From: Thomas Wolmer <thomas.wolmer@projectaon.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Aug 2005 19:44:15 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Corrected various *ne issues.
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Corrected various *ne issues.


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diff --git a/xml/02tfc.xml b/xml/02tfc.xml
index 4589fd9..910bbc7 100755
--- a/xml/02tfc.xml
+++ b/xml/02tfc.xml
@@ -20,6 +20,9 @@
 $Id$
 
 $Log$
+Revision 1.10  2005/08/14 19:44:15  angantyr
+Corrected various *ne issues.
+
 Revision 1.9  2005/08/12 23:23:51  jonathan.blake
 Minor updates and illustration corrections.
 
@@ -127,13 +130,14 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield
  <meta>
   <title>The Forbidden City</title>
   <creator class="short">Ian Page and Joe Dever</creator>
-  <creator class="medium">Ian Page<!-- WOLM: we are still waiting... <br />Illustrated by Paul Bonner --><br />Edited by Joe Dever</creator>
+  <creator class="medium">Ian Page<br />Illustrated by Paul Bonner<br />Edited by Joe Dever</creator>
   <creator class="long">
    &inclusion.ian.page.bio.gs;
    &inclusion.joe.dever.bio.gs;
+   &inclusion.paul.bonner.bio.gs;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2004</year><month>6</month><day>20</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2005</year><month>08</month><day>14</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the Wizard Grey Star. Your quest is to retrieve the legendary Moonstone and with its power throw down the evil Wytch-king. You must find the Shadow Gate&emdash;doorway to the magic realm where it lies hidden. When the moon is full, the Shadow Gate appears&emdash;in Desolation Valley beyond the Mountains of Morn, where you must dare <!--ERRTAG-RE-6558--><strong>The Forbidden City</strong><!--/ERRTAG-RE-6558-->.</p>
    <p>The Wytch-king will try to track you down. His slaves will dog your every step&emdash;the cruel warriors of Shadaki, the phantom spirit of the Deathgaunt and the dark horror of the demon <!--ERRTAG-RE-6876-->Kleas&aacute;<!--/ERRTAG-RE-6876-->. Only your <!--ERRTAG-RE-6952-->Magical Powers<!--/ERRTAG-RE-6952--> and the might of your Wizard&apos;s Staff can protect you in a terrifying adventure of madness, magic and menace!</p>
@@ -142,9 +146,9 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield
   <description class="publication">
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
-  <rights class="copyrights">Concept copyright &copy; 1985 Joe Dever and Gary Chalk. <br />Text copyright &copy; 1985 Ian Page.</rights>
+  <rights class="copyrights">Concept copyright &copy; 1985 Joe Dever and Gary Chalk. <br />Text copyright &copy; 1985 Ian Page.<br />Illustrations copyright &copy; 1985 Paul Bonner.</rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>Concept copyright &copy; 1985 Joe Dever and Gary Chalk.<br />Text copyright &copy; 1985 Ian Page.<br />Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
+   <p>Concept copyright &copy; 1985 Joe Dever and Gary Chalk.<br />Text copyright &copy; 1985 Ian Page.<br />Illustrations copyright &copy; 1985 Paul Bonner.<br />Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -1638,7 +1642,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield
       <meta><title>81</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>Samu sets the pace, reaching forward with great strides to lead you across the gently undulating plain that lies between Karnali and the mountains of the west. The Belzar Hills on the far side of the river east a shadow across the waters, as though disapproving of your choice of destination.</p>
+       <p>Samu sets the pace, reaching forward with great strides to lead you across the gently undulating plain that lies between Karnali and the mountains of the west. The Belzar Hills on the far side of the river cast a shadow across the waters, as though disapproving of your choice of destination.</p>
        <illustration class="inline">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>