From: Simon Osborne Date: Mon, 16 Jul 2007 20:56:25 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Books 5 and 6 and 15: Minor corrections only X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=64ae0e887283214044f66f1f5970bb74f9dc2aa0;p=project-aon.git Books 5 and 6 and 15: Minor corrections only git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@298 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/05sots.xml b/05sots.xml index 923fd79..7fce861 100755 --- a/05sots.xml +++ b/05sots.xml @@ -3075,7 +3075,7 @@ added a few instances of the tag 199 -

You grasp the frightened guard in a secure head-lock and threaten to break his neck if he does not answer your questions. He immediately promises to tell you everything he knows. He says that the new Zakhan fears that you are an assassin, sent by his enemies in the west. He claims to hate the new Zakhan himself. He is only a simple jailer, he says, and knows nothing more.

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You grasp the frightened guard in a secure head-lock and threaten to break his neck if he does not answer your questions. He immediately promises to tell you everything he knows. He says that the new Zakhan fears that you are an assassin, sent by his enemies in the west. He claims to hate the new Zakhan himself. He is only a simple gaoler, he says, and knows nothing more.

If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, turn to 39. If you do not possess this skill, turn to 9. @@ -6221,7 +6221,8 @@ added a few instances of the tag

(189) Replaced falls, but with falls but and indifference, and with indifference and.

(190) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(195) Replaced bodies and with bodies, and and chest as with chest are as.

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(198) Replaced 7-9 with 7-12.

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(198) Replaced 79 with 712.

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(198) Replaced jailer with gaoler.

(200) Replaced gold, but with gold but.

(202) Replaced gold, and with gold and and street, and with street and. Replaced all occurrences of market-place with marketplace

(203) Replaced Vordak but with Vordak, but and blood, and with blood and.

diff --git a/06tkot.xml b/06tkot.xml index 3e7b9b8..a8a06a8 100755 --- a/06tkot.xml +++ b/06tkot.xml @@ -5464,7 +5464,7 @@ Initial revision

You enter a wide street where black iron lanterns swing above the doors of shops and houses, their oily black smoke staining the walls and adding a pall of gloom to the darkening sky. The street descends towards the River Quarl, where flatboats lie moored at the rich merchant wharfs. Quarlen stands at the most northerly point on the river that can be navigated by boat and barge, and it is here that the river meets the caravan routes to Casiorn and the Lastlands, so ensuring the future of the town.

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At the approach to a wide stone bridge, you see an impressive-looking hostelry, with stables and out-houses. A painted shield hangs above the courtyard gate proudly displaying its name:

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At the approach to a wide stone bridge, you see an impressive-looking hostelry, with stables and outhouses. A painted shield hangs above the courtyard gate proudly displaying its name:

THE BARREL BRIDGE TAVERN

The moment you enter the courtyard, a stableboy appears from nowhere and bids you welcome. He takes charge of your horse and shows you the door to the tavern hall. It is crowded, despite the early hour, and a roaring fire blazes in its great stone hearth. The smell of roasting beef makes your mouth water, reminding you that you have not eaten today.

If you do not have any Gold Crowns, turn to 91. diff --git a/15tdc.xml b/15tdc.xml index 4c517eb..d00d923 100644 --- a/15tdc.xml +++ b/15tdc.xml @@ -2340,7 +2340,7 @@ note: you need at 3 arrows to follow the link to 180

You remove your hand and uncover the proud countenance of King Ulnar V stamped on the face of the coin.

Well done, Prarg. Youve guessed correctly, you say, and press the Gold Crown back into your pouch. Ill stand the first watchyou get some sleep. Weve a long march ahead of us tomorrow and youll need all your strength.

Prarg breaths a sigh of relief, and while he settles himself down to sleep in the relative comfort of the boat, you pull your cloak about you and climb to the top of Bear Rock where you begin your lonely vigil.

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For hours you sit on this windswept boulder, staring out through a curtain of swirling snow at the surrounding timberline. Despite your fatigue you stay alert and your iron discipline pays off when, shortly before midnight, you sense movement at the forests edge. Then your super-keen Kai senses detect an animal scent on the cold air which you recognize immediately: it is Akataz.

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For hours you sit on this windswept boulder, staring out through a curtain of swirling snow at the surrounding timber-line. Despite your fatigue you stay alert and your iron discipline pays off when, shortly before midnight, you sense movement at the forests edge. Then your super-keen Kai senses detect an animal scent on the cold air which you recognize immediately: it is Akataz.

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Prarg is understandably happy to accept your offer to stand the first watch. While he settles himself down to sleep in the relative comfort of the boat, you pull your cloak about you and climb to the top of Bear Rock where you begin your lonely vigil. For hours you sit on this windswept boulder, staring out through a curtain of swirling snow at the surrounding timberline. Despite your fatigue you stay alert and your iron discipline pays off when, shortly before midnight, you sense movement at the forests edge. Then your super-keen Kai senses detect an animal scent on the cold air which you recognize immediately: it is Akataz.

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Prarg is understandably happy to accept your offer to stand the first watch. While he settles himself down to sleep in the relative comfort of the boat, you pull your cloak about you and climb to the top of Bear Rock where you begin your lonely vigil. For hours you sit on this windswept boulder, staring out through a curtain of swirling snow at the surrounding timber-line. Despite your fatigue you stay alert and your iron discipline pays off when, shortly before midnight, you sense movement at the forests edge. Then your super-keen Kai senses detect an animal scent on the cold air which you recognize immediately: it is Akataz.

Turn to 163. @@ -5906,6 +5906,7 @@ note: you need at 3 arrows to follow the link to 180

(111) Replaced arrow with Arrow and bow with Bow. Replaced strike, then with strike; then.

(114) Replaced consumate with consummate.

(115) Replaced animal control with Animal Control.

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(118) Replaced timberline with timber-line.

(118) Replaced on to with onto.

(121) Removed (or higher). Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced wintery with wintry.

(122) Replaced distented with distended.

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(304) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense and backpack with Backpack. Replaced click, then with click; then.

(305) Replaced inate with innate.

(308) Removed the quotation marks and dashes around Sense Evil. Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

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(309) Replaced timberline with timber-line.

(310) Replaced area and, aided with area, and aided and larger, unit with larger unit.

(312) Replaced but, as with but as.

(313) Replaced face and, within with face, and within.