, the pain ceases.</p>
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        <p>You open your eyes and look down, and to your astonishment you see the scorched remains of Helshezag lying at the foot of the dais, the sword obliterated by the power of the Deathstaff (erase Helshezag from your Special Items list).</p>
        <choice idref="sect318">To continue, <link-text>turn to 318</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You throw the red-hot token away, but it hits a boulder and rebounds directly into the trough. There is a dreadful moment of silence, then the whole area is lit up by a blinding flash of yellow flame. Suddenly everything seems to be happening in slow motion. You see acolytes tumbling backwards, screaming, their robes sprouting tongues of flame, and chunks of marble from the trough hurtling skywards like fiery meteors. Then the heat and the shock of the explosion rip into your face and chest, sending you cartwheeling backwards into a black, unfeeling oblivion.</p>
+       <p>You throw the red-hot token away, but it hits a boulder and rebounds directly into the trough. There is a dreadful moment of silence; then the whole area is lit up by a blinding flash of yellow flame. Suddenly everything seems to be happening in slow motion. You see acolytes tumbling backwards, screaming, their robes sprouting tongues of flame, and chunks of marble from the trough hurtling skywards like fiery meteors. Then the heat and the shock of the explosion rip into your face and chest, sending you cartwheeling backwards into a black, unfeeling oblivion.</p>
        <p>Tragically, your life and your quest end here, on the trail to the Maakengorge.</p>
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-       <p>At Shamath&apos;s command, the attendants draw vicious-looking slivers of steel from scabbards hidden inside their robes, and come rushing forwards to hack you down.</p>
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+       <p>At Shamath<ch.apos/>s command, the attendants draw vicious-looking slivers of steel from scabbards hidden inside their robes, and come rushing forwards to hack you down.</p>
+
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        <combat><enemy>Cheghath</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">37</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>These beings are gifted with strong psychic defences. Halve all bonuses you would normally receive if you choose to use a psychic attack (including Kai-blast) during this combat.</p>
        <choice idref="sect303">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 303</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -1911,9 +1952,9 @@ Initial revision
        <p><quote>Somewhere, here, I fear there is a great evil at work,</quote> says Kadharian, pointing to a section of the table which depicts the territory north of Lake Vorndarol, an area uncomfortably close to the deep furrow which represents the Maakengorge.</p>
        <p><quote>Three moons ago, the lakeside hamlet of Vorn was reportedly destroyed by an unnatural storm, the first of many that have continuously swept the region. I dispatched a troop of my guards to investigate but they never returned. Since then, a second troop has also disappeared without trace.</quote></p>
        <p><quote>But what makes you think that a plot to resurrect Vashna is afoot?</quote> you reply, trying not to sound overly sceptical. <quote>With due respect, President, this is a notorious region infested with renegades and brigands. There may be a far simpler explanation for the destruction of Vorn and the disappearance of your troops.</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>Aye, &apos;tis so,</quote> retorts Kadharian. <quote>At first, I too made the same assumption. But then I came into the possession of something which made me believe otherwise.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Aye, <ch.apos/>tis so,</quote> retorts Kadharian. <quote>At first, I too made the same assumption. But then I came into the possession of something which made me believe otherwise.</quote></p>
        <p>From a leather pouch hanging from his sword belt, Kadharian takes an item which is neatly wrapped in a square of patterned silk.</p>
-       <p><quote>Here, Grand Master,</quote> he says, offering it to you, <quote>I&apos;ll let you draw your own conclusions from this.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Here, Grand Master,</quote> he says, offering it to you, <quote>I<ch.apos/>ll let you draw your own conclusions from this.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect133"><link-text>Turn to 133</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You are so stunned by the image of your dead brother&apos;s face that your mind enters a deep state of psychic shock: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>You are so stunned by the image of your dead brother<ch.apos/>s face that your mind enters a deep state of psychic shock: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect195">If you survive the effects of this trauma, <link-text>turn to 195</link-text>.</choice>
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        <footnote id="sect103-1-foot" idref="sect103-1">
-        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
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-       <p>You draw on your Kai mastery to conjure up a dense fog to surround you, in the hope that it will hamper the attacking horde. However, the Vortexi are psychic creatures who actively seek out their prey by the strength of their mind waves. Your Discipline disrupts this homing process to some extent, but there are still many among the phantom horde who sense accurately where you are. When they attack, you are forced to defend yourself vigorously.</p>
+       <p>You draw on your Kai Mastery to conjure up a dense fog to surround you, in the hope that it will hamper the attacking horde. However, the Vortexi are psychic creatures who actively seek out their prey by the strength of their mind waves. Your Discipline disrupts this homing process to some extent, but there are still many among the phantom horde who sense accurately where you are. When they attack, you are forced to defend yourself vigorously.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Vortexi</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">44</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">30</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>For every level of Kai rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, you may add 2 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight. If you possess the Sommerswerd, restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score.<a id="sect103-1" idref="sect103-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <choice idref="sect46">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 46</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You dig your heels into Bracer&apos;s flanks and gallop along the track, steering him away from the rocky ledge and the onrushing wall of water which threatens to drown you both. Helped by your Kai mastery, you make him leave the track and ascend a difficult slope that leads to higher ground. He obeys your command and, with barely seconds to spare, you avoid being caught by the flood as it careers along the gully.</p>
+       <p>You dig your heels into Bracer<ch.apos/>s flanks and gallop along the track, steering him away from the rocky ledge and the onrushing wall of water which threatens to drown you both. Helped by your Kai Mastery, you make him leave the track and ascend a difficult slope that leads to higher ground. He obeys your command and, with barely seconds to spare, you avoid being caught by the flood as it careers along the gully.</p>
        <p>The remaining few hours before sunrise are spent on a tiny island of rock, waiting for the flood waters to subside. It is a long and uncomfortable wait: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect12"><link-text>Turn to 12</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The journey to Helgor takes you south to the City-state of Casiorn, then west to the Lyrisian capital of Varetta&emdash;a road you once travelled several years ago during your Magnakai quest. In the main, your ride is peaceably uneventful. By choice you keep to yourself and avoid staying too long in any one place. It is not until you reach Vakovar that the uncertain politics of this region give rise for concern. This squalid, lawless city is home to some of the Stornlands&apos; most notorious criminals and robber-barons. It is common knowledge that travellers who value their wealth and health wisely avoid Vakovar whenever possible. Forewarned by these rumours you choose not to dwell here, but ride swiftly through the city and press on to Helgor. Yet while you are within the city walls of Vakovar no less than a dozen separate attempts are made to relieve you of your money pouch and horse. There are no witnesses to these attacks, which is just as well, for when you ride out of Vakovar you leave a score of dead robbers littering the cobblestones.</p>
-       <p>It is early evening when you eventually crest a hill and catch your first disappointing glimpse of Helgor. It is a damp and unwholesome-looking city, ringed by a rampart of mouldering rubble, the remains of a curtain wall which was destroyed during the war against the Darklords. Through the many gaps in this rampart you can see the thick fog that swirls through Helgor&apos;s brick streets and crooked, filthy alleys. At first sight it seems that the Magadorian capital is little more than a beggar-city, a vast hotchpotch of slums and hovels, but as you ride nearer you notice several grand towers piercing the rolling grey mist.</p>
+       <p>The journey to Helgor takes you south to the City-state of Casiorn, then west to the Lyrisian capital of Varetta<ch.emdash/>a road you once travelled several years ago during your Magnakai quest. In the main, your ride is peaceably uneventful. By choice you keep to yourself and avoid staying too long in any one place. It is not until you reach Vakovar that the uncertain politics of this region give rise for concern. This squalid, lawless city is home to some of the Stornlands<ch.apos/> most notorious criminals and robber-barons. It is common knowledge that travellers who value their wealth and health wisely avoid Vakovar whenever possible. Forewarned by these rumours you choose not to dwell here, but ride swiftly through the city and press on to Helgor. Yet while you are within the city walls of Vakovar no less than a dozen separate attempts are made to relieve you of your money pouch and horse. There are no witnesses to these attacks, which is just as well, for when you ride out of Vakovar you leave a score of dead robbers littering the cobblestones.</p>
+       <p>It is early evening when you eventually crest a hill and catch your first disappointing glimpse of Helgor. It is a damp and unwholesome-looking city, ringed by a rampart of mouldering rubble, the remains of a curtain wall which was destroyed during the war against the Darklords. Through the many gaps in this rampart you can see the thick fog that swirls through Helgor<ch.apos/>s brick streets and crooked, filthy alleys. At first sight it seems that the Magadorian capital is little more than a beggar-city, a vast hotchpotch of slums and hovels, but as you ride nearer you notice several grand towers piercing the rolling grey mist.</p>
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-       <p>The main approach to Helgor is patrolled by presidential guards, heavily armed with crossbows and spears, who are checking everyone attempting to enter by road. They are dressed in flamboyant tunics of green, scarlet, and black calf hide, which seem too lavish for the garrison of such a squalid city. When asked your business, you show them the scroll given to you by Rimoah. They are impressed by the invitation and insist that an armed escort be provided to take you directly to the President&apos;s palace. After your experience at Vakovar you welcome their offer.</p>
-       <p>Despite the overwhelming squalor of Helgor&apos;s dingy tenements and streets, you were expecting the President&apos;s palace to be the exception. To your disappointment, it turns out to be little more than a fortified chateau situated at the centre of the city, atop a hill known as the Vanagrom Knoll. You are welcomed into the palace&apos;s senate hall by an official called Stepona, a dour man who looks older than his thirty years. He sees to it that your horse is stabled, and that you are given refreshments while you await your audience with the President. An hour passes before the doors to the senate hall swing open and, without formal announcement, in strides President Kadharian of Magador.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect315">If you have ever visited the city of Aarnak in a previous Lone Wolf adventure, <link-text>turn to 315</link-text>.</choice>
+
+       <p>The main approach to Helgor is patrolled by presidential guards, heavily armed with crossbows and spears, who are checking everyone attempting to enter by road. They are dressed in flamboyant tunics of green, scarlet, and black calf hide, which seem too lavish for the garrison of such a squalid city. When asked your business, you show them the scroll given to you by Rimoah. They are impressed by the invitation and insist that an armed escort be provided to take you directly to the President<ch.apos/>s palace. After your experience at Vakovar you welcome their offer.</p>
+       <p>Despite the overwhelming squalor of Helgor<ch.apos/>s dingy tenements and streets, you were expecting the President<ch.apos/>s palace to be the exception. To your disappointment, it turns out to be little more than a fortified chateau situated at the centre of the city, atop a hill known as the Vanagrom Knoll. You are welcomed into the palace<ch.apos/>s senate hall by an official called Stepona, a dour man who looks older than his thirty years. He sees to it that your horse is stabled, and that you are given refreshments while you await your audience with the President. An hour passes before the doors to the senate hall swing open and, without formal announcement, in strides President Kadharian of Magador.</p>
+       <choice idref="sect315">If you have ever visited the city of Aarnak in a previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventure, <link-text>turn to 315</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect202">If you have never been to Aarnak, <link-text>turn to 202</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You recite the words of the battle spell <spell>Invisible Fist</spell> and suddenly you feel a powerful gust of wind sweep past your face. It punches the Elder squarely in the stomach, lifts him off his feet, and sends him tumbling over the side of the boat.</p>
+       <p>You recite the words of the battle-spell <spell>Invisible Fist</spell> and suddenly you feel a powerful gust of wind sweep past your face. It punches the Elder squarely in the stomach, lifts him off his feet, and sends him tumbling over the side of the boat.</p>
        <p>A cry goes up along the deck, a shout of alarm that one of the Elders has fallen overboard. Scores of acolytes rush to the rail in response but there is nothing they can do. The longboat is travelling so fast that the Elder is already hundreds of metres behind the stern and cannot be seen amidst the churning water.</p>
        <p>Those who were seated near you have now become uncomfortably curious about who you are. To avoid their attentions, you move to the stern where a score of acolytes are kneeling in prayer.</p>
        <choice idref="sect124"><link-text>Turn to 124</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p><quote>Calm yourself, Smudd,</quote> you say, purposefully letting your hands drift away from your weapons, <quote>I mean you no harm. I just want to talk with you awhile, that&apos;s all.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Calm yourself, Smudd,</quote> you say, purposefully letting your hands drift away from your weapons, <quote>I mean you no harm. I just want to talk with you awhile, that<ch.apos/>s all.</quote></p>
        <p>The scrawny-faced knave stares at you with deep suspicion. Cold sweat beads upon his brow and his hand tightens on the hilt of his rapier.</p>
-       <p><quote>Look,</quote> you say, reaching to your Backpack, <quote>I&apos;m even prepared to compensate you for the privilege.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Look,</quote> you say, reaching to your Backpack, <quote>I<ch.apos/>m even prepared to compensate you for the privilege.</quote></p>
        <p>Slowly you unshoulder your Backpack, unbuckle the flap, and offer him any item of his choosing. After some hesitation, he picks the item which is listed at the top of your Backpack List. (Erase this item from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</p>
        <choice idref="sect323">To continue, <link-text>turn to 323</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You raise your Bow and draw an Arrow, but the instant the feathers touch your lips, both the Bow and the Arrow burst into flames: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
-       <p>Cadak cackles with glee at the success of his spell. <quote>You are doomed, Lone Wolf. Why don&apos;t you admit it,</quote> he says, sneeringly. <quote>You were doomed the moment you returned from the great arch.</quote></p>
+       <p>Cadak cackles with glee at the success of his spell. <quote>You are doomed, Lone Wolf. Why don<ch.apos/>t you admit it,</quote> he says, sneering. <quote>You were doomed the moment you returned from the great arch.</quote></p>
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-        <p>This is the correct answer to second sequence of numbers on the crystal dais grid in <a idref="sect235">Section 235</a>.</p>
+        <p>This is the correct answer to the second sequence of numbers on the crystal dais grid in <a idref="sect235">Section 235</a>.</p>
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        <p>The instant you correctly complete the second sequence, a deep hum resonates from inside the upper tier and slowly it opens to reveal a hexagonal crystal plinth with a circular hole at its centre.<a id="sect110-1" idref="sect110-1-foot" class="footnote" /> Your Kai senses inform you that by inserting the tip of the Deathstaff into the hole, you will cause the Shadow Gate beneath the great arch to close.</p>
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        <p>Trembling with fear and exhilaration, you raise the Deathstaff above your head and bring it down with one mighty thrust, driving it deep into the hole.</p>
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-       <p>Using your Kai mastery, you steer your exhausted horse across this difficult terrain with incredible skill. You manage to keep him ahead of the Jackals just long enough to reach firmer ground, where he is then able to increase his pace and escape from the howling pack.</p>
+       <p>Using your Kai Mastery, you steer your exhausted horse across this difficult terrain with incredible skill. You manage to keep him ahead of the Jackals just long enough to reach firmer ground, where he is then able to increase his pace and escape from the howling pack.</p>
        <p>The Jackals command the shore, and you are forced to retrace your steps all the way back to the fork in the trail and take the other path that leads into the foothills. By the time you arrive here, you are tired and very hungry. Unless you possess Grand Huntmastery, you must eat 2 meals or lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.<a id="sect112-1" idref="sect112-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
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-       <p>You stretch out with your right foot and kick open the satchel, but in doing so you place yourself off balance. The brigand captain senses this and uses the opportunity to break free. He scurries away for the safety of the trees, screaming all the while for his men to come and save him. Then you see the first of them emerging from the surrounding pines. Rather than fight them, you decide it better to escape whilst you still can, and so you take to your heels pausing only to snatch up the captain&apos;s satchel as you leave. The brigands give chase, but they soon lose you among the dense pines and call off their pursuit.</p>
+       <p>You stretch out with your right foot and kick open the satchel, but in doing so you place yourself off balance. The brigand captain senses this and uses the opportunity to break free. He scurries away for the safety of the trees, screaming all the while for his men to come and save him. Then you see the first of them emerging from the surrounding pines. Rather than fight them, you decide it better to escape whilst you still can, and so you take to your heels pausing only to snatch up the captain<ch.apos/>s satchel as you leave. The brigands give chase, but they soon lose you among the dense pines and call off their pursuit.</p>
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        <p>You find shelter in a wooded grove, close to the trail, where you are able to make camp for the night. Darkness descends, but the surrounding trees are kept illuminated by a spectacular host of twinkling lights which swoop and soar above the hills. It is a wondrous display but you are not deceived into thinking that all is well. There is a great and evil magic at work here; you can sense it.</p>
-       <p>The storms stay away this night and you are able to get several hours&apos; uninterrupted sleep&emdash;restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You rise with the dawn and breakfast on roots and berries which are in plentiful supply (there is sufficient surplus for 2 Meals). Then you break camp and continue your ride towards Vorn.</p>
+       <p>The storms stay away this night and you are able to get several hours<ch.apos/> uninterrupted sleep<ch.emdash/>restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. You rise with the dawn and breakfast on roots and berries which are in plentiful supply (there is sufficient surplus for 2 Meals). Then you break camp and continue your ride towards Vorn.</p>
        <choice idref="sect8"><link-text>Turn to 8</link-text>.</choice>
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        <footnote id="sect118-1-foot" idref="sect118-1">
-        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
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-       <p>You raise the Sun-sword and strike out with unerring accuracy as the first of the Vortexi engulf you.</p>
+       <p>You raise the sun-sword and strike out with unerring accuracy as the first of the Vortexi engulf you.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Vortexi</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">49</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">48</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>For possessing the Sommerswerd, restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score.<a id="sect118-1" idref="sect118-1-foot" class="footnote" /> For every level of Kai rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, you may add a further 2 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight.</p>
        <choice idref="sect46">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 46</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You place the food before their feet and step away, but they do not touch it until you sheathe your weapon and taste it yourself to prove that it has not been poisoned (erase this Meal from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>). Ravenously they consume the humble meal in seconds and, when they have finished, they allow you to approach and examine their sickly child. You tell them that you can help their son. Using your innate Healing skills, you place your hands upon the boy&apos;s chest and let your Kai power flow through into his fever-wracked body. Within a few moments he stirs to consciousness and gives a healthy cry; you have saved his life.</p>
+       <p>You place the food before their feet and step away, but they do not touch it until you sheathe your weapon and taste it yourself to prove that it has not been poisoned (erase this Meal from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>). Ravenously they consume the humble meal in seconds and, when they have finished, they allow you to approach and examine their sickly child. You tell them that you can help their son. Using your innate Healing skills, you place your hands upon the boy<ch.apos/>s chest and let your Kai power flow through into his fever-wracked body. Within a few moments he stirs to consciousness and gives a healthy cry; you have saved his life.</p>
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        <footnote id="sect123-1-foot" idref="sect123-1">
-        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
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-       <p>You whisper the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> and point your finger at the Arch Druid. A tingling sensation runs down the length of your arm which culminates with a bolt of blue-white energy that arcs from your index finger and explodes against the haft of Cadak&apos;s staff.</p>
+       <p>You whisper the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Lightning Hand</spell> and point your finger at the Arch Druid. A tingling sensation runs down the length of your arm which culminates with a bolt of blue-white energy that arcs from your index finger and explodes against the haft of Cadak<ch.apos/>s staff.</p>
        <p>Your sudden and unexpected use of magic caught the Arch Druid offguard. He defended himself, but you sense that the bolt has weakened him. Seizing this opportunity, you draw your weapon and rush forwards to attack him before he fully recovers.<a id="sect123-1" idref="sect123-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <combat><enemy>Arch Druid Cadak</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">48</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">32</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect298">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 298</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Drawing on your mastery of psychic defence, you are able to construct a shield around your mind which absorbs the Elder&apos;s probe. He learns nothing from his attempt to read your psyche and, rather than admit to failure, he dismisses you as an empty-headed cretin.</p>
+       <p>Drawing on your mastery of psychic defence, you are able to construct a shield around your mind which absorbs the Elder<ch.apos/>s probe. He learns nothing from his attempt to read your psyche and, rather than admit to failure, he dismisses you as an empty-headed cretin.</p>
        <p>With a growl of disdain, he orders you to rejoin the end of the procession and pushes you out of his way as he strides back to rally those acolytes who are fleeing down the path.</p>
        <choice idref="sect250"><link-text>Turn to 250</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You urge Bracer up a treacherously slick path that leads to the entrance. Without once faltering on the difficult ascent, he carries you to the top of the path where two rusty wagon rails disappear into the mineshaft&apos;s shadowy maw. You approach, and the instant you are out of the rain, your keen Sixth Sense alerts you to the fact that you are not the only ones seeking shelter here. The scent of greasy fur and the glint of two grey-green eyes in the gloom tell you that you have stumbled upon the lair of a mountain wolf.</p>
+       <p>You urge Bracer up a treacherously slick path that leads to the entrance. Without once faltering on the difficult ascent, he carries you to the top of the path where two rusty wagon rails disappear into the mine shaft<ch.apos/>s shadowy maw. You approach, and the instant you are out of the rain, your keen Sixth Sense alerts you to the fact that you are not the only ones seeking shelter here. The scent of greasy fur and the glint of two grey-green eyes in the gloom tell you that you have stumbled upon the lair of a mountain wolf.</p>
+
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        <p>The wolf growls menacingly and Bracer backs away in fright. Quickly you prepare to use your Magnakai skill of Animal Control to calm this beast before its hunger or its fear make it attack.</p>
        <choice idref="sect89">If you possess Animal Mastery, and have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 89</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect151">If you do not possess this skill, or have yet to reach this rank, <link-text>turn instead to 151</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have picked is equal to the number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points lost as a result of the lightning impact and the fall.</p>
        <p>You are left stunned and smouldering by the explosion. Drunkenly, you stagger to your feet and use your Magnakai Discipline of Nexus to extinguish those parts of your cloak and tunic ignited by the blast. Your Weapon disintegrated when it was hit (erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>), yet it served to conduct some of the energy of the lightning ball away from your body.</p>
-       <p>Your terrified horse has halted at the river&apos;s edge and you call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear. He responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
+       <p>Your terrified horse has halted at the river<ch.apos/>s edge and you call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear. He responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
        <choice idref="sect80"><link-text>Turn to 80</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>At Shamath&apos;s command, her attendants draw wicked-looking slivers of steel from scabbards hidden inside their robes and, with a cry of vengeance, they come rushing forwards to hack you down.</p>
+       <p>At Shamath<ch.apos/>s command, her attendants draw wicked-looking slivers of steel from scabbards hidden inside their robes and, with a cry of vengeance, they come rushing forwards to hack you down.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Cheghath</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">37</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">40</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>These beings are gifted with strong psychic defences. Halve all bonuses you would normally receive if you choose to use a psychic attack (including Kai-blast) during this combat.</p>
        <choice idref="sect303">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 303</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You accept the package and carefully unfold its silken wrapper to reveal an amulet, oblong in shape, strung upon a length of crude twine. It has been carved from coal-black stone, flecked with grains of metal, which sparkle in the firelight.</p>
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        <p><quote>Where was this found?</quote> you ask.</p>
        <p><quote>In the ruins of Vorn,</quote> replies Kadharian, ominously.</p>
        <choice idref="sect262">If you possess the Discipline of Telegnosis, and have reached the Kai rank of Sun Knight or higher, <link-text>turn to 262</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect49">If you do not possess this Discipline, or have yet to reach this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 49</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect49">If you do not possess this Discipline, or have yet to reach this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 49</link-text>.</choice>
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        <footnote id="sect135-1-foot" idref="sect135-1">
-        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
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-       <p>You draw the Sommerswerd from its scabbard and point it accusingly at the Arch Druid, expecting him to wither in the face of its goodly light. But the blade does not glow as radiantly as before: it is as if its powers are being subdued by Cadak&apos;s spectral prison.</p>
+       <p>You draw the Sommerswerd from its scabbard and point it accusingly at the Arch Druid, expecting him to wither in the face of its goodly light. But the blade does not glow as radiantly as before: it is as if its powers are being subdued by Cadak<ch.apos/>s spectral prison.</p>
        <p>With loathing in your heart, you advance upon your despised enemy. He weaves his hands before his face and his image fades. He is using a spell of invisibility but it does not keep him entirely hidden: you can still see the outline of his staff and his body flickering as he moves against the background wall of light.<a id="sect135-1" idref="sect135-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <combat><enemy>Arch Druid Cadak</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">50</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">35</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect298">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 298</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>As you approach the hall, you notice that it has only one means of entry&emdash;a large pair of double doors facing the lake. A long procession of acolytes are filing into the hall through these open doors and you stop to observe them. It occurs to you that if you are to discover what is going on inside, then you will have to enter by the same way.</p>
+       <p>As you approach the hall, you notice that it has only one means of entry<ch.emdash/>a large pair of double doors facing the lake. A long procession of acolytes are filing into the hall through these open doors and you stop to observe them. It occurs to you that if you are to discover what is going on inside, then you will have to enter by the same way.</p>
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        <p>A portly perimeter guard passes by and you duck into a darkened doorway to avoid being seen. He goes into a hut opposite and suddenly an idea springs to mind, an idea that could get you into the grand hall. You hurry across to the hut and rush in, catching the acolyte by surprise. A blow to the back of the head renders him unconscious, and quickly you put on his voluminous red robes which completely cover your clothing and equipment (you need not record these robes on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>).</p>
        <p>Dressed as an acolyte, and aided by your Kai Camouflage skills, you should now have no difficulty getting into the hall.</p>
        <choice idref="sect289">If, before leaving the hut, you wish to search it for useful items, <link-text>turn to 289</link-text>.</choice>
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        <footnote id="sect142-1-foot" idref="sect142-1">
-        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
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        <p>You raise the hood of your robe and join the procession of acolytes who are filing into the hall. The interior is a dark and forbidding place, decorated with the ritualistic trappings of the Acolytes of Vashna. Spluttering candles dimly illuminate a central altar and a sickly-smelling incense saturates the air. The acolytes encircle the altar several ranks deep and listen intently as two of their Elders conduct a liturgy in praise of Darklord Vashna, and the victory he has seen fit to grant them. They conclude their sinister ceremony by crying out the words, <quote>We celebrate this eve of the <quote>Great Welcoming</quote>. May Lord Vashna, our master, vanquish his enemies and rule unchallenged ever more!</quote></p>
-       <p>The acolytes respond spontaneously by repeatedly chanting their master&apos;s name. <quote>Vashna! Vashna! Vashna!</quote> they cry, as they slowly shuffle out of the hall in single file. At the door, each acolyte is handed a burning torch and made to parade past the Elders who give them their unholy blessing. You take care to keep your face concealed within the raised hood of your robe as your turn comes to pass before them.</p>
+       <p>The acolytes respond spontaneously by repeatedly chanting their master<ch.apos/>s name. <quote>Vashna! Vashna! Vashna!</quote> they cry, as they slowly shuffle out of the hall in single file. At the door, each acolyte is handed a burning torch and made to parade past the Elders who give them their unholy blessing. You take care to keep your face concealed within the raised hood of your robe as your turn comes to pass before them.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Kai-alchemy, Kai-screen, or Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked.<a id="sect143-1" idref="sect143-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <p>Also, if you possess a Runic Disc, add 1; if you possess the Sommerswerd, deduct 3; and for every rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, add 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect322">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 322</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>As the first of the brigand captain&apos;s men emerge from the surrounding pines, you break off the fight and take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up his satchel as you leave. Thinking that his swordsmanship has terrified you into running away, the captain gives chase, but he soon loses you among the dense pines and gives up his pursuit.</p>
+       <p>As the first of the brigand captain<ch.apos/>s men emerge from the surrounding pines, you break off the fight and take to your heels, pausing only to snatch up his satchel as you leave. Thinking that his swordsmanship has terrified you into running away, the captain gives chase, but he soon loses you among the dense pines and gives up his pursuit.</p>
        <choice idref="sect247"><link-text>Turn to 247</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Suddenly, a grey-haired man dressed in furs springs up from behind the boulder with a loaded crossbow clutched in his hands.</p>
-       <p><quote>Don&apos;t move!</quote> he growls, and levels the weapon at your heart.</p>
+       <p><quote>Don<ch.apos/>t move!</quote> he growls, and levels the weapon at your heart.</p>
        <choice idref="sect201">If you possess the Discipline of Telegnosis, and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect280">If you do not possess this skill, or choose not to use it, <link-text>turn to 280</link-text>.</choice>
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       <meta><title>147</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The street ends at a stagnant fountain where a rowdy crowd has gathered to watch a bare-knuckled contest between two tough streetfighters. You stop to ask one of the spectators the way to the Crooked Sage Inn and, somewhat to your surprise, he seems pleased to offer his help. He gives you clear directions to Tavern Lane, the street where the inn is situated, and less than ten minutes later you find yourself at a signpost which marks the start of this narrow thoroughfare.</p>
+       <p>The street ends at a stagnant fountain where a rowdy crowd has gathered to watch a bare-knuckled contest between two tough street-fighters. You stop to ask one of the spectators the way to the Crooked Sage Inn and, somewhat to your surprise, he seems pleased to offer his help. He gives you clear directions to Tavern Lane, the street where the inn is situated, and less than ten minutes later you find yourself at a signpost which marks the start of this narrow thoroughfare.</p>
        <choice idref="sect332"><link-text>Turn to 332</link-text>.</choice>
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       <data>
-       <p>The longboat glides to a halt beside the jetty and attendant acolytes make it secure with ropes and hawsers. An Elder oversees the disembarkation, allowing the wounded off first, followed by the rest in descending order of rank and superiority. You join in the queue with the lowly initiates and follow the line as it files off the jetty and up a torchlit hilltrack to a hall of stone. It is a grand building which shows signs of having only recently been constructed.</p>
+       <p>The longboat glides to a halt beside the jetty and attendant acolytes make it secure with ropes and hawsers. An Elder oversees the disembarkation, allowing the wounded off first, followed by the rest in descending order of rank and superiority. You join in the queue with the lowly initiates and follow the line as it files off the jetty and up a torchlit hill track to a hall of stone. It is a grand building which shows signs of having only recently been constructed.</p>
        <p>The interior of the hall is a dark and forbidding place, decorated with the ritualistic trappings of the Acolytes of Vashna. Spluttering candles dimly illuminate a central altar and a sickly-smelling incense saturates the air. The acolytes encircle the altar several ranks deep and listen intently as two of their Elders conduct a liturgy in praise of Darklord Vashna, and the victory he has seen fit to grant them. They conclude their sinister ceremony by crying out the words, <quote>We celebrate this eve of the <quote>Great Welcoming</quote>. May Lord Vashna, our master, vanquish his enemies and rule unchallenged ever more!</quote></p>
-       <p>The acolytes respond spontaneously by repeatedly chanting their master&apos;s name. <quote>Vashna! Vashna! Vashna!</quote> they cry, as they slowly shuffle out of the hall in single file. At the door, each acolyte is handed a burning torch and made to parade past the Elders who give them their unholy blessing. You take care to keep your face concealed within the raised hood of your robe as your turn comes to pass before them.</p>
+       <p>The acolytes respond spontaneously by repeatedly chanting their master<ch.apos/>s name. <quote>Vashna! Vashna! Vashna!</quote> they cry, as they slowly shuffle out of the hall in single file. At the door, each acolyte is handed a burning torch and made to parade past the Elders who give them their unholy blessing. You take care to keep your face concealed within the raised hood of your robe as your turn comes to pass before them.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Kai-alchemy, Kai-screen, or Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked.<a id="sect150-1" idref="sect150-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <p>Also, if you possess a Runic Disc, add 1; if you possess the Sommerswerd, deduct 3; and for every rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, add 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect322">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 322</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -2535,8 +2586,8 @@ Initial revision
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-       <p>Your basic Kai skills are sufficient to calm the wolf, but he is clearly agitated by the scent and presence of your horse. Confused and frustrated by its conflicting instincts, the wolf retreats into the depths of the mineshaft where it howls throughout the remainder of the night.</p>
-       <p>Unable to sleep because of the wolf&apos;s incessant cries, you spend the next five hours in quiet discomfort waiting for the storm to subside: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Your basic Kai skills are sufficient to calm the wolf, but he is clearly agitated by the scent and presence of your horse. Confused and frustrated by its conflicting instincts, the wolf retreats into the depths of the mine shaft where it howls throughout the remainder of the night.</p>
+       <p>Unable to sleep because of the wolf<ch.apos/>s incessant cries, you spend the next five hours in quiet discomfort waiting for the storm to subside: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect279"><link-text>Turn to 279</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You unsheathe your weapon and wait with bated breath as you listen to the beast approaching. It sounds as if it is more than thirty metres away when suddenly, with a deafening roar, it drops through the fog and lands upon you. Desperately you fight to defend yourself as it tries to rake you unmercifully with fang and claw.</p>
+
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-         <description>You unsheathe your weapon and wait with bated breath as you listen to the beast approaching.</description>
+         <description><line>You unsheathe your weapon and wait with bated</line><line>breath as you listen to the beast approaching.</line></description>
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+       </illustration>
+
        <combat><enemy>Zarthyn</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">45</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">50</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect90">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 90</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2582,8 +2635,14 @@ Initial revision
      <section class="numbered" id="sect155">
       <meta><title>155</title></meta>
 
+      <footnotes>
+       <footnote id="sect155-1-foot" idref="sect155-1">
+        <p>There is no indication whether or not the extra meals that you gather as you ride should also have a curative effect. If you decide that they do, record each on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as <quote>Meal +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></quote>.</p>
+       </footnote>
+      </footnotes>
+
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-       <p>The trail meanders away from the lapping waters of the lake and winds slowly upwards to a chalky plateau covered with dense scrub. Clumps of dull yellow blossoms, blighted by the severe weather, cling to the boughs of this foliage. They give off a pleasant odour which your horse finds irresistible. You sense that they are nutritious and so you stop and both of you eat your fill: restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. (There is a sufficient surplus of blossoms for 2 Meals.)</p>
+       <p>The trail meanders away from the lapping waters of the lake and winds slowly upwards to a chalky plateau covered with dense scrub. Clumps of dull yellow blossoms, blighted by the severe weather, cling to the boughs of this foliage. They give off a pleasant odour which your horse finds irresistible. You sense that they are nutritious and so you stop and both of you eat your fill: restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. (There is a sufficient surplus of blossoms for 2 Meals.)<a id="sect155-1" idref="sect155-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <choice idref="sect338"><link-text>Turn to 338</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Throughout the afternoon, the rocky trail descends through an unlovely landscape of shale hills and crags topped with thorny brambles. It is difficult terrain but your ride passes without incident. Shortly before dusk, you come to the top of a ridge and catch your first glimpse of the River Storn and the snow-capped peaks of the southern Durncrags beyond. The elation of having come this far is sobered when you see that the distant sky is changing rapidly, and only a slender streak of light fringes the horizon. A storm is closing in.</p>
        <p>As you make the long, gradual descent towards the river, the air becomes humid and dark clouds appear overhead. The turmoil of moisture quickly charges the atmosphere. Lightning flashes without warning from the clouds to the earth and arcs skyward again, its energy echoing in a slow roll of thunder. Then the heavens open and a deluge of rain saturates the land. You calm your startled horse and urge him through the pouring rain, praying all the while that you will be able to find shelter before night closes in.</p>
-       <p>You are within a mile of the river when the darkness is almost complete. Yet, aided by your keen vision, you are able to make out two places that can offer some degree of shelter from the storm. The first is a cone-shaped stone hut, perched near the river&apos;s edge; the second is a rocky hollow close to the trail.</p>
+       <p>You are within a mile of the river when the darkness is almost complete. Yet, aided by your keen vision, you are able to make out two places that can offer some degree of shelter from the storm. The first is a cone-shaped stone hut, perched near the river<ch.apos/>s edge; the second is a rocky hollow close to the trail.</p>
        <choice idref="sect207">If you wish to shelter in the hut, <link-text>turn to 207</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect91">If you wish to take shelter in the rocky hollow, <link-text>turn to 91</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You scramble to your feet and sprint to the dais where you wrench the Deathstaff from the floor of the lower tier. To your horror it feels abnormally heavy and you sag beneath its weight. The Demoness spins around and emits a terrible scream when she sees what you are holding. The noise of her wrath lifts you bodily and sends you skidding across the floor.</p>
+
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+
        <p>Desperately, you fight to maintain your grip on the Deathstaff as the furious Shamath comes striding towards you. The deafening shriek of her voice rings once more in your ears as you clutch the Deathstaff to your chest and take a running leap into the dark oblivion of the Shadow Gate.</p>
        <choice idref="sect270"><link-text>Turn to 270</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2644,7 +2705,7 @@ Initial revision
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       <data>
-       <p>The Elder&apos;s probe breaks through your defence and he suddenly realizes that you are an intruder. He pulls at your robe and tears it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
+       <p>The Elder<ch.apos/>s probe breaks through your defence and he suddenly realizes that you are an intruder. He pulls at your robe and tears it open, revealing your leather tunic and breeches. Recognizing them at once to be Sommlending in origin, he gasps with shock as he guesses at your true identity.</p>
        <p><quote>Seize him!</quote> he bellows, and a score of acolytes spring forward to obey the command. You draw your weapon and fight them with breathtaking skill and valour, but eventually you are overcome by the sheer weight of their numbers. By the time they have disarmed you and pinned you to the rocky ground, more than thirty of them lie slain or seriously injured in a heaped circle around where you lie.</p>
        <p>You stare back defiantly at the ring of grim torchlit faces that loom over you. Then the face of the Elder comes into view and he sneers with disdain. He places the tip of a glowing wand to your forehead and suddenly there is an explosion of white light. Sadly for you, it is the last sensation you will ever experience.</p>
        <p>Your life and your quest end here, on the trail to the Maakengorge.</p>
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        <p>The shops and hovels which sandwich this narrow street show no visible signs of life. Heavy iron bars and stout oaken shutters secure their every portal, understandably a necessary precaution in this villainous city. You are beginning to lose hope of finding the Crooked Sage Inn, when suddenly you notice a pale yellow light streaming from the doorway of a nearby building. As you ride closer, you see a sign hanging above the door. It shows a black bear standing upright on its hind legs, and in its forepaws it grasps a placard which says:</p>
-       <signpost>GHADLAR &amp; SONS&emdash;FURRIERS</signpost>
-       <choice idref="sect226">If you wish to enter the furriers&apos; shop, <link-text>turn to 226</link-text>.</choice>
+       <signpost>GHADLAR <ch.ampersand/> SONS<ch.emdash/>FURRIERS</signpost>
+       <choice idref="sect226">If you wish to enter the furriers<ch.apos/> shop, <link-text>turn to 226</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect244">If you choose to ignore it, you may continue along this street by <link-text>turning to 244</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2666,7 +2727,8 @@ Initial revision
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       <data>
-       <p>The howling phantoms come swirling out of the storm. They encircle the great shimmering arch in a long, unbroken chain, and then, one by one, they peel away to dive at the place where you are standing. Guided by your Kai instincts, you raise the Deathstaff and whirl it around your head&emdash;once, twice, three times&ellips;</p>
+       <p>The howling phantoms come swirling out of the storm. They encircle the great shimmering arch in a long, unbroken chain, and then, one by one, they peel away to dive at the place where you are standing. Guided by your Kai instincts, you raise the Deathstaff and whirl it around your head<ch.emdash/>once, twice, three times<ch.ellips/></p>
+
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-       <p>An ominous hum radiates from its haft. There is a crackle of static electricity and the damp air seethes with restrained, undischarged power. A thread of mist issues from the staff&apos;s tip and builds rapidly into a spinning cyclone that ensnares the Vortexi and prevents them from reaching you. In desperation, you sense them pooling their immense psychic energies in an attempt to break out of this whirling prison and attack you.</p>
+
+       <p>An ominous hum radiates from its haft. There is a crackle of static electricity and the damp air seethes with restrained, undischarged power. A thread of mist issues from the staff<ch.apos/>s tip and builds rapidly into a spinning cyclone that ensnares the Vortexi and prevents them from reaching you. In desperation, you sense them pooling their immense psychic energies in an attempt to break out of this whirling prison and attack you.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
        <p>If you possess Kai-surge, add 4 to this number. If you possess Kai-screen, add 2. If you possess Assimilance, add 1.</p>
        <p>Also, if your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total is 18 or more, add 1; if your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total is 17 or less, deduct 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect206">If your total score is now 3 or less, <link-text>turn to 206</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect305">If it is 4&endash;8, <link-text>turn to 305</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect305">If it is 4<ch.endash/>8, <link-text>turn to 305</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect138">If it is 9 or more, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2690,14 +2753,16 @@ Initial revision
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        <p>Tied to a stone obelisk in the centre of the quay square are three Acolytes of Vashna. They are guarded by two Vakovarian brigands who keep themselves amused by bullying and tormenting them.</p>
        <p>For the past hour the sky overhead has become increasingly grey and thundery, with occasional storm flashes illuminating the northern shore. Now this storm is crossing the lake and the lightning is beginning to strike dangerously close to the quay. The brigands seemingly ignore this danger, so preoccupied are they with their petty cruelties, but then something appears on the surface of the lake which commands their attention.</p>
+
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          <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
-         <description>Suddenly, a massive longboat emerges from the wall of fog and comes speeding towards the quay.</description>
+         <description><line>Suddenly, a massive longboat emerges from the wall of</line><line>fog and comes speeding towards the quay.</line></description>
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-       </illustration> 
+       </illustration>
+
        <p>A massive bank of grey-white fog is rolling across the water towards the quay at an unnatural pace. When it is just a few hundred metres from the shore, a volley of lightning bolts comes hurtling from its core to explode against the quayside wall with devastating effect. Several brigands are incinerated where they stand, leaving nothing but glowing piles of ash to mark their passing. Then, suddenly, a massive longboat emerges from the wall of fog and comes speeding towards the quay. Glowing bolts of energy dart from its prow to explode upon the deck of the Vakovarian ship. One of these bolts passes high between the masts and arcs through the air towards the quay. You watch with mounting horror as it comes speeding directly towards you.</p>
        <choice idref="sect176">If you possess the Sommerswerd, <link-text>turn to 176</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect149">If you do not possess this Special Item, <link-text>turn to 149</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -2717,6 +2782,7 @@ Initial revision
        <p>Galvanized into action by the fear of what will happen should the Demoness be allowed entry to this world, you cast your eyes and Kai senses across the symbols which are engraved upon the crystal surface of the uppermost tier. Then, in a sudden flash of inspiration, you realize that the symbols themselves are the key to the activation of the Shadow Gate.</p>
        <p>You study the symbols and determine that a sequence must be completed in order for you to be able to close the Shadow Gate.</p>
        <p>Study the following grid of numbers carefully. When you think you know the missing number, turn to the entry which bears the same number as your answer.<a id="sect164-1" idref="sect164-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
+
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+
        <choice idref="sect235">If you cannot solve the problem, <link-text>turn to 235</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2732,7 +2799,7 @@ Initial revision
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-       <p>You throw yourself flat against Bracer&apos;s neck and the bolt parts your hair as it whistles past your head. Unharmed, you reach the cover of a dense pine copse where you quickly dismount. Having secured Bracer&apos;s reins to a tree, you move back to the edge of the copse to try and catch a glimpse of your attackers. You have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, armed with crossbows and swords, are rushing through the undergrowth directly towards your hiding place.</p>
+       <p>You throw yourself flat against Bracer<ch.apos/>s neck and the bolt parts your hair as it whistles past your head. Unharmed, you reach the cover of a dense pine copse where you quickly dismount. Having secured Bracer<ch.apos/>s reins to a tree, you move back to the edge of the copse to try and catch a glimpse of your attackers. You have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, armed with crossbows and swords, are rushing through the undergrowth directly towards your hiding place.</p>
        <choice idref="sect330">If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 330</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect136">If you do not, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The moment you step through the archway you feel an electrifying jolt run through your body, and snake-like tendrils of blue-white energy arc from the rim of the arch to the hilt of the Sommerswerd. A gasp of astonishment arises from the acolytes, audible even above the howling wind.</p>
-       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst!</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard&apos;s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the sun-sword free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the Sommerswerd&apos;s divine energy, but then the tip of Cadak&apos;s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
+       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst!</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard<ch.apos/>s staff at you accusingly. You fight the paralysing effect of the current and tug the sun-sword free of its scabbard. For a moment the current weakens as it is absorbed and neutralized by the Sommerswerd<ch.apos/>s divine energy, but then the tip of Cadak<ch.apos/>s staff ignites with a crimson flame and the current intensifies anew, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
        <p><quote>Ha! I know you, intruder,</quote> yells Cadak maniacally. <quote>You are Lone Wolf, the doomed hero of a doomed realm. You are a fool to come here, Kai Lord. Your powers are no match for those of Naar, the King of the Darkness.</quote></p>
        <p>With this he turns to the acolytes and throws up his hands triumphantly.</p>
        <p><quote>This night we shall celebrate a double victory, my brethren. The resurrection of Lord Vashna and the destruction of Grand Master Lone Wolf!</quote></p>
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-       <p>You hurry down towards the circle of boulders, dragging your frozen horse behind you, eager to get him out of this icy gale. You are twenty metres from your goal when you are brought skidding to a halt by your hunting senses&emdash;something is wrong here. You listen and, to your horror, you detect the clacking of fangs and the scent of blood and greasy fur. Suddenly the clacking ceases and a terrifying howl arises from the far side of the boulders.</p>
+       <p>You hurry down towards the circle of boulders, dragging your frozen horse behind you, eager to get him out of this icy gale. You are twenty metres from your goal when you are brought skidding to a halt by your hunting senses<ch.emdash/>something is wrong here. You listen and, to your horror, you detect the clacking of fangs and the scent of blood and greasy fur. Suddenly the clacking ceases and a terrifying howl arises from the far side of the boulders.</p>
        <choice idref="sect309">If you wish to mount your horse and gallop away from here, <link-text>turn to 309</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect208">If you choose to draw your weapon and investigate what lurks on the other side of these boulders, <link-text>turn to 208</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p><quote>Easy, Smudd,</quote> you say, letting your hands drift away from your weapons, <quote>I mean you no harm. I just want to talk with you awhile, that&apos;s all.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Easy, Smudd,</quote> you say, letting your hands drift away from your weapons, <quote>I mean you no harm. I just want to talk with you awhile, that<ch.apos/>s all.</quote></p>
        <p>The scrawny-faced knave looks at you with deep suspicion, his hand tightening around the hilt of his rapier.</p>
-       <p><quote>Look,</quote> you say, reaching for your money pouch, <quote>I&apos;m even prepared to pay for the privilege.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Look,</quote> you say, reaching for your money pouch, <quote>I<ch.apos/>m even prepared to pay for the privilege.</quote></p>
        <p>Slowly you remove five Gold Crowns and place them on the table (if you currently have less than five Gold Crowns, you give Smudd what you have <em>plus</em> one item from your Backpack).</p>
        <choice idref="sect323">Adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly, then <link-text>turn to 323</link-text>.</choice>
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       <meta><title>171</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>Inspired by your plan, you run towards the advancing line of automatons, taking care to keep a watchful eye on Demoness Shamath, and your goal&emdash;the distant Deathstaff.</p>
+       <p>Inspired by your plan, you run towards the advancing line of automatons, taking care to keep a watchful eye on Demoness Shamath, and your goal<ch.emdash/>the distant Deathstaff.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <p>If you possess Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked. If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, add 1. If you possess Telegnosis, add 1. Also, for every level of Kai mastery you have attained above the rank of Kai Grand Defender, add 1.</p>
+       <p>If you possess Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked. If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, add 1. If you possess Telegnosis, add 1. Also, for every level of Kai Mastery you have attained above the rank of Kai Grand Defender, add 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect334">If your total score is now 5 or less, <link-text>turn to 334</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect34">If it is 6 or more, <link-text>turn to 34</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The crossing is laborious and tiring (lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points), but at length you reach the far side of the river and disembark safely. A stony trail runs along the bank, heading north, and you follow it with high hopes of reaching Lake Vorndarol before sunset.</p>
-       <p>All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night&apos;s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
+       <p>All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night<ch.apos/>s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
        <choice idref="sect102">If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 102</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect260">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 260</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The young woman smiles at you and begins to laugh.</p>
-       <p><quote>You can&apos;t harm me, Lone Wolf,</quote> she says, full of confidence. <quote>You may as well sheathe that weapon for now, though you&apos;ll be needing it later I fancy.</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>Who are you? What do you want?</quote> you hiss, still clutching your weapon defensively. <quote>Are you some cursed illusion, some mind-trick of Naar&apos;s sent to entrap me? Well, demon, maybe this will wipe the smile off your face.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>You can<ch.apos/>t harm me, Lone Wolf,</quote> she says, full of confidence. <quote>You may as well sheathe that weapon for now, though you<ch.apos/>ll be needing it later I fancy.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Who are you? What do you want?</quote> you hiss, still clutching your weapon defensively. <quote>Are you some cursed illusion, some mind-trick of Naar<ch.apos/>s sent to entrap me? Well, demon, maybe this will wipe the smile off your face.</quote></p>
        <p>You strike the young woman a savage blow to the head but to no effect. She laughs again and says, with a mocking tone, <quote>Now do you believe me?</quote></p>
        <p>You back away, looking to either side for a way of escaping this creature, but there is none. She advances, and you regard her with fearful caution. She is wearing a worn leather jerkin and ragged trousers which are cut short at the knees, and does not appear to be armed with a weapon.</p>
-       <p><quote>You should be more respectful,</quote> she says, <quote>after all, if I should decide to leave, who&apos;ll keep you hidden from the gaze of Shamath?</quote> She points to the giant demoness to illustrate who she means. <quote>Trinket or no,</quote> she continues, motioning to the Platinum Amulet you wear, <quote>you wouldn&apos;t last long against her without my help.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>You should be more respectful,</quote> she says. <quote>After all, if I should decide to leave, who<ch.apos/>ll keep you hidden from the gaze of Shamath?</quote> She points to the giant demoness to illustrate who she means. <quote>Trinket or no,</quote> she continues, motioning to the Platinum Amulet you wear, <quote>you wouldn<ch.apos/>t last long against her without my help.</quote></p>
        <p><quote>What do you want from me?</quote> you reply, uneasily.</p>
        <p><quote>Your attention would be a good start. Strange as it may seem, I wish to help you, Lone Wolf.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect221">If you possess Telegnosis, <link-text>turn to 221</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>On leaving the furriers&apos; shop, you continue along the street until you reach a junction. The old woman&apos;s directions lead you through a warren of covered alleyways and narrow passages which eventually lead to the start of Tavern Lane, the street where she says you&apos;ll find the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
+       <p>On leaving the furriers<ch.apos/> shop, you continue along the street until you reach a junction. The old woman<ch.apos/>s directions lead you through a warren of covered alleyways and narrow passages which eventually lead to the start of Tavern Lane, the street where she says you<ch.apos/>ll find the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
        <choice idref="sect332"><link-text>Turn to 332</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You collect your horse and accompany Fyrad to his camp which is hidden in a hill cave. The hunter has made this bare rock hollow surprisingly comfortable with a fire, a straw mattress, and a rock-lined food store dug into its earthen floor. The two corvayl pelts he spoke of are hanging on wooden frames near the smouldering embers of the fire, and his mule, which he calls <quote>Izzy</quote>, is dozing at the rear of the cave.</p>
+
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-         <description>As you enter, a hawk swoops down from the roof and lands on Fyrad&apos;s arm.</description>
+         <description><line>As you enter, a hawk swoops down from the roof and</line><line>lands on Fyrad<ch.apos/>s arm.</line></description>
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-       <p>As you enter, a hawk swoops down from the roof and lands on Fyrad&apos;s arm. He produces a strip of dried meat from his pocket and the hawk takes it back to his perch to consume at his leisure.</p>
-       <p><quote>Fine bird, that &apos;un,</quote> he says, fondly. <quote>He&apos;s led me to some rich quarry over the years.</quote></p>
+       </illustration>
+
+       <p>As you enter, a hawk swoops down from the roof and lands on Fyrad<ch.apos/>s arm. He produces a strip of dried meat from his pocket and the hawk takes it back to his perch to consume at his leisure.</p>
+       <p><quote>Fine bird, that <ch.apos/>un,</quote> he says, fondly. <quote>He<ch.apos/>s led me to some rich quarry over the years.</quote></p>
        <p>Over a meal of rabbit and wild berries, you ask Fyrad what he knows about the Acolytes of Vashna and the Maakengorge. He says he has seen their camp on the east shore of the lake but, like the infamous gorge, only from a distance. His main cause for concern has been the storms and the Vakovarian bandits. If he did not have a hungry family and debts to meet in Karkaste, he would have packed up and gone home a month ago.</p>
        <p>After your delicious meal, you attend to your horse before settling down for the night. You offer to share the watch but Fyrad says this will not be necessary.</p>
-       <p><quote>Best watchman you could ever wish for,</quote> he says, pointing to his pet hawk. <quote>He&apos;ll let us know in good time if trouble comes a-callin&apos; tonight.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Best watchman you could ever wish for,</quote> he says, pointing to his pet hawk. <quote>He<ch.apos/>ll let us know in good time if trouble comes a-callin<ch.apos/> tonight.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect66"><link-text>Turn to 66</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>A grimace spreads slowly across the Elder&apos;s face and sweat breaks out on his forehead as he tries to shut you out of his mind. Suddenly, he breaks the spell and his mouth opens wide. In your desperation to prevent him from sounding the alarm, you lash out with your clenched fist and punch him squarely on the jaw.</p>
+       <p>A grimace spreads slowly across the Elder<ch.apos/>s face and sweat breaks out on his forehead as he tries to shut you out of his mind. Suddenly, he breaks the spell and his mouth opens wide. In your desperation to prevent him from sounding the alarm, you lash out with your clenched fist and punch him squarely on the jaw.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect333">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;4, <link-text>turn to 333</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect134">If it is 5&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 134</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect333">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>4, <link-text>turn to 333</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect134">If it is 5<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 134</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Shamath&apos;s laughter becomes a hideous screech. She mouths a word of power and a flood of psychic energy comes washing across the cavern towards you. Fortunately, it hits the force field and breaks like a wave against it, sparing you from its full effect. Even so, the residue which penetrates the wall is enough to leave you stunned and gasping for breath: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Shamath<ch.apos/>s laughter becomes a hideous screech. She mouths a word of power and a flood of psychic energy comes washing across the cavern towards you. Fortunately, it hits the force field and breaks like a wave against it, sparing you from its full effect. Even so, the residue which penetrates the wall is enough to leave you stunned and gasping for breath: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <p>The Demoness flicks her fingers and instantly the wall is gone. But now you see that you are surrounded by a ring of her sinister, robed attendants.</p>
        <choice idref="sect58">If you possess the Sommerswerd, <link-text>turn to 58</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect97">If you do not possess this Special Item, <link-text>turn to 97</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The birds attack at such a tremendous speed that you dismiss the idea of using a Bow. Swiftly you draw your weapon&emdash;it has barely cleared its sheath when the first of the Scavengers swoop in for the kill. You are forced to release your grip on the guide rope and step back a few paces, for you are not the target of their attack: they are after your horse.</p>
+       <p>The birds attack at such a tremendous speed that you dismiss the idea of using a Bow. Swiftly you draw your weapon<ch.emdash/>it has barely cleared its sheath when the first of the Scavengers swoop in for the kill. You are forced to release your grip on the guide rope and step back a few paces, for you are not the target of their attack: they are after your horse.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Durncrag Scavengers</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">42</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">18</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect317">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 317</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Swiftly you steer Bracer off the track and into the surrounding undergrowth. Almost immediately you hear an angry voice shouting a command, followed by the sound of crossbow bolts in flight. A glance over your shoulder makes your heart leap&emdash;a bolt is speeding directly towards your face!</p>
+       <p>Swiftly you steer Bracer off the track and into the surrounding undergrowth. Almost immediately you hear an angry voice shouting a command, followed by the sound of crossbow bolts in flight. A glance over your shoulder makes your heart leap<ch.emdash/>a bolt is speeding directly towards your face!</p>
        <choice idref="sect170">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 170</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect69">If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline, <link-text>turn to 69</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You turn your head slightly and see a pair of sandalled feet standing on the deck by your side. They belong to the Elder with whom you almost collided when you jumped aboard the longboat. He repeats his command and this time you recognize some of the words. You think he is saying something like: <quote>Move, or you&apos;ll be wounded.</quote></p>
+       <p>You turn your head slightly and see a pair of sandalled feet standing on the deck by your side. They belong to the Elder with whom you almost collided when you jumped aboard the longboat. He repeats his command and this time you recognize some of the words. You think he is saying something like: <quote>Move, or you<ch.apos/>ll be wounded.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect219">If you wish to move along the bench, <link-text>turn to 219</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect292">If you decide to ignore his command, <link-text>turn to 292</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p><quote>Bah! Y&apos; towheaded screwjaw,</quote> curses the drunkard when you refuse to pay his outrageous price. <quote>I&apos;ve more pressin&apos; things t&apos; do than waste breath on you.</quote></p>
-       <p>With this, he stumbles away into the fog, clutching his jug of ale. You watch him disappear, then you look again at the three exits from this square and try to fathom which one will lead you to the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
+       <p><quote>Bah! Y<ch.apos/> towheaded screwjaw,</quote> curses the drunkard when you refuse to pay his outrageous price. <quote>I<ch.apos/>ve more pressin<ch.apos/> things t<ch.apos/> do than waste breath on you.</quote></p>
+       <p>With this, he stumbles away into the fog, clutching his jug of ale. You watch him disappear; then you look again at the three exits from this square and try to fathom which one will lead you to the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
        <choice idref="sect16">If you wish to leave the square by the north exit, <link-text>turn to 16</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect332">If you wish to leave the square by the east exit, <link-text>turn to 332</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect161">If you wish to leave the square by the west exit, <link-text>turn to 161</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>It seems that the closer you get to the pool, the hotter the relic becomes. Another few steps and it will be hot enough to explode. Desperately, you fumble to retrieve it from the charred pocket of your tunic and hurl it away.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;4, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 5&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>4, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 5<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>As the last of the Vakovarians falls dead at your feet, you step away from their heaped bodies and wipe the sweat of battle from your bloodied brow. You have slain the enemy but you can hear more of their kind crashing through the undergrowth, eager to reach you and avenge the deaths of their brothers-in-arms.</p>
+
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-       <p>Several of the dead have satchels, quivers and backpacks slung about their shoulders. Some have been torn open during the combat and their contents lie spilled out on the ground. A cursory glance reveals the following weapons and other items:</p>
+
+       <p>Several of the dead have satchels, quivers, and backpacks slung about their shoulders. Some have been torn open during the combat and their contents lie spilled out on the ground. A cursory glance reveals the following weapons and other items:</p>
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         <li>6 Arrows</li>
         <li>Comb</li>
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-       <p><quote>Attend with care to what I say, mortal,</quote> says the face of Shamath. <quote>When I have finished, I shall ask you this question: <quote>While I am here to do Naar&apos;s bidding, how many loyal servants guard my throne of power?</quote>&thinspace;</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Attend with care to what I say, mortal,</quote> says the face of Shamath. <quote>When I have finished, I shall ask you this question: <quote>While I am here to do Naar<ch.apos/>s bidding, how many loyal servants guard my throne of power?</quote><ch.thinspace/></quote></p>
        <p>Shamath notes the look of concentration on your face and she allows herself a sneering laugh at your expense before she continues. She is confident that you will not defeat her in this intellectual contest. She begins:</p>
        <blockquote>
         <p><quote>In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.</quote></p>
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         <p><quote>But when my Lieutenants of Night arrived, the Dwellers of the Abyss had to leave.</quote></p>
         <p><quote>Exactly half of the remaining number also departed, for they were beholden to the Dwellers.</quote></p>
         <p><quote>From the remainder I picked the loyal servants to guard my throne of power. I chose them all, except for one who was known to me as a traitor. I executed the traitor before I set my loyal servants to guard my throne.</quote></p>
-        <p><quote>So, mortal, answer my question: while I am here to do Naar&apos;s bidding, how many loyal servants guard my throne of power?</quote></p>
+        <p><quote>So, mortal, answer my question: while I am here to do Naar<ch.apos/>s bidding, how many loyal servants guard my throne of power?</quote></p>
        </blockquote>
-       <p>Study the words of Shamath&apos;s riddle carefully. When you think you have the answer, turn to the entry which bears the same number as your answer.<a id="sect189-1" idref="sect189-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
-       <choice idref="sect216">If you cannot answer Shamath&apos;s riddle, <link-text>turn to 216</link-text>.</choice>
+       <p>Study the words of Shamath<ch.apos/>s riddle carefully. When you think you have the answer, turn to the entry which bears the same number as your answer.<a id="sect189-1" idref="sect189-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
+       <choice idref="sect216">If you cannot answer Shamath<ch.apos/>s riddle, <link-text>turn to 216</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Using your advanced Kai mastery, you alter your body weight so that you are able to glide over this soft section of the cavern floor and you soon reach firmer ground. With ease, you slip past the end of the line of automatons and race towards the dais.</p>
+       <p>Using your advanced Kai Mastery, you alter your body weight so that you are able to glide over this soft section of the cavern floor and you soon reach firmer ground. With ease, you slip past the end of the line of automatons and race towards the dais.</p>
        <p>During your flight across the sagging floor, the Demoness was putting on an armoured breastplate of varnished black steel and was otherwise distracted. But she saw you get around the flank of her automatons and now she is aware of your plan. It is clear by the anger on her face that she has no intention of allowing you anywhere near the dais or the Deathstaff.</p>
        <choice idref="sect57">If you possess Kai-alchemy, <link-text>turn to 57</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect282">If you do not possess this Grand Master Discipline, <link-text>turn to 282</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Your spine tingles with the presentiment of danger. Your senses warn that something evil is abroad this night and you are fearful that it will come upon you while you are sleeping. With this worry foremost in your mind, you stand at the mouth of the cave and use your Kai mastery to summon a woodland creature. A few minutes pass, then you sight a wildcat and its cub emerging from the pines. They have answered your call and obediently they submit to your will. You command them to guard the cave mouth, then you settle down to rest, confident in the knowledge that they will wake you at the first sign of trouble.</p>
+       <p>Your spine tingles with the presentiment of danger. Your senses warn that something evil is abroad this night and you are fearful that it will come upon you while you are sleeping. With this worry foremost in your mind, you stand at the mouth of the cave and use your Kai Mastery to summon a woodland creature. A few minutes pass, then you sight a wildcat and its cub emerging from the pines. They have answered your call and obediently they submit to your will. You command them to guard the cave mouth; then you settle down to rest, confident in the knowledge that they will wake you at the first sign of trouble.</p>
+
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+
        <choice idref="sect344"><link-text>Turn to 344</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The face of the worm is changing. It no longer resembles your brother Jen; it has taken on the haughty visage of the Demoness Shamath.</p>
-       <p><quote>Ha!</quote> she snorts. <quote>How puny and insignificant you mortals are. There can be no sport for me in the easy slaying of your kind, for it is too easy. There is no challenge. Therefore I, Shamath, Mistress of the Gates of Darkness, shall devise one. I challenge you to a duel&ellips; a duel of intellect!</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Ha!</quote> she snorts. <quote>How puny and insignificant you mortals are. There can be no sport for me in the easy slaying of your kind, for it is too easy. There is no challenge. Therefore I, Shamath, Mistress of the Gates of Darkness, shall devise one. I challenge you to a duel<ch.ellips/> a duel of intellect!</quote></p>
        <p>The great worm-thing retreats towards the dais and the darkened walls of the cavern are suddenly illuminated by a thousand jets of flame, which roar from jets set into the smooth, glassy floor.</p>
-       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> she says, fixing you with her supernatural eyes, <quote>let the combat begin.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> she says, fixing you with her supernatural eyes. <quote>Let the combat begin.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect189"><link-text>Turn to 189</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>As the Elder is hauling you off the bench, your robe gets snagged on a splinter and it rises up to reveal your boots and scabbard. The Elder is now angry and suspicious; he shouts at you, demanding to know how you came to be in possession of these items.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect190">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;6, <link-text>turn to 190</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect116">If it is 7&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 116</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect190">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>6, <link-text>turn to 190</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect116">If it is 7<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 116</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You unshoulder your Bow and draw an Arrow with one swift and fluid movement. Then, as the beast&apos;s head crosses your line of sight, you release the shaft and send it whistling towards its gaping jaws.</p>
+       <p>You unshoulder your Bow and draw an Arrow with one swift and fluid movement. Then, as the beast<ch.apos/>s head crosses your line of sight, you release the shaft and send it whistling towards its gaping jaws.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect48">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 48</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect272">If it is 5 or more, <link-text>turn to 272</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>With your teeth clenched tightly against the fearful stench that is arising from the grave, you scrape away the remaining earth and stones and begin to search through the corpse&apos;s robes. There is little of value to be found here, nothing that the brigands have not already picked over. You are about to abandon this unpleasant task when suddenly you notice something protruding from the corpse&apos;s boot. It is a hexagonal token engraved with strange symbols, and it is made from the same black, metallic substance as the amulet given to you by President Kadharian.</p>
+       <p>With your teeth clenched tightly against the fearful stench that is arising from the grave, you scrape away the remaining earth and stones and begin to search through the corpse<ch.apos/>s robes. There is little of value to be found here, nothing that the brigands have not already picked over. You are about to abandon this unpleasant task when suddenly you notice something protruding from the corpse<ch.apos/>s boot. It is a hexagonal token engraved with strange symbols, and it is made from the same black, metallic substance as the amulet given to you by President Kadharian.</p>
        <p>You decide to keep this item. (Record this Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Black Token which you carry in your pocket. If you already carry the maximum number of Special Items permissible, you must discard one in its favour.) Having satisfied your curiosity, you leave the gravesite and return to your horse, eager to continue your journey as quickly as you can.</p>
        <choice idref="sect156"><link-text>Turn to 156</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You stare into the man&apos;s steel-blue eyes and, using your psychic skill, implant in his mind the suggestion that he should put his crossbow on the ground. You are hoping he will comply with your command so that you can attempt to get away, but then he says something which makes that idea redundant.</p>
-       <p><quote>You&apos;re no bandit,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
+       <p>You stare into the man<ch.apos/>s steel-blue eyes and, using your psychic skill, implant in his mind the suggestion that he should put his crossbow on the ground. You are hoping he will comply with your command so that you can attempt to get away, but then he says something which makes that idea redundant.</p>
+       <p><quote>You<ch.apos/>re no bandit,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
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        <p>President Kadharian is a tall, muscular man whose stern countenance reflects his unmistakably military background. He gives a formal salute, then he offers you his strong hand in friendship. You accept readily, without hesitation.</p>
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        <p><quote>Welcome, Grand Master,</quote> he says, his jade-green eyes glinting warmly in the torchlit hall. <quote>I am deeply honoured that you have answered my call. I trust your journey to Helgor was not too difficult?</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>I encountered no problems that couldn&apos;t be overcome,</quote> you reply.</p>
+       <p><quote>I encountered no problems that couldn<ch.apos/>t be overcome,</quote> you reply.</p>
        <p><quote>Good, good,</quote> he says, and gives a knowing laugh. Then he bids you accompany him as he crosses the floor of the senate hall and pushes open the door to a smaller adjoining room.</p>
        <p><quote>And now to the business in hand. I shall endeavour to explain the reasons why I felt it necessary to request your help, Grand Master.</quote></p>
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        <p>Darkness descends as you ride down from the hill pass, but the twisting trail is kept illuminated by a spectacular host of twinkling lights which swoop and soar above the glimmering waters of the lake. It is a wondrous display but you are not deceived into thinking that all is well. There is a great and evil magic at work here; you can sense it.</p>
-       <p>You have ridden to within five kilometres of Vorn when you are forced to leave the trail and take cover. Ahead you see a group of Vakovarian bandits encamped on a bridge which carries the trail across a fast-flowing stream. Rather than risk a confrontation, you take cover in a wooded grove and spend a restless night waiting for the dawn. Due to the proximity of the enemy, you are unable to sleep&emdash;lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>You have ridden to within five kilometres of Vorn when you are forced to leave the trail and take cover. Ahead you see a group of Vakovarian bandits encamped on a bridge which carries the trail across a fast-flowing stream. Rather than risk a confrontation, you take cover in a wooded grove and spend a restless night waiting for the dawn. Due to the proximity of the enemy, you are unable to sleep<ch.emdash/>lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
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        <p>The hut has long been deserted but it still offers you and your horse good protection against the elements. It is watertight and there is sufficient straw on the floor to feed your mount and keep you warm during the night.</p>
        <p>Before you settle down to rest, unless you possess Grand Huntmastery, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
-       <p>Sheltered from the foul storm, you are able to get a good night&apos;s rest. You awake the following morning feeling invigorated: restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Sheltered from the foul storm, you are able to get a good night<ch.apos/>s rest. You awake the following morning feeling invigorated: restore 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
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        <p>Your mastery of the Kai Camouflage skills makes you virtually undetectable. The Vakovarians search the inn thoroughly but they fail to find you, even though one passes so close that he treads on your foot.</p>
-       <p>You wait until they have gone, then you leave the inn and make your way down through the ruins towards the lake, taking care to avoid those other Vakovarians who are out looting. The burnt-out shell of a meeting hall offers you an unobstructed view of the quay and its flagstoned square. You hide here, invisible among the charred roof timbers, and watch as a curious scene unfolds on the quayside outside.</p>
+       <p>You wait until they have gone; then you leave the inn and make your way down through the ruins towards the lake, taking care to avoid those other Vakovarians who are out looting. The burnt-out shell of a meeting hall offers you an unobstructed view of the quay and its flagstoned square. You hide here, invisible among the charred roof timbers, and watch as a curious scene unfolds on the quayside outside.</p>
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        <p>You level the Deathstaff at the Arch Druid, and say, <quote>This is the key to the resurrection of Vashna; without it your Demoness will be powerless to summon him.</quote></p>
-       <p>Cadak laughs sneeringly at your words. <quote>And how long do you think you will keep it from her, Kai Lord? Did you think that the Demoness Shamath will have difficulty taking it from you? No, she will not. You are doomed, Lone Wolf. Why don&apos;t you admit it? You were doomed the moment you returned from the great arch.</quote></p>
+       <p>Cadak laughs, sneering at your words. <quote>And how long do you think you will keep it from her, Kai Lord? Did you think that the Demoness Shamath will have difficulty taking it from you? No, she will not. You are doomed, Lone Wolf. Why don<ch.apos/>t you admit it? You were doomed the moment you returned from the great arch.</quote></p>
        <p>Your hatred for the evil druid wells up and you suddenly feel a tingling sensation engulf your hands. Your emotion has activated the power of the Deathstaff and, without warning, a swirling cone of grey vapour emerges from its tip and coils towards Cadak. He yelps with shocked surprise and raises his staff to fend off the attack. He is successful, but at great cost to his magical stamina.</p>
-       <p>You, too, feel the draining effect of this accursed staff (lose 7 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points) and your Kai senses scream a warning not to use it again in combat for fear of the consequences. Next time you could lose more than <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points&emdash;you could lose your soul!</p>
+       <p>You, too, feel the draining effect of this accursed staff (lose 7 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points) and your Kai senses scream a warning not to use it again in combat for fear of the consequences. Next time you could lose more than <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points<ch.emdash/>you could lose your soul!</p>
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        <p>You focus your power on a small pile of rocks lying at the edge of an outcrop which overhangs the boulder. The vibrations that you set up dislodge the rocks and make them cascade on to the boulder beneath. Suddenly, there is a cry of alarm and a man springs up from behind the boulder, shielding his head with both arms as he scurries out in the open to avoid the deluge. He is a grey-bearded man, clad in furs and armed with an expensive-looking crossbow which is slung by a leather strap around his shoulder. By his looks you judge him to be a hunter, not a brigand.</p>
        <p>Coughing and spitting dust, he wipes his face with his hairy hands then turns to look in your direction. You sense that he is about to reach for his crossbow, but when you raise your hand in a show of friendship, he pauses and narrows his eyes, as if he is trying to get a clearer look at you.</p>
-       <p><quote>You&apos;re no Vakovarian,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>You<ch.apos/>re no Vakovarian,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
        <p>Chuckling under his breath, he makes his way down the slope and comes walking towards you with a broad smile on his weather-beaten face.</p>
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-       <p>A wave of panic sweeps through the crowded inn. Women shriek hysterically and gruff voices shout in anger and confusion, demanding Smudd&apos;s killer be found. You back away from the alcove and, as you turn towards the counter, you catch a glimpse of a figure running along the gallery which overlooks the taproom floor. He is clad from head to toe in a close-fitting black tunic and he is carrying a bow. You watch helplessly as he disappears through a door which leads off the gallery.</p>
+       <p>A wave of panic sweeps through the crowded inn. Women shriek hysterically and gruff voices shout in anger and confusion, demanding Smudd<ch.apos/>s killer be found. You back away from the alcove and, as you turn towards the counter, you catch a glimpse of a figure running along the gallery which overlooks the taproom floor. He is clad from head to toe in a close-fitting black tunic and he is carrying a bow. You watch helplessly as he disappears through a door which leads off the gallery.</p>
+
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        <choice idref="sect259">If you wish to climb an adjoining staircase and give chase, <link-text>turn to 259</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You sheathe your weapon and hold out your open palms to show that you have no intention of harming them. They seem to respond to this gesture and they allow you to approach and examine their sickly child. You tell them that you can help their son and, using your innate Healing skills, you place your hands upon the boy&apos;s chest and let your Kai power flow through into his fever-wracked body. Within a few moments he stirs to consciousness and gives a healthy cry; you have saved his life.</p>
+       <p>You sheathe your weapon and hold out your open palms to show that you have no intention of harming them. They seem to respond to this gesture and they allow you to approach and examine their sickly child. You tell them that you can help their son and, using your innate Healing skills, you place your hands upon the boy<ch.apos/>s chest and let your Kai power flow through into his fever-wracked body. Within a few moments he stirs to consciousness and gives a healthy cry; you have saved his life.</p>
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        <p>Beyond the perimeter of the settlement the path steadily gets steeper as it ascends into the hills. The torch-bearing line of acolytes illuminates the rocky landscape with flickering shadows as slowly they zigzag their way eastwards. Another storm is brewing; the eastern sky is alive with electrical activity and thunder booms beyond the horizon. Your ears pop as the air pressure fluctuates wildly and the howl of the wind seems to be growing ever louder. Then you notice something strange. Your torch does not seem to be affected by the storm; it is burning as smoothly as if you were in an enclosed room. You glance over your shoulder and see that the same is true of every other torch. It is as if the procession is being protected from the outside elements by an invisible tunnel.</p>
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        <p>Two kilometres from the settlement you pass a group of acolyte youths, all in their early teens, who are calling encouragement, chanting, and waving the line onwards. Then the path bends and you see a wayside altar and a large marble trough filled with stagnant green water. As they file past, every acolyte dips his right hand into the trough and touches it to his heart.</p>
        <choice idref="sect349">If you possess a Black Token, <link-text>turn to 349</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect121">If you do not possess this Special Item, <link-text>turn to 121</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Immediately you recognize the man: he is Gwynian, the Sage of Varetta.</p>
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        <p><quote>Welcome, Grand Master. It has been a long time since we last met. Come, step into my humble abode. The time has come once more for us to discuss the future.</quote></p>
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-       <p>Your Kai mastery informs you that this creature is telling the truth. You also sense that she is not human, she is a supernatural creature, not of your world or this. You scan her mind but it is impossible for you to penetrate her psychic defences. She seems to possess contradictory qualities; she is both good and evil.</p>
+       <p>Your Kai Mastery informs you that this creature is telling the truth. You also sense that she is not human; she is a supernatural creature, not of your world or this. You scan her mind but it is impossible for you to penetrate her psychic defences. She seems to possess contradictory qualities; she is both good and evil.</p>
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-       <p>You leap into the saddle and steer your terrified horse away from the frenzied Jackals. Bloodied in combat, they stand off just long enough for you to urge your horse to a gallop and get away along the shore. With the help of your Kai mastery, he crosses the difficult terrain with agility, despite his fatigue, and soon reaches firmer ground where he is able to increase his pace and escape from the howling pack.</p>
+       <p>You leap into the saddle and steer your terrified horse away from the frenzied Jackals. Bloodied in combat, they stand off just long enough for you to urge your horse to a gallop and get away along the shore. With the help of your Kai Mastery, he crosses the difficult terrain with agility, despite his fatigue, and soon reaches firmer ground where he is able to increase his pace and escape from the howling pack.</p>
        <p>The Jackals command the shore and you are forced to retrace your steps all the way back to the fork in the trail and take the other path that leads into the foothills. By the time you arrive here, you are tired and very hungry. Unless you possess Grand Huntmastery, you must eat 1 Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
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-       <p>Your keen Kai senses detect the warm scent of horse flesh on the air, mingling with the sharp tang of the surrounding pine trees. Hopeful that it is Bracer, escaped from the brigands and come to find you, you push through the densely-packed trees until you stumble upon a clearing. Here you discover that it is not Bracer after all; you have found the brigands&apos; horses.</p>
+       <p>Your keen Kai senses detect the warm scent of horse flesh on the air, mingling with the sharp tang of the surrounding pine trees. Hopeful that it is Bracer, escaped from the brigands and come to find you, you push through the densely-packed trees until you stumble upon a clearing. Here you discover that it is not Bracer after all; you have found the brigands<ch.apos/> horses.</p>
        <p>They are unguarded and you cannot sense their owners close by, but even so you take every care not to startle them. Silently you untether one of the stallions and lead him away from the rest of the horses, along a trail which is covered with fresh tracks, and soon you come to a wider trail which winds away to the north. Here you mount the horse and set off along this rocky trail, but you have gone little more than half a mile when you smell something that makes you rein your new horse to a halt. From a wooded gully away to your right you detect the scent of death being carried on the afternoon breeze.</p>
        <choice idref="sect342">If you wish to investigate the wooded gully, <link-text>turn to 342</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect156">If you choose to avoid it and ride on, <link-text>turn to 156</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You intensify your vision and focus upon the figure who commands the crystal dais. Shock freezes your spine when you recognize at once the face and flowing platinum hair of Arch Druid Cadak, ruler of Mogaruith, the usurper lord of Kaag. He has grown strong since your last fateful encounter, and now it seems that he is poised to fulfil the Dark God Naar&apos;s lust for vengeance by releasing Vashna and his hordes from the depths of the Maakengorge.</p>
-       <p>You take your place among the throng who are kneeling before the dais, and hear Cadak&apos;s voice ring out above the howling storm.</p>
+       <p>You intensify your vision and focus upon the figure who commands the crystal dais. Shock freezes your spine when you recognize at once the face and flowing platinum hair of Arch Druid Cadak, ruler of Mogaruith, the usurper lord of Kaag. He has grown strong since your last fateful encounter, and now it seems that he is poised to fulfil the Dark God Naar<ch.apos/>s lust for vengeance by releasing Vashna and his hordes from the depths of the Maakengorge.</p>
+       <p>You take your place among the throng who are kneeling before the dais, and hear Cadak<ch.apos/>s voice ring out above the howling storm.</p>
        <p><quote>I summon forth from the Vortex of the Planes the Deliverer of Vashna, Mighty Lord of Darkness, Prince of the Legions of the Restless Dead. Come to us. Come to us now and fulfil our destiny. We, the worthy, now prove our faith in the undying power of Vashna.</quote></p>
        <p>With these words, the acolytes utter a chilling cry of affirmation and rise to their feet. By rank they follow the Elders in single file towards a smaller, shimmering metallic arch which stands to one side of the crystal dais, almost obscured by the glare of the larger one. One by one they file through this archway, under the watchful gaze of Cadak, and then return to their places where they kneel and pray.</p>
        <p>As you approach the smaller arch, you sense a curtain of power drawn across it. Anxiously you pray to the Gods Kai and Ishir to protect you as you prepare to pass through this invisible barrier.</p>
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        <p>You wrench the Deathstaff from the dais and sag beneath its unnatural weight. The moment you raise it into the air, the Demoness spins around to stare at you, sending her attendants flying in all directions. She screams with unholy anger and the noise of her wrath lifts you bodily and sends you skidding across the floor.</p>
-       <p>Desperately you fight to maintain your grip on the Deathstaff as the furious Shamath gets to her feet. She comes striding towards you, bolts of energy darting from her fingertips to rip open the ground as you stumble away towards the yawning black tunnel. The deafening shriek of Shamath&apos;s voice rings in your ears as you clutch the Deathstaff to your chest and leap head first into the oblivion of the Shadow Gate.</p>
+       <p>Desperately you fight to maintain your grip on the Deathstaff as the furious Shamath gets to her feet. She comes striding towards you, bolts of energy darting from her fingertips to rip open the ground as you stumble away towards the yawning black tunnel. The deafening shriek of Shamath<ch.apos/>s voice rings in your ears as you clutch the Deathstaff to your chest and leap head first into the oblivion of the Shadow Gate.</p>
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-       <p>You tether your horse&apos;s reins to a peg beside the door and step into the welcoming warmth of the furriers&apos; shop. Immediately you are assailed by the greasy stench of the furs which fill this emporium. They hang in rows from ornate brass hooks driven into the wooden walls and ceiling rafters, sorted by size and type. Three young men, all strikingly similar in looks, are busy trimming wolf pelts at a work bench. Behind the counter stands a grey-haired old woman with a straight back and clear, milky-white skin. She smiles and asks if you wish to buy or sell furs.</p>
-       <p><quote>Neither, madam,</quote> you reply, politely, <quote>I&apos;m trying to find my way to an inn called the Crooked Sage.</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>Oh, you are, are you?</quote> she mumbles, disappointedly, her welcoming smile fading as she abandons hopes of striking up a deal with you. Then her smile returns and she says, <quote>Well, sir, I&apos;ll be glad to tell you&ellips; but only if you buy something first. If you won&apos;t buy any of my furs, then I&apos;ll sell you the information you want for five Gold Crowns. What do you say?</quote></p>
+       <p>You tether your horse<ch.apos/>s reins to a peg beside the door and step into the welcoming warmth of the furriers<ch.apos/> shop. Immediately you are assailed by the greasy stench of the furs which fill this emporium. They hang in rows from ornate brass hooks driven into the wooden walls and ceiling rafters, sorted by size and type. Three young men, all strikingly similar in looks, are busy trimming wolf pelts at a work bench. Behind the counter stands a grey-haired old woman with a straight back and clear, milky-white skin. She smiles and asks if you wish to buy or sell furs.</p>
+       <p><quote>Neither, madam,</quote> you reply, politely, <quote>I<ch.apos/>m trying to find my way to an inn called the Crooked Sage.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Oh, you are, are you?</quote> she mumbles, disappointedly, her welcoming smile fading as she abandons hopes of striking up a deal with you. Then her smile returns and she says, <quote>Well, sir, I<ch.apos/>ll be glad to tell you<ch.ellips/> but only if you buy something first. If you won<ch.apos/>t buy any of my furs, then I<ch.apos/>ll sell you the information you want for five Gold Crowns. What do you say?</quote></p>
+
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-       <p>Without replying, you step away from the counter and look up. On a square of black slate hanging above the old woman&apos;s head are chalked the following items and prices:</p>
+       </illustration>
+
+       <p>Without replying, you step away from the counter and look up. On a square of black slate hanging above the old woman<ch.apos/>s head are chalked the following items and prices:</p>
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-       <p>The Arrow streaks into the bushes and you hear it shatter against the rocks behind. Then you hear the faint scrape of leather on stone, above and to the side. You turn to look and a man&apos;s voice growls, <quote>Don&apos;t move!</quote></p>
+       <p>The Arrow streaks into the bushes and you hear it shatter against the rocks behind. Then you hear the faint scrape of leather on stone, above and to the side. You turn to look and a man<ch.apos/>s voice growls, <quote>Don<ch.apos/>t move!</quote></p>
        <p>Standing between two boulders away to your left is a grey-bearded man clad in furs and clutching a loaded crossbow. The weapon is pointing directly at your heart.</p>
        <choice idref="sect201">If you possess the Discipline of Telegnosis, and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
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         <p>Since this attack is described as a <quote>Kai-blast</quote>, you should deduct 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points from your current score.</p>
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        <footnote id="sect229-2-foot" idref="sect229-2">
-        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+        <p>The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
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-       <p>You open the depths of your mind and summon forth a glowing ball of Kai energy which you project at the leading phantom.<a id="sect229-1" idref="sect229-1-foot" class="footnote" /> This fiery ball of psychic power rips into the creature&apos;s ghostly form and causes it to shriek with agony. Your Kai-blast has wounded this entity, but it has not stopped its attack. It gathers itself and swoops down upon you, like a hungry vulture descending on a corpse.</p>
+       <p>You open the depths of your mind and summon forth a glowing ball of Kai energy which you project at the leading phantom.<a id="sect229-1" idref="sect229-1-foot" class="footnote" /> This fiery ball of psychic power rips into the creature<ch.apos/>s ghostly form and causes it to shriek with agony. Your Kai-blast has wounded this entity, but it has not stopped its attack. It gathers itself and swoops down upon you, like a hungry vulture descending on a corpse.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Vortexi (weakened by Kai-blast)</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">22</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>For every level of Kai rank you have attained above that of Kai Grand Guardian, you may add 2 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this fight. If you possess the Sommerswerd, restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score.<a id="sect229-2" idref="sect229-2-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <choice idref="sect159">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 159</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>A kilometre beyond the cove the shoreline trail becomes littered with boulders and huge mounds of muddy earth. It is the debris of landslides from the surrounding hills, a consequence of the violent storms. It soon becomes impossible to continue on horseback and you are forced to dismount and make your way on foot, with your horse trailing behind you.</p>
-       <p>During this difficult trek an icy squall arises, driven by a gale-force wind which whips the shoreline mercilessly. Your innate skills of Nexus protect you from the cold, but your horse is not so lucky. You know that you must find shelter from this bitter wintery squall, and quickly, if he is to survive.</p>
-       <p>As you reach the top of a rocky mound, you see below you a cluster of huge boulders grouped in a horseshoe shape near the lake&apos;s edge; they promise good protection from the squall.</p>
+       <p>During this difficult trek an icy squall arises, driven by a gale-force wind which whips the shoreline mercilessly. Your innate skills of Nexus protect you from the cold, but your horse is not so lucky. You know that you must find shelter from this bitter wintry squall, and quickly, if he is to survive.</p>
+       <p>As you reach the top of a rocky mound, you see below you a cluster of huge boulders grouped in a horseshoe shape near the lake<ch.apos/>s edge; they promise good protection from the squall.</p>
        <choice idref="sect302">If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 302</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect168">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 168</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The gamblers are enraged that their privacy has been invaded. They crowd in on you, demanding an explanation, but you push them aside and leave the room without uttering a word. At the bottom of the gallery stairs you are met by an excited throng of people, still shocked and angered by Smudd&apos;s murder. Some openly blame you and attempt to stop you from leaving. By the time you have forced your way across the taproom to the doors of the inn, your face is bleeding and your body is bruised from their kicks and punches.</p>
-       <p>You stumble out into the street and, as you turn towards the stables to go and retrieve your horse, your eagle eyes catch a glimpse of movement on a second storey balcony. It is the archer you saw a few minutes ago, the man in black who fled from the gallery. With bated breath you watch as he climbs on to the balcony rail and leaps across the narrow street on to the roof of the building opposite.</p>
+       <p>The gamblers are enraged that their privacy has been invaded. They crowd in on you, demanding an explanation, but you push them aside and leave the room without uttering a word. At the bottom of the gallery stairs you are met by an excited throng of people, still shocked and angered by Smudd<ch.apos/>s murder. Some openly blame you and attempt to stop you from leaving. By the time you have forced your way across the taproom to the doors of the inn, your face is bleeding and your body is bruised from their kicks and punches.</p>
+       <p>You stumble out into the street and, as you turn towards the stables to go and retrieve your horse, your eagle-eyes catch a glimpse of movement on a second storey balcony. It is the archer you saw a few minutes ago, the man in black who fled from the gallery. With bated breath you watch as he climbs on to the balcony rail and leaps across the narrow street on to the roof of the building opposite.</p>
        <choice idref="sect274"><link-text>Turn to 274</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Terror grips your heart as you feel yourself sinking into the cavern floor. Your feet have completely disappeared from sight when suddenly the sinking sensation stops&ellips; but the terror goes on. Suddenly you hear a hideous squeaking sound high above your head. You look up into the vaulted ceiling and gasp with dread as a writhing cloud of Crypt Spawn come plummeting down towards your face.</p>
+       <p>Terror grips your heart as you feel yourself sinking into the cavern floor. Your feet have completely disappeared from sight when suddenly the sinking sensation stops<ch.ellips/> but the terror goes on. Suddenly you hear a hideous squeaking sound high above your head. You look up into the vaulted ceiling and gasp with dread as a writhing cloud of Crypt Spawn come plummeting down towards your face.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Crypt Spawn</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">43</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">35</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>Reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 4 for the duration of this fight due to your immobility.</p>
        <choice idref="sect79">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 79</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You remove the Amulet from your pocket and hand it to the old sage.</p>
        <p><quote>President Kadharian gave me this. It was found on the shore of Lake Vorndarol, near the ruins of Vorn, by a rogue who went by the name of Smudd. I tracked him to a tavern in Helgor but he was assassinated before he could tell me anything more about it. Can you?</quote></p>
        <p>Gwynian holds the Amulet close to his myopic eyes and examines the engravings with great care.</p>
-       <p>After a short while he says, <quote>It is a seal. It&apos;s an amulet of fealty worn by the Acolytes of Vashna,</quote> he says sadly. <quote>It would seem to confirm our fears. I have seen amulets such as this before, but none crafted from such a metal. This is a metal not of this world.</quote></p>
+       <p>After a short while he says, <quote>It is a seal. It<ch.apos/>s an amulet of fealty worn by the Acolytes of Vashna,</quote> he says sadly. <quote>It would seem to confirm our fears. I have seen amulets such as this before, but none crafted from such a metal. This is a metal not of this world.</quote></p>
        <p>Gwynian hands back the Amulet and you return it to your pocket.</p>
        <choice idref="sect45"><link-text>Turn to 45</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Your first attempt at deciphering the secret of the crystal dais was not successful and a new sequence of numbers materializes upon the surface of the upper tier.</p>
        <p>This time the sequence appears to be harder. Now you will need to bring to bear all your Kai skill and intelligence if you are to break the code and close the Shadow Gate in time. Or will you be defeated by your old enemy, Arch Druid Cadak, even after his death?</p>
        <p>Study the following grid of numbers carefully. When you think you know the missing number, turn to the entry which bears the same number as your answer.<a id="sect235-1" idref="sect235-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
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-       <p>Using your advanced Kai mastery you can tell that, along with the heat, the token is giving off intense ultraviolet radiation. It is a cursed relic which has been activated by its proximity to the pool of stagnant water. The closer you get to the pool, the hotter and more reactive the relic becomes. Another few steps and it will explode. Knowing this, you fumble to retrieve it from the smoking pocket of your tunic, and hurl it away.</p>
+       <p>Using your advanced Kai Mastery you can tell that, along with the heat, the token is giving off intense ultraviolet radiation. It is a cursed relic which has been activated by its proximity to the pool of stagnant water. The closer you get to the pool, the hotter and more reactive the relic becomes. Another few steps and it will explode. Knowing this, you fumble to retrieve it from the smoking pocket of your tunic, and hurl it away.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;1, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 2&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect96">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>1, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect316">If it is 2<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 316</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p><quote>Who found this amulet?</quote> you ask.</p>
-       <p><quote>A rogue, one who goes by the name of Smudd,</quote> answers Kadharian. <quote>A patrol found him in the mountains close by the River Storn, a few days after the second troop went missing. When he couldn&apos;t give a good reason for being there, they arrested him and brought him back to Helgor for <em>questioning</em>.</quote></p>
-       <p>Kadharian&apos;s emphasis on the word <quote>questioning</quote> leaves you in no doubt that Smudd&apos;s interrogation probably involved some degree of torture.</p>
-       <p><quote>Where is he now?</quote> you ask. <quote>I&apos;d like to, er, question him myself.</quote></p>
-       <p><quote>He&apos;s in Helgor. He stays at the Crooked Sage, an inn in the north quarter of the city. I&apos;d willingly send a detachment of Palace Guards to fetch him here but that quarter of Helgor is rife with villains. Word would be sure to get out and he&apos;d go to ground. My men would never find him. No, I&apos;m afraid the only likely way you&apos;ll get to speak to Smudd is by going to the Crooked Sage in person.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>A rogue, one who goes by the name of Smudd,</quote> answers Kadharian. <quote>A patrol found him in the mountains close by the River Storn, a few days after the second troop went missing. When he couldn<ch.apos/>t give a good reason for being there, they arrested him and brought him back to Helgor for <em>questioning</em>.</quote></p>
+       <p>Kadharian<ch.apos/>s emphasis on the word <quote>questioning</quote> leaves you in no doubt that Smudd<ch.apos/>s interrogation probably involved some degree of torture.</p>
+       <p><quote>Where is he now?</quote> you ask. <quote>I<ch.apos/>d like to, er, question him myself.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>He<ch.apos/>s in Helgor. He stays at the Crooked Sage, an inn in the north quarter of the city. I<ch.apos/>d willingly send a detachment of Palace Guards to fetch him here but that quarter of Helgor is rife with villains. Word would be sure to get out and he<ch.apos/>d go to ground. My men would never find him. No, I<ch.apos/>m afraid the only likely way you<ch.apos/>ll get to speak to Smudd is by going to the Crooked Sage in person.</quote></p>
        <p><quote>Very well, President,</quote> you reply, <quote>then that is exactly what I shall do.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect84"><link-text>Turn to 84</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Hurriedly you leave the trail, steering Bracer through the undergrowth towards the cover of a dense pine copse. Here, you quickly dismount and tie his reins to a tree before going forward to see what you can find.</p>
+
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-         <description>You soon discover that a gang of brigands are lying in ambush.</description>
+         <description><line>You soon discover that a gang of brigands are lying</line><line>in ambush.</line></description>
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+
        <p>You soon discover that a gang of brigands are lying in ambush, well hidden among the boulders that line both sides of the trail. Your Kai Hunting skills enable you to circle around and get behind them without being seen and, from a high vantage point among the boulders, you observe their leader and three of his henchmen hiding behind the bough of a fallen tree.</p>
        <choice idref="sect304">If you possess a Bow and wish to fire an Arrow at the brigand leader, <link-text>turn to 304</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect212">If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use the spell of <spell>Mind Charm</spell>, <link-text>turn to 212</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You turn your head slightly and see a pair of sandalled feet standing on the deck by your side. They belong to the Elder whom you almost collided with when you jumped aboard the longboat. He repeats his command and this time, aided by your Kai mastery, you understand what he says. He is commanding you to get up and go forward to the bow and help with the carrying of some wounded acolytes to the stern.</p>
-       <p>You nod to signify you acknowledge his order yet you do not raise your head&emdash;to do so would risk him seeing your face. Unfortunately, as you rise from the bench, your robe gets snagged on a splinter and is pulled up to reveal your boots and scabbard. The Elder becomes suspicious and he demands to know how you came to be in possession of these items.</p>
+       <p>You turn your head slightly and see a pair of sandalled feet standing on the deck by your side. They belong to the Elder whom you almost collided with when you jumped aboard the longboat. He repeats his command and this time, aided by your Kai Mastery, you understand what he says. He is commanding you to get up and go forward to the bow and help with the carrying of some wounded acolytes to the stern.</p>
+       <p>You nod to signify you acknowledge his order yet you do not raise your head<ch.emdash/>to do so would risk him seeing your face. Unfortunately, as you rise from the bench, your robe gets snagged on a splinter and is pulled up to reveal your boots and scabbard. The Elder becomes suspicious and he demands to know how you came to be in possession of these items.</p>
        <choice idref="sect55">If you possess a Runic Disc, <link-text>turn to 55</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect82">If you wish to say that you took them from a dead Vakovarian during the battle at the quay, <link-text>turn to 82</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect22">If you choose to pretend that you did not hear him, <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>A shudder runs through the dais and fingers of green electrical fire shoot from the tip of the Deathstaff into the ground below. There is a moment of dreadful silence when even the storm and the rain abate, then the air shakes with a terrific implosion as the great shimmering arch collapses inwards and slowly disintegrates. Sparkling sheets of energy buckle and fuse as segments of the arch fall to the ground, crushing everything beneath, rock and man. For an instant you catch a glimpse of a huge booted foot stepping through a silvery sheet of energy and you tremble at the thought of what will happen next, for you recognize only too well to whom the foot belongs. But in the very next instant the keystone of the arch falls away and, with a grating cry of tortured rock, the whole edifice comes crashing to the ground.</p>
+       <p>A shudder runs through the dais and fingers of green electrical fire shoot from the tip of the Deathstaff into the ground below. There is a moment of dreadful silence when even the storm and the rain abate; then the air shakes with a terrific implosion as the great shimmering arch collapses inwards and slowly disintegrates. Sparkling sheets of energy buckle and fuse as segments of the arch fall to the ground, crushing everything beneath, rock and man. For an instant you catch a glimpse of a huge booted foot stepping through a silvery sheet of energy and you tremble at the thought of what will happen next, for you recognize only too well to whom the foot belongs. But in the very next instant the keystone of the arch falls away and, with a grating cry of tortured rock, the whole edifice comes crashing to the ground.</p>
        <p>Then, as if from nowhere, a raging whirlwind arises in mid-air, at the centre of where the arch stood. This whirling vortex quickly builds in power until it is sucking everything into its spinning black core. Screaming acolytes tumble past and disappear into its maw as you desperately hang on to the dais to stop yourself from being sucked to your doom.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
        <p>If your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score is 14 or higher, add 2 to the number you picked.</p>
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        <p>When you sense it is safe to do so, you stop to catch your breath and examine the contents of the satchel, which you empty out on to the ground. It contains the following items:</p>
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         <li>80 Gold Crowns</li>
         <li>Enough food for 3 Meals</li>
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        <p>You focus your power of Animal Control on the leader of this predatory flock and will him to abandon his attack. The speed of his descent is making it difficult for you to target him, but your persistence and your Kai skills overcome this. At the last moment the ugly black bird banks away, cawing frantically, and the remainder of his flock follow suit without pressing home their attack. You watch with grim satisfaction as the flock return to the mountains, cawing with frustration, their hunger unsatiated.</p>
-       <p>You manage to regain control of the raft and, at length, you reach the far side of the river and disembark safely. A stony trail runs along the bank, heading north, and you follow it with high hopes of reaching Lake Vorndarol before sunset. All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night&apos;s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
+       <p>You manage to regain control of the raft and, at length, you reach the far side of the river and disembark safely. A stony trail runs along the bank, heading north, and you follow it with high hopes of reaching Lake Vorndarol before sunset. All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night<ch.apos/>s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
        <choice idref="sect102">If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 102</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect260">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 260</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>For three kilometres you trek stolidly through the hills towards a deep magenta glow that is bathing the horizon. Then as you round a knoll of rock shaped like an accusing skeletal finger, you are confronted by a spectacle which leaves you staring open-mouthed with awe and horror.</p>
        <p>An expanse of dead land, littered with cracked and shattered rocks, slopes down to the edge of an immense chasm that stretches more than a kilometre from rim to rim. It is the Maakengorge. Hordes of screeching Vortexi ride a violent electrical storm which rages in the clouds above this vast abyss, and the earth shudders in echoing response to the booming thunder. Near the rim of the chasm there stands a towering arch, hewn of stone, that shimmers with such a supernatural brilliance that you cannot fully focus upon it. Peering closer you see before the arch an elaborate, multi-tiered dais constructed entirely of crystal. Around it kneel hundreds of acolytes who are chanting devoutly. Their dreary voices add to the dreadful noise.</p>
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-         <description>You follow the procession as it winds its way towards the dais.</description>
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-       <p>You follow the procession as it winds its way towards the dais and soon you see that a solitary figure is standing upon its uppermost tier. He faces the shimmering arch, his hands outstretched, and with every movement of his fingers there is a subtle shift in the spectrum of colours within the angry clouds above. It is as if he is manipulating the storm as a conductor would an orchestra. With a grand sweep of his arms he calms the turbulent sky, then he turns to face his kneeling congregation.</p>
+       </illustration>
+
+       <p>You follow the procession as it winds its way towards the dais and soon you see that a solitary figure is standing upon its uppermost tier. He faces the shimmering arch, his hands outstretched, and with every movement of his fingers there is a subtle shift in the spectrum of colours within the angry clouds above. It is as if he is manipulating the storm as a conductor would an orchestra. With a grand sweep of his arms he calms the turbulent sky; then he turns to face his kneeling congregation.</p>
        <choice idref="sect224">If you have ever been to Kaag or Mogaruith, <link-text>turn to 224</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect295">If you have never been to these city-fortresses, <link-text>turn to 295</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The tip of your Arrow clips the man&apos;s calf and you hear him yelp with pain. But the wound is superficial and it does not prevent him from making his escape out on to the balcony.</p>
+       <p>The tip of your Arrow clips the man<ch.apos/>s calf and you hear him yelp with pain. But the wound is superficial and it does not prevent him from making his escape out on to the balcony.</p>
        <p>With weapon in hand, you climb out of the window. You are expecting the archer to attack you the moment you appear but the balcony is deserted: he has disappeared. Then your keen eyes notice fresh bloodstains on the balcony rail and you catch a glimpse of movement on the roof of the building opposite. It is the archer. Despite his wounded leg he has leapt across the narrow street and is now making his escape across the rooftops of the north quarter.</p>
        <p>With the grace of a panther you spring on to the balcony rail and leap across to the roof opposite. Without breaking your stride, you set off after the fleeing assassin and pursue him to the edge of a flat-topped warehouse at the end of Tavern Lane. Here a plank of wood has been laid down to span the gap of fifteen metres to the rooftop opposite. The man limps across the plank, then kicks it away to prevent you from following him.</p>
        <choice idref="sect42">If you are determined to follow him and wish to try to leap across the gap, <link-text>turn to 42</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You sense that Cadak is playing for time. It is his wish to keep you imprisoned within this umbrella of light until the Demoness Shamath arrives. Then you recall the words of the young girl whom you encountered in the cavern&emdash;<thought>Be brave, Grand Master. But most of all&emdash;be swift!</thought></p>
+       <p>You sense that Cadak is playing for time. It is his wish to keep you imprisoned within this umbrella of light until the Demoness Shamath arrives. Then you recall the words of the young girl whom you encountered in the cavern<ch.emdash/><thought>Be brave, Grand Master. But most of all<ch.emdash/>be swift!</thought></p>
        <choice idref="sect123">If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 123</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect267">If you possess Kai-surge and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 267</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect54">If you possess neither of these skills, or if you choose not to use them, <link-text>turn to 54</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You use your advanced healing skills to staunch the flow of blood from your gashed neck and to mend the torn tissue. Within a few moments the pain subsides, and sufficient strength returns to your aching limbs to enable you to break from cover and run after your horse.</p>
-       <p>You enter the dense pine copse to find Bracer standing among the trees, whinnying nervously. You calm him down and secure his reins to a branch, then you go back and try to catch a glimpse of your attackers. As you reach the edge of the trees you have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, brandishing crossbows and swords, are rushing through the knee-high undergrowth towards your hiding place.</p>
+       <p>You enter the dense pine copse to find Bracer standing among the trees, whinnying nervously. You calm him down and secure his reins to a branch; then you go back and try to catch a glimpse of your attackers. As you reach the edge of the trees you have no difficulty seeing them: a dozen brigands, brandishing crossbows and swords, are rushing through the knee-high undergrowth towards your hiding place.</p>
        <choice idref="sect330">If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 330</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect136">If you do not, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You raise your weapon and bring your horse about to face this fearsome beast&apos;s attack. The instant he sees the creature he panics and rears up on his hind legs, neighing with fright, his hooves scrabbling frantically at the air. You bring him under control using your innate Kai skills, but in doing so your attention is diverted from the attacking beast as it moves in and swipes at you with its clawed paw.</p>
+       <p>You raise your weapon and bring your horse about to face this fearsome beast<ch.apos/>s attack. The instant he sees the creature he panics and rears up on his hind legs, neighing with fright, his hooves scrabbling frantically at the air. You bring him under control using your innate Kai skills, but in doing so your attention is diverted from the attacking beast as it moves in and swipes at you with its clawed paw.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Black Corvayl</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">46</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">58</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>Reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 10 for the first round of this fight only.</p>
        <choice idref="sect210">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 210</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You leave the ancient settlement and continue your ride along the sun-baked river trail. As dusk approaches, you keep a weather eye open for the signs of a storm. Clouds are rapidly forming over the mountains to the east, and the metallic smell of ozone is strong on the evening breeze.</p>
-       <p>In the middle distance you see a large herd of Vythaz. These timid, goat-like mountain animals are rarely seen at this time of the year, yet here are more than two hundred of them drinking at the river&apos;s edge. You sense that they are nervous and confused; the eerie weather has disrupted their natural migratory instincts and they have descended to the river a season earlier than is usual.</p>
+       <p>In the middle distance you see a large herd of Vythaz. These timid, goat-like mountain animals are rarely seen at this time of the year, yet here are more than two hundred of them drinking at the river<ch.apos/>s edge. You sense that they are nervous and confused; the eerie weather has disrupted their natural migratory instincts and they have descended to the river a season earlier than is usual.</p>
        <p>Suddenly, there is a flash of lightning and a mighty clap of thunder explodes in the sky overhead. The herd scatter in all directions, terrified by the noise. Then an incredible ball of light shoots down from the heavens and hits the trail, scattering stones like shrapnel and leaving a huge, smoking crater in its wake. You pull your horse off the trail and run with the fleeing Vythaz herd as more of the lightning balls streak down from the stormy sky.</p>
        <choice idref="sect321">If you possess the Sommerswerd, <link-text>turn to 321</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect236">If you do not possess this Special Item, <link-text>turn to 236</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The blazing cavern walls grow dim, and shimmering waves of the crimson light begin to sweep across the floor towards the crystal dais. Suddenly Shamath reappears in her female form at the base of the dais. In front of her booted legs there stand a dozen powerful warriors, armoured and helmeted as if for war, but their stern faces have no eyes and their mouths have no lips. Behind her, a score of new attendants emerge from the shadows carrying large pieces of shiny black armour. She begins to strap this armour to her limbs and, by the sluggishness of her movements, you can tell that she must have been weakened by your earlier conflict.</p>
+
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-         <description>Suddenly Shamath appears in her female form at the base of the dais.</description>
+         <description><line>Suddenly Shamath appears in her female form at the</line><line>base of the dais.</line></description>
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+
        <p>With a single word she commands the warriors to attack you. They raise their short swords and come marching slowly forwards, their movements stiff and machine-like. Beyond their advancing line you catch sight of the Deathstaff still lying near the base of the dais, and a bold plan springs to mind. If you could evade the oncoming line of automatons, you could reach the dais. Then you would be able to take the Deathstaff and enter the Shadow Gate before Shamath recovers her strength.</p>
        <choice idref="sect171"><link-text>Turn to 171</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Guided by your Kai instincts, you raise the Deathstaff and whirl it around your head&emdash;once, twice, three times&ellips;</p>
-       <p>An ominous hum radiates from its haft. There is a crackle of static electricity and the damp air seethes with restrained, undischarged power. A thread of mist issues from the staff&apos;s tip and builds rapidly into a spinning cyclone that ensnares the Vortexi and prevents them from reaching you. In desperation, you sense them pooling their immense psychic energies in an attempt to break out of this whirling prison and attack you.</p>
+       <p>Guided by your Kai instincts, you raise the Deathstaff and whirl it around your head<ch.emdash/>once, twice, three times<ch.ellips/></p>
+       <p>An ominous hum radiates from its haft. There is a crackle of static electricity and the damp air seethes with restrained, undischarged power. A thread of mist issues from the staff<ch.apos/>s tip and builds rapidly into a spinning cyclone that ensnares the Vortexi and prevents them from reaching you. In desperation, you sense them pooling their immense psychic energies in an attempt to break out of this whirling prison and attack you.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
        <p>If you possess Kai-surge, add 4 to this number. If you possess Kai-screen, add 2. If you possess Assimilance, add 1.</p>
        <p>Also, if your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total is 18 or more, add 1; if your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points total is 17 or less, deduct 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect206">If your total score is now 3 or less, <link-text>turn to 206</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect305">If it is 4&endash;8, <link-text>turn to 305</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect305">If it is 4<ch.endash/>8, <link-text>turn to 305</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect138">If it is 9 or more, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
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        <footnote id="sect267-1-foot" idref="sect267-1">
-        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and this Section describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+        <p>There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and this Section describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
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        <p>You focus your psychic energy at the distant druid and release a burst of power the instant he takes his eyes off you. You see him falter and place a hand to his forehead, as if he has just been struck by a stone.</p>
-       <p>Your sudden and unexpected use of a psychic attack caught the Arch Druid offguard. His inner mind is well shielded, but you sense that your burst of power has weakened him. Seizing this opportunity, you draw your weapon and rush forwards to attack him before he fully recovers.<a id="sect267-1" idref="sect267-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
+       <p>Your sudden and unexpected use of a psychic attack caught the Arch Druid off-guard. His inner mind is well shielded, but you sense that your burst of power has weakened him. Seizing this opportunity, you draw your weapon and rush forwards to attack him before he fully recovers.<a id="sect267-1" idref="sect267-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <combat><enemy>Arch Druid Cadak</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">45</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">32</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect298">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 298</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The hardened steel tip of your Arrow penetrates the roof of the creature&apos;s mouth and skewers its brain. For a moment it freezes in mid-stride, seeming to defy gravity as it balances precariously on one hairy foot. Then its eyes roll back, revealing the whites, and it crashes down in an untidy heap at the side of the trail.</p>
+       <p>The hardened steel tip of your Arrow penetrates the roof of the creature<ch.apos/>s mouth and skewers its brain. For a moment it freezes in mid-stride, seeming to defy gravity as it balances precariously on one hairy foot. Then its eyes roll back, revealing the whites, and it crashes down in an untidy heap at the side of the trail.</p>
        <p>You bring your horse about and gallop away in case there are others of its kind lurking nearby. Beyond the plateau, the trail descends steeply towards a thick pine wood. Milky-white pools of water punctuate this section of the track, some deceptively deep, making the descent difficult and tiring. By the time you reach the wood your horse is in need of rest.</p>
        <p>You dismount to take the weight off his back, and as you gather his reins together you notice that the flap of your Backpack is undone. On checking the contents you discover that one of your possessions is missing. (Erase the second item on your list of Backpack Items. If you have only one item on your list, erase that one instead.)</p>
        <p>As soon as your horse is rested, you remount him and set off through the pine wood, heading east.</p>
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-       <p>As soon as all of the acolytes have clambered aboard, you see them cut the grappling lines which tie their longboat to the sinking Vakovarian ship. At the longboat&apos;s prow there stand a trio of Acolyte Elders, each holding a glowing wand of power in their outstretched hands. The moment they touch them together to form a triangle there is a flash of light. A swirling cone of vapour pours from the tip of this triangle and coils into the sky, creating a howling wind which fills the ship&apos;s sails and catapults the vessel away from the quayside at tremendous speed. Five minutes later the longboat has disappeared from sight, beyond the stormy horizon.</p>
+       <p>As soon as all of the acolytes have clambered aboard, you see them cut the grappling lines which tie their longboat to the sinking Vakovarian ship. At the longboat<ch.apos/>s prow there stand a trio of Acolyte Elders, each holding a glowing wand of power in their outstretched hands. The moment they touch them together to form a triangle there is a flash of light. A swirling cone of vapour pours from the tip of this triangle and coils into the sky, creating a howling wind which fills the ship<ch.apos/>s sails and catapults the vessel away from the quayside at tremendous speed. Five minutes later the longboat has disappeared from sight, beyond the stormy horizon.</p>
        <p>The raiding acolytes leave chaos behind them. The brigands flee in all directions, taking with them little more than the bitter regret that their hoard of loot is now resting in the hold of a sunken ship, ten fathoms down at the bottom of the quay. You leave Vorn as soon as you can and return to the copse to retrieve your horse. Then you set off on a trail that heads east, following along the shoreline of Lake Vorndarol. You pass a few brigands on this trail but they are too busy nursing their battle wounds to cause you any concern.</p>
        <p>Three kilometres later, you come to a cove where the trail splits in two. The left trail continues on along the shoreline whilst the right trail turns towards the foothills of the Durncrags. Your natural tracking instincts tell you that the shoreline will be the harder of the two routes to follow. The hill trail looks easier, but it could take you much longer to reach the east shore of Lake Vorndarol that way.</p>
        <choice idref="sect230">If you wish to follow the shoreline trail, <link-text>turn to 230</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You draw on all your Kai mastery to evade these swooping horrors as you make good your escape. At first they pursue you, but when you leave the island they seem to lose interest and they turn back to their lair. Within a few minutes of their departing, a grey vapour boils up from the cracks in the ground. The vapour thickens with breathtaking speed until the basalt island and the entire fiery plain beyond is engulfed by this grey fog.</p>
+       <p>You draw on all your Kai Mastery to evade these swooping horrors as you make good your escape. At first they pursue you, but when you leave the island they seem to lose interest and they turn back to their lair. Within a few minutes of their departing, a grey vapour boils up from the cracks in the ground. The vapour thickens with breathtaking speed until the basalt island and the entire fiery plain beyond is engulfed by this grey fog.</p>
        <p>You walk through this cloying sea of mist for what seems like an eternity until your senses detect that something is circling high above you. At first you suspect that the golden-winged creatures have come hunting for you again, but then you detect that it is something completely different. There is only one creature, and you sense that it is using a highly-developed psychic probe in order to seek you out.</p>
        <choice idref="sect31">If you possess Grand Nexus, and have reached the Kai rank of Sun Knight or higher, <link-text>turn to 31</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect106">If you do not possess this skill, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 106</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect106">If you do not possess this skill, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 106</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Tearful with gratitude, the boy&apos;s parents kiss your hands and thank you with all their hearts for saving their child&apos;s life. The man asks if there is anything they can do to help you in return and you respond by asking who they are, and how they came to be hiding here.</p>
+       <p>Tearful with gratitude, the boy<ch.apos/>s parents kiss your hands and thank you with all their hearts for saving their child<ch.apos/>s life. The man asks if there is anything they can do to help you in return and you respond by asking who they are, and how they came to be hiding here.</p>
        <p>You learn that they once lived in the hamlet of Vorn where the man, whose name is Bayan, made a humble but honest living fishing the waters of Lake Vorndarol. Then one fateful night, some weeks ago, the Acolytes of Vashna came and destroyed Vorn. They managed to escape with their lives but they fear that the rest of their community were slaughtered in the attack, or perished in the dreadful storms which followed. For the past few weeks they have been hiding in the hills to avoid the acolytes and the marauding bands of robbers who have come from Vakovar looking for loot.</p>
        <p>You tell them that you have been sent here by President Kadharian to find out what is going on at Lake Vorndarol. Bayan replies that he knows a safe route through the hills which leads directly to the ruins of his old home. He says he is willing to act as your guide and you accept his offer gratefully.</p>
        <choice idref="sect335"><link-text>Turn to 335</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p><quote>Fools!</quote> screams Cadak at his fleeing acolytes. <quote>Must I do everything myself?</quote></p>
-       <p>With these words he bangs the tip of his staff three times against the floor of the dais and a gout of crackling energy arcs through the rain-laden air towards you. Instinctively, you raise the Deathstaff and catch the arching bolt on its haft. There is a flash of sparks, then the crackling energy flickers and disappears.</p>
+       <p>With these words he bangs the tip of his staff three times against the floor of the dais and a gout of crackling energy arcs through the rain-laden air towards you. Instinctively, you raise the Deathstaff and catch the arcing bolt on its haft. There is a flash of sparks; then the crackling energy flickers and disappears.</p>
        <p>Cadak curses loudly and promises that you are about to die, but for all his bravado you sense that he is scared. He recognizes the Deathstaff for what it is and he fears that, in your hands, it could lay waste to all his meticulous plans. The aged druid looks to the stormy clouds and screams a command to the circling Vortexi to help him finish you once and for all.</p>
        <choice idref="sect162"><link-text>Turn to 162</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The first light of dawn brings with it a dramatic change in the weather. The storm has ended and the sky is now bright and clear, but on the distant horizon you can still see flashes of lightning and hear thunder rumbling in the mountains.</p>
+
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-       <p>You leave the old mine and urge Bracer down the muddy slope towards the track, most of which you discover has been washed away by last night&apos;s storm. The damp earth is streaming in the unusual heat of the morning sun and the air crackles with an eerie residue of static electricity.</p>
+
+       <p>You leave the old mine and urge Bracer down the muddy slope towards the track, most of which you discover has been washed away by last night<ch.apos/>s storm. The damp earth is steaming in the unusual heat of the morning sun and the air crackles with an eerie residue of static electricity.</p>
        <p>You continue your ride through the hills without stopping until, shortly after midday, you come to a derelict hovel which stands at the edge of a marshy peat bog. Your Kai senses inform you that there is somebody inside and, spurred on by curiosity, you resolve to find out who they are. You dismount and leave Bracer to feed on the marsh grass while you go forward to investigate the hovel on foot. You are six metres away from its rotting wooden door when suddenly it creaks open and you see an old man standing in the doorway. He is smiling at you.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect220">If you have ever visited the city of Varetta, the city of Tahou, or a hut on the Ruanon Pike in a previous Lone Wolf adventure, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect220">If you have ever visited the city of Varetta, the city of Tahou, or a hut on the Ruanon Pike in a previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventure, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect53">If you have never visited any of these places, <link-text>turn to 53</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The man makes a slow, sure-footed descent to within three metres of where you are standing, during which time his weapon&apos;s sights never leave your chest. You can tell immediately that he is a skilled hunter and, judging by his furs and his beautifully crafted crossbow, he is a successful one too.</p>
+       <p>The man makes a slow, sure-footed descent to within three metres of where you are standing, during which time his weapon<ch.apos/>s sights never leave your chest. You can tell immediately that he is a skilled hunter and, judging by his furs and his beautifully crafted crossbow, he is a successful one too.</p>
        <p>Your muscles are tense and coiled like springs, ready to propel you out of the path of his crossbow bolt in case he fires. But then he says something which makes you realize that, maybe, he has no intentions of killing you after all.</p>
-       <p><quote>You&apos;re no bandit,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>You<ch.apos/>re no bandit,</quote> he muses. <quote>No, by thunder, you look like a Sommlending to me.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect340"><link-text>Turn to 340</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The Demoness comes striding towards you, screaming maniacally, bolts of energy darting from her fingertips to rip open the ground as you zigzag to avoid being hit.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect4">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;3, <link-text>turn to 4</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect92">If it is 4&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 92</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect4">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>3, <link-text>turn to 4</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect92">If it is 4<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 92</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>In the cold light of dawn you see that the River Storn is too deep and fast-flowing to be fordable at this point. The trail follows the river downstream so you decide to follow it in the hope of finding somewhere to cross. Two kilometres later, you happen upon such a place.</p>
        <p>At a point where the river slows and widens, you find a crude rope ferry has been erected. It comprises two rafts attached to two long lengths of rope which are suspended above the river. A crossing can be achieved by boarding a raft and pulling on its guide rope to haul it across to the opposite bank.</p>
+
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-         <description>A crossing can be achieved by boarding a raft and pulling on its guide rope.</description>
+         <description><line>A crossing can be achieved by boarding a raft and</line><line>pulling on its guide rope.</line></description>
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+
        <p>You wait and observe that area for a few minutes. When you feel sure that it is safe to proceed, you place your horse aboard a raft and begin the laborious task of pulling yourself across to the distant shore.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
        <choice idref="sect87">If the number you have picked is even (0, 2, 4, 6, 8), <link-text>turn to 87</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> you say, <quote>how do you intend to help me?</quote></p>
-       <p>The young woman begins by confirming your suspicions. The Demoness Shamath is indeed preparing to go to the Maakengorge in response to Cadak&apos;s summons. She will make the journey by entering the tunnel; it is a Shadow Gate which will transport her from this plane of existence to Magnamund, to the great shimmering archway through which you were hurled by the storm. She will take with her an artefact of great evil&emdash;the Deathstaff&emdash;a device forged by the Dark God Naar himself and imbued with the power to resurrect the spirit of his long-lost champion, Lord Vashna, from the depths of the Chasm of Doom.</p>
-       <p><quote>Naar has laboured long and hard to create the Deathstaff,</quote> says the young woman. She points once more towards the crystal dais and says, <quote>Can you see, Lone Wolf? It is there, resting beside Shamath&apos;s feet.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> you say. <quote>How do you intend to help me?</quote></p>
+       <p>The young woman begins by confirming your suspicions. The Demoness Shamath is indeed preparing to go to the Maakengorge in response to Cadak<ch.apos/>s summons. She will make the journey by entering the tunnel; it is a Shadow Gate which will transport her from this plane of existence to Magnamund, to the great shimmering archway through which you were hurled by the storm. She will take with her an artefact of great evil<ch.emdash/>the Deathstaff<ch.emdash/>a device forged by the Dark God Naar himself and imbued with the power to resurrect the spirit of his long-lost champion, Lord Vashna, from the depths of the Chasm of Doom.</p>
+       <p><quote>Naar has laboured long and hard to create the Deathstaff,</quote> says the young woman. She points once more towards the crystal dais and says, <quote>Can you see, Lone Wolf? It is there, resting beside Shamath<ch.apos/>s feet.</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect63"><link-text>Turn to 63</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The drunkard gives a lop-sided grin and wipes his greasy mouth with the back of his hand before replying to your question.</p>
-       <p><quote>F&apos; sure I know where be the Crooked Sage. Fine ale to be had there, if only I was moneyed enough to afford it. I&apos;ll tell you where it is for a small payment&ellips; say, ten Gold Crowns?</quote></p>
+       <p>The drunkard gives a lopsided grin and wipes his greasy mouth with the back of his hand before replying to your question.</p>
+       <p><quote>F<ch.apos/> sure I know where be the Crooked Sage. Fine ale to be had there, if only I was moneyed enough to afford it. I<ch.apos/>ll tell you where it is for a small payment<ch.ellips/> say, ten Gold Crowns?</quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect62">If you wish to pay the drunkard for this information, erase 10 Gold Crowns from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> and <link-text>turn to 62</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect185">If you refuse to pay such a high price, <link-text>turn to 185</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You watch helplessly as the woman approaches, her corpse-white hands outstretched, reaching in eager anticipation for the flap of the money pouch which hangs from your belt. You fight to resist the mind charm which is paralysing your limbs but, try as you will, you cannot break free.</p>
        <p>Then with a jolt, the feeling suddenly returns to your paralysed body. The woman has vanished and so, too, have nearly all the Gold Crowns in your Belt Pouch.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <p>If the number you have picked is 0&endash;3, there are only two Gold Crowns left in your pouch.</p>
-       <p>If the number you have picked is 4&endash;7, there are only three Gold Crowns remaining.</p>
-       <p>If the number you have picked is 8&endash;9, you have been left with five Gold Crowns.</p>
+       <p>If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>3, there are only two Gold Crowns left in your pouch.</p>
+       <p>If the number you have picked is 4<ch.endash/>7, there are only three Gold Crowns remaining.</p>
+       <p>If the number you have picked is 8<ch.endash/>9, you have been left with five Gold Crowns.</p>
        <p>Remember to adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly.</p>
        <p>Cursing your luck, you coax your horse to the right at the road junction and continue on your search for the Crooked Sage Inn. A warren of covered alleyways and narrow passages eventually lead to a wider street, one which is illuminated by flickering torchlight.</p>
        <choice idref="sect147"><link-text>Turn to 147</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You whisper the words of the Brotherhood Spell <spell>Mind Charm</spell> and, at once, you see Smudd relaxing under its influence. He removes his hand from his sword and the scowl of fearful suspicion softens to a smile as he lowers himself back into his seat. With a flick of his hand he dismisses the bar-girl. She leaves without protest and as you watch her walk away, he leans across the table and says, <quote>How can I help you, stranger?</quote></p>
        <p><quote>What do you know about a little hamlet called Vorn?</quote> you say, quietly.</p>
-       <p>For a moment the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes, then he sneers and says, <quote>I know it no longer exists, that&apos;s what I know. There&apos;s rumour on the street that it was destroyed by the storms, but there&apos;s more to it than that. More than I care to remember.</quote></p>
-       <p>You show him the Black Amulet that President Kadharian gave to you and once more you repeat your question. Now he refuses to answer, fearing that you are one of Kadharian&apos;s agents out to arrest him. He kicks back his chair and tries to stand, but he does not make it.</p>
+       <p>For a moment the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes; then he sneers and says, <quote>I know it no longer exists, that<ch.apos/>s what I know. There<ch.apos/>s rumour on the street that it was destroyed by the storms, but there<ch.apos/>s more to it than that. More than I care to remember.</quote></p>
+       <p>You show him the Black Amulet that President Kadharian gave to you and once more you repeat your question. Now he refuses to answer, fearing that you are one of Kadharian<ch.apos/>s agents out to arrest him. He kicks back his chair and tries to stand, but he does not make it.</p>
        <p>He is halfway out of his seat when suddenly his chest is transfixed by a crystal arrow. Wide-eyed with pain and shocked surprise, he crashes to the floor amid a spray of blood and spilt ale.</p>
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        <p>The night passes uneventfully, but you awake at dawn to a spectacular sight. The eastern sky is filled with soaring meteors of fiery yellow light which shoot from the midst of a bank of deep magenta storm clouds. The air seethes with electrical energy and lightning flashes can be seen all along the distant horizon. You find the sight unnerving, doubly so when you calculate that its centre of activity lies directly over the Maakengorge.</p>
        <p>After a frugal breakfast, you set off along the shoreline trail on a route which takes you ever nearer to the storm.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect32">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;4, <link-text>turn to 32</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect155">If it is 5&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 155</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect32">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>4, <link-text>turn to 32</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect155">If it is 5<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 155</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You thank Gwynian for his help and he waves farewell as you leave the hovel and walk back to your horse.</p>
-       <p><quote>Good luck, Grand Master,</quote> he calls out, <quote>my hopes and my prayers go with you.</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Good luck, Grand Master,</quote> he calls out. <quote>My hopes and my prayers go with you.</quote></p>
        <p>By nightfall you have covered twenty kilometres of rough terrain and have been assailed by extremes of weather. From a desert-like heat at mid-afternoon the temperature plummeted, causing a sub-zero squall which left you and Bracer blanketed with frost. But now, as darkness draws its cloak over this troubled land, the temperature quickly rises. This heralds the return of the rain, and the thunder and the violent lightning strikes.</p>
        <p>Helped by your Tracking skills, you discover a shallow cave where you can take shelter from the storm. You are tired and hungry, and unless you possess Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect194">If you possess Animal Mastery, and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 194</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect23">If you do not possess this Discipline, or if you have yet to achieve this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 23</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect23">If you do not possess this Discipline, or if you have yet to achieve this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 23</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>As you strike your killing blow, Cadak shudders and crashes to the ground, clutching his staff tightly to his chest. He finds just enough strength to utter a dying curse, then, before your disbelieving eyes, his body slowly disintegrates. The skin is quickly criss-crossed by thousands of wrinkles, and the drying flesh falls from his skull, leaving it bare boned with a tattered layer of leathery skin stretched over it. Then, in the next instant his body collapses into naked bone. His staff breaks into chalky chunks and, finally, bone and staff blacken and fall away to dust.</p>
+       <p>As you strike your killing blow, Cadak shudders and crashes to the ground, clutching his staff tightly to his chest. He finds just enough strength to utter a dying curse; then, before your disbelieving eyes, his body slowly disintegrates. The skin is quickly criss-crossed by thousands of wrinkles, and the drying flesh falls from his skull, leaving it bare boned with a tattered layer of leathery skin stretched over it. Then, in the next instant his body collapses into naked bone. His staff breaks into chalky chunks and, finally, bone and staff blacken and fall away to dust.</p>
        <choice idref="sect72"><link-text>Turn to 72</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Aching with fatigue and spattered with the foul ichor that passed for blood in the bodies of Shamath&apos;s attendants, you step back from those you have slain and stare defiantly at the towering Demoness.</p>
+       <p>Aching with fatigue and spattered with the foul ichor that passed for blood in the bodies of Shamath<ch.apos/>s attendants, you step back from those you have slain and stare defiantly at the towering Demoness.</p>
        <choice idref="sect242"><link-text>Turn to 242</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You draw back your Arrow until the feathers are touching your lips, then you let slip the straining bowstring. The shaft whistles through the trees towards the brigand leader&apos;s back and hits him squarely between the shoulder blades with a loud <onomatopoeia>thok!</onomatopoeia> He screams and throws his arms wide as he crashes face-first to the ground.</p>
-       <p>His henchmen spin around and see you. They bellow commands to their underlings and at once the angry brigands begin to close in on your position from all sides. You retreat into the trees and head back the way you came, anxious to retrieve your horse before the brigands find him. You are within a stone&apos;s throw of Bracer when suddenly you are confronted by more than a dozen bandits, hungry for revenge. They attack in a frenzy and you are forced to fight all twelve at once.</p>
+       <p>You draw back your Arrow until the feathers are touching your lips; then you let slip the straining bowstring. The shaft whistles through the trees towards the brigand leader<ch.apos/>s back and hits him squarely between the shoulder blades with a loud <onomatopoeia>thok!</onomatopoeia> He screams and throws his arms wide as he crashes face-first to the ground.</p>
+       <p>His henchmen spin around and see you. They bellow commands to their underlings and at once the angry brigands begin to close in on your position from all sides. You retreat into the trees and head back the way you came, anxious to retrieve your horse before the brigands find him. You are within a stone<ch.apos/>s throw of Bracer when suddenly you are confronted by more than a dozen bandits, hungry for revenge. They attack in a frenzy and you are forced to fight all twelve at once.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Vakovarian brigands</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">46</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">56</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <choice idref="sect35">You may evade this combat after six rounds by <link-text>turning to 35</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect188">If you win the fight, <link-text>turn to 188</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Your Weapon disintegrated in the blast (erase it from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>), yet it served to conduct the energy of the lightning ball away from your body. It has spared you from sustaining injury and possibly death.</p>
-       <p>Dazed by the blast and the fall, you stagger to your feet and look around for your horse. He has halted at the river&apos;s edge where he is pacing nervously to and fro. You call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear, and he responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
+       <p>Dazed by the blast and the fall, you stagger to your feet and look around for your horse. He has halted at the river<ch.apos/>s edge where he is pacing nervously to and fro. You call to him, using your natural Kai skills to calm and control his fear, and he responds at once and returns to collect you. Swiftly you climb back into the saddle and gallop away along the river trail, anxious to put distance between you and this deadly storm.</p>
        <choice idref="sect80"><link-text>Turn to 80</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Stunned by the speed and skill with which you have dispatched over fifteen of their brothers, the circle of murderous acolytes retreat a few paces to catch their breath and lick their wounds.</p>
-       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard&apos;s staff at you accusingly. The tip flares brightly, then a jet of crimson energy comes arcing towards your chest. You try to dodge it but it follows you and connects with your spine, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
+       <p><quote>We have an intruder in our midst,</quote> screams Cadak, levelling his wizard<ch.apos/>s staff at you accusingly. The tip flares brightly; then a jet of crimson energy comes arcing towards your chest. You try to dodge it but it follows you and connects with your spine, numbing your limbs with its insidious effect.</p>
        <choice idref="sect228"><link-text>Turn to 228</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The brigand captain&apos;s men respond to his call for help and, with the sound of them closing in, you break off the fight and take to your heels. Thinking that he has terrified you into running away, the captain gives chase, but he soon loses you among the dense pines and calls off his pursuit. The area is alive with bandits and you are forced to flee northwards, away from the place where you left Bracer tethered to a tree. You are anxious for his safety and mindful that there are still many miles to be covered before you reach Lake Vorndarol, but you dare not turn back for him. Then you hear something that makes you halt in your tracks: it is the sound of a horse whinnying.</p>
+       <p>The brigand captain<ch.apos/>s men respond to his call for help and, with the sound of them closing in, you break off the fight and take to your heels. Thinking that he has terrified you into running away, the captain gives chase, but he soon loses you among the dense pines and calls off his pursuit. The area is alive with bandits and you are forced to flee northwards, away from the place where you left Bracer tethered to a tree. You are anxious for his safety and mindful that there are still many miles to be covered before you reach Lake Vorndarol, but you dare not turn back for him. Then you hear something that makes you halt in your tracks: it is the sound of a horse whinnying.</p>
        <choice idref="sect223"><link-text>Turn to 223</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Immediately you recognize the tall, muscular man who stands before you now; he was once known as the Slavemaster of Aarnak. He was an agent of the Elder Magi based in the Darklands who, seven years earlier, helped you to enter the dread city of Helgedad and bring about the downfall of the Darklords. Now he is known by a different name&emdash;President Kadharian of Magador.</p>
-       <p><quote>Welcome, Grand Master,</quote> he says, smiling warmly, <quote>it seems we have both come a long way since our last meeting.</quote></p>
-       <p>The President is amused by your expression of surprise and offers an explanation of how he came to be leader of this rough republic. After the fall of Helgedad, the Elder Magi arranged for his safe passage to the Stornlands where he was granted a command in the army of Lyris. He distinguished himself in battle and later, once the remains of the Darkland armies had been vanquished, he returned to his native Magador and led an uprising against King Vanagrom VI, who had long been a puppet of the Darklords. The revolt ended with the King&apos;s death and the abolition of the monarchy. Magador became a republic and the Slavemaster, whose given name was Kadharian, became its first elected leader.</p>
+       <p>Immediately you recognize the tall, muscular man who stands before you now; he was once known as the Slavemaster of Aarnak. He was an agent of the Elder Magi based in the Darklands who, seven years earlier, helped you to enter the dread city of Helgedad and bring about the downfall of the Darklords. Now he is known by a different name<ch.emdash/>President Kadharian of Magador.</p>
+       <p><quote>Welcome, Grand Master,</quote> he says, smiling warmly. <quote>It seems we have both come a long way since our last meeting.</quote></p>
+       <p>The President is amused by your expression of surprise and offers an explanation of how he came to be leader of this rough republic. After the fall of Helgedad, the Elder Magi arranged for his safe passage to the Stornlands where he was granted a command in the army of Lyris. He distinguished himself in battle and later, once the remains of the Darkland armies had been vanquished, he returned to his native Magador and led an uprising against King Vanagrom VI, who had long been a puppet of the Darklords. The revolt ended with the King<ch.apos/>s death and the abolition of the monarchy. Magador became a republic and the Slavemaster, whose given name was Kadharian, became its first elected leader.</p>
        <p><quote>And now to the reasons why I have requested your help, Grand Master,</quote> he says, as he pushes open the door to a smaller room which adjoins the senate hall.</p>
        <choice idref="sect100"><link-text>Turn to 100</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The few scavengers that survive the attack wheel away and return to the mountains, cawing with frustration, their wings bloodied and their hunger unsatiated. You manage to regain control of the raft and, at length, you reach the far side of the river and disembark safely. A stony trail runs along the bank, heading north, and you follow it with high hopes of reaching Lake Vorndarol before sunset. All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night&apos;s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
+       <p>The few scavengers that survive the attack wheel away and return to the mountains, cawing with frustration, their wings bloodied and their hunger unsatiated. You manage to regain control of the raft and, at length, you reach the far side of the river and disembark safely. A stony trail runs along the bank, heading north, and you follow it with high hopes of reaching Lake Vorndarol before sunset. All day the sun blazes supreme in a cloudless sky and waves of heat create a shimmering, distorted view of the trail ahead. The distant horizon is streaked with myriad colours and the dry air crackles with electricity, a legacy of last night<ch.apos/>s violent storm. Late in the afternoon you come to the ruins of an ancient settlement and stop here to allow your horse to rest awhile in the shade.</p>
        <choice idref="sect102">If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 102</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect260">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 260</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You step back from the glowing remains of Helshezag and feel yourself sagging beneath the unnatural weight of the Deathstaff. The sound of the bolt attracts Shamath&apos;s attention and she spins around to stare at you, sending her attendants flying in all directions. Then she screams with unholy anger and the noise of her wrath lifts you bodily and sends you skidding across the floor.</p>
+       <p>You step back from the glowing remains of Helshezag and feel yourself sagging beneath the unnatural weight of the Deathstaff. The sound of the bolt attracts Shamath<ch.apos/>s attention and she spins around to stare at you, sending her attendants flying in all directions. Then she screams with unholy anger and the noise of her wrath lifts you bodily and sends you skidding across the floor.</p>
        <p>Desperately you fight to maintain your grip on the Deathstaff as the furious Demoness gets to her feet. She comes striding towards you, bolts of energy darting from her fingertips to rip open the ground as you stumble away towards the yawning black tunnel. The deafening shriek of her voice rings in your ears as you clutch the Deathstaff to your chest and leap head first into the oblivion of the Shadow Gate.</p>
        <choice idref="sect270"><link-text>Turn to 270</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The ground beneath Bracer&apos;s hooves is trembling. At first you think the thunder is the cause, but then you notice that the sound of the storm is getting louder and louder. Fear knots your stomach when suddenly you see a solid roaring wall of water come tumbling down the gully. It is a flash flood and, unless you act quickly, you and your horse will be washed away without trace.</p>
+       <p>The ground beneath Bracer<ch.apos/>s hooves is trembling. At first you think the thunder is the cause, but then you notice that the sound of the storm is getting louder and louder. Fear knots your stomach when suddenly you see a solid roaring wall of water come tumbling down the gully. It is a flash flood and, unless you act quickly, you and your horse will be washed away without trace.</p>
+
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-         <description>You see a solid roaring wall of water come tumbling down the gully.</description>
+         <description><line>You see a solid roaring wall of water come tumbling</line><line>down the gully.</line></description>
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-       </illustration> 
-       <choice idref="sect104">If you possess Grand Huntmastery and have reached the Kai rank of Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 104</link-text>.</choice>
+       </illustration>
+
+       <choice idref="sect104">If you possess Grand Huntmastery and have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 104</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect73">If you do not possess this skill, or have yet to attain this rank of Kai Grand Mastership, <link-text>turn to 73</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You focus your sight and hearing at the bushes and suddenly realize that you have been taken in by an elaborate ruse. A thin length of twine runs away under the foliage; it is the trigger that dislodged the rock and made it fall. There is nobody hiding there after all.</p>
        <p>Your eye follows the twine along the hillside to a boulder high up on the slope to your left. Perhaps your would-be ambusher is hiding there instead?</p>
        <choice idref="sect214">If you possess Grand Nexus, and have reached the Kai rank of Sun Knight; <link-text>turn to 214</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect146">If you do not possess this skill, or have yet to reach this level of Kai mastery, <link-text>turn to 146</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect146">If you do not possess this skill, or have yet to reach this level of Kai Mastery, <link-text>turn to 146</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>Smudd is clearly impressed by your generosity. He removes his hand from his sword and the scowl of fearful suspicion softens to a smile as he lowers himself back into his seat. With a flick of his hand he dismisses the bar-girl. She leaves without protest, and as you watch her walk away, he leans across the table and says, <quote>How can I help you, stranger?</quote></p>
        <p><quote>What do you know about a little hamlet called Vorn?</quote> you say, quietly.</p>
-       <p>For an instant the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes, then he sneers and says, <quote>I know it no longer exists, that&apos;s what I know. There&apos;s a rumour on the street that it was destroyed by the storm, but there&apos;s more to it than that. More than I care to remember.</quote></p>
-       <p>You show him the Black Amulet that President Kadharian gave to you and once more you repeat your question. Now he refuses to answer, fearing that you are one of Kadharian&apos;s agents out to arrest him. He kicks back his chair and tries to stand, but he does not make it.</p>
+       <p>For an instant the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes; then he sneers and says, <quote>I know it no longer exists, that<ch.apos/>s what I know. There<ch.apos/>s a rumour on the street that it was destroyed by the storm, but there<ch.apos/>s more to it than that. More than I care to remember.</quote></p>
+       <p>You show him the Black Amulet that President Kadharian gave to you and once more you repeat your question. Now he refuses to answer, fearing that you are one of Kadharian<ch.apos/>s agents out to arrest him. He kicks back his chair and tries to stand, but he does not make it.</p>
        <p>He is halfway out of his seat when suddenly his chest is transfixed by a crystal arrow. Wide-eyed with pain and shocked surprise, he crashes to the floor amid a spray of blood and spilt ale.</p>
        <choice idref="sect215"><link-text>Turn to 215</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The few acolytes who survive the fight count themselves lucky and flee for their lives. <quote>Fools!</quote> screams Cadak, at his routing acolytes. <quote>Must I do everything myself!</quote></p>
-       <p>With these words he bangs the tip of his staff three times against the floor of the dais and a gout of crackling energy arcs through the rain-laden air towards you. Instinctively, you raise the Deathstaff and catch the arcing bolt on its haft. There is a flash of sparks, then the crackling energy flickers and disappears.</p>
+       <p>With these words he bangs the tip of his staff three times against the floor of the dais and a gout of crackling energy arcs through the rain-laden air towards you. Instinctively, you raise the Deathstaff and catch the arcing bolt on its haft. There is a flash of sparks; then the crackling energy flickers and disappears.</p>
        <p>Cadak curses loudly and promises that you are about to die, but for all his bravado you sense that he is scared. He recognizes the Deathstaff for what it is and he fears that, in your hands, it could lay waste to all his meticulous plans. The aged druid looks to the stormy clouds and screams a command to the circling Vortexi to help him finish you once and for all.</p>
        <choice idref="sect65"><link-text>Turn to 65</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Before you stretches a gigantic cavern. Its walls of ancient obsidian rise to a high-arched roof where hangs a circle of stalactites&emdash;twelve huge luminescent spears of lime-green stone. Bathed in their pulsating glow is a many-tiered crystal dais, identical to the one on which Arch Druid Cadak stood before the great shimmering archway at the edge of the Maakengorge. To the right of this dais you see a dark tunnel. The entrance appears like a black semicircular shadow upon the cavern wall.</p>
-       <p>Standing upon the uppermost tier of the dais is a creature which both mesmerizes and repulses you. It has the semblance of a human female, yet she stands more than seven metres tall. She is strikingly beautiful but you sense at once that she is also wholly evil. Her skin has a deathly, corpse-like pallor and she is clad in a flowing black costume which trails thin wisps of smoke. Cloaked figures scurry around the lower tiers of the dais, carrying out their mistress&apos;s commands and attending to her every whim. If they fail or displease her she crushes them like lowly insects in her elegant, deadly hands.</p>
+       <p>Before you stretches a gigantic cavern. Its walls of ancient obsidian rise to a high-arched roof where hangs a circle of stalactites<ch.emdash/>twelve huge luminescent spears of lime-green stone. Bathed in their pulsating glow is a many-tiered crystal dais, identical to the one on which Arch Druid Cadak stood before the great shimmering archway at the edge of the Maakengorge. To the right of this dais you see a dark tunnel. The entrance appears like a black semicircular shadow upon the cavern wall.</p>
+       <p>Standing upon the uppermost tier of the dais is a creature which both mesmerizes and repulses you. It has the semblance of a human female, yet she stands more than seven metres tall. She is strikingly beautiful but you sense at once that she is also wholly evil. Her skin has a deathly, corpse-like pallor and she is clad in a flowing black costume which trails thin wisps of smoke. Cloaked figures scurry around the lower tiers of the dais, carrying out their mistress<ch.apos/>s commands and attending to her every whim. If they fail or displease her she crushes them like lowly insects in her elegant, deadly hands.</p>
        <p>You watch in silent fascination as this demonic creature makes preparations, as if for a long journey. Then, in a flash of a sudden realization, you know her purpose. She is getting ready to enter the tunnel, a tunnel which will transport her to the archway at the edge of the Maakengorge. She is the deliverer of Vashna of whom Cadak spoke, the one who will raise the spirit of Lord Vashna from the chasm of doom!</p>
+
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-         <description>You find yourself looking into the impish face of a young, teenage girl.</description>
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        <p>Suddenly you are aware that someone is standing behind you. Instantly, you unsheathe your weapon and spin around to face them, half-expecting to see the grotesque face of a demonic minion. Instead, you find yourself looking into the impish face of a young, teenage girl.</p>
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-       <p>You let loose your Arrow and watch as it clips the man&apos;s thigh before arcing away into the night. You hear him yelp with pain, but the wound is superficial and it does not prevent him from making a safe landing on the rooftop opposite.</p>
+       <p>You let loose your Arrow and watch as it clips the man<ch.apos/>s thigh before arcing away into the night. You hear him yelp with pain, but the wound is superficial and it does not prevent him from making a safe landing on the rooftop opposite.</p>
        <p>You dash along the street, your eyes fixed on the limping archer as he makes good his escape from the inn. You are twenty metres ahead of him when the street makes a turn and you find yourself face-to-face with a solid brick wall; you have come to a dead end. You are about to retrace your steps when suddenly you notice a rusty iron staircase away to your right. It is a crude fire-escape ladder and it leads all the way to the roof of a linen warehouse. Quickly you climb the ladder, your weapon drawn in readiness to intercept the wounded assassin the moment he appears.</p>
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        <p>The brigands are clumsy in their eagerness to reach the copse, presenting themselves as easy targets to your Bow. Every Arrow finds its mark until their leader calls off the assault and they take cover among the boulders. Now the trees echo to the sound of steel bolts ripping through branches and ricocheting off stone; once more these brigands have begun firing at you with their crossbows.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0=10). The number you have picked is equal to the number of Arrows you have fired at the brigands (adjust your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> accordingly).</p>
        <choice idref="sect268">If the number you have picked is greater than the number of Arrows you have in your Quiver, erase them all and <link-text>turn to 268</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect167">If, after having deducted the relevant number of Arrows, you still have one or more left in your quiver, <link-text>turn to 167</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect167">If, after having deducted the relevant number of Arrows, you still have one or more left in your Quiver, <link-text>turn to 167</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You draw on your Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen to keep safe your identity from the Elder&apos;s mind probe. You sense that his psychic power is strong and you fear that your defences may not be sufficient to repel him.</p>
+       <p>You draw on your Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen to keep safe your identity from the Elder<ch.apos/>s mind probe. You sense that his psychic power is strong and you fear that your defences may not be sufficient to repel him.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Assimilance, add 3 to the number you have picked. Also, if you possess Grand Nexus, add 2; and if you possess Kai-alchemy, add 1.</p>
        <choice idref="sect160">If your total score is now 8 or less, <link-text>turn to 160</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect181">If it is 9 or more, <link-text>turn to 181</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You ride slowly through the clammy fog which carpets the cobblestones of this ill-smelling lane. Clamped against the walls of the surrounding buildings are oil-soaked torches which serve to illuminate the signs of wine shops and taverns. They are crudely painted with emblems&emdash;a bloodied battle-axe, a winged horse, a watery sun rising from a broken skull. There is not one that resembles a crooked sage and you are beginning to lose heart when suddenly you hear the sound of drunken revelry coming from a two-storey building at the end of the street. Its oaken doors hang open and the vivid orange glare of its roaring hearth spills invitingly into the dank night gloom. Although it has no painted emblem, you sense at once that you have at last found the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
+       <p>You ride slowly through the clammy fog which carpets the cobblestones of this ill-smelling lane. Clamped against the walls of the surrounding buildings are oil-soaked torches which serve to illuminate the signs of wine shops and taverns. They are crudely painted with emblems<ch.emdash/>a bloodied battle-axe, a winged horse, a watery sun rising from a broken skull. There is not one that resembles a crooked sage and you are beginning to lose heart when suddenly you hear the sound of drunken revelry coming from a two-storey building at the end of the street. Its oaken doors hang open and the vivid orange glare of its roaring hearth spills invitingly into the dank night gloom. Although it has no painted emblem, you sense at once that you have at last found the Crooked Sage Inn.</p>
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        <p>At your approach, a sallow-faced stable boy limps from a wooden hut which is leaning precariously against the side of the tavern wall. For one Gold Crown (erase this from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>), he takes charge of your horse and shows you to the taproom door.<a id="sect332-1" idref="sect332-1-foot" class="footnote" /></p>
        <choice idref="sect21"><link-text>Turn to 21</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Bayan says farewell to his wife, warning her to stay hidden here with the child until he returns. She thanks you once more for curing her son and she wishes you a safe journey, then Bayan leads you to another hovel where he has hidden a donkey. It is a stubborn, flea-bitten old ass, but it serves Bayan well as the two of you follow his secret trail into the foothills of the southern Durncrags.</p>
+       <p>Bayan says farewell to his wife, warning her to stay hidden here with the child until he returns. She thanks you once more for curing her son and she wishes you a safe journey; then Bayan leads you to another hovel where he has hidden a donkey. It is a stubborn, flea-bitten old ass, but it serves Bayan well as the two of you follow his secret trail into the foothills of the southern Durncrags.</p>
        <p>It is a long and tortuous route but it is also a safe one. At dusk you come to a cave whose entrance is hidden by clumps of loose brushwood. Bayan and his family have used it several times over in the past few weeks and they have stocked it with a buried cache of roots and berries. These, together with some live game which you catch at a nearby stream, make for a filling and nutritious meal which you both enjoy before settling down to a long sleep.</p>
        <choice idref="sect64">You may restore your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score to its original level. To continue, <link-text>turn to 64</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The creature roars with anger as it overcomes your mental commands and rushes forward. You raise your weapon and bring your horse about to face this fearsome beast&apos;s attack. The instant he sees the creature he panics and rears up on his hind legs, neighing with fright, his hooves scrabbling frantically at the air. You bring him under control using your innate Kai skills, but in so doing your attention is diverted from the attacking beast as it moves in and swipes at you with its clawed paw.</p>
+       <p>The creature roars with anger as it overcomes your mental commands and rushes forward. You raise your weapon and bring your horse about to face this fearsome beast<ch.apos/>s attack. The instant he sees the creature he panics and rears up on his hind legs, neighing with fright, his hooves scrabbling frantically at the air. You bring him under control using your innate Kai skills, but in so doing your attention is diverted from the attacking beast as it moves in and swipes at you with its clawed paw.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Black Corvayl</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">46</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">58</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>Reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 10 for the first round of this fight only.</p>
        <choice idref="sect210">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 210</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>You leave the cave at first light and continue your lonely trek towards Lake Vorndarol. Before dawn, an icy wind swept down from the north and spread a thick blanket of frost on the trail, freezing the mud beneath. To your surprise, the going is easier and swifter than expected and, by noon, you find you have covered more than thirty kilometres.</p>
        <p>During your ride you have watched the land slowly changing. The trail is now steeper and granite outcroppings have begun to appear, tinged with moss and interspersed with pine trees and grey-green underbrush. You are approaching an area littered with huge granite boulders when suddenly your Magnakai Pathsmanship skills alert you to danger; you sense there is an ambush ahead.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect182">If the number you have picked is 0&endash;1, <link-text>turn to 182</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect241">If it is 2&endash;9, <link-text>turn to 241</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect182">If the number you have picked is 0<ch.endash/>1, <link-text>turn to 182</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect241">If it is 2<ch.endash/>9, <link-text>turn to 241</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Although you are unable to sleep, you take some comfort from the fact that there is no storm this night. You leave the grove at first light and follow the rushing stream until you happen upon a shallow bend where the water is fordable on horseback. You cross here, make a wide detour, and then return to the trail a mile beyond the Vakovarian&apos;s encampment.</p>
+       <p>Although you are unable to sleep, you take some comfort from the fact that there is no storm this night. You leave the grove at first light and follow the rushing stream until you happen upon a shallow bend where the water is fordable on horseback. You cross here, make a wide detour, and then return to the trail a mile beyond the Vakovarian<ch.apos/>s encampment.</p>
        <p>The trail gradually descends towards the burnt and derelict hovels of Vorn, clustered in squalid disarray around a greystone quay. Vakovarian bandits occupy the ruined hamlet and you decide it wise to leave the trail in case they have posted a lookout. A copse of stunted firs offers you a good hiding place for your horse. You tether him here, then gather some grasses and roots for him to eat while you are away scouting the hamlet.</p>
        <p>You have no difficulty entering Vorn unseen. From the first-floor ruins of a burnt-out inn on the outskirts of the hamlet you make a careful observation of the Vakovarians. They seem to be systematically looting the ruins and transporting their ill-gotten booty to a fishing boat which is moored at the quay. You are watching this boat closely when suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of a yapping dog.</p>
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        <choice idref="sect281">If you possess Animal Mastery, <link-text>turn to 281</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect2">If you do not possess this Discipline, <link-text>turn to 2</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p><quote>I bid you welcome, Northlander,</quote> says the fur-clad stranger, taking you aback with his friendly tone, <quote>&thinspace;&apos;T&apos;as been many moons since I&apos;ve seen a welcome face in this godforsaken land. What beckons you here?</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>I bid you welcome, Northlander,</quote> says the fur-clad stranger, taking you aback with his friendly tone, <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>T<ch.apos/>as been many moons since I<ch.apos/>ve seen a welcome face in this godforsaken land. What beckons you here?</quote></p>
        <p>You answer with caution in case he is trying to trick you, and simply reply that you are a hunter.</p>
-       <p><quote>A hunter, eh?</quote> he says, smiling. <quote>Come, now. You be no hunter, least none like I know. And I should know seein&apos; as I&apos;m a hunter m&apos;self.</quote></p>
-       <p>You use your Kai senses to assess this man&apos;s purpose and realize that he is speaking the truth. He really is a hunter and he intends you no harm.</p>
-       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> you say, <quote>I admit I&apos;m not a hunter, at least not in the way you think. I&apos;ve come here to find out what is going on at the Maakengorge. I want to know why Vorn was destroyed and what is causing the storms. But what of your purpose, master hunter? What quarry is there here that&apos;s worth battling these accursed storms for?</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>A hunter, eh?</quote> he says, smiling. <quote>Come, now. You be no hunter, least none like I know. And I should know seein<ch.apos/> as I<ch.apos/>m a hunter m<ch.apos/>self.</quote></p>
+       <p>You use your Kai senses to assess this man<ch.apos/>s purpose and realize that he is speaking the truth. He really is a hunter and he intends you no harm.</p>
+       <p><quote>Very well,</quote> you say, <quote>I admit I<ch.apos/>m not a hunter, at least not in the way you think. I<ch.apos/>ve come here to find out what is going on at the Maakengorge. I want to know why Vorn was destroyed and what is causing the storms. But what of your purpose, master hunter? What quarry is there here that<ch.apos/>s worth battling these accursed storms for?</quote></p>
        <p>The hunter tells you that he has travelled all the way from Karkaste, in the realm of Lyris, to hunt for Black Corvayl. The fur of this beast is worth a small fortune in the markets of Casiorn and the Stornlands. He says the storms and the Vakovarian brigands have made things difficult for him; he has been in these mountains for more than a month now and has only two pelts to show for his trouble.</p>
        <p>The hunter, whose name is Fyrad, invites you to join him at his camp in the hills. It will soon be dusk and the icy winds are getting colder, so you gladly accept his offer of food and warm shelter.</p>
        <choice idref="sect175"><link-text>Turn to 175</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>As soon as the stable boy has saddled Bracer, you mount up and leave the inn at a gallop. You decide to forgo sleep this night and begin your journey north without further delay. Shortly past midnight, you pass through Helgor&apos;s ruined East Gate and head off along a rutted track that winds a northeasterly route towards the River Storn. The moon is full and this rough trail is illuminated clearly by its cold, ashen light. Far to the north an electrical storm is brewing. Flashes of forked lightning light up the horizon and the sky, and the hills echo to the rumble of distant thunder.</p>
+       <p>As soon as the stable boy has saddled Bracer, you mount up and leave the inn at a gallop. You decide to forgo sleep this night and begin your journey north without further delay. Shortly past midnight, you pass through Helgor<ch.apos/>s ruined East Gate and head off along a rutted track that winds a northeasterly route towards the River Storn. The moon is full and this rough trail is illuminated clearly by its cold, ashen light. Far to the north an electrical storm is brewing. Flashes of forked lightning light up the horizon and the sky, and the hills echo to the rumble of distant thunder.</p>
        <p>You have covered little more than ten kilometres when the trail gradually peters out. You continue on across soft heathland for a few miles further until you find another trail, muddier than the first. Fresh tracks are imprinted in its surface, leading off towards the northeast. Curious as to their origin, you dismount and take a closer look.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you have Grand Huntmastery, add 1 for every Kai level you are above the rank of Kai Grand Guardian to the number you have picked.</p>
        <choice idref="sect307">If your total score is now 4 or less, <link-text>turn to 307</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>You are awoken in the middle of the night by the she-cat&apos;s nervous growl. At first you think that a new day must already have dawned for the cave is awash with bright light, but when you look out at the surrounding landscape you see that the light has a far more sinister origin.</p>
+       <p>You are awoken in the middle of the night by the she-cat<ch.apos/>s nervous growl. At first you think that a new day must already have dawned for the cave is awash with bright light, but when you look out at the surrounding landscape you see that the light has a far more sinister origin.</p>
        <p>The sky is alive with hordes of glowing, wraith-like phantoms. They swoop down from the roiling storm clouds and skim the treetops, howling and screeching like angry banshees. A trio of these ghastly apparitions passes within a few yards of the cave mouth and startle the wild cat and her mewing cub. Terrified, they flee the cave and disappear into the pines.</p>
        <choice idref="sect283">If you possess Kai-screen, and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 283</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect19">If you do not possess Kai-screen, or have yet to attain this Kai rank, <link-text>turn to 19</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Time passes and you sense flashing motes of light streaking past your closed eyes, and faint far away sounds come dimly to your ears through the howling wind. Then, as suddenly as it began, the sensation of falling ceases and you feel yourself lurching forwards onto wet, rocky soil. Rain spatters your face and, when you open your eyes, you see that you have returned to Magnamund&ellips; and to terrible danger.</p>
-       <p><quote>Kill him!</quote> It is the voice of Arch Druid Cadak. You have emerged from the Shadow Gate and now you lie on the ground between the great shimmering arch and Cadak&apos;s crystal dais. You have only just found your feet when a growling horde of vengeful acolytes close in upon you, eager to fulfil their leader&apos;s wish.</p>
+       <p>Time passes and you sense flashing motes of light streaking past your closed eyes, and faint far away sounds come dimly to your ears through the howling wind. Then, as suddenly as it began, the sensation of falling ceases and you feel yourself lurching forwards onto wet, rocky soil. Rain spatters your face and, when you open your eyes, you see that you have returned to Magnamund<ch.ellips/> and to terrible danger.</p>
+       <p><quote>Kill him!</quote> It is the voice of Arch Druid Cadak. You have emerged from the Shadow Gate and now you lie on the ground between the great shimmering arch and Cadak<ch.apos/>s crystal dais. You have only just found your feet when a growling horde of vengeful acolytes close in upon you, eager to fulfil their leader<ch.apos/>s wish.</p>
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        <combat><enemy>Acolytes of Vashna</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">40</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">45</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>If you choose to use the Deathstaff as your weapon during this fight, you may add 10 to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>.</p>
        <choice idref="sect26">If you win the combat (using the Deathstaff), <link-text>turn to 26</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Using your formidable mind skill, you create a protective wall around your will which deflects the woman&apos;s psychic power-charm. Her spell rebounds and the suddenness of this reversal completely overwhelms her senses. In an instant the light vanishes from her eyes and her face becomes blank and expressionless, like that of a mask of a mindless automaton.</p>
+       <p>Using your formidable mind skill, you create a protective wall around your will which deflects the woman<ch.apos/>s psychic power-charm. Her spell rebounds and the suddenness of this reversal completely overwhelms her senses. In an instant the light vanishes from her eyes and her face becomes blank and expressionless, like that of a mask of a mindless automaton.</p>
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-       <p>You slay all but one Jackal. This bruised and blood-spattered cur flees from the shore, defeated but determined not to suffer the fate of the others. You pause to wipe the sticky gore from your weapon, then you mount your horse and set off along the rugged shoreline, foregoing the shelter of the horseshoe boulders in case the Jackal should return in the night with more of its ferocious brothers.</p>
+       <p>You slay all but one Jackal. This bruised and blood-spattered cur flees from the shore, defeated but determined not to suffer the fate of the others. You pause to wipe the sticky gore from your weapon; then you mount your horse and set off along the rugged shoreline, foregoing the shelter of the horseshoe boulders in case the Jackal should return in the night with more of its ferocious brothers.</p>
        <p>Fortunately, you soon reach firmer ground and, by nightfall, you come to a sheltered cove where you find a warm hollow in which to set up camp for the night. Unless you possess Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect296">To continue, <link-text>turn to 296</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Suddenly, the raging winds cease and you fall unconscious to the floor of the dais. When you awaken you discover that you are entirely alone. The collapse of the Shadow Gate and the whirlwind which followed have consumed everything, save yourself and the crystal dais: no acolytes, no trace of the grand archway, no Deathstaff, not even the storms remain. Virtually all trace of Cadak&apos;s evil plan has been wiped from the surface of your world.</p>
-       <p>Congratulations, Grand Master Lone Wolf. You have triumphed. You have defeated the plan to resurrect Vashna and saved Magnamund from his rule of terror. But the fight against Evil is not yet over. The collapsing Shadow Gate destroyed everything it consumed&ellips; everything, that is, with one exception. That exception returns to haunt you in the next Grand Master adventure, entitled:</p>
-       <p><a href="&link.17tdoi;">The Deathlord of Ixia</a></p>
+       <p>Suddenly, the raging winds cease and you fall unconscious to the floor of the dais. When you awaken you discover that you are entirely alone. The collapse of the Shadow Gate and the whirlwind which followed have consumed everything, save yourself and the crystal dais: no acolytes, no trace of the grand archway, no Deathstaff, not even the storms remain. Virtually all trace of Cadak<ch.apos/>s evil plan has been wiped from the surface of your world.</p>
+       <p>Congratulations, Grand Master Lone Wolf. You have triumphed. You have defeated the plan to resurrect Vashna and saved Magnamund from his rule of terror. But the fight against Evil is not yet over. The collapsing Shadow Gate destroyed everything it consumed<ch.ellips/> everything, that is, with one exception. That exception returns to haunt you in the next Grand Master adventure, entitled:</p>
+       <p><bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref></p>
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-     </illustration>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>JC Alvarez <ch.ampersand></ch.ampersand> Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="acdscplz.gif" width="385" height="246" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+    </illustration>
 
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-      </meta>
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-     </illustration>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>JC Alvarez <ch.ampersand/> Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="acchklst.gif" width="385" height="128" class="html" mime-type="image/gif" />
+    </illustration>
 
-     <illustration class="inline">
-      <meta>
-       <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
-      </meta>
-      <instance src="ac1.tex" width="400" height="500" class="tex" />
-     </illustration>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>JC Alvarez <ch.ampersand></ch.ampersand> Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="acitems.gif" width="386" height="192" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+    </illustration>
 
-     <illustration class="inline">
-      <meta>
-       <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
-      </meta>
-      <instance src="ac2.tex" width="400" height="500" class="tex" />
-     </illustration>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>JC Alvarez <ch.ampersand></ch.ampersand> Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="acbckpck.gif" width="386" height="113" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+    </illustration>
 
-     <illustration class="inline">
-      <meta>
-       <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
-      </meta>
-      <instance src="ac3.tex" width="400" height="500" class="tex" />
-     </illustration>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>JC Alvarez <ch.ampersand></ch.ampersand> Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="acspcl.gif" width="386" height="280" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+    </illustration>
 
-    </data>
-   </section>
+    <illustration>
+     <meta>
+      <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance class="text">
+      <p>
+       <line><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>: <ch.blankline></ch.blankline></line>
+       <line><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>: <ch.blankline></ch.blankline></line>
+      </p>
+      <p>Grand Master Disciplines:</p>
+       <ol>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+       </ol>
+      <p>Bonus Disciplines:</p>
+       <ol>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline>: 5th Discipline if you've completed one Lone Wolf Grand Master Adventure successfully</li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline>: 6th Discipline if you've completed two Lone Wolf Grand Master Adventure successfully</li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline>: 7th Discipline if you've completed three Lone Wolf Grand Master Adventure successfully</li>
+       </ol>
+      <p>Weapons:</p>
+       <ol>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+       </ol>
+      <p>Belt Pouch: <ch.blankline></ch.blankline></p>
+      <p>Meals: <ch.blankline></ch.blankline></p>
+      <p>Backpack Items:</p>
+       <ol>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+       </ol>
+      <p>Special Items:</p>
+       <ol>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+        <li><ch.blankline></ch.blankline></li>
+       </ol>
+     </instance>
+    </illustration>
+   </data>
+  </section>
 
    <section class="backmatter" id="crsumary">
     <meta><title>Combat Rules Summary</title></meta>
@@ -5115,11 +5267,11 @@ Initial revision
     <data>
 
      <ol>
-      <li>Add your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to any extra points given to you by your Kai Disciplines.</li>
+      <li>Add your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to any extra points given to you by your Grand Master Disciplines.</li>
       <li>Subtract the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of your enemy from this total. This number = Combat Ratio.</li>
       <li>Pick number from <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</li>
-      <li>Turn to the <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a>.</li>
-      <li>Find your Combat Ratio on the top of the chart and cross-reference to the random number you have picked. (E indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Enemy. LW indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Lone Wolf.)</li>
+      <li>Turn to <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a>.</li>
+      <li>Find your Combat Ratio on the top of the chart and cross-reference to random number you have picked. (E indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Enemy. LW indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Lone Wolf.)</li>
       <li>Continue the combat from Stage 3 until one character is dead. This is when <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points of either character fall to 0 or below.</li>
      </ol>
 
@@ -5132,53 +5284,377 @@ Initial revision
         <li>You may only do this when the text of the adventure offers you the opportunity.</li>
         <li>You undertake one round of combat in the usual way. All points lost by the enemy are ignored, only Lone Wolf loses the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</li>
         <li>If the book offers the chance of taking evasive action in place of combat, it can be taken in the first round of combat or any subsequent round.</li>
-       </ol>
+      </ol>
 
-      </data>
-     </section>
+     </data>
+    </section>
 
-    </data>
-   </section>
+   </data>
+  </section>
 
-   <section class="backmatter" id="crtable">
-    <meta><title>Combat Results Table</title></meta>
+  <section class="backmatter" id="crtable">
+   <meta><title>Combat Results Table</title></meta>
 
-    <data>
+   <data>
+    <illustration>
+     <meta>
+      <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="crtneg.gif" width="386" height="472" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+     <instance src="crtneg.tex" width="380" height="500" class="tex"></instance>
+    </illustration>
 
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-      <meta>
-       <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
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-      <instance src="crtneg.tex" width="380" height="500" class="tex" />
-     </illustration>
+    <illustration>
+     <meta>
+      <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="crtpos.gif" width="386" height="472" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+     <instance src="crtpos.tex" width="380" height="500" class="tex"></instance>
+    </illustration>
+   </data>
+  </section>
 
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-     </illustration>
+  <section class="backmatter" id="random">
+   <meta><title>Random Number Table</title></meta>
 
-    </data>
-   </section>
+   <data>
 
-   <section class="backmatter" id="random">
-    <meta><title>Random Number Table</title></meta>
+    <illustration class="inline">
+     <meta>
+      <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance src="random.gif" width="332" height="432" class="html" mime-type="image/gif"></instance>
+     <instance src="random.tex" width="380" height="500" class="tex"></instance>
+     <instance class="text">
+      <table>
+       <tr>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+        <td>0</td>
+        <td>8</td>
+       </tr>
+       <tr>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>6</td>
+        <td>3</td>
+        <td>2</td>
+        <td>9</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>1</td>
+        <td>4</td>
+        <td>5</td>
+        <td>7</td>
+       </tr>
+      </table>
+     </instance>
+    </illustration>
+
+    <illustration>
+     <meta>
+      <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
+     </meta>
+     <instance class="text">
+      <table summary="This table provides the endurance losses sustained by the hero and enemy as a result of combat.">
+       <caption>Combat Results with combined hero and enemy endurance losses</caption>
 
-    <data>
+       <colgroup span="1"></colgroup>
+       <colgroup span="13"></colgroup>
 
-     <illustration class="inline">
-      <meta>
-       <creator>Jonathan Blake</creator>
-      </meta>
-      <instance src="random.gif" width="332" height="432" class="html" mime-type="image/gif" />
-      <instance src="random.tex" width="380" height="500" class="tex" />
-     </illustration>
+       <tfoot>
+        <tr>
+         <td colspan="14">Combat results are given enemy's endurance loss first followed by the hero's endurance loss. For example, "12/0" means that the enemy loses 12 endurance points while the hero loses 0 endurance points. A combat result of "k" means that the combatant is killed. For example, "0/k" means that the enemy loses 0 endurance points while the hero is killed.</td>
+        </tr>
+       </tfoot>
 
-    </data>
-   </section>
+       <tbody>
+        <tr>
+         <th rowspan="2" scope="col">Random Number</th>
+         <th colspan="13" scope="colgroup">Combat Ratio</th>
+        </tr>
+
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-11 or lower</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-10/ -9</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-8/ -7</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-6/ -5</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-4/ -3</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">-2/ -1</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">0</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">1/ 2</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">3/ 4</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">5/ 6</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">7/ 8</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">9/ 10</th>
+         <th scope="col" axis="combat_ratio">11 or higher</th>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">1</th>
+         <td>0/k</td>
+         <td>0/k</td>
+         <td>0/8</td>
+         <td>0/6</td>
+         <td>1/6</td>
+         <td>2/5</td>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/5</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/4</td>
+         <td>7/4</td>
+         <td>8/3</td>
+         <td>9/3</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">2</th>
+         <td>0/k</td>
+         <td>0/8</td>
+         <td>0/7</td>
+         <td>1/6</td>
+         <td>2/5</td>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/4</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/3</td>
+         <td>8/3</td>
+         <td>9/3</td>
+         <td>10/2</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">3</th>
+         <td>0/8</td>
+         <td>0/7</td>
+         <td>1/6</td>
+         <td>2/5</td>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/4</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/3</td>
+         <td>8/3</td>
+         <td>9/2</td>
+         <td>10/2</td>
+         <td>11/2</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">4</th>
+         <td>0/8</td>
+         <td>1/7</td>
+         <td>2/6</td>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/4</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/3</td>
+         <td>8/2</td>
+         <td>9/2</td>
+         <td>10/2</td>
+         <td>11/2</td>
+         <td>12/2</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">5</th>
+         <td>1/7</td>
+         <td>2/6</td>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/4</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/2</td>
+         <td>8/2</td>
+         <td>9/2</td>
+         <td>10/2</td>
+         <td>11/2</td>
+         <td>12/2</td>
+         <td>14/1</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">6</th>
+         <td>2/6</td>
+         <td>3/6</td>
+         <td>4/5</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/2</td>
+         <td>8/2</td>
+         <td>9/2</td>
+         <td>10/2</td>
+         <td>11/1</td>
+         <td>12/1</td>
+         <td>14/1</td>
+         <td>16/1</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">7</th>
+         <td>3/5</td>
+         <td>4/5</td>
+         <td>5/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/2</td>
+         <td>8/2</td>
+         <td>9/1</td>
+         <td>10/1</td>
+         <td>11/1</td>
+         <td>12/0</td>
+         <td>14/0</td>
+         <td>16/0</td>
+         <td>18/0</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">8</th>
+         <td>4/4</td>
+         <td>8/4</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/2</td>
+         <td>8/1</td>
+         <td>9/1</td>
+         <td>10/0</td>
+         <td>11/0</td>
+         <td>12/0</td>
+         <td>14/0</td>
+         <td>16/0</td>
+         <td>18/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">9</th>
+         <td>5/3</td>
+         <td>6/3</td>
+         <td>7/2</td>
+         <td>8/0</td>
+         <td>9/0</td>
+         <td>10/0</td>
+         <td>11/0</td>
+         <td>12/0</td>
+         <td>14/0</td>
+         <td>16/0</td>
+         <td>18/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+        </tr>
+        <tr>
+         <th scope="row" axis="random_number">0</th>
+         <td>6/0</td>
+         <td>7/0</td>
+         <td>8/0</td>
+         <td>9/0</td>
+         <td>10/0</td>
+         <td>11/0</td>
+         <td>12/0</td>
+         <td>14/0</td>
+         <td>16/0</td>
+         <td>18/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+         <td>k/0</td>
+        </tr>
+       </tbody>
+      </table>
+     </instance>
+    </illustration>
+   </data>
+  </section>
 
    <section class="backmatter" id="errata">
     <meta><title>Errata</title></meta>
@@ -5196,43 +5672,52 @@ Initial revision
       <meta><title>Errata</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote>&eacute;lite</quote>, <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>, <quote>strongholds fierce</quote> with <quote>strongholds, fierce</quote>, <quote>Right-Handed Magic</quote> with <quote>Right-handed magic</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>, <quote>Dark God and</quote> with <quote>Dark God, and</quote>, <quote>vigilant for</quote> with <quote>vigilant, for</quote>, <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>, <quote>body, and those</quote> with <quote>body, along with those</quote>, <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>, and <quote>quickly and</quote> with <quote>quickly, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Changed <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> to <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> according to <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote> and <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Magador you</quote> with <quote>Magador, you</quote>, <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>, <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of the the Maakengorge and surrounding territories</quote>, <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, and <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>The currency of Magador is the Gold Crown. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>, <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>, and <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>, <quote>no Kai lord</quote> with <quote>no Kai Lord</quote>, <quote>strongholds fierce</quote> with <quote>strongholds, fierce</quote>, <quote>Right-Handed Magic</quote> with <quote>Right-handed magic</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>, <quote>Dark God and</quote> with <quote>Dark God, and</quote>, <quote>vigilant for</quote> with <quote>vigilant, for</quote>, <quote>free-state</quote> with <quote>Freeland</quote>, <quote>body, and those</quote> with <quote>body, along with those</quote>, <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>, and <quote>quickly and</quote> with <quote>quickly, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>monastery of the Kai</quote> with <quote>Monastery of the Kai</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>the Monastery</quote> with <quote>the monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>gold, you</quote> with <quote>gold you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Akagazad and</quote> with <quote>Akagazad, and</quote>.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages</quote> and <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>(ie,</quote> with <quote>(i.e.</quote>. Changed <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> to <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> according to <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24</cite>. Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote> and <quote>opposite and overleaf</quote> with <quote>below</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced <quote>Magador you</quote> with <quote>Magador, you</quote>, <quote>eg Gold</quote> with <quote>e.g. Gold</quote>, <quote>map of the area</quote> with <quote>map of the the Maakengorge and surrounding territories</quote>, <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, and <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 5 points</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Added a section about Gold Crowns which reads <quote>The currency of Magador is the Gold Crown. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty Crowns.</quote> Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>, <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 32)</quote> with <quote>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27)</quote>, and <quote>adds 3 points</quote> with <quote>adds 8 points</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>to zero</quote> with <quote>to zero or below</quote>.</p>
+
        <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai-Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>surface, eg:</quote> with <quote>surfaces, e.g.</quote>, <quote>ie.</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>, <quote>Kai Surge</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>arrow, or arrow-like</quote> with <quote>Arrow or Arrow-like</quote>, <quote>lava and</quote> with <quote>lava, and</quote>, and <quote>body-weight</quote> with <quote>body weight</quote>. Added <quote>(7 Disciplines)</quote> after <quote>Sun Lord</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Improved Grand Master Disciplines</quote> and <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>.</p>
-       <p><cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24</cite> states: <quote>In Lone Wolf 16, the Improved Discipline of Kai-surge (at rank of Sun Lord) is not fully explained (a sentence is missing from the paragraph). A Kai Sun Lord using Kai Blast [sic] determines the damage inflicted on an enemy by picking two numbers from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. These numbers should be added together (a &apos;0&apos; = 1) and the resultant total equals the damage inflicted.</quote>. This missing information has been added to the text.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master&apos;s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>skyship Skyrider</quote> with <quote>skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite></quote> and <quote>scroll</quote> with <quote>Scroll</quote>.</p>
+       <p><cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24</cite> states: <quote>In <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> 16, the Improved Discipline of Kai-surge (at rank of Sun Lord) is not fully explained (a sentence is missing from the paragraph). A Kai Sun Lord using Kai Blast [sic] determines the damage inflicted on an enemy by picking two numbers from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. These numbers should be added together (a <ch.apos/>0<ch.apos/> = 1) and the resultant total equals the damage inflicted.</quote>. This missing information has been added to the text. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Grand Master<ch.apos/>s Wisdom</a>) Moved this section of the book to its normal position after <a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+
+       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>skyship Skyrider</quote> with <quote>skyship, <cite>Skyrider</cite></quote> and <quote>scroll</quote> with <quote>Scroll</quote>. Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>animal kinship</quote> with <quote>Animal Kinship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>beyond is</quote> with <quote>beyond are</quote>, <quote>Nexus, and</quote> with <quote>Nexus and</quote> and <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>tier and</quote> with <quote>tier, and</quote> and <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>tier and</quote> with <quote>tier, and</quote> and <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>hand you</quote> with <quote>hand, you</quote>, <quote>appear but</quote> with <quote>appear, but</quote>, and <quote>panther you</quote> with <quote>panther, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag scavenger</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Scavenger</quote>, <quote>most-favoured</quote> with <quote>most favoured</quote>, <quote>weakened state and this</quote> with <quote>weakened state, and this</quote>, <quote>state and</quote> with <quote>state, and</quote>, <quote>skull and, as</quote> with <quote>skull, and as</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>, <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>, and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>sun and</quote> with <quote>sun, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigand captain</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigand Captain</quote> and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>will and</quote> with <quote>will, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>T&apos;is</quote> with <quote>&thinspace;&apos;Tis</quote> and <quote>not less</quote> with <quote>not &apos;less</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>T<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>Tis</quote> and <quote>not less</quote> with <quote>not <ch.apos/>less</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>, <quote>sudden massive</quote> with <quote>sudden, massive</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>doorway and</quote> with <quote>doorway, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>doorway and</quote> with <quote>doorway, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>moments, then</quote> with <quote>moments; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>taproom, <ch.lsquot/>now</quote> with <quote>taproom. <ch.lsquot/>Now</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>over and, as</quote> with <quote>over, and as</quote>, <quote>them you</quote> with <quote>them, you</quote>, <quote>can and so you</quote> with <quote>can. You</quote>, <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>, and <quote>and they give</quote> with <quote>and give</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>strike an</quote> with <quote>strike, an</quote>, <quote>this time,</quote> with <quote>this time!</quote>, <quote>alive.</quote> with <quote>alive!</quote>, <quote>Bow and arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun Lord or higher,</quote> with <quote>Sun Lord,</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote> and <quote>prey on which</quote> with <quote>prey with which</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote> and <quote>swarthy-face</quote> with <quote>swarthy-faced</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk&ucirc;l</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>Kraagenskul</quote> with <quote>Kraagensk<ch.ucirc/>l</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>Vortex</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>, <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>, and <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>, <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote>, and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>dim blue</quote> with <quote>dim, blue</quote>, <quote>streches</quote> with <quote>stretches</quote>, and <quote>light and in its dim glow you</quote> with <quote>light, and in its dim glow, you</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Removed the superfluous semicolon in <quote>region; has</quote>&emdash;the original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced <quote>says, as</quote> with <quote>says as</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect45">45</a>) Removed the superfluous semicolon in <quote>region; has</quote><ch.emdash/>the original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced <quote>says, as</quote> with <quote>says as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, and <quote>Black corvayl</quote> with <quote>Black Corvayl</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>them they</quote> with <quote>them, they</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>psychic ability</quote> with <quote>psychic abilities</quote> and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>psychic ability</quote> with <quote>psychic abilities</quote> and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>. Replaced <quote>lair, then</quote> with <quote>lair; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility yet</quote> with <quote>invisibility, yet</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>runic disc</quote> with <quote>Runic Disc</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>.</p>
@@ -5240,49 +5725,52 @@ Initial revision
        <p>(<a idref="sect59">59</a>) Replaced <quote>bandits and</quote> with <quote>bandits, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect60">60</a>) Replaced <quote>hard pressed</quote> with <quote>hard-pressed</quote> and <quote>ascend but</quote> with <quote>ascend, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect61">61</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote> and <quote>peak but</quote> with <quote>peak, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect63">63</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect64">64</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote>, <quote>desolate but</quote> with <quote>desolate, but</quote>, and <quote>streets and</quote> with <quote>streets, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect66">66</a>) Replaced <quote>shore, then</quote> with <quote>shore; then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect67">67</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect68">68</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks around <quote>Counterspell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>downpour you</quote> with <quote>downpour, you</quote> and <quote>summonation</quote> with <quote>summoning</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Added a comma after the first <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>flood you</quote> with <quote>flood, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>strong and</quote> with <quote>strong, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>arm lock</quote> with <quote>armlock</quote> and <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>arm lock</quote> with <quote>armlock</quote> and <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>. Replaced <quote>partic<ch.apos/>lar<ch.ellips/> no</quote> with <quote>partic<ch.apos/>lar<ch.ellips/> No</quote>. Replaced <quote>hisses, <ch.lsquot/>my</quote> with <quote>hisses. <ch.lsquot/>My</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>camouflage</quote> with <quote>Camouflage</quote> and <quote>acolyte Elders</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elders</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier&apos;s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers&apos; shop</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote> and <quote>desolate but</quote> with <quote>desolate, but</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>huntmastery</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery</quote> and <quote>desolate but</quote> with <quote>desolate, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>camp fires</quote> with <quote>campfires</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>deck and</quote> with <quote>deck, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>Guardian,</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher,</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Black Talisman</quote> with <quote>Black Amulet</quote> and <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>Guardian,</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Black Talisman</quote> with <quote>Black Amulet</quote> and <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>. Replaced <quote>rewrap</quote> with <quote>re-wrap</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks from <quote>Sense Evil</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>scavengers</quote> with <quote>Scavengers</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>drop and</quote> with <quote>drop, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>drop and</quote> with <quote>drop, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>death throes</quote> with <quote>death-throes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>dawn the</quote> with <quote>dawn, the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>Crack!</quote> with <quote>crack!</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>rips</quote> with <quote>rip</quote> and <quote>flame and suddenly</quote> with <quote>flame. Suddenly</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>rips</quote> with <quote>rip</quote> and <quote>flame and suddenly</quote> with <quote>flame. Suddenly</quote>. Replaced <quote>silence, then</quote> with <quote>silence; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>One by one his</quote> with <quote>One by one, his</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced all occurences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>, <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>, and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>t&apos;is</quote> with <quote>&thinspace;&apos;tis</quote> and <quote>At first I, too, made</quote> with <quote>At first, I too made</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>tis</quote> and <quote>At first I, too, made</quote> with <quote>At first, I too made</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>investigate and your</quote> with <quote>investigate. Your</quote> and <quote>acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote> and <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote> and <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect104">104</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Citystate</quote> with <quote>City-state</quote> and <quote>destoyed</quote> with <quote>destroyed</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>life force</quote> with <quote>life-force</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Removed the quotation marks from  <quote>Invisible Fist</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Removed the quotation marks from  <quote>Invisible Fist</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle spell</quote> with <quote>battle-spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect108">108</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitation he</quote> with <quote>hesitation, he</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote> and <quote>bow and the arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and the Arrow</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote> and <quote>bow and the arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and the Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>says, sneeringly</quote> with <quote>says, sneering</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Removed <quote>, or higher</quote> from <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>shore and</quote> with <quote>shore, and</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>shore and</quote> with <quote>shore, and</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>off-balance</quote> with <quote>off balance</quote>, <quote>them you</quote> with <quote>them, you</quote>, <quote>can and</quote> with <quote>can, and</quote>, <quote>heels, pausing</quote> with <quote>heels pausing</quote>, and <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>sun-sword</quote> with <quote>Sun-sword</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) </p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>healing</quote> with <quote>Healing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote> and replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Lightning Hand</quote> and replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>adgana</quote> with <quote>Adgana</quote> and <quote>long discordant</quote> with <quote>long, discordant</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>far sinister</quote> with <quote>far more sinister</quote> and <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Removed the quotation marks from around <quote>Levitation</quote> and replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>. Removed the choices at the end since they are superfluous: Lone Wolf must have Kai-alchemy to reach this section. The choices read:</p>
@@ -5294,11 +5782,12 @@ Initial revision
        <blockquote>
         <p>Turn to 57.</p>
        </blockquote>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote> and <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote> and <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>. Replaced <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>) Replaced <quote>Vasha</quote> with <quote>Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Elder</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote> and <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>camouflage</quote> with <quote>Camouflage</quote> and <quote>unconscious and</quote> with <quote>unconscious, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -5309,25 +5798,34 @@ Initial revision
        <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>we celebrate</quote> with <quote>We celebrate</quote> and <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote> and <quote>swoop</quote> with <quote>swoops</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>streetfighters</quote> with <quote>street-fighters</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>command and</quote> with <quote>command, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>hilltrack</quote> with <quote>hill track</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>mineshaft</quote> with <quote>mine shaft</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain the rank of Sun Lord,</quote> with <quote>Otherwise,</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>guttering</quote> with <quote>gutter</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>and it makes</quote> with <quote>which makes</quote> and <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier&apos;s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers&apos; shop</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced both occurrences <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote> and <quote>in our midst,</quote> with <quote>in our midst!</quote>, and <quote>Cadak, maniacally, &lsquot;You</quote> with <quote>Cadak maniacally. &lsquot;You</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote> and <quote>in our midst,</quote> with <quote>in our midst!</quote>, and <quote>Cadak, maniacally, <ch.lsquot/>You</quote> with <quote>Cadak maniacally. <ch.lsquot/>You</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>, <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote>, and <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier&apos;s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers&apos; shop</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>says, <ch.lsquot/>after</quote> with <quote>says. <ch.lsquot/>After</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>scavengers</quote> with <quote>Scavengers</quote>, <quote>paces for</quote> with <quote>paces, for</quote> and <quote>attack; they</quote> with <quote>attack: they</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote> and both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>whom you almost collided with</quote> with <quote>with whom you almost collided</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>screwjaws</quote> with <quote>screwjaw</quote> and <quote>drunkard, when</quote> with <quote>drunkard when</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>screwjaws</quote> with <quote>screwjaw</quote> and <quote>drunkard, when</quote> with <quote>drunkard when</quote>. Replaced <quote>disappear, then</quote> with <quote>disappear; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>tunic, and</quote> with <quote>tunic and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>quivers and</quote> with <quote>quivers, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>mouth, then</quote> with <quote>mouth; then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>eyes, <ch.lsquot/>let</quote> with <quote>eyes. <ch.lsquot/>Let</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and draw an arrow</quote> with <quote>Bow and draw an Arrow</quote> and <quote>jaw</quote> with <quote>jaws</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>counter-attack</quote> with <quote>counterattack</quote>, <quote>acolyte Elders</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elders</quote>, <quote>face it you see, two</quote> with <quote>face it, you see two</quote> and <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
@@ -5336,29 +5834,35 @@ Initial revision
        <p>(<a idref="sect207">207</a>) Replaced <quote>Huntmastery you</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Replaced <quote>scavenger</quote> with <quote>Scavenger</quote>, <quote>most-favoured</quote> with <quote>most favoured</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>Jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>, <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>, and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>, <quote>animal kinship</quote> with <quote>Animal Kinship</quote>, and <quote>so you</quote> with <quote>so, you</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>camouflage</quote> with <quote>Camouflage</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>camouflage</quote> with <quote>Camouflage</quote>. Replaced <quote>gone, then</quote> with <quote>gone; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote> and replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>laughs sneeringly</quote> with <quote>laughs, sneering</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>healing</quote> with <quote>Healing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>to the gallop</quote> with <quote>to a gallop</quote> and both occurences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>human, she</quote> with <quote>human; she</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>to the gallop</quote> with <quote>to a gallop</quote> and both occurences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier&apos;s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers&apos; shop</quote>, <quote>mitts</quote> with <quote>Mitts</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>cloaks</quote> with <quote>Cloaks</quote>, <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>pelts</quote> in the sale list with <quote>Pelts</quote>, <quote>White wolf</quote> with <quote>White Wolf</quote>, and <quote>hides</quote> with <quote>Hides</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>furrier<ch.apos/>s shop</quote> with <quote>furriers<ch.apos/> shop</quote>, <quote>mitts</quote> with <quote>Mitts</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>cloaks</quote> with <quote>Cloaks</quote>, <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>, both occurrences of <quote>pelts</quote> in the sale list with <quote>Pelts</quote>, <quote>White wolf</quote> with <quote>White Wolf</quote>, and <quote>hides</quote> with <quote>Hides</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote> and <quote>man, clad in furs clutching</quote> with <quote>man clad in furs and clutching</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect228">228</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>. Replaced <quote>add 5 to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score</quote> with <quote>restore 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>horseshoe circle</quote> with <quote>horseshoe shape</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>horseshoe circle</quote> with <quote>horseshoe shape</quote>. Replaced <quote>wintery</quote> with <quote>wintry</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect231">231</a>) Replaced <quote>eagle eyes</quote> with <quote>eagle-eyes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud of crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>cloud of Crypt Spawn</quote> and <quote>Crypt spawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>After a short while he says.</quote> with <quote>After a short while he says,</quote> and moved that phrase into the beginning of the fourth paragraph rather than at the end of the third. Replaced three occurences of <quote>amulet</quote> with <quote>Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>hunting</quote> with <quote>Hunting</quote>, <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, and <quote>longer ,</quote> with <quote>longer,</quote>. Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Replaced <quote>abate, then</quote> with <quote>abate; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>animal control</quote> with <quote>Animal Control</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>Then, as you round a knoll of rock, shaped</quote> with <quote>Then as you round a knoll of rock shaped</quote> and <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>Then, as you round a knoll of rock, shaped</quote> with <quote>Then as you round a knoll of rock shaped</quote> and <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky, then</quote> with <quote>sky; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Be brave, Grand Master. But most of all&emdash;be swift!</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Removed the quotation marks around <quote>Be brave, Grand Master. But most of all<ch.emdash/>be swift!</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>branch, then</quote> with <quote>branch; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, <quote>approaching.</quote> with <quote>approaching from.</quote>, <quote>domain, a</quote> with <quote>domain: a</quote>, and <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>runic disc</quote> with <quote>Runic Disc</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Replaced <quote>north-easterly</quote> with <quote>northeasterly</quote>.</p>
@@ -5367,39 +5871,44 @@ Initial revision
        <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect264">264</a>) Replaced <quote>psi-screen</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect265">265</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elder</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) Replaced <quote>offguard</quote> with <quote>off-guard</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect268">268</a>) Replaced <quote>Vakovarian brigands</quote> with <quote>Vakovarian Brigands</quote> and <quote>rounds, by</quote> with <quote>rounds by</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>be&emdash;a lowly acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>be: a lowly Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect269">269</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>be<ch.emdash/>a lowly acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>be: a lowly Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect272">272</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect275">275</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elder</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>Knight, or</quote> with <quote>Knight or</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>humble-but-honest</quote> with <quote>humble but honest</quote> and <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote>sparks, then</quote> with <quote>sparks; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>streaming</quote> with <quote>steaming</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Removed <quote>, or higher</quote> from <quote>Sun Lord, or higher</quote> since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote> and <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>gold crowns</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote> and <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>say, <ch.lsquot/>how</quote> with <quote>say. <ch.lsquot/>How</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect287">287</a>) Replaced <quote>gold crowns</quote> with <quote>Gold Crowns</quote>. Replaced <quote>lop-sided</quote> with <quote>lopsided</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>Elder-magi</quote> with <quote>Elder Magi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks from <quote>Mind Charm</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Replaced <quote>spell</quote> with <quote>Spell</quote> and removed the quotation marks from <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes, then</quote> with <quote>eyes; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>ever-nearer</quote> with <quote>ever nearer</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>tracking</quote> with <quote>Tracking</quote> and <quote>Guardian, or</quote> with <quote>Guardian or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>tracking</quote> with <quote>Tracking</quote> and <quote>Guardian, or</quote> with <quote>Guardian or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>out, <ch.lsquot/>my</quote> with <quote>out. <ch.lsquot/>My</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>curse, then</quote> with <quote>curse; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>camouflage</quote> with <quote>Camouflage</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>bow, draw an arrow from your quiver</quote> with <quote>Bow, draw an Arrow from your Quiver</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, <quote>Thok!</quote> with <quote>thok!</quote>, and <quote>screams, and</quote> with <quote>screams and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, <quote>Thok!</quote> with <quote>thok!</quote>, and <quote>screams, and</quote> with <quote>screams and</quote>. Replaced <quote>lips, then</quote> with <quote>lips; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote> and <quote>north-easterly</quote> with <quote>northeasterly</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackals</quote> with <quote>Jackals</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>king&apos;s</quote> with <quote>King&apos;s</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>. Replaced <quote>brightly, then</quote> with <quote>brightly; then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>king<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>King<ch.apos/>s</quote>.  Replaced <quote>warmly, <ch.lsquot/>it</quote> with <quote>warmly. <ch.lsquot/>It</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>token</quote> with <quote>Token</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect318">318</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote> and <quote>Guardian, or</quote> with <quote>Guardian or</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote> and <quote>Guardian, or</quote> with <quote>Guardian or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand Guardian</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand Guardian</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect322">322</a>) Replaced <quote>acolyte Elder</quote> with <quote>Acolyte Elder</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Moved <quote>How can I help you, stranger?</quote> to the first paragraph and moved <quote>For an instant the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes, then he sneers and says,</quote> to the third paragraph.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Moved <quote>How can I help you, stranger?</quote> to the first paragraph and moved <quote>For an instant the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes, then he sneers and says,</quote> to the third paragraph. Replaced <quote>eyes, then</quote> with <quote>eyes; then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>vortexi</quote> with <quote>Vortexi</quote>. Replaced <quote>sparks, then</quote> with <quote>sparks; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>acolytes of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolytes of Vashna</quote> and <quote>ruins, by</quote> with <quote>ruins by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Guardian, or</quote> with <quote>Guardian or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect327">327</a>) Replaced <quote>stalagtites</quote> with <quote>stalactites</quote> and <quote>young teenage</quote> with <quote>young, teenage</quote>.</p>
@@ -5407,18 +5916,20 @@ Initial revision
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>, and <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>automatons</quote> with <quote>Automatons</quote> and <quote>Kai Blast</quote> with <quote>Kai-blast</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect335">335</a>) Replaced <quote>journey, then</quote> with <quote>journey; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect336">336</a>) Replaced <quote>corvayl</quote> with <quote>Corvayl</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Replaced <quote>pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>T&apos;as been</quote> with <quote>&thinspace;&apos;T&apos;as been</quote> and <quote>black corvayl</quote> with <quote>Black Corvayl</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>T<ch.apos/>as been</quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.apos/>T<ch.apos/>as been</quote> and <quote>black corvayl</quote> with <quote>Black Corvayl</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>north-easterly</quote> with <quote>northeasterly</quote> and <quote>north-east</quote> with <quote>northeast</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>gulley</quote> with <quote>gully</quote>, <quote>indentify</quote> with <quote>identifies</quote>, and <quote>acolyte of Vashna</quote> with <quote>Acolyte of Vashna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>tree-tops</quote> with <quote>treetops</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote> and <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackal</quote> with <quote>Jackal</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>jackal</quote> with <quote>Jackal</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon, then</quote> with <quote>weapon; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>invisibility</quote> with <quote>Invisibility</quote> and removed the quotation marks around <quote>Mind Charm</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>, and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines</quote>.</p>
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-     <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the <a href="&link.rh;">Rules Handbook</a> for details.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Note that this list is not identical to the one used in <cite><a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a></cite>: this list is missing the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard. These items are restored to the list of permissible items from the Kai and Magnakai series again in <cite><a href="&link.17tdoi;">The Deathlord of Ixia</a></cite>. Presumably, therefore, it should be permissible to leave the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard in safekeeping at the monastery during the intervening books and retrieve them at the outset of <cite><a href="&link.17tdoi;">The Deathlord of Ixia</a></cite>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6&endash;12) and the fact that the <quote>rank of Kai Grand Defender&ellips; means you are skilled in two&ellips; weapons</quote> imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13&endash;20), you will gain mastery of an additional Kai weapon. E.g. if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have Mastery of.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the <a href="&link.rh;">Readers<ch.apos/> Handbook</a> for details.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Note that this list is not identical to the one used in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref>: this list is missing the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard. These items are restored to the list of permissible items from the Kai and Magnakai series again in <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref>. Presumably, therefore, it should be permissible to leave the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard in safekeeping at the monastery during the intervening books and retrieve them at the outset of <bookref series="lw" book="17tdoi"><cite>The Deathlord of Ixia</cite></bookref>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6<ch.endash/>12) and the fact that the <quote>rank of Kai Grand Defender<ch.ellips/> means you are skilled in two<ch.ellips/> weapons</quote> imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional Weapon. E.g. if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have mastery of.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="imprvdsc">Improved Grand Master Disciplines</a>) The <spell>Strength</spell> spell is, in practice, also used in armed combat contrary to what is indicated here.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Note this Scroll as a Special Item that doesn&apos;t take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Note this Scroll as a Special Item that doesn<ch.apos/>t take up any space on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) This is the correct answer to the crystal dais grid in <a idref="sect164">Section 164</a>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) This is the correct answer to Shamath&apos;s riddle in <a idref="sect189">Section 189</a>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) This is the correct answer to Shamath<ch.apos/>s riddle in <a idref="sect189">Section 189</a>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) If you have already spent all of your money, you have a choice: you may either give her an item of comparable or greater value, or you may simply disregard this cost.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) This is the correct answer to second sequence of numbers on the crystal dais grid in <a idref="sect235">Section 235</a>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect62">62</a>) If you have already spent all of your money, you have a choice: you may either give him an item of comparable or greater value, or you may simply disregard this cost.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) This is the correct answer to the second sequence of numbers on the crystal dais grid in <a idref="sect235">Section 235</a>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) You may also eat a single Meal and only lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and <a idref="sect267">Section 267</a> of this book describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) It is most likely that these Discipline bonuses are not intended to be cumulative.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) It is most likely that these Discipline bonuses are not intended to be cumulative.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) There is no indication whether or not the extra meals that you gather as you ride should also have a curative effect. If you decide that they do, record each on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as <quote>Meal +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></quote>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) The section corresponding to the correct answer will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. You have only one chance to guess at the correct answer. If you guess incorrectly, <a idref="sect235">turn immediately to 235</a>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) The correct method for finding the solution of this riddle has eluded readers ever since <cite>The Legacy of Vashna</cite> was published (as befits a riddle posed by an immortal demoness). If you can find the correct solution, please <a href="&link.staff.contact;">contact</a> the Project Aon volunteers. The section corresponding to the correct answer will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. You have only one chance to guess at the correct answer. If you guess incorrectly, <a idref="sect216">turn immediately to 216</a>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Since this attack is described as a <quote>Kai-blast</quote>, you should deduct 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points from your current score.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn&apos;t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) The originally published edition of this book instructed you to add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score. We believe that our alteration to specify restoration instead of addition is closer to the intent of the author. The original led to several questions. Would this additional score be a permanent increase of your maximum <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>? Permanent alterations of basic scores in the middle of an adventure are rare making this option unlikely. Nor does the context support this conclusion. Then would this addition only be for the duration of the combat similar to the bonus to <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>? This makes the bonus useless. If you were to complete the combat with fewer than 5 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points remaining and then removed the bonus after the combat was over, you would be just as dead as without the bonus. Another proposal was that you should remove the bonus from your score only if it leaves your score above the normal maximum after the combat. Although reasonable, this probably wasn<ch.apos/>t the intent of the author since he did not specify this procedure. We have opted for the simplest, most straightforward choice: that this is just a restorative effect.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) The section corresponding to the correct answer will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. You have only one chance to guess at the correct answer. If you guess incorrectly, <a idref="sect141">turn immediately to 141</a>.</p>
-     <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mind Blast and Psi-surge but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <a href="&link.13tplor;">The Plague Lords of Ruel</a> Sections 156 and 212 is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and this Section describes Arch Druid Cadak&apos;s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
+     <p>(<a idref="sect267">267</a>) There are strong indications that Arch Druid Cadak should be immune to both Mindblast and Psi-surge, but not Kai-surge. The Cener High Priest fought in <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor"><cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite></bookref> Sections <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect156">156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="13tplor" section="sect212">212</bookref> is immune to these lesser psychic Disciplines, and this Section describes Arch Druid Cadak<ch.apos/>s inner mind as <quote>well-shielded</quote>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) There is no indication whether or not the extra meals that you gather as you ride should also have a curative effect. If you decide that they do, record each on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as <quote>Meal +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></quote>.</p>
      <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) If you have already spent all of your money, you have a choice: you may either give her an item of comparable or greater value, or you may simply disregard this cost.</p>
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        <li>Illustration XVIII (<a idref="sect319">Section 319</a>)</li>
        <li>Illustration XIX (<a idref="sect327">Section 327</a>)</li>
        <li>Illustration XX (<a idref="sect345">Section 345</a>)</li>
-       <li><a idref="map">The Maakengorge &amp; Surrounding Territories</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="map">The Maakengorge <ch.ampersand/> Surrounding Territories</a></li>
        <li><a idref="action">Action Chart</a></li>
       </ul>
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-    <section class="backmatter" id="secill">
-     <meta><title>Secondary Illustrations</title></meta>
+     <section class="backmatter" id="secill">
+      <meta><title>Secondary Illustrations</title></meta>
 
-     <data>
-      <ul class="unbulleted">
-       <li><a idref="sect8">8</a>, <a idref="sect339">339</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect12">12</a>, <a idref="sect279">279</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect53">53</a>, <a idref="sect220">220</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect62">62</a>, <a idref="sect332">332</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect6">6</a>, <a idref="sect63">63</a>, <a idref="sect94">94</a>, <a idref="sect110">110</a>, <a idref="sect157">157</a>, <a idref="sect162">162</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect87">87</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect105">105</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect133">133</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect137">137</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect164">164</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect188">188</a>, <a idref="sect247">247</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect194">194</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect218">218</a></li>
-       <li><a idref="sect235">235</a></li>
+      <data>
+       <p>Only the first occurrence of each secondary illustration is cited.</p>
+       <ul class="unbulleted">
+       <li><a idref="sect133">Small 1</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect62">Small 2</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect188">Small 3</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect137">Small 4</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect87">Small 5</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect6">Small 6</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect218">Small 7</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect194">Small 8</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect12">Small 9</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect8">Small 10</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect53">Small 11</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect105">Small 12</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect164">Small 13</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="sect235">Small 14</a></li>
       </ul>
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