From: Simon Osborne Date: Sun, 22 Jul 2007 15:38:58 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Books 1 and 2 updated: Some Errata and xml structure updated. X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=3de06fe4f3b54338548051428b4ee8321cc62faa;p=project-aon.git Books 1 and 2 updated: Some Errata and xml structure updated. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@315 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/01fftd.xml b/01fftd.xml index 818d2fc..d34b3eb 100755 --- a/01fftd.xml +++ b/01fftd.xml @@ -9,143 +9,37 @@ %general.inclusions; ]> - - - - - + Flight from the Dark Joe Dever and Gary Chalk - Joe Dever
Illustrated by Gary Chalk + + Joe Dever + Illustrated by Gary Chalk + &inclusion.joe.dever.bio.lw; &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw; Project Aon - 2007511 + 2007722

You are the sole survivor of a devastating attack on the monastery where you were learning the skills of the Kai Lords. You swear vengeance on the Darklords for the massacre of the Kai warriors, and with a sudden flash of insight you know what you must do. You must set off on a perilous journey to the capital city to warn the King of the terrible threat that faces his people: For you are now the last of the Kaiyou are now Lone Wolf.

Internet Edition published by Project Aon. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the Errata.

 - Text copyright 1984 Joe Dever.
Illustrations copyright 1984 Gary Chalk. + + Text copyright 1984 Joe Dever. + Illustrations copyright 1984 Gary Chalk. + -

Text copyright 1984 Joe Dever.
Illustrations copyright 1984 Gary Chalk.
Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the Project Aon License.

+

+ Text copyright 1984 Joe Dever. + Illustrations copyright 1984 Gary Chalk. + Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the Project Aon License. +

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Transcription
Ryan Landek
Illustration Transcription
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Jonathan Blake
Paul Haskell
Simon Osborne
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+ Jonathan Blake + Paul Haskell + Simon Osborne +
XML
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Jonathan Blake
Jeff Dougan
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+ Jonathan Blake + Jeff Dougan +
Alternate Illustrations
-
JC Alvarez (text illustrations and action charts)
Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)
Michael Hahn (map)
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+ JC Alvarez (text illustrations and action charts) + Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables) + Michael Hahn (map) +
Proofreading
-
Mark Laird (Sections 3670 and 281315)
Christian Leonhard (Sections 106140 and 211245)
Brad Phelps (Sections 176210)
Michael Richey (Sections 135 and 316350)
Tyson Torres (Sections 71105, 141175 and 246280)
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+ Mark Laird (Sections 3670 and 281315) + Christian Leonhard (Sections 106140 and 211245) + Brad Phelps (Sections 176210) + Michael Richey (Sections 135 and 316350) + Tyson Torres (Sections 71105, 141175 and 246280) +
Editing
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Mike Feldman
Ingo Klcker
Mark Laird
Simon Osborne
Thomas Wolmer
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+ Mike Feldman + Ingo Klcker + Mark Laird + Simon Osborne + Thomas Wolmer +
PDF Layout
Ingo Klcker
Coordination
Jonathan Blake
Special Thanks
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Pedro Almeida, Tony Lenzo, Laurence OToole
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+ Pedro Almeida, Tony Lenzo, Laurence OToole +
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If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 1 of Lone Wolf, you may add a further Kai Discipline of your choice to your Action Chart in Book 2. This additional skill, together with your five other skills and any Special Items that you have picked up in Book 1, may then be used in the next adventure of the Lone Wolf series which is called Fire on the Water.

+

If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 1 of Lone Wolf, you may add a further Kai Discipline of your choice to your Action Chart in Book 2. This additional skill, together with your five other skills and any Special Items that you have picked up in Book 1, may then be used in the next adventure of the Lone Wolf series which is called Fire on the Water.

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  • Unless otherwise instructed, or unless you have an option to evade, the next round of combat now starts.

  • Repeat the sequence from Stage 3.

    • -

    This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced.

    +

    This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced.

    A summary of Combat Rules appears in the back of this book.

    @@ -570,13 +489,13 @@ Todo: -

    The following table is a guide to the rank and titles that are bestowed upon Kai Lords at each stage of their training. As you successfully complete each adventure in the Lone Wolf series, you will gain an additional Kai Discipline and gradually progress towards mastery of the ten basic Kai Disciplines.

    +

    The following table is a guide to the rank and titles that are bestowed upon Kai Lords at each stage of their training. As you successfully complete each adventure in the Lone Wolf series, you will gain an additional Kai Discipline and gradually progress towards mastery of the ten basic Kai Disciplines.

    1. Novice
    2. Intuite
    3. Doan
    4. Acolyte
      5. -
    5. InitiateYou begin the Lone Wolf adventures with this level of Kai training
      6. +
    6. InitiateYou begin the Lone Wolf adventures with this level of Kai training
    7. Aspirant
    8. Guardian
    9. Warmarn or Journeyman
      10. @@ -598,7 +517,7 @@ Todo:

      Your mission will be one of great danger, for the Darklords and their servants are a cruel and fierce enemy who give and expect no mercy. Use the map to help you steer a correct course for the capital. Make notes as you progress through the story, for they will be of great help in future adventures.

      -

      Many things that you find will aid you during the adventure. Some Special Items will be of use in future Lone Wolf adventures and others may be red herrings of no real use at all, so be selective in what you decide to keep.

      +

      Many things that you find will aid you during the adventure. Some Special Items will be of use in future Lone Wolf adventures and others may be red herrings of no real use at all, so be selective in what you decide to keep.

      There are many routes to the King, but only one involves a minimum of danger. With a wise choice of Kai Disciplines and a great deal of courage, any player should be able to complete the mission, no matter how weak their initial COMBAT SKILL or ENDURANCE points score.

      The honour and memory of the Kai Lords will go with you on your perilous journey.

      Good luck!

      @@ -3361,7 +3280,7 @@ Todo: - KolanisSage & Herbalist + KolanisSage Herbalist If you wish to enter, turn to 91. @@ -5027,7 +4946,7 @@ Todo:

      Lone Wolf, you have selfless courage: the quality of a true Kai Lord. Your journey here has been one of great peril and although your news comes as a grievous blow, the spirit of your determination is like a beacon of hope to us all in this dark hour. You have brought great honour to the memory of your Masters, and for that we praise you.

      You receive the praise and heartfelt thanks of the entire hallan honour that brings a certain redness to your young face. The King raises his hand and all the voices cease.

      You have done all that Sommerlund could have asked of a loyal son, but she is greatly in need of you still. The Darklords are powerful once more and their ambition knows no bounds. Our only hope lies within Durenor with the power that once defeated the Darklords an age ago. Lone Wolf, you are the last of the Kaiyou have the skills. Will you journey to Durenor and return with the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun? Only with that gift of the gods may we crush this evil and save our land.

      -

      If you wish to accept the quest of the Sommerswerd, begin your adventure with Book 2 of the Lone Wolf adventures:

      +

      If you wish to accept the quest of the Sommerswerd, begin your adventure with Book 2 of the Lone Wolf adventures:

      Fire on the Water
    @@ -5063,35 +4982,35 @@ Todo: - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake @@ -5576,12 +5495,19 @@ Todo:

    (The Game Rules) Replaced all occurrences of ie with i.e. Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied. Replaced on 4 with on the number 4. Removed on the last page of this book. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below.

    -

    (Kai Disciplines) Replaced Kai Discipline section with Kai Disciplines section, removed on the last page of the book, and capitalized all occurrences of discipline. Replaced fully in Equipment section with fully in the Equipment section.

    + +

    (Kai Disciplines) Replaced Kai Discipline section with Kai Disciplines section, removed on the last page of the book, and capitalized all occurrences of discipline. Replaced fully in Equipment section with fully in the Equipment section. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

    +

    (Equipment) Added periods to the sentences describing the Helmet and Chainmail Waistcoat.

    +

    (Equipment: How to use your equipment) Added a period to the second from last sentence in the Weapons subsection.

    -

    (Rules for Combat) Removed a superfluous period in the second paragraph of the first example. Removed on the inside back cover of the book and replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced reduced to zero with reduced to zero or below. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced.

    + +

    (Rules for Combat) Removed a superfluous period in the second paragraph of the first example. Removed on the inside back cover of the book and replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced reduced to zero with reduced to zero or below. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced. Replaced at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. with at which point that combatant is declared dead..

    +

    (Levels of Kai Training) The Levels of Kai Training section did not originally appear in this book, but has been added for the reader's information.

    -

    (Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book .

    + +

    (Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book . Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

    +

    (1) Replaced Sommerlund with Sommlending and made the last choice (about using Sixth Sense) the first.

    (4) Moved the last choice (about the Tracking Discipline) into the first position.

    (7) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

    @@ -5661,7 +5587,7 @@ Todo:

    (342) Replaced bloods with blood.

    (349) Vonatar, from the seventh paragraph, is spelled Vonotar in later Lone Wolf books. Replaced magicians guild of Toran with Magicians Guild of Toran.

    (350) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

    -

    (Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below.

    +

    (Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

     @@ -5671,6 +5597,7 @@ Todo: Footnotes +
    @@ -5714,12 +5641,14 @@ Todo: Secondary Illustrations -

    Only the first occurrence of each secondary illustration is cited.

     diff --git a/02fotw.xml b/02fotw.xml index 99c1add..feb75bd 100755 --- a/02fotw.xml +++ b/02fotw.xml @@ -11,105 +11,6 @@ - - Fire on the Water Joe Dever and Gary Chalk @@ -122,7 +23,7 @@ To do: &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw; Project Aon - 2007511 + 2007722

    You are Lone WolfLast of the Kai Lords. Bitter war rages through your homeland as the evil Darklords of the west lay siege to the capital. The King has sent you on a desperate journey to retrieve the only power in Magnamund that can save your people: the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Ahead of you lie terrible dangersferocious sea-storms, the tunnel of Tarnalin, and the ghostly death-hulks of Vonotar the Traitor. But only you can save your land from the devastation of the Darklords.

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    For Titus, Ben Ryan and Victoria

    +

    + For Titus, Ben Ryan and Victoria +

    @@ -177,8 +80,8 @@ To do: -

    I would be especially pleased if my granting of the rights to distribute my books in this way was seen as my millennium gift to all those devoted readers who have kept the Kai flag flying high, through all the good times, and the not-so-good. It would make me very proud indeed if this enterprise laid the foundations of a lasting legacy, securing the longevity of Lone Wolf by making my creation freely and readily accessible to current and future online generations. For them, for us, for Sommerlund and the Kai. Joe Dever

    -

    Project Aon would first like to thank Joe Dever for making this generous offering of the books that we have all loved from the beginning. We would also like to acknowledge the following members of Project Aon for their diligent work:

    + + &inclusion.joe.dever.endowment;
    Credits @@ -262,7 +165,7 @@ To do:

    The first number that you pick from the Random Number Table in this way represents your COMBAT SKILL. Add 10 to the number you picked and write the total in the COMBAT SKILL section of your Action Chart. (i.e. if your pencil fell on 4 in the Random Number Table you would write in a COMBAT SKILL Of 14.) When you fight, your COMBAT SKILL will be pitted against that of your enemy. A high score in this section is therefore very desirable.

    The second number that you pick from the Random Number Table represents your powers of ENDURANCE. Add 20 to this number and write the total in the ENDURANCE section of your Action Chart. (i.e. if your pencil fell on the number 6 on the Random Number Table you would have 26 ENDURANCE points.)

    If you are wounded in combat you will lose ENDURANCE points. If at any time your ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost ENDURANCE points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of ENDURANCE points can never go above the number with which you start your adventure.

    -

    If you have successfully completed Book 1 of the Lone Wolf series, you will already have your COMBAT SKILL, ENDURANCE points and Kai Disciplines which you can now carry over with you to Book 2. You may also carry over any Weapons and Special Items that you held at the end of Book 1 and these should be entered on your new Action Chart (you are still limited to two weapons and eight Backpack Items).

    +

    If you have successfully completed Book 1 of the Lone Wolf series, you will already have your COMBAT SKILL, ENDURANCE points and Kai Disciplines which you can now carry over with you to Book 2. You may also carry over any Weapons and Special Items that you held at the end of Book 1 and these should be entered on your new Action Chart (you are still limited to two weapons and eight Backpack Items).

    Through your experiences in Book 1 you have learned new skills, and you may choose one extra Kai Discipline to add to your Action Chart. Now read the section on equipment for Book 2 carefully.

    @@ -389,7 +292,7 @@ To do:
    -

    If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 2 of Lone Wolf, you may add a further Kai Discipline of your choice to your Action Chart in Book 3. This additional skill, together with your five or six other skills and any Special Items that you have picked up in Books 1 and 2, may then be used in the next adventure of the Lone Wolf series which is called The Caverns of Kalte.

    +

    If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 2 of Lone Wolf, you may add a further Kai Discipline of your choice to your Action Chart in Book 3. This additional skill, together with your five or six other skills and any Special Items that you have picked up in Books 1 and 2, may then be used in the next adventure of the Lone Wolf series which is called The Caverns of Kalte.

    @@ -554,7 +457,7 @@ To do:

  • Unless otherwise instructed, or unless you have an option to evade, the next round of combat now starts.

  • Repeat the sequence from Stage 3.

    • -

    This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced.

    +

    This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced.

    A summary of Combat Rules appears in the back of this book.

    @@ -575,13 +478,13 @@ To do: -

    The following table is a guide to the rank and titles that are bestowed upon Kai Lords at each stage of their training. As you successfully complete each adventure in the Lone Wolf series, you will gain an additional Kai Discipline and gradually progress towards mastery of the ten basic Kai Disciplines.

    +

    The following table is a guide to the rank and titles that are bestowed upon Kai Lords at each stage of their training. As you successfully complete each adventure in the Lone Wolf series, you will gain an additional Kai Discipline and gradually progress towards mastery of the ten basic Kai Disciplines.

    1. Novice
    2. Intuite
    3. Doan
    4. Acolyte
      5. -
    5. InitiateYou begin the Lone Wolf adventures with this level of Kai training
      6. +
    6. InitiateYou begin the Lone Wolf adventures with this level of Kai training
    7. Aspirant
    8. Guardian
    9. Warmarn or Journeyman
      10. @@ -603,7 +506,7 @@ To do:

      Your mission will be one of great danger, for the Darklords and their servants are a cruel and fierce enemy who give and expect no mercy. Use the map to help you steer a correct course for the capital. Make notes as you progress through the story, for they will be of great help in future adventures.

      -

      Many things that you find will aid you during the adventure. Some Special Items will be of use in future Lone Wolf adventures and others may be red herrings of no real use at all, so be selective in what you decide to keep.

      +

      Many things that you find will aid you during the adventure. Some Special Items will be of use in future Lone Wolf adventures and others may be red herrings of no real use at all, so be selective in what you decide to keep.

      There are many routes to the Hammerdal, but only one will enable you to retrieve the Sommerswerd and return to Sommerlund with the minimum of danger. A wise choice of Kai Disciplines and a great deal of courage, will enable any player to complete the mission, no matter how weak their initial COMBAT SKILL or ENDURANCE points score.

      The fate of your country hangs on the success of your perilous quest.

      Good luck!

      @@ -4068,7 +3971,7 @@ To do:
    10. Spears 5 Gold Crowns each
    11. Maces 4 Gold Crowns each
    12. Axes 3 Gold Crowns each
      13. -
    13. Quarterstaffs 3 Gold Crowns each
      14. +
    14. Quarterstaves 3 Gold Crowns each

      15. You may purchase any of the above weapons if you have enough money to do so. The weaponsmith will also buy any Weapons that you may already have for 1 Gold Crown less than the price shown on his wooden board. Mark any necessary changes on your Action Chart before bidding him goodnight and returning to the street.

      At the end of Oxyoke Way, on your right you find a large stable and coach station. It is now very dark and you must find somewhere to spend the night. Climbing a ladder at the side of the building, you spend a comfortable night hidden in the hay-loft.

      @@ -4988,7 +4891,7 @@ To do: -

      Though you keep your Backpack itself, you lose everything it contained in addition to your Weapons and the Chainmail Waistcoat, if you had one. This was clarified by Joe Dever in Lone Wolf Club Newsletter #2.

      +

      Though you keep your Backpack itself, you lose everything it contained in addition to your Weapons and the Chainmail Waistcoat, if you had one. This was clarified by Joe Dever in Lone Wolf Club Newsletter #2.

             @@ -5161,7 +5064,7 @@ To do:

      Gripped with fear and panic, the vast black army rise up and run in chaos from the city wall. The impossible has happened, their invincible master is slain. Again the Sommerswerd has returned to defeat them. The army and the allies of Durenor ride out of the city gates in pursuit of the panic-stricken enemy as they run blindly towards the Durncrag Mountains. The victory is yours. Holmgard is saved and the murder of the Kai has finally been avenged.

      -

      But for you, Lone Wolf, a life of high adventure has only just begun. A new challenge awaits you and the Sommerswerd in Book Three of the Lone Wolf series:

      +

      But for you, Lone Wolf, a life of high adventure has only just begun. A new challenge awaits you and the Sommerswerd in Book Three of the Lone Wolf series:

      The Caverns of Kalte
    @@ -5196,35 +5099,35 @@ To do: - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake - JC Alvarez & Jonathan Blake + JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake @@ -5699,12 +5602,19 @@ To do:

    (Title Page) Replaced seastorms with sea-storms.

    +

    (The Game Rules) Replaced all occurrences of ie with i.e.. Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied. Split the last paragraph into two starting with Through your experiences. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below.

    -

    (Kai Disciplines) Replaced Kai Discipline section with Kai Disciplines section. Capitalized all occurrences of discipline.

    -

    (Equipment) Removed the 1=, 2=, in the How to carry your equipment section. These were obviously carried over from Flight from the Darks random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete.

    -

    (Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of the book. Removed on the last page of the book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced reduced to zero with reduced to zero or below. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced.

    + +

    (Kai Disciplines) Replaced Kai Discipline section with Kai Disciplines section. Capitalized all occurrences of discipline. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

    + +

    (Equipment) Removed the 1=, 2=, in the How to carry your equipment section. These were obviously carried over from Flight from the Darks random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

    + +

    (Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of the book. Removed on the last page of the book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced reduced to zero with reduced to zero or below. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced. Replaced at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. with at which point that combatant is declared dead..

    +

    (Levels of Kai Training) The Levels of Kai Training section did not originally appear in this book, but has been added for the readers information.

    -

    (Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book and replaced LONE WOLF with Lone Wolf.

    + +

    (Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book and replaced LONE WOLF with Lone Wolf.

    +

    (4) Replaced Sandsnake with sandsnake.

    (9) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

    (12) Replaced agreeing a wager with agreeing to a wager.

    @@ -5781,6 +5691,7 @@ To do:

    (258) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

    (261) Replaced person with people to agree in number to the second choice.

    (265) Replaced warfleet with war fleet. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

    +

    (266) Replaced Quarterstaffs with Quarterstaves.

    (267) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord. Replaced on to with onto.

    (268) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

    (274) Replaced first floor with first-floor.

    @@ -5813,7 +5724,7 @@ To do:

    (334) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

    (337) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.

    (345) Replaced jet black with jet-black.

    -

    (350) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains. Replaced air, continually with air continually. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

    +

    (350) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains. Replaced air, continually with air continually. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

    (Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below.

     @@ -5824,6 +5735,7 @@ To do: Footnotes +
    @@ -5867,12 +5779,12 @@ To do: Secondary Illustrations -

    Only the first occurrence of each secondary illustration is cited.