From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2008 23:01:57 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: simon's reported issues of 2008/1/11
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simon's reported issues of 2008/1/11

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          <p>The fact that you are skilled with three weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional weapon to your list.</p>
-         <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Weaponmastery: +3 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and tick your chosen weapons on the <a idref="action">Weapons List</a>. You cannot carry more than two weapons.</p>
+         <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Weaponmastery: +3 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and tick your chosen weapons on the <a idref="action">Weapons List</a>. You cannot carry more than <!--ERRTAG-RE-14622-->two Weapons<!--/ERRTAG-RE-14622-->.</p>
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@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@
 
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        <p>Before leaving Sommerlund on your quest for the Lorestone of Varetta, you equip yourself with a <a idref="map">map of the Stornlands</a> and a pouch of gold. To find out how much gold is in the pouch, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. Add 10 to the number you have picked. The total equals the number of Gold Crowns inside the pouch, and you should now enter this number in the <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. If you have successfully completed books 1<ch.endash/>5 of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures in the earlier series, you may add this sum to the total of any Crowns you already possess. You can only carry a maximum of fifty Crowns, but any over this number can be left in safekeeping at your Kai Monastery.</p>
-       <p>You can take five items from the list below, again adding to these, if necessary, any you may already possess. However, remember you can only carry two weapons and eight Backpack Items, maximum.</p>
+       <p>You can take five items from the list below, again adding to these, if necessary, any you may already possess. However, remember you can only carry <!--ERRTAG-RA-23219-->two Weapons<!--/ERRTAG-RA-23219--> and eight Backpack Items, maximum.</p>
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         <li><p>Sword (Weapons)</p></li>
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@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
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           <dt>Weapons</dt>
-           <dd><p>Weapons aid you in combat. If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery and a correct weapon, it adds 3 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. If you enter a combat with no weapons, deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and fight with your bare hands. If you find a weapon during the adventure, you may pick it up and use it. (Remember that you can only carry two weapons at once.)</p></dd>
+           <dd><p>Weapons aid you in combat. If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery and a correct weapon, it adds 3 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. If you enter a combat with no weapons, deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and fight with your bare hands. If you find a weapon during the adventure, you may pick it up and use it. (Remember that you can only carry <!--ERRTAG-RA-23219-->two Weapons<!--/ERRTAG-RA-23219--> at once.)</p></dd>
           <dt>Bow and Arrows</dt>
            <dd>
            <p>During your adventure there will be opportunities to use a Bow and Arrow. If you equip yourself with this weapon, and you possess at least one Arrow, you may use it when the text of a particular section allows you to do so. The Bow is a useful weapon, for it enables you to hit an enemy at a distance. However, a Bow cannot be used in hand-to-hand combat; therefore it is strongly recommended that you also equip yourself with a close combat weapon, like a Sword or Mace.</p>
@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@
            <p>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow. If you enter combat armed only with a Bow, you must deduct 4 points from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and fight with your bare hands.</p>
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           <dt>Backpack Items</dt>
-           <dd><p>During your travels you will discover various useful items which you may wish to keep. (Remember you can only carry a maximum of eight items in your Backpack at anytime.) You may exchange or discard them at any point when you are not involved in combat.</p></dd>
+           <dd><p>During your travels you will discover various useful items which you may wish to keep. (Remember you can only carry a maximum of eight items in your Backpack at any time.) You may exchange or discard them at any point when you are not involved in combat.</p></dd>
           <dt>Special Items</dt>
            <dd><p>Special Items are not carried in the Backpack. When you discover a Special Item, you will be told how to carry it. If you have successfully completed previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books, you may already possess Special Items.</p></dd>
           <dt>Gold Crowns</dt>
@@ -631,8 +631,8 @@
        <p>The courtyard of the Kai Monastery is strangely silent the morning you begin the quest. A blanket of frost sparkles on the battlements and the air is crisp and clear as you guide your horse down the steep hill track that disappears into the Fryelund Forest. It is only a little later when you look back to see the tall grey towers of your stronghold silhouetted against the sky. You bid a silent farewell before entering the densely packed trees. You do not look back again.</p>
        <p>The long ride south is not without incident. On Raider<ch.apos/>s Road, the highway between the capital and the province of Ruanon, you are confronted by a ragged outlaw band. They demand gold but instead receive a harsh lesson in the powers of a Kai Master. You fight them and they flee in confusion, leaving three of their number dead on the highway. After this encounter, you are given a wide berth by all the other unsavoury characters of this bleak and desolate region.</p>
        <p>In Ruanon, you are greeted with a hero<ch.apos/>s welcome by the lord of the land, Baron Vanalund. He and his people will never forget the debt they owe you, for it was your courage that once saved them from destruction at the hands of an evil renegade warlord. You are made so welcome by the Ruanese that your quest is in danger of being forgotten in the endless round of banquets and celebrations held in your honour. However, you cannot neglect your duty, and the time soon comes for you to leave the mining town and venture south once more.</p>
-       <p>Long ago, the highway from Ruanon to Quarlen was torn in two by a terrible earthquake that scarred the land for hundreds of miles. This deep crevasse became known as the Maakengorge<ch.emdash/>the chasm of doom<ch.emdash/>for its fathomless depths are cursed with a dreadful legacy. It was here, during the Age of the Black Moon, that King Ulnar killed the mightiest of the Darklords<ch.emdash/>Lord Vashna, whose body, along with the bodies of all his followers, was cast down into its bottomless reach. The legends say that his death-cry will echo through the gorge until he rises again to wreak his vengeance on Sommerlund and the House of Ulnar.</p>
-       <p>You are eager to avoid the chasm of doom and the long detour to the free city-state of Casiorn is a far better prospect than a visit to the ghost-city of Maaken. Gradually, the fertile plain of southern Ruanon gives way to the sparse vegetation on the borders of the Dry Main. There, like a jewel rising out of the desert, lies the city-state of Casiorn. Your stay in the City of Merchants is a brief but profitable one; a piece of luck helped by your Kai skills gives a profitable win at the gambling house of the Silver Sage. With the gold you win you replenish your supplies and purchase a fresh mount for your ride to Quarlen.</p>
+       <p>Long ago, the highway from Ruanon to Quarlen was torn in two by a terrible earthquake that scarred the land for hundreds of miles. This deep crevasse became known as the Maakengorge<ch.emdash/>the <!--ERRTAG-RA-45488-->Chasm of Doom<!--/ERRTAG-RA-45488--><ch.emdash/>for its fathomless depths are cursed with a dreadful legacy. It was here, during the Age of the Black Moon, that King Ulnar killed the mightiest of the Darklords<ch.emdash/>Lord Vashna, whose body, along with the bodies of all his followers, was cast down into its bottomless reach. The legends say that his death-cry will echo through the gorge until he rises again to wreak his vengeance on Sommerlund and the House of Ulnar.</p>
+       <p>You are eager to avoid the <!--ERRTAG-RA-45488-->Chasm of Doom<!--/ERRTAG-RA-45488--> and the long detour to the free city-state of Casiorn is a far better prospect than a visit to the ghost-city of Maaken. Gradually, the fertile plain of southern Ruanon gives way to the sparse vegetation on the borders of the Dry Main. There, like a jewel rising out of the desert, lies the city-state of Casiorn. Your stay in the City of Merchants is a brief but profitable one; a piece of luck helped by your Kai skills gives a profitable win at the gambling house of the Silver Sage. With the gold you win you replenish your supplies and purchase a fresh mount for your ride to Quarlen.</p>
 
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        <p>A shrill cockcrow heralds the break of day. By the time you have dressed and gathered together your equipment, Cyrilus is waiting for you in the courtyard below.</p>
        <p><quote>A glorious day,</quote> he says cheerfully, pointing up at the cloudless sky with his slender oaken staff. <quote>We<ch.apos/>ll have no difficulty reaching the Halfway Inn by nightfall.</quote></p>
-       <p>You bid farewell to the innkeeper and his son and urge your horses out <!--ERRTAG-RE-50994-->onto<!--/ERRTAG-RE-50994--> the narrow street that leads to the west gatehouse. By mid-morning you are riding across gentle hills crested with yellow-leaved trees. The hilltops are shrouded with mist, but occasional rays of sunshine break through to lighten the lush green fields below. Time passes swiftly as Cyrilus recounts the histories and legends of the area. You learn that the rich and fertile kingdoms bordering the River Storn have a wild and turbulent past, swept by wars, divided by empires, split by national rivalries and the ambitions of petty princes who prey upon one another and the rest of the populace. Lyris is embroiled in war with Magador, Delden with Salony and Salony with Slovia. Battles are fought, lives are lost and the land is pillaged with grim regularity<ch.emdash/>only the mercenaries and the crows seem to prosper from the continual conflicts.</p>
+       <p>You bid farewell to the innkeeper and his son and urge your horses out <!--ERRTAG-RE-50994-->onto<!--/ERRTAG-RE-50994--> the narrow street that leads to the west gatehouse. By mid-morning you are riding across gentle hills crested with yellow-leaved trees. The hilltops are shrouded with mist, but occasional rays of sunshine break through to lighten the lush green fields below. Time passes swiftly as Cyrilus recounts the histories and legends of the area. You learn that the rich and fertile kingdoms bordering the River Storn have a wild and turbulent past, swept by wars, divided by empires, split by national rivalries and the ambitions of petty princes who prey upon one another and the rest of the populace. Lyris is embroiled in war with Magador, Delden with <!--ERRTAG-RE-52141-->Salony, and Salony<!--/ERRTAG-RE-52141--> with Slovia. Battles are fought, lives are lost and the land is pillaged with grim regularity<ch.emdash/>only the mercenaries and the crows seem to prosper from the continual conflicts.</p>
 
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-       <p>In the dim glow of a street lantern, you unfold the Map of Varetta and study the complicated network of roads and alleys. Mark this as a Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. Brass Street is located on the far side of the city, close to the west wall. Suddenly, a bell tolls, its dull clang echoing among the rooftops and towers. It is the curfew: everyone must be off the streets within one hour. You will never reach the far side of the city in an hour, so you resolve to find a tavern for the night and resume your quest at dawn.</p>
+       <p>In the dim glow of a street lantern, you unfold the Map of Varetta and study the complicated network of roads and alleys. Mark this as a Special Item on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. Brass Street is located on the far side of the city, close to the west wall. Suddenly, a bell tolls, its dull <onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia> echoing among the rooftops and towers. It is the curfew: everyone must be off the streets within one hour. You will never reach the far side of the city in an hour, so you resolve to find a tavern for the night and resume your quest at dawn.</p>
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-       <p>On a table in the centre of the tent lies a stack of bows that have been provided by the villagers. Most of them are in very poor condition but you manage to find three that are neither warped, split nor unstrung. One is a Vassagonian bow called a Jakan; another is a bone bow from Kalte; and the third is a Durenese hunting bow.</p>
+       <p>On a table in the centre of the tent lies a stack of bows that have been provided by the villagers. Most of them are in very poor condition but you manage to find three that are neither warped, <!--ERRTAG-RE-67077-->split, nor unstrung<!--/ERRTAG-RE-67077-->. One is a Vassagonian bow called a Jakan; another is a bone bow from Kalte; and the third is a Durenese hunting bow.</p>
        <choice idref="sect205">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery, <link-text>turn to 205</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect298">If you decide to take the Jakan, <link-text>turn to 298</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect214">If you decide to take the bone bow, <link-text>turn to 214</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>Luyen, the city of flowers and wine, greets you, its towers, timbered houses and fortified perimeter walls silhouetted against the sky. It lies in the shadow of the Ceners, at a dangerous bend where the fast-flowing Storn undercuts the sheer slopes of Mount Prindar.</p>
+       <p>Luyen, the city of flowers and wine, greets you, its towers, timbered <!--ERRTAG-RE-67973-->houses, and fortified perimeter walls<!--/ERRTAG-RE-67973--> silhouetted against the sky. It lies in the shadow of the Ceners, at a dangerous bend where the fast-flowing Storn undercuts the sheer slopes of Mount Prindar.</p>
        <p>The captain docks at the Luyen quay for provisions, and as his men busy themselves with a myriad of duties and tasks, you accompany him on a visit to the Luyen apothecary.</p>
-       <p>The entrance to this famed establishment is marked by a huge stone jar, creaking on its chains. The shop is vast, and full of things that stir your curiosity. Towers of containered liquids, mountains of coarse-grained powders and forests of roots and herbs crowd the bleached wooden shelves. The captain seeks medicines of strength and healing in readiness for the battle ahead, and the herbmaster<ch.apos/>s eyes widen with delight when he reads the captain<ch.apos/>s list<ch.emdash/>they are his most expensive preparations.</p>
+       <p>The entrance to this famed establishment is marked by a huge stone jar, creaking on its chains. The shop is vast, and full of things that stir your curiosity. Towers of containered liquids, mountains of coarse-grained <!--ERRTAG-RE-68626-->powders, and forests of roots<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68626--> and herbs crowd the bleached wooden shelves. The captain seeks medicines of strength and healing in readiness for the battle ahead, and the herbmaster<ch.apos/>s eyes widen with delight when he reads the captain<ch.apos/>s list<ch.emdash/>they are his most expensive preparations.</p>
        <choice idref="sect2">If you wish to examine some of the potions that line the shelves, <link-text>turn to 2</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect152">If you wish to take a look at some of the other shops in this street while the herbmaster prepares the captain<ch.apos/>s order, <link-text>turn to 152</link-text>.</choice>
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+      <footnotes>
+       <footnote id="sect20-1-foot" idref="sect20-1">
+        <p>Remember to deduct an Arrow from your Action Chart.</p>
+       </footnote>
+      </footnotes>
+
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-       <p>Your ambush catches the enemy by surprise, making them panic and fly in all directions. At such close range your <!--ERRTAG-RE-68473-->Arrow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68473--> pierces the chainmailed chest of the rider holding Cyrilus<ch.apos/> horse and kills him instantly. As he tumbles to the ground, you break cover, exploding through the bushes and scooping the reins from the dead man<ch.apos/>s horse. Angry shouts echo in your wake as you take off along the highway with the wizard and his horse by your side.</p>
+       <p>Your ambush catches the enemy by surprise, making them panic and fly in all directions. At such close range your <!--ERRTAG-RE-68473-->Arrow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68473--> pierces the chainmailed chest of the rider holding Cyrilus<ch.apos/> horse and kills him instantly.<footref id="sect20-1" idref="sect20-1-foot"/> As he tumbles to the ground, you break cover, exploding through the bushes and scooping the reins from the dead man<ch.apos/>s horse. Angry shouts echo in your wake as you take off along the highway with the wizard and his horse by your side.</p>
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-       <p>You wipe your weapon on the cloak of a dead grave robber and turn him over with the toe of your boot. Several graves bear the signs of the grave robbers<ch.apos/> labour; the freshly-dug soil is heaped high and coffin lids lie shattered and discarded everywhere. The weapons these men have used are old and pitted with rust and obviously acquired, like the rest of their booty, from graves and tombs. A search of the bodies reveals 27 Gold Crowns, a Bottle of Wine and a Mirror. You may take any of these items before leaving the churchyard.</p>
+       <p>You wipe your weapon on the cloak of a dead grave robber and turn him over with the toe of your boot. Several graves bear the signs of the grave robbers<ch.apos/> labour; the freshly-dug soil is heaped high and coffin lids lie shattered and discarded everywhere. The weapons these <!--ERRTAG-RE-89928-->men used<!--/ERRTAG-RE-89928--> are old and pitted with rust and obviously acquired, like the rest of their booty, from graves and tombs. A search of the bodies reveals 27 Gold Crowns, a Bottle of <!--ERRTAG-RE-90151-->Wine, and a Mirror<!--/ERRTAG-RE-90151-->. You may take any of these items before leaving the churchyard.</p>
        <choice idref="sect191"><link-text>Turn to 191</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The sun has set by the time you reach the east gate. The red-coated guards offer no challenge, and you pass into the wide streets of this magnificent city, to arrive eventually at a quadrangle. A pillar of red stone indicates the names of the streets that lead away from the square.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect79">If you wish to go north into Helm Way, <link-text>turn to 79</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect79">If you wish to go north into Helin Way, <link-text>turn to 79</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect135">If you wish to go west into Coachcourse, <link-text>turn to 135</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect147">If you wish to go south into Flute Street, <link-text>turn to 147</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect238">If you decide to go east, along the street down which you have just ridden, <link-text>turn to 238</link-text>.</choice>
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-       <p>The shop is filled with a fascinating collection of stuffed creatures, each one in a life-like pose and displayed in a realistic setting. A two-headed wolf stands guard at the entrance to a cave, a baknar lies on a snowy ledge and a desert ganthi drinks its fill from a sculptured oasis of sandstone and toa trees.</p>
+       <p>The shop is filled with a fascinating collection of stuffed creatures, each one in a life-like pose and displayed in a realistic setting. A two-headed wolf stands guard at the entrance to a cave, a baknar lies on a snowy <!--ERRTAG-RE-162270-->ledge, and a desert ganthi<!--/ERRTAG-RE-162270--> drinks its fill from a sculptured oasis of sandstone and toa trees.</p>
        <p>You are examining the beautifully preserved head of an itikar when you hear a soft, cultivated voice behind you.</p>
        <p><quote>Good evening, sir. Welcome to my establishment.</quote></p>
        <p>A tall, aristocratic man dressed in a richly embroidered robe steps forward and bows. He is clearly impressed by your interest in his work and offers to conduct you on a brief tour of his shop.</p>
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-       <p>The city is choked with people: mercenaries from the north and west, weapon merchants from the east and ragged refugees from the war-torn south. The captain orders his men to sleep aboard the <cite>Kazonara</cite> this night, forbidding them to go ashore, for Prince Balonn of Rioma and his mercenary knights are encamped inside the city wall. A bitter and long-standing rivalry exists between the two companies, and the captain wisely wishes to avoid any confrontation.</p>
+       <p>The city is choked with people: mercenaries from the north and west, weapon merchants from the <!--ERRTAG-RE-164633-->east, and ragged refugees<!--/ERRTAG-RE-164633--> from the war-torn south. The captain orders his men to sleep aboard the <cite>Kazonara</cite> this night, forbidding them to go ashore, for Prince Balonn of Rioma and his mercenary knights are encamped inside the city wall. A bitter and long-standing rivalry exists between the two companies, and the captain wisely wishes to avoid any confrontation.</p>
        <p>Rumour has it that a number of the Stornlands<ch.apos/> most powerful princes are gathered in Rhem to plot the defeat of the Slovians. However, the captain believes it is more likely that the robber-barons are conspiring against each other to steal the riches of Tekaro for themselves.</p>
        <p>You set sail at first light, bidding farewell to the slender twin-towers of the Rhem citadel, which overshadows the city quay. The Storn flows southwards through steep-sided fields of vines, arranged in endless straight rows like the waves of a green sea. The weather is warm, and you spend the day on deck watching the traffic of refugees heading north along a highway and the strange gigantic toads, the sloats, at work, pulling riverboats and barges upstream.</p>
        <p>It is late afternoon when you sight the town of Eula in the distance. You saddle your horse and shoulder your equipment as the <cite>Kazonara</cite> berths at the town<ch.apos/>s wooden pier.</p>
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-       <p>The door clicks shut behind you. It takes a few seconds for your eyes to grow accustomed to the dimly lit interior, but the room appears to be the antechamber of a larger hall. Following the faint sound of voices, you pass through an archway, along a corridor and into the main hall. Gathered about a circular table of gleaming steel, a group of elderly men are poring over books, star charts and astral maps and engrossed in discussion. Globes of blue-white fire hang motionless in the air above them to illuminate their work. The old men do not see you until you are close to their steel table. Their reaction to your sudden appearance is astonishing<ch.emdash/>they look as though they have seen a ghost. There are yelps of shock and startled expressions; sweat forms on their brows. The sight is too much for one old man, who swoons and faints, falling limply across his books and maps. Only one man remains calm and collected.</p>
+       <p>The door clicks shut behind you. It takes a few seconds for your eyes to grow accustomed to the dimly lit interior, but the room appears to be the antechamber of a larger hall. Following the faint sound of voices, you pass through an archway, along a <!--ERRTAG-RE-169326-->corridor, and into<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169326--> the main hall. Gathered about a circular table of gleaming steel, a group of elderly men are poring over books, star <!--ERRTAG-RE-169514-->charts, and astral maps<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169514--><!--ERRTAG-RE-169576-->, engrossed<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169576--> in discussion. Globes of blue-white fire hang motionless in the air above them to illuminate their work. The old men do not see you until you are close to their steel table. Their reaction to your sudden appearance is astonishing<ch.emdash/>they look as though they have seen a ghost. There are yelps of shock and startled expressions; sweat forms on their brows. The sight is too much for one old man, who swoons and faints, falling limply across his books and maps. Only one man remains calm and collected.</p>
 
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-       <p>You ride between ranks of carved stone idols, whose mouths hold flickering torches, which illuminate this broad avenue. Mercenaries of all races and nationalities pack the street, talking, boasting or simply dozing in the shadows. At the end of the street, you arrive at a junction where a woman in filthy clothes sits nursing a crying child. As you pass, she holds out a grimy hand and begs for Gold Crowns to feed her hungry baby.</p>
+       <p>You ride between ranks of carved stone idols, whose mouths hold flickering torches, which illuminate this broad avenue. Mercenaries of all races and nationalities pack the street, talking, <!--ERRTAG-RE-178899-->boasting, or simply dozing<!--/ERRTAG-RE-178899--> in the shadows. At the end of the street, you arrive at a junction where a woman in filthy clothes sits nursing a crying child. As you pass, she holds out a grimy hand and begs for Gold Crowns to feed her hungry baby.</p>
 
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        <p>Cyrilus offers to stay and look after the horses while you take part in the contest. He says that archery holds no interest for him, but you suspect this is just an excuse to take an afternoon nap. You hand him the reins of your horse and hurry to join a line of men waiting to enter the tournament field.</p>
-       <p>The event reminds you of a Sommlending village pageant and the jugglers, the dancers and the numerous sideshows all add to the festive spirit. Eventually, you reach the gate where a cheerful old lady is collecting the 2 Gold Crowns entrance fee. You hand over your Crowns (remember to mark these off on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>) and enter a large tent where the other competitors are stringing their bows.</p>
+       <p>The event reminds you of a Sommlending village pageant and the jugglers, the <!--ERRTAG-RE-185152-->dancers, and the numerous sideshows<!--/ERRTAG-RE-185152--> all add to the festive spirit. Eventually, you reach the gate where a cheerful old lady is collecting the 2 Gold Crowns entrance fee. You hand over your Crowns (remember to mark these off on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>) and enter a large tent where the other competitors are stringing their bows.</p>
        <choice idref="sect340">If <!--ERRTAG-RE-183874-->you have a Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-183874-->, <link-text>turn to 340</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect18">If you <!--ERRTAG-RE-184019-->do not have a Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-184019-->, <link-text>turn to 18</link-text>.</choice>
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        <p>The dormitory is a long, narrow, low-ceilinged hall at the rear of the tavern, full of snoring mercenaries and the smell of stale sweat. You pick a straw mattress next to a window, braving the cold draught whipping through its shattered pane; at least this carries away the foul air.</p>
-       <p>In the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour over the drab dormitory. You watch as the star slowly disappears before settling down once more to your much needed rest. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome clang of the dormitory bell fills your ears.</p>
+       <p>In the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour over the drab dormitory. You watch as the star slowly disappears before settling down once more to your much needed rest. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome <onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia> of the dormitory bell fills your ears.</p>
 
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        <p><quote>All awake! All awake! A new day dawns, my fine brave lads!</quote> The voice of the tavern-keeper is echoed by the groans of a hundred bleary-eyed soldiers, as they drag themselves coughing and wheezing from their beds.</p>
-       <p>You dress, gather your equipment and collect your horse from the stable. However, it is not until you are studying the route to Brass Street that you discover that an item is missing from your Backpack; it was stolen during the night. Erase one Backpack Item of your choice from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before setting off for Brass Street.</p>
+       <p>You dress, gather your <!--ERRTAG-RE-188821-->equipment, and collect<!--/ERRTAG-RE-188821--> your horse from the stable. However, it is not until you are studying the route to Brass Street that you discover that an item is missing from your Backpack; it was stolen during the night. Erase one Backpack Item of your choice from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before setting off for Brass Street.</p>
        <choice idref="sect300"><link-text>Turn to 300</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2971,7 +2977,7 @@
        </combat>
        <p>To break open the door, you should follow the normal combat rules. Any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points that you lose during this <quote>combat</quote> represent the fatigue you suffer as you hack and batter the door.</p>
        <choice idref="sect339">If you wish to cease <quote>combat</quote> at any time and continue along the sewer, <link-text>turn to 339</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect200">If you reduce the door<ch.apos/>s Resistance (<typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>) to 0, <link-text>turn to 200</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect200">If you reduce the door<ch.apos/>s RESISTANCE (<typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>) to 0, <link-text>turn to 200</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -2995,8 +3001,8 @@
       <data>
        <p>The passage leads to a vaulted cellar, as cold and as silent as a tomb. Gwynian talks with his brothers who then hurry off towards a distant portal. As they disappear into the dark, he returns to your side, his face sombre but composed.</p>
        <p><quote>The Lorestone of Varetta is hidden in the crypt of the cathedral of Tekaro. This key will unlock the tomb in which it lies.</quote> He produces a Silver Key from his sleeve and gives it to you.</p>
-       <p><quote>My brothers will provide a swift horse for your journey. When the observatory clock strikes midnight, enter the portal and follow the passage to the end. It passes beneath the city wall, and your horse will be waiting where the passage comes to the surface. You are welcome to take any Items you require from this cellar that may be of use to you on your quest. May the gods protect you, Lone Wolf.</quote> You nod your thanks and watch as Gwynian disappears into the portal.</p>
-       <p>The cellar is well stocked with provisions and you find the following Items that could be of use on your journey to Tekaro:</p>
+       <p><quote>My brothers will provide a swift horse for your journey. When the observatory clock strikes midnight, enter the portal and follow the passage to the end. It passes beneath the city wall, and your horse will be waiting where the passage comes to the surface. You are welcome to take any <!--ERRTAG-RA-202349-->items<!--/ERRTAG-RA-202349--> you require from this cellar that may be of use to you on your quest. May the gods protect you, Lone Wolf.</quote> You nod your thanks and watch as Gwynian disappears into the portal.</p>
+       <p>The cellar is well stocked with provisions and you find the following <!--ERRTAG-RA-202349-->items<!--/ERRTAG-RA-202349--> that could be of use on your journey to Tekaro:</p>
        <ul>
         <li>Quarterstaff</li>
         <li>Enough food for 3 Meals</li>
@@ -3005,7 +3011,7 @@
         <li>Rope</li>
         <li>Short Sword</li>
        </ul>
-       <p>Together with the Silver Key that Gwynian gave you (mark this as a Special Item that you keep in your pocket), you collect together all the Items you wish to keep and settle down for the long wait till midnight.</p>
+       <p>Together with the Silver Key that Gwynian gave you (mark this as a Special Item that you keep in your pocket), you collect together all the <!--ERRTAG-RA-202349-->items<!--/ERRTAG-RA-202349--> you wish to keep and settle down for the long wait till midnight.</p>
        <choice idref="sect175"><link-text>Turn to 175</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -3164,7 +3170,7 @@
       <data>
        <p>It is nearly dark when you catch sight of a tavern on the road ahead. Two guttering torches set into rusty brackets illuminate the sign nailed above the door:</p>
        <signpost>THE HALFWAY INN</signpost>
-       <p>You recognize the name of the tavern that Cyrilus spoke of this morning, and it grieves you that he is not here to accompany you. Distant thunder rumbles through the hills as you stable your horse and enter the welcoming warmth of the taproom. The tavern is alive with the chatter of merchants, the clink of glasses and the crackle of a blazing fire. The centre of the room is dominated by a small stage on which a conjurer is performing his tricks to the delight of the customers.</p>
+       <p>You recognize the name of the tavern that Cyrilus spoke of this morning, and it grieves you that he is not here to accompany you. Distant thunder rumbles through the hills as you stable your horse and enter the welcoming warmth of the taproom. The tavern is alive with the chatter of merchants, the clink of <!--ERRTAG-RE-213449-->glasses, and the crackle<!--/ERRTAG-RE-213449--> of a blazing fire. The centre of the room is dominated by a small stage on which a conjurer is performing his tricks to the delight of the customers.</p>
        <choice idref="sect199">If you wish to stand and watch the conjurer, <link-text>turn to 199</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect253">If you wish to enquire about a room for the night, <link-text>turn to 253</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -3609,7 +3615,7 @@
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       <data>
-       <p>The room is small, shabby and bare except for the battered straw mattress and threadbare carpet covering the floor. You lock the door and settle down to sleep, using your Backpack as a pillow and your cloak as a blanket. In the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour across your drab surroundings. You watch the star as it slowly disappears before settling down once more to your much needed rest. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome clang of the tavern bell fills your ears.</p>
+       <p>The room is small, <!--ERRTAG-RE-241554-->shabby, and bare<!--/ERRTAG-RE-241554--> except for the battered straw mattress and threadbare carpet covering the floor. You lock the door and settle down to sleep, using your Backpack as a pillow and your cloak as a blanket. In the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour across your drab surroundings. You watch the star as it slowly disappears before settling down once more to your much needed rest. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome <onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia> of the tavern bell fills your ears.</p>
 
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-       <p><quote>All awake, all awake! A new day dawns my fine brave lads!</quote> As the voice of the tavern-keeper echoes through the inn, you dress, gather your equipment and then collect your horse from the stable.</p>
+       <p><quote>All awake, all awake! A new day dawns my fine brave lads!</quote> As the voice of the tavern-keeper echoes through the inn, you dress, gather your <!--ERRTAG-RE-242458-->equipment, and then collect<!--/ERRTAG-RE-242458--> your horse from the stable.</p>
        <p>Your rest restores 1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point. Make the necessary change to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> before setting off on your search for Brass Street.</p>
        <choice idref="sect300"><link-text>Turn to 300</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -3821,7 +3827,7 @@
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       <data>
-       <p>You concentrate all your powers of Curing, transmitting the warmth created by your Magnakai skill through your hands into the shattered body of the magician. His frail shoulders tremble as he forces himself to whisper once more: <quote>Brass street<ch.ellips/> Varetta<ch.ellips/> find Gwynian the sage<ch.ellips/> he will help<ch.ellips/> help your quest<ch.emdash/></quote></p>
+       <p>You concentrate all your powers of Curing, transmitting the warmth created by your Magnakai skill through your hands into the shattered body of the magician. His frail shoulders tremble as he forces himself to whisper once more: <quote><!--ERRTAG-RE-255934-->Brass Street<!--/ERRTAG-RE-255934--><ch.ellips/> Varetta<ch.ellips/> find Gwynian the sage<ch.ellips/> he will help<ch.ellips/> help your quest<ch.emdash/></quote></p>
        <choice idref="sect46"><link-text>Turn to 46</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -3855,8 +3861,8 @@
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       <data>
-       <p>Suddenly, there is a mighty crash as the hall door is slammed shut. Into the tavern strides a black-browed young lordling, wearing a flamboyant costume of ebony and gold. He makes ceremonious display of removing his velvet cloak and pompously demands food and wine, and it takes three serving girls and the innkeeper to see to his wishes. His manner is so insulting that you are not surprised to see the many scars that disfigure his young face. He must be continually provoking fights and duels.</p>
-       <p>The lordling chooses to seat himself at a table already occupied by a small, thin, inoffensive old man. Within seconds there is a thunderous outburst of foul language. The lordling grabs the old man by the throat, lifts him one-handedly from his seat and hurls him to the floor. <quote>You snivelling toad, how dare you sit with me!</quote> he bellows.</p>
+       <p>Suddenly, there is a mighty crash as the hall door is slammed shut. Into the tavern strides a black-browed young lordling, wearing a flamboyant costume of ebony and gold. He <!--ERRTAG-RE-257702-->makes a ceremonious display<!--/ERRTAG-RE-257702--> of removing his velvet cloak and pompously demands food and wine, and it takes three serving girls and the innkeeper to see to his wishes. His manner is so insulting that you are not surprised to see the many scars that disfigure his young face. He must be continually provoking fights and duels.</p>
+       <p>The lordling chooses to seat himself at a table already occupied by a small, thin, inoffensive old man. Within seconds there is a thunderous outburst of foul language. The lordling grabs the old man by the throat, lifts him one-handedly from his <!--ERRTAG-RE-258323-->seat, and hurls<!--/ERRTAG-RE-258323--> him to the floor. <quote>You snivelling toad, how dare you sit with me!</quote> he bellows.</p>
 
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        <p>The room is a disappointment. For five Gold Crowns you were expecting some degree of luxury, but the small and shabby accommodation you find leaves much to be desired. Steam rising from an open-topped barrel in a corner of the room clouds the air. At first you think it must be some form of heating, until you discover it is full of soapy water and realize that this is, in fact, your hot bath. The meagre luxuries of Varetta do not come cheaply.</p>
-       <p>You bathe before settling down to a good night<ch.apos/>s rest, but in the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour across your drab room. You watch as the star slowly fades and then settle down to sleep once more. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome clang of the tavern bell fills your ears.</p>
+       <p>You bathe before settling down to a good night<ch.apos/>s rest, but in the middle of the night you are woken by a bright light. A shooting star of sun-like brilliance arcs over the city, shedding a rainbow of colour across your drab room. You watch as the star slowly fades and then settle down to sleep once more. It seems as if you have only just closed your eyes when the loud and loathsome <onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia> of the tavern bell fills your ears.</p>
 
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        <p><quote>Looks as like y<ch.apos/>made it here jus<ch.apos/> in time,</quote> says the cheerful innkeeper, pointing to a rain-streaked window pane. <quote>It<ch.apos/>s going<ch.apos/> t<ch.apos/>be a rough night t<ch.apos/>night, no mistakin<ch.apos/>.</quote></p>
-       <p>You discover that a room for the night costs 2 Gold Crowns, plus 1 Gold Crown for your horse<ch.apos/>s keep. A Meal of black bread and hard-boiled eggs will cost you another Gold Crown, unless you choose to eat a Meal from your Backpack: you must in any case eat a Meal now or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>You discover that a room for the night costs 2 Gold Crowns, plus 1 Gold Crown for your horse<ch.apos/>s keep. A <!--ERRTAG-RE-293172-->meal of black bread<!--/ERRTAG-RE-293172--> and hard-boiled eggs will cost you another Gold Crown, unless you choose to eat a Meal from your Backpack: you must in any case eat a Meal now or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <choice idref="sect35">If you wish to pay the innkeeper for a night<ch.apos/>s lodging, <link-text>turn to 35</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect54">If you do not have enough Gold Crowns to pay for a room, <link-text>turn to 54</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5000,7 +5006,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>The tide of battle has turned in your favour. The pirates came in search of easy plunder, but your furious resistance has broken their nerve. They flee from the decks, scrambling into the longboats to escape. The captain follows them, hewing at them with his sword. He cuts his way to the ship<ch.apos/>s rail and grabs the pirate leader by the neck. He rams the man<ch.apos/>s head against the main mast, once, twice, three times, with a rage that splits the timber and the pirate<ch.apos/>s leather-clad skull.</p>
-       <p><quote>Ha!</quote> he cries gleefully, <quote>I<ch.apos/>ve always said the Deldenians have no head for a fight!</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Ha!</quote> he cries <!--ERRTAG-RE-335631-->gleefully.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-335631--> <quote>I<ch.apos/>ve always said the Deldenians have no head for a fight!</quote></p>
        <p>The battle ends as swiftly as it began, with the surviving pirates melting away like phantoms into the fog. There are few casualties amongst the mercenaries, but the boat<ch.apos/>s crew have been decimated. The pirate berserkers trapped them below decks and slaughtered them<ch.emdash/>only one escaped their murderous blades.</p>
        <p>The captain takes command, marshalling repairs and overseeing the burial of the dead. As the bodies sink beneath the dark waters, the <cite>Kazonara</cite> emerges from the mist to the welcoming sight of Luyen.</p>
        <choice idref="sect19"><link-text>Turn to 19</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5055,7 +5061,7 @@
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-       <p>At the centre of the city, you cross a square paved with crystal slabs and pass beneath an archway of polished green stone. Stately halls and public buildings give way to dust-worn shops and a park full of glistening flowers with huge leaves of red, gold and pink. Beyond the park, a street paved with white gravel leads to a fortified tower, the tallest in the city. It is the Tower of the King and marks the entrance to Brass Street.</p>
+       <p>At the centre of the city, you cross a square paved with crystal slabs and pass beneath an archway of polished green stone. Stately halls and public buildings give way to dust-worn shops and a park full of glistening flowers with huge leaves of red, <!--ERRTAG-RE-339835-->gold, and pink<!--/ERRTAG-RE-339835-->. Beyond the park, a street paved with white gravel leads to a fortified tower, the tallest in the city. It is the Tower of the King and marks the entrance to Brass Street.</p>
        <p>Turning into Brass Street, the sound of bubbling water and quiet chanting drifts towards you on the still air. Old men in brown robes, their heads covered by hoods, glide silently across the white gravelled path. You ride under an archway and enter the enclosed courtyard of a grand building, a hall of learning. Suddenly, a tingle runs the length of your spine as you sense you are close to your goal.</p>
        <p>At the door to the hall, there is a sign that indicates the location of three chambers: the observatory, the library and the temple.</p>
        <choice idref="sect127">If you wish to investigate the observatory, <link-text>turn to 127</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5071,7 +5077,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>With the speed and grace of movement that marks you as a Kai Master, you load, take aim and fire. Your <!--ERRTAG-RE-337127-->Arrow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-337127--> pierces the lordling<ch.apos/>s forearm as his sword descends, causing the blow to splinter stone, not skull. He utters a shrill cry and spins backwards, cradling his wounded arm as he falls.</p>
-       <p><quote>Curse you, scum!</quote> he shrieks, <quote>I am Roark, highborn of Amory. I shall have your life for this<ch.emdash/>mark my words!</quote></p>
+       <p><quote>Curse you, scum!</quote> he <!--ERRTAG-RE-341531-->shrieks.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-341531--> <quote>I am Roark, highborn of Amory. I shall have your life for this<ch.emdash/>mark my words!</quote></p>
        <p>Trembling with pain and fury, he staggers to his feet and demands his sword and cloak from the innkeeper before stumbling into the night with a welter of threats and curses.</p>
        <choice idref="sect281"><link-text>Turn to 281</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5603,7 +5609,7 @@
 
        <p>You wake an hour after dawn and peer out of the circular porthole at the shadowy river bank. Drizzle obscures all detail and the sky is tinged with grey. As day approaches, the river mist grows thicker and whiter and you go up on deck. The captain stands alone at the rail, the shoulders of his leather cloak soaked by the cold drizzle. He nods a welcome and points to the Cener Mountains now hidden in the mist.</p>
        <p><quote>This foul weather robs us of landmarks, but by my reckoning we should be in Luyen by noon.</quote> You stare through the grey, damp air and pull your cloak closely around your shoulders.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect131">If you have completed the Lore-circle of Solaris (that is, you possess the Magnakai Disciplines of Invisibility, Huntmastery and Pathsmanship), <link-text>turn to 131</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect131">If you have completed the Lore-circle of Solaris (that is, you possess the Magnakai Disciplines of Invisibility, <!--ERRTAG-RE-377263-->Huntmastery, and Pathsmanship<!--/ERRTAG-RE-377263-->), <link-text>turn to 131</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect44">If you have not completed this Lore-circle, <link-text>turn to 44</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5615,7 +5621,7 @@
 
       <data>
        <p>The women smile as you dismount and approach the shrine.</p>
-       <p><quote>Welcome brave sir, welcome to the Shrine of the Warrior. You come in search of our sacred crop, do you not?</quote> says a rosy-cheeked matron as she dusts the leafy shrubs with a square of silk.</p>
+       <p><quote><!--ERRTAG-RE-377734-->Welcome, brave sir. Welcome<!--/ERRTAG-RE-377734--> to the Shrine of the Warrior. You come in search of our sacred crop, do you not?</quote> says a rosy-cheeked matron as she dusts the leafy shrubs with a square of silk.</p>
        <p><quote>The fruit of our alether plant will give you strength in battle,</quote> says another and offers you a handful of the small orange berries.</p>
        <choice idref="sect123">If you wish to purchase some Alether Berries, <link-text>turn to 123</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect100">If you wish to decline her offer, remount your horse and leave the village, <link-text>turn to 100</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5674,7 +5680,7 @@
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       <data>
-       <p>Seated near to the fireplace are three surly-faced drinkers, their tunics stained with the grime of travel. Each wear a red badge upon their breast, embroidered with the crossed swords of Varetta. You sense that they are soldiers-of-fortune, probably in the pay of a captain who comes from the same city.</p>
+       <p>Seated near to the fireplace are three surly-faced drinkers, their tunics stained with the grime of travel. <!--ERRTAG-RE-380878-->Each wears<!--/ERRTAG-RE-380878--> a red badge upon their breast, embroidered with the crossed swords of Varetta. You sense that they are soldiers-of-fortune, probably in the pay of a captain who comes from the same city.</p>
        <choice idref="sect125">If you wish to join the men and perhaps find out more about Varetta, <link-text>turn to 125</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect232">If you decide not to approach them and wish to go to the bar and ask about a room for the night, <link-text>turn to 232</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect172">If you would rather take a seat and order some food, <link-text>turn to 172</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -6285,9 +6291,9 @@
 
        <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>fall to zero</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-8921-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-8921-ITEM--></p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>scent, and</quote> with <quote>scent and</quote>, <quote>points, and</quote> with <quote>points and</quote>, and <quote>danger, or</quote> with <quote>danger or</quote>. Removed all extraneous spaces between a number and its sign (e.g. replaced <quote>+ 3</quote> with <quote>+3</quote>). Set the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>scent, and</quote> with <quote>scent and</quote>, <quote>points, and</quote> with <quote>points and</quote>, and <quote>danger, or</quote> with <quote>danger or</quote>. Removed all extraneous spaces between a number and its sign (e.g. replaced <quote>+ 3</quote> with <quote>+3</quote>). Set the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-14622-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-14622-ITEM--></p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>, <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>, <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>, and <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, and <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>, <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>, <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>, and <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>, <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, and <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RA-23219-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-23219-ITEM--></p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>to evade combat, but</quote> with <quote>to evade combat but</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
@@ -6295,9 +6301,9 @@
 
        <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Magnakai Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>adventures and</quote> with <quote>adventures, and</quote>. Removed <quote> at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fryelund forest</quote> with <quote>Fryelund Forest</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Fryelund forest</quote> with <quote>Fryelund Forest</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RA-45488-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>chasm of doom</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Doom</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-45488-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>mist but</quote> with <quote>mist, but</quote> and <quote>highway and</quote> with <quote>highway, and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-50994-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-50994-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>mist but</quote> with <quote>mist, but</quote> and <quote>highway and</quote> with <quote>highway, and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-50994-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-50994-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-52141-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Salony and Salony</quote> with <quote>Salony, and Salony</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-52141-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>table, and</quote> with <quote>table and</quote> and <quote>pulled and</quote> with <quote>pulled, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Reworded the sentence <quote>(Mark this as a Special Item<ch.ellips/>)</quote> to match the wording from <a idref="sect16">section 16</a>.  The original wording is misleading. Replaced <quote>you but</quote> with <quote>you, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Capitalized each occurrence of the item <quote>Ticket</quote>. Replaced <quote>river boat</quote> with <quote>riverboat</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-57316-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-57316-ITEM--></p>
@@ -6307,8 +6313,8 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>invocation and</quote> with <quote>invocation, and</quote>, <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>, and <quote>men but, as</quote> with <quote>men, but as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>manouevre</quote> with <quote>manoeuvre</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>split or</quote> with <quote>split nor</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>provisions and, as</quote> with <quote>provisions, and as</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>split or</quote> with <quote>split nor</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.<!--ERRTAG-RE-67077-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>split nor unstrung</quote> with <quote>split, nor unstrung</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-67077-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>provisions and, as</quote> with <quote>provisions, and as</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-67973-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>houses and fortified perimeter walls</quote> with <quote>houses, and fortified perimeter walls</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-67973-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-68626-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>powders and forests of roots</quote> with <quote>powders, and forests of roots</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68626-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect20">20</a>) Replaced <quote>Cyrilus<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Cyrilus<ch.apos/></quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-68473-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-68473-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>vanished: the</quote> with <quote>vanished; the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Replaced <quote>pikeheads</quote> with <quote>pike heads</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
@@ -6325,7 +6331,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>toll and</quote> with <quote>toll, and</quote> and <quote>rump, and</quote> with <quote>rump and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>irrisistible</quote> with <quote>irresistible</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Varettian hills</quote> with <quote>Varettian Hills</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>grave-robber</quote> with <quote>grave robber</quote> and <quote>grave-robbers<ch.apos/></quote> with <quote>grave robbers<ch.apos/></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect40">40</a>) Replaced <quote>grave-robber</quote> with <quote>grave robber</quote> and <quote>grave-robbers<ch.apos/></quote> with <quote>grave robbers<ch.apos/></quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-89928-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>men have used</quote> with <quote>men used</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-89928-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-90151-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Wine and a Mirror</quote> with <quote>Wine, and a Mirror</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-90151-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect41">41</a>) Replaced <quote>nature but</quote> with <quote>nature, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>side and</quote> with <quote>side, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
@@ -6374,23 +6380,23 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Replaced <quote>sunset you</quote> with <quote>sunset, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>forest of Eula</quote> with <quote>Forest of Eula</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>Rhem and</quote> with <quote>Rhem, and</quote> and <quote>found but</quote> with <quote>found, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-trees</quote> with <quote>toa-trees</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-trees</quote> with <quote>toa-trees</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-162270-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>ledge and a desert ganthi</quote> with <quote>ledge, and a desert ganthi</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-162270-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>fight they</quote> with <quote>fight, they</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>Stornland<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Stornlands<ch.apos/></quote>, <quote>Sloats</quote> with <quote>sloats</quote>, <quote>companies and</quote> with <quote>companies, and</quote>, <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>, <quote>highway, and</quote> with <quote>highway and</quote>, and <quote>river-boat</quote> with <quote>riverboat</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect124">124</a>) Replaced <quote>Stornland<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Stornlands<ch.apos/></quote>, <quote>Sloats</quote> with <quote>sloats</quote>, <quote>companies and</quote> with <quote>companies, and</quote>, <quote>warm and</quote> with <quote>warm, and</quote>, <quote>highway, and</quote> with <quote>highway and</quote>, and <quote>river-boat</quote> with <quote>riverboat</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-164633-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>east and ragged refugees</quote> with <quote>east, and ragged refugees</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-164633-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>them, and</quote> with <quote>them and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>captain and</quote> with <quote>captain, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>interior but</quote> with <quote>interior, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect127">127</a>) Replaced <quote>interior but</quote> with <quote>interior, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.<!--ERRTAG-RE-169326-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>corridor and into</quote> with <quote>corridor, and into</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169326-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-169514-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>charts and astral maps</quote> with <quote>charts, and astral maps</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169514-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-169576-ITEM--> Replaced <quote> and engrossed</quote> with <quote>, engrossed</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-169576-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>lair and</quote> with <quote>lair, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>fatigue and</quote> with <quote>fatigue, and</quote> and <quote>body and</quote> with <quote>body, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>wheel but</quote> with <quote>wheel, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>small flat-faced</quote> with <quote>small, flat-faced</quote> and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>birdsong</quote> with <quote>bird song</quote>, <quote>Cyrilus, <ch.apos/>The</quote> with <quote>Cyrilus. <ch.apos/>The</quote>, <quote>semi-circle</quote> with <quote>semicircle</quote>, and <quote>month and</quote> with <quote>month, and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>pass she</quote> with <quote>pass, she</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>pass she</quote> with <quote>pass, she</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-178899-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>boasting or simply dozing</quote> with <quote>boasting, or simply dozing</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-178899-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>toa-tree</quote> with <quote>toa-tree</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>Instictively</quote> with <quote>Instinctively</quote> and <quote>free but</quote> with <quote>free, but</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-180365-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-180365-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect139">139</a>) Replaced <quote>axe</quote> with <quote>Axe</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>Chart), and</quote> with <quote>Chart) and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-183874-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>you have a bow</quote> with <quote>you have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-183874-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-184019-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>do not have a bow</quote> with <quote>do not have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-184019-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>Chart), and</quote> with <quote>Chart) and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-183874-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>you have a bow</quote> with <quote>you have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-183874-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-184019-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>do not have a bow</quote> with <quote>do not have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-184019-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-185152-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>dancers and the numerous sideshows</quote> with <quote>dancers, and the numerous sideshows</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-185152-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-188821-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>equipment and collect</quote> with <quote>equipment, and collect</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-188821-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>behind and</quote> with <quote>behind, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect147">147</a>) Replaced <quote>street and</quote> with <quote>street, and</quote> and <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect148">148</a>) Replaced <quote>Items, or</quote> with <quote>Items or</quote>.</p>
@@ -6398,8 +6404,8 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Moved the choice regarding having been to the temple of Maaken into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-195482-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>you have a bow</quote> with <quote>you have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-195482-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-195627-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>do not have a bow</quote> with <quote>do not have a Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-195627-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect155">155</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-196448-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-196448-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>resistance</quote> with <quote>Resistance</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>resistance</quote> with <quote>RESISTANCE</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect158">158</a>) Replaced <quote>wall and</quote> with <quote>wall, and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RA-202349-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-202349-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect159">159</a>) Replaced <quote>Varetian</quote> with <quote>Varettian</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-202015-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-202015-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>unprepared and</quote> with <quote>unprepared, and</quote>, <quote>face, somersaulting</quote> with <quote>face somersaulting</quote>, and <quote>again you</quote> with <quote>again, you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced <quote>crowd and</quote> with <quote>crowd, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>belt pouch</quote> with <quote>Belt Pouch</quote>.</p>
@@ -6408,6 +6414,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect165">121</a>) Replaced <quote>guild of city criers</quote> with <quote>Guild of City Criers</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>wagon but</quote> with <quote>wagon, but</quote> and <quote>bruised but</quote> with <quote>bruised, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect167">167</a>) Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>.</p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-213449-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>glasses and the crackle</quote> with <quote>glasses, and the crackle</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-213449-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>unlocked but</quote> with <quote>unlocked, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-212420-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-212420-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>strength and</quote> with <quote>strength, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6427,7 +6434,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Deleted a period after <quote>He asks</quote> in the last sentence.<!--ERRTAG-RE-236717-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-236717-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>open and, as</quote> with <quote>open, and as</quote>, <quote>chill stale</quote> with <quote>chill, stale</quote>, and <quote>key but</quote> with <quote>key, but</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-238835-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-238835-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-242458-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>equipment and then collect</quote> with <quote>equipment, and then collect</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-242458-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-241554-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>shabby and bare</quote> with <quote>shabby, and bare</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-241554-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced <quote>company and</quote> with <quote>company, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>copse, and</quote> with <quote>copse and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Replaced <quote>face but, forewarned</quote> with <quote>face, but forewarned</quote>.</p>
@@ -6435,8 +6442,9 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>head and, likewise,</quote> with <quote>head, and likewise,</quote>, <quote>company and, as</quote> with <quote>company, and as</quote>, <quote>point and</quote> with <quote>point, and</quote>, and <quote>fighters and</quote> with <quote>fighters, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Helm</quote> with <quote>Helin</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Replaced <quote>northlander</quote> with <quote>Northlander</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>Baknar or Kalkoth</quote> with <quote>baknar or kalkoth</quote>.</p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-255934-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Brass street</quote> with <quote>Brass Street</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-255934-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>stones but</quote> with <quote>stones, but</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>arena for</quote> with <quote>arena, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect219">219</a>) Replaced <quote>arena for</quote> with <quote>arena, for</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.<!--ERRTAG-RE-257702-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>makes ceremonious display</quote> with <quote>makes a ceremonious display</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-257702-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-258323-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>seat and hurls</quote> with <quote>seat, and hurls</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-258323-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>Chart, before</quote> with <quote>Chart before</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect224">224</a>) Replaced <quote>aid but</quote> with <quote>aid, but</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-261761-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-261761-ITEM--></p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-264174-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-264174-ITEM--></p>
@@ -6453,6 +6461,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>any, and</quote> with <quote>any and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>rest but</quote> with <quote>rest, but</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RA-289522-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-289522-ITEM--></p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-293172-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Meal of black bread</quote> with <quote>meal of black bread</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-293172-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect255">255</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>hard unyielding</quote> with <quote>hard, unyielding</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-294925-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-294925-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
@@ -6484,10 +6493,10 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect294">294</a>) Switched the section numbers given for the two choices to be consistent with the choices in <a idref="sect151">Section 151</a> and the text of <a idref="sect67">Sections 67</a> and <a idref="sect108">108</a>. Replaced <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote> and <quote>forever but</quote> with <quote>forever, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>charge but</quote> with <quote>charge, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>target but</quote> with <quote>target, but</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-330409-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-330409-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-332122-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-332122-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>plunder but</quote> with <quote>plunder, but</quote> and <quote>mercenaries but</quote> with <quote>mercenaries, but</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>plunder but</quote> with <quote>plunder, but</quote> and <quote>mercenaries but</quote> with <quote>mercenaries, but</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-335631-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>gleefully,</quote> with <quote>gleefully.</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-335631-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>you but</quote> with <quote>you, but</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>city you</quote> with <quote>city, you</quote> and <quote>hall there</quote> with <quote>hall, there</quote>.</p>
-<p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-337127-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-337127-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>city you</quote> with <quote>city, you</quote> and <quote>hall there</quote> with <quote>hall, there</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-339835-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>gold and pink</quote> with <quote>gold, and pink</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-339835-ITEM--></p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-337127-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-337127-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-341531-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>shrieks,</quote> with <quote>shrieks.</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-341531-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>Varetta, or</quote> with <quote>Varetta or</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RA-338860-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-338860-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
@@ -6514,8 +6523,9 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect338">338</a>) Replaced <quote>surrounded and</quote> with <quote>surrounded, and</quote>, <quote>shortlived</quote> with <quote>short-lived</quote>, and <quote>completely and, as</quote> with <quote>completely, and as</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Kalte Firesphere, a Torch, or a Tinderbox</quote> with <quote>If you possess a Kalte Firesphere or a Torch and a Tinderbox</quote>. A Torch is unusable without a Tinderbox; this parallels wording in sections from future <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books. Replaced <quote>Firesphere, a Torch, or a Tinderbox,</quote> with <quote>Firesphere or a Torch and a Tinderbox,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items</quote> with <quote>items</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect340">340</a>) Replaced <quote>jerkin, enters</quote> with <quote>jerkin enters</quote> and <quote>field are</quote> with <quote>field is</quote>. Replaced <quote>with a bow</quote> with <quote>with Bow</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-372719-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-372719-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Cener mountains</quote> with <quote>Cener Mountains</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>matron, as</quote> with <quote>matron as</quote>, <quote>Alether plant</quote> with <quote>alether plant</quote>, <quote>Alether berries</quote> with <quote>Alether Berries</quote>, and <quote>another, and</quote> with <quote>another and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>Cener mountains</quote> with <quote>Cener Mountains</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-377263-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Huntmastery and Pathsmanship</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery, and Pathsmanship</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-377263-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>matron, as</quote> with <quote>matron as</quote>, <quote>Alether plant</quote> with <quote>alether plant</quote>, <quote>Alether berries</quote> with <quote>Alether Berries</quote>, and <quote>another, and</quote> with <quote>another and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-377734-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Welcome brave sir, welcome</quote> with <quote>Welcome, brave sir. Welcome</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-377734-ITEM--></p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-380878-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Each wear</quote> with <quote>Each wears</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-380878-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>Swords and, as</quote> with <quote>Swords, and as</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect348">348</a>) Replaced <quote>manouevre</quote> with <quote>manoeuvre</quote> and <quote>secure and</quote> with <quote>secure, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>spongy and</quote> with <quote>spongy, and</quote>.</p>