From: Ingo Klöcker <ingo.kloecker@projectaon.org>
Date: Thu, 2 Aug 2007 21:26:45 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Fixed errata:
X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=2d44afa1fce22654e8d39a4fbda6a060748b7fc5;p=project-aon.git

Fixed errata:
(er) 120: headfirst -> head-first


git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@407 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/09tcof.xml b/09tcof.xml
index a2e4ef9..ed18070 100755
--- a/09tcof.xml
+++ b/09tcof.xml
@@ -2226,7 +2226,7 @@
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill7.pdf" width="386" height="636" />
       </illustration>
 
-      <p>The Kraan and its two riders take to the air, but the beast is so overburdened with loot that it cannot clear the rooftops. Frantically it beats its leathery wings, hovering erratically just a few feet off the ground. The Giaks urge it on with kicks and punches, but to no avail. Suddenly it lurches forward and the Giaks tumble headfirst on to the cobblestones a few feet from where you stand. <quote>Orgadaka!</quote> they cry, as they catch sight of you and Banedon hiding at the corner.</p>
+      <p>The Kraan and its two riders take to the air, but the beast is so overburdened with loot that it cannot clear the rooftops. Frantically it beats its leathery wings, hovering erratically just a few feet off the ground. The Giaks urge it on with kicks and punches, but to no avail. Suddenly it lurches forward and the Giaks tumble head-first on to the cobblestones a few feet from where you stand. <quote>Orgadaka!</quote> they cry, as they catch sight of you and Banedon hiding at the corner.</p>
       <choice idref="sect12">If you have a bow and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 12</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect285">If you wish to attack the Giaks with a hand weapon before they have a chance to stand, <link-text>turn to 285</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect63">If you choose to avoid combat by remounting your horse and galloping along the track that leads out of the village, <link-text>turn to 63</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5722,7 +5722,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>city but</quote> with <quote>city, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) </p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>skin but</quote> with <quote>skin, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>air but</quote> with <quote>air, but</quote> and <quote>punches but</quote> with <quote>punches, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>air but</quote> with <quote>air, but</quote>, <quote>punches but</quote> with <quote>punches, but</quote>, and <quote>headfirst</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai skill</quote> with <quote>Magnakai skill</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>doomwolves</quote> with <quote>Doomwolves</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>fire but</quote> with <quote>fire, but</quote>.</p>