From: Simon Osborne Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 14:35:26 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Books 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11, and 12 updated for consistency (minor issue). X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=8d4fc9afae4f388d40e0f2ad992cc82f8c7d0e73;p=project-aon.git Books 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11, and 12 updated for consistency (minor issue). git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@251 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/05sots.xml b/05sots.xml index f9f0501..40c3590 100755 --- a/05sots.xml +++ b/05sots.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + Revision 1.5 2007/06/30 16:30:03 Simon Osborne Updated to 0.12. Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues. @@ -6045,13 +6048,13 @@ added a few instances of the tag

(5) Replaced half-way with half-way.

(7) Replaced bowstring and with bowstring, and, range and with range, and, and surrounded and with surrounded, and.

(8) Replaced efforts and with efforts, and.

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(12) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(12) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(10) Replaced wire and with wire, and.

(13) Replaced appalling, and with appalling; and.

(17) Replaced subside but with subside, but. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(18) Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains.

(19) Replaced suspiciously, but with suspiciously but.

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(20) Replaced reins, and with reins and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(20) Replaced reins, and with reins and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(24) Replaced market-place with marketplace.

(25) Replaced free but with free, but.

(27) Replaced oil with Oil.

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(49) Replaced climb; and with climb, and, and troops you with troops, you (awkward).

(51) Replaced pain but with pain, but.

(52) Replaced both occurrences of Jailer Keys with Gaolers Keys.

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(54) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(54) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(56) Replaced shot and with shot, and.

(57) Replaced unlocked and with unlocked, and.

(61) Replaced open and with open, and.

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(64) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(64) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(66) Replaced guard, and with guard and.

(67) Replaced deep dark with deep, dark.

(69) Replaced crisscrossed with criss-crossed, free, and with free and, and greedily, and with greedily and.

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(87) Replaced Zakhans, and with Zakhans and.

(88) Replaced overturned and with overturned, and.

(89) Replaced equipment, and with equipment and.

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(90) Replaced advice, and with advice and. Replaced water keeping with water, keeping. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(90) Replaced advice, and with advice and. Replaced water keeping with water, keeping. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(93) Replaced parched and with parched, and.

(95) Replaced swim but with swim, but.

(96) Replaced rib-cage with rib cage.

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(101) Replaced Potion Alether with Potion of Alether.

(102) Replaced both occurrences of Jailer Keys with Gaolers Keys.

(103) Replaced body, and with body and.

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(106) Replaced combat, and with combat and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(106) Replaced combat, and with combat and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(107) Replaced guards with guards.

(109) Replaced market-place with marketplace.

(110) Replaced strike and with strike, and.

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(117) Replaced houses all with houses, all and first floor with first-floor.

(118) Replaced swell and with swell, and.

(122) Replaced Jailer Keys with Gaolers Keys.

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(123) Replaced Break with Break. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(123) Replaced Break with Break. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(124) Replaced hall and with hall, and.

(125) Replaced slippery and with slippery, and.

(126) Moved the Camouflage/Hunting choice into the first position.

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(130) Replaced view and with view, and.

(131) Replaced may, or with may or.

(132) Replaced corridor, and with corridor and. Replaced distance and with distance, and.

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(135) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(135) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(137) Replaced strange luxuriant purple with strange, luxuriant, purple. Moved the Tracking/Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced grass, and with grass and.

(138) Replaced door and with door, and.

(139) Replaced skin, that with skin that.

(140) Replaced leatherbound with leather-bound.

(142) Replaced strange jelly-like with strange, jelly-like and sides and with sides, and.

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(143) Replaced chain-reaction with chain reaction. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(143) Replaced chain-reaction with chain reaction. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(145) Replaced away and with away, and.

(148) Replaced shut and with shut, and.

(151) Replaced place and with place, and.

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(158) Replaced gallery and with gallery, and.

(159) Replaced entrance, but with entrance but and combat, and with combat and.

(160) Replaced construction, and with construction and and Palace, that with Palace that.

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(162) Replaced lungs; and with lungs, and and horrors for with horrors, for. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(162) Replaced lungs; and with lungs, and and horrors for with horrors, for. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(163) Replaced you, and with you and. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(167) Replaced door, and with door and.

(168) Replaced sommersaults with somersaults.

(173) Replaced north-west with northwest.

(175) Replaced Maouk who with Maouk, who and shadows, a dart with shadowsa dart.

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(177) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(177) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(178) Replaced half-way with half-way.

(183) Replaced legs tearing with legs, tearing.

(187) Replaced long curved with long, curved and claws, its with clawsits.

(189) Replaced falls, but with falls but and indifference, and with indifference and.

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(190) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(190) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(195) Replaced bodies and with bodies, and and chest as with chest are as.

(198) Replaced 7-9 with 7-12.

(200) Replaced gold, but with gold but.

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(209) Replaced Drakkarim, and with Drakkarim and.

(211) Replaced wine, and with wine and.

(213) Replaced Vakar mountains with Vakar Mountains.

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(216) Replaced town, and with town and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(216) Replaced town, and with town and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(217) Replaced ring, and with ring and.

(218) Replaced tongues and with tongues, and.

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(223) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(223) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(224) Replaced razor sharp with razor-sharp.

(226) Replaced you, by with you by.

(229) Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains.

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(247) Replaced sky but with sky, but and Main but with Main, but.

(248) Replaced small beady with small, beady. Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch.

(250) Replaced blood and with blood, and.

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(253) Replaced subsides; but with subsides, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(253) Replaced subsides; but with subsides, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(254) Replaced battle-jerkins, pull with battle-jerkins pull and gratitude for with gratitude, for.

(258) Replaced noise, and with noise and, death blow with death-blow, and terror but with terror, but.

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(264) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(264) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(269) Replaced both occurrences of drawbolt with bolt.

(271) Replaced below, but with below but, blood, and with blood and and stiffen and with stiffen, and.

(274) Replaced market place with marketplace.

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(277) Replaced drawbolt with bolt.

(280) Replaced face sending with face, sending.

(282) Replaced However for with However, for.

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(285) Replaced hand, and with hand and and muzzle-first with muzzle first. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(285) Replaced hand, and with hand and and muzzle-first with muzzle first. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(289) Replaced surface and with surface, and and gutteral with guttural. Italicised crack.

(295) Added the sentences, When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold. Your attack is silent and deadly. These are copied from 236. Turn to 236 is now replaced with If you wish to search the guards body, turn to 207. If you decide to ignore the body, hurry into the Itikars pen and turn to 224. This retains the text for the Mind Over Matter option, while fixing the out-of-place wording if you never untied the guards money pouch. (See also the errata for sections 236, 357, and 389.) Perhaps Joe Dever originally intended for there to be a Random Number pick even when you used Mind Over Matter and then made Mind Over Matter an automatic victory against the sentry but he seems to have forgotten to change the wording for the Random Number pick.

(296) Replaced Zakhan, others with Zakhan. Others.

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(303) Replaced behind, and with behind and.

(304) Replaced out but with out, but and battle cry with battle-cry.

(305) Replaced half-way with half-way.

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(306) Replaced obey, and with obey and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(306) Replaced obey, and with obey and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(312) Replaced boomsail with boom-sail.

(315) Replaced collar bone with collarbone.

(316) Replaced surprise, their weapons with surprise; their weapons.

(320) Replaced blood but with blood, but and back-breaking with backbreaking. Replaced Koneshi mountains with Koneshi Mountains.

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(323) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(323) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(326) Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch.

(329) Replaced Drakkarim but with Drakkarim, but.

(328) Replaced market-place with marketplace.

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(336) Replaced craft, is with craft is and forward and with forward, and.

(337) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(342) Replaced half-way with half-way and Jala with jala.

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(343) Replaced behind you but with behind you, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains.

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(343) Replaced behind you but with behind you, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Dahir mountains with Dahir Mountains.

(344) Replaced yellow and with yellow, and and herb, and with herb and.

(345) Replaced hand, and with hand and.

(347) Replaced below but with below, but.

(351) Replaced semi-circle with semicircle.

(352) Replaced place, and with place and.

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(353) Replaced Cryptspawn with Crypt Spawn and fire but with fire, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(353) Replaced Cryptspawn with Crypt Spawn and fire but with fire, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(354) Replaced deck but with deck, but.

(357) Deleted the words forgets about his scattered gold and from the third sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced combat, and with combat and.

(361) Replaced boomsail with boom-sail.

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(370) Replaced stranger, and with stranger and. Replaced falls to zero with falls to zero or below. Replaced points to zero with points to zero or below.

(372) Replaced drawbolt with bolt.

(374) Replaced happening, you with happening; you.

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(375) Replaced blow, and with blow and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(375) Replaced blow, and with blow and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(376) Replaced white-washed with whitewashed.

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(380) Replaced helm but with helm, but and bosun with Bosun. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(380) Replaced helm but with helm, but and bosun with Bosun. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(382) Replaced the choice at the end of this section to match those in Section 288.

(385) Replaced seering with searing.

(389) Deleted the words forgets about his gold and from the second sentence. (See the erratum for section 295.) Replaced pen, combat with pen; combat and combat, and with combat and.

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(394) Replaced madman, as with madman as.

(395) Replaced it, and with it and.

(396) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced spirals stairs with spiral stairs.

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(400) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series.

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(400) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference, top of chart with top of the chart and fall to 0 with falls to 0 or below.

diff --git a/06tkot.xml b/06tkot.xml index 1e49dab..673ef19 100755 --- a/06tkot.xml +++ b/06tkot.xml @@ -15,6 +15,12 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.43 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + +Revision 1.42 2007/02/07 15:18:00 Simon Osborne +Correctly credited Gary Chalk as the map illustrator (copy/paste error). + Revision 1.41 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne Minor period omissions corrected. @@ -5699,7 +5705,7 @@ Initial revision - Brian Williams + Gary Chalk @@ -6246,7 +6252,7 @@ Initial revision

(6) Replaced table, and with table and and pulled and with pulled, and.

(8) Reworded the sentence (Mark this as a Special Item) to match the wording from section 16. The original wording is misleading. Replaced you but with you, but.

(10) Capitalized each occurrence of the item Ticket. Replaced river boat with riverboat.

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(11) Replaced siege works with siege-works. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(11) Replaced siege works with siege-works. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(13) Replaced body and, as with body, and as, presence and with presence, and and you and with you, and.

(13) Replaced spreadeagled with spread-eagled.

(14) Replaced invocation and with invocation, and, northlander with Northlander, and men but, as with men, but as.

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(21) Replaced vanished: the with vanished; the.

(22) Replaced pikeheads with pike heads. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.

(24) Replaced puddles and with puddles, and, large shiny with large, shiny, and rope you with rope, you. Moved the Nexus choice into the first position.

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(25) Replaced both occurrences of guildhouse with guild-house. Replaced hand bells with hand-bells. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(25) Replaced both occurrences of guildhouse with guild-house. Replaced hand bells with hand-bells. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(26) Replaced toa-wood with toa wood.

(27) Replaced open and with open, and.

(28) Replaced surrounded and with surrounded, and, shortlived with short-lived, and resistance and with resistance, and.

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(43) Replaced side and with side, and.

(45) Replaced bow for, in with bow, for in.

(46) Replaced heart and with heart, and.

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(47) Replaced knuckleduster with knuckle-duster and knuckleduster and, judging with knuckleduster, and judging. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(47) Replaced knuckleduster with knuckle-duster and knuckleduster and, judging with knuckleduster, and judging. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(51) Deleted a period in the middle of the second sentence.

(53) In the first choice, replaced Unless you have already done so, if you wish to approach the merchant with If you wish to approach the merchant It is actually impossible to have already approached the merchant at this point.

(56) Replaced men and with men, and.

(58) Replaced guildhouse with guild-house.

(60) Replaced old but with old, but.

(62) Replaced truth for with truth, for.

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(63) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(63) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(68) Replaced forest of Eula with Forest of Eula.

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(71) Replaced man and with man, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(71) Replaced man and with man, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(73) Moved the Curing choice into the first position.

(76) Replaced Items with items. Altered list of items to initial capital letters.

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(77) Replaced war horn with war-horn and battle frenzy with battle-frenzy. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(77) Replaced war horn with war-horn and battle frenzy with battle-frenzy. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(81) Replaced animal and with animal, and.

(82) Replaced merchants, but with merchants but and horses; not with horses: not.

(84) Replaced formula but with formula, but, heavy and with heavy, and, and awake but with awake, but.

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(96) Replaced chainmail, strides with chainmail strides.

(98) Replaced QUARTERSTAFFS with QUARTERSTAVES.

(99) Replaced shock and with shock, and, pikeheads with pike heads, and breath but with breath, but.

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(100) Replaced challenge and with challenge, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(100) Replaced challenge and with challenge, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(102) Replaced Soren and with Soren, and.

(104) Replaced Cyriluss with Cyrilus.

(106) Replaced cracked and with cracked, and.

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(112) Replaced dead and with dead, and.

(113) Replaced lying and with lying, and and Chart, before with Chart before.

(114) Replaced heart and, as with heart, and as.

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(116) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(116) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(118) Replaced sunset you with sunset, you. Replaced forest of Eula with Forest of Eula.

(119) Replaced Rhem and with Rhem, and and found but with found, but.

(121) Replaced toa-trees with toa-trees.

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(124) Replaced Stornlands with Stornlands, Sloats with sloats, companies and with companies, and, warm and with warm, and, highway, and with highway and, and river-boat with riverboat.

(125) Replaced them, and with them and.

(126) Replaced captain and with captain, and.

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(127) Replaced interior but with interior, but. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(127) Replaced interior but with interior, but. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(128) Replaced lair and with lair, and.

(129) Replaced fatigue and with fatigue, and and body and with body, and.

(131) Replaced wheel but with wheel, but.

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(146) Replaced behind and with behind, and. Replaced north-west with northwest.

(147) Replaced street and with street, and and you and with you, and.

(148) Replaced Items, or with Items or.

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(151) Moved the choice regarding having been to the temple of Maaken into the first position. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(151) Moved the choice regarding having been to the temple of Maaken into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(155) Replaced you and with you, and.

(156) Replaced resistance with Resistance.

(158) Replaced wall and with wall, and.

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(160) Replaced unprepared and with unprepared, and, face, somersaulting with face somersaulting, and again you with again, you.

(161) Replaced crowd and with crowd, and. Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch.

(162) Replaced deterred and with deterred, and.

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(164) Replaced time and with time, and and northlander with Northlander. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(164) Replaced time and with time, and and northlander with Northlander. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(121) Replaced guild of city criers with Guild of City Criers.

(166) Replaced wagon but with wagon, but and bruised but with bruised, but.

(167) Replaced you and with you, and.

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(184) Replaced pirate and with pirate, and.

(186) Replaced vibrate and with vibrate, and.

(187) Replaced pikehead with pike head.

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(188) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(188) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(191) Replaced ride but with ride, but.

(195) Replaced peril and with peril, and and end and with end, and.

(197) Replaced points), and with points) and.

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(212) Replaced northlander with Northlander.

(214) Replaced Baknar or Kalkoth with baknar or kalkoth.

(217) Replaced stones but with stones, but.

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(219) Replaced arena for with arena, for. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(219) Replaced arena for with arena, for. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(223) Replaced Chart, before with Chart before.

(224) Replaced aid but with aid, but.

(229) Replaced archers and with archers, and.

(230) Replaced guardedness and with guardedness, and.

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(232) Replaced small piggish with small, piggish and Chart), and with Chart) and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(232) Replaced small piggish with small, piggish and Chart), and with Chart) and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(234) Replaced aside and with aside, and and northlander with Northlander.

(236) Replaced dead and with dead, and.

(243) Replaced with a bow with with Bow.

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(251) Replaced rest but with rest, but.

(255) Replaced Psi-shield with Psi-screen.

(257) Replaced hard unyielding with hard, unyielding.

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(258) Replaced drawbolt with bolt. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(258) Replaced drawbolt with bolt. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(261) Replaced seconds but with seconds, but.

(262) Moved the Divination choice into the first position. Replaced guildhouse with guild-house.

(263) Replaced bodyguards and with bodyguards, and.

(267) Replaced Varettian plain with Varettian Plain.

(268) Replaced with a bow with with Bow.

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(270) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(270) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(271) Replaced competition and with competition, and.

(272) Replaced east and with east, and. Moved the Curing choice into the first position.

(273) Replaced all occurrences of .. with .

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(276) Replaced warhammer and with warhammer, and.

(277) Replaced lightning fast with lightning-fast.

(278) Replaced feet but with feet, but.

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(279) Replaced doors and with doors, and, building and with building, and, and battle but, unlike with battle, but unlike. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(279) Replaced doors and with doors, and, building and with building, and, and battle but, unlike with battle, but unlike. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(283) Replaced power your with power, your, ground and with ground, and, northlander with Northlander, and attack you with attack, you.

(284) Replaced huge fat-bellied with huge, fat-bellied and men and with men, and.

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(286) Replaced cover and with cover, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(286) Replaced cover and with cover, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(287) Replaced here but with here, but.

(288) Replaced esteem for with esteem, for.

(289) Replaced wineshops with wine shops. Replaced rivermen with river-men.

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(319) Replaced Varetta and with Varetta, and.

(320) Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.

(322) Replaced guard and with guard, and.

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(324) Replaced workshop but with workshop, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(324) Replaced workshop but with workshop, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(326) Replaced fades and with fades, and.

(328) Replaced Chart), and with Chart) and.

(329) Replaced you and with you, and and wounded and with wounded, and.

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(347) Replaced Swords and, as with Swords, and as. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.

(348) Replaced manouevre with manoeuvre and secure and with secure, and.

(349) Replaced spongy and with spongy, and.

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(350) Replaced appears and with appears, and, fade you with fade, you, and you and with you, and. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(350) Replaced appears and with appears, and, fade you with fade, you, and you and with you, and. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference, top of chart with top of the chart and fall to 0 with falls to 0 or below. Replaced Kai Disciplines with Magnakai Disciplines.

diff --git a/07cd.xml b/07cd.xml index 789ea21..7cd77a2 100755 --- a/07cd.xml +++ b/07cd.xml @@ -15,6 +15,12 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.42 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + +Revision 1.41 2007/02/07 15:18:00 Simon Osborne +Correctly credited Gary Chalk as the map illustrator (copy/paste error). + Revision 1.4 2007/07/01 22:50:07 Simon Osborne Fixed Many Errata and non-errata issues. Updated to version 0.12. @@ -4821,11 +4827,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, The Magiocracy of Dessi - - Brian Williams + Gary Chalk @@ -5371,7 +5376,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(4) Replaced persistance with persistence and to bursting with to the bursting.

(10) Replaced view and, for with view, and for.

(12) Replaced head and with head, and and Lipo with Lio.

-

(13) Replaced flatstones with flagstones. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(13) Replaced flatstones with flagstones. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(14) Replaced Sweetdreams with Sweet dreams and ugly bearded with ugly, bearded.

(15) Replaced points), and with points) and.

(16) Replaced fall but with fall, but.

@@ -5379,7 +5384,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(22) Replaced you but with you, but.

(23) Replaced fortess with fortress.

(26) Replaced Weaponskill with Weaponmastery.

-

(27) Replaced intact and with intact, and, cry and with cry, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(27) Replaced intact and with intact, and, cry and with cry, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(28) Replaced skull and with skull, and.

(30) Replaced warm and, as with warm, and as.

(31) Replaced robes but, lying with robes, but lying, use and with use, and, chamber but, as with chamber, but as and helmet, and with helmet and.

@@ -5390,7 +5395,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(39) Replaced louder but with louder, but.

(41) Replaced warm but with warm, but.

(43) Replaced Boari jungle with Boari Jungle.

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(45) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(45) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(46) Moved the Invisibility/Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.

(47) Replaced tracks, and with tracks and.

(48) Replaced yards, when with yards when and light and with light, and.

@@ -5399,7 +5404,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(57) Replaced deeper but with deeper, but.

(58) Replaced points.) with points). and presence but with presence, but.

(60) Replaced arm and with arm, and.

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(63) Replaced chamber, but with chamber but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(63) Replaced chamber, but with chamber but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(64) Replaced deep and with deep, and.

(65) Replaced Kai initiate with Kai Initiate. Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

(66) Replaced the second choice If you do not have a sword, you will have to abandon the door. Only the statue offers any hope of escape for you; turn to 168. with If you do not have a sword, turn to 263.. Section 168 offers basically the same choice and is only forestalling the impending outcome in Section 263.

@@ -5410,7 +5415,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(72) Replaced tunic but with tunic, but. Also deleted the (lose 2 ENDURANCE points) since Nexus is supposed to prevent or reduce ENDURANCE loss - not induce it. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(74) Replaced Kazan-Oud, they with Kazan-Oud; they.

(76) Replaced dagger and with dagger, and.

-

(78) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(78) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(79) Replaced scream but with scream, but.

(81) Replaced crossbow but with crossbow, but.

(82) Replaced lake and with lake, and, wall and with wall, and and storm but with storm, but.

@@ -5423,11 +5428,11 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(93) Replaced difficult that with difficult than and Sticky rope-like with Sticky, rope-like.

(95) Replaced Then gurgling with Then, gurgling.

(96) Replaced mouth and with mouth, and. Replaced new-found with newfound.

-

(100) Replaced wall but with wall, but, ceiling and with ceiling, and and has, and with has and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(100) Replaced wall but with wall, but, ceiling and with ceiling, and and has, and with has and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(102) Replaced accord and with accord, and.

(105) Replaced Elzian, he with Elzian, he.

(107) Replaced hand but with hand, but. Replaced envelopes with envelops. Replaced Items with items.

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(110) Replaced open and with open, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(110) Replaced open and with open, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(111) Replaced dim diffused with dim, diffused.

(112) Replaced pieces, and with pieces and.

(113) Replaced sleep and with sleep, and.

@@ -5447,7 +5452,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(138) Replaced heard and with heard, and.

(139) Replaced undisturbed, not with undisturbed: not.

(141) Replaced go but, as with go, but as and mace but with mace, but. Moved the Lore-circle of the Spirit choice into the first position.

-

(142) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(142) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(145) Replaced hole and with hole, and.

(146) Replaced face, and with face and.

(148) Replaced warm and with warm, and.

@@ -5461,8 +5466,8 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(159) Replaced deserted and with deserted, and and beam but with beam, but.

(161) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.

(162) Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.

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(164) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

-

(165) Replaced laughter and with laughter, and, distance and with distance, and, fever but with fever, but and two and with two, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(164) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(165) Replaced laughter and with laughter, and, distance and with distance, and, fever but with fever, but and two and with two, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(171) Replaced others and with others, and. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(173) Replaced narrow and, as with narrow, and as. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.

(174) Replaced staff but with staff, but.

@@ -5479,12 +5484,12 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(195) Replaced you and, in with you, and in.

(196) Replaced lake and with lake, and and weapon, as with weapon as.

(197) Replaced helmet, and with helmet and.

-

(198) Replaced more you with more, you. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(198) Replaced more you with more, you. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(199) Replaced chain-mail with chainmail.

(200) Replaced crumbling and with crumbling, and.

(201) Replaced wall but with wall, but.

(202) Replaced crow and with crow, and.

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(203) Replaced rope and with rope, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(203) Replaced rope and with rope, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(204) Replaced take but, as with take, but as.

(205) Replaced discipline and with Discipline, and.

(210) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

@@ -5493,7 +5498,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(217) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(219) Replaced feet and with feet, and.

(220) Replaced new-found with newfound.

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(221) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(221) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(223) Replaced eyes and with eyes, and. Replaced Turn to 164 with Turn to 165. All other paths leading to Section 164 came through Section 277 which involves falling into a pit. All paths leading to Section 165 involved getting ensnared in a booby trap similar to the trap in Section 223.

(225) Replaced Weaponskill with Weaponmastery.

(228) Replaced blow and with blow, and. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.

@@ -5506,27 +5511,27 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(244) Replaced flood-next with flood - next.

(245) Replaced eyes and with eyes, and.

(248) Replaced staircase, and with staircase and. Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position.

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(249) Replaced hands and with hands, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(249) Replaced hands and with hands, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(250) Replaced Herdos and with Herdos, and and level, and with level and. Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position. Replaced new-found with newfound.

(252) Replaced now and with now, and.

-

(255) Replaced trunk and, after with trunk, and after. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Replaced 58 with 38.

+

(255) Replaced trunk and, after with trunk, and after. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Replaced 58 with 38.

(256) Replaced spine and, to with spine, and to.

(258) Replaced advance but with advance, but, darkness and with darkness, and and turn to 186 with turn to 289. Note that we chose Section 289 instead of Section 49 as noted in Lone Wolf Club Summer Special 1987 newsletter.

(260) Replaced decay and, to with decay, and to and Items with items.

(261) Replaced deserted but with deserted, but.

(262) Replaced locked but with locked, but.

-

(265) Replaced sand and with sand, and, Psi-surge, and with Psi-surge and and skill, or with skill or. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(265) Replaced sand and with sand, and, Psi-surge, and with Psi-surge and and skill, or with skill or. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(267) Replaced rests, and with rests and. Replaced new-found with newfound.

(269) Replaced heavy and with heavy, and.

(270) Replaced statue and with statue, and.

(272) Replaced end and with end, and.

(273) Replaced power-staves and with power-staves, and.

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(280) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced to zero in with to zero or below in.

+

(280) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced to zero in with to zero or below in.

(282) Replaced turn to 173 with turn to 273.

(286) Replaced open and with open, and, mist and with mist, and, semi-circular with semicircular, and darkness and with darkness, and.

(287) Replaced ahead but with ahead, but.

(290) Replaced combat for with combat, for. Replaced new-found with newfound.

-

(293) Replaced storm adds to with storm add to. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(293) Replaced storm adds to with storm add to. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(294) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.

(296) Replaced body and with body, and.

(298) Replaced them and with them, and.

@@ -5540,7 +5545,7 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(312) Replaced click and with click, and.

(313) Deleted the instruction to choose an unused random number.

(314) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(315) Replaced rapidly and with rapidly, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(315) Replaced rapidly and with rapidly, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(316) Replaced simultaneously and with simultaneously, and.

(318) Replaced right and with right, and and ahead, and with ahead and.

(322) Replaced maze but with maze, but.

@@ -5551,12 +5556,12 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations,

(335) Replaced hunch-backed with hunchbacked.

(336) Replaced knees but with knees, but and air and with air, and. Replaced the pack are with the pack is.

(341) Replaced brighter and with brighter, and.

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(342) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(342) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(344) Replaced presence but with presence, but.

(346) Replaced sound but with sound, but.

(348) Replaced light and with light, and.

(349) Replaced corridor the with corridor, the, back but with back, but and maze and with maze, and.

-

(350) Replaced trumpeteers with trumpeters, caravel and with caravel, and and impossible and with impossible, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series.

+

(350) Replaced trumpeteers with trumpeters, caravel and with caravel, and and impossible and with impossible, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference, top of chart with top of the chart and fall to 0 with falls to 0 or below. Replaced Kai Disciplines with Magnakai Disciplines.

diff --git a/09tcof.xml b/09tcof.xml index ed71d69..a35b77d 100755 --- a/09tcof.xml +++ b/09tcof.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log: 09tcof.xml,v $ +Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + Revision 1.5 2007/06/28 14:12:03 Simon Osborne Updated to 0.12. Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues. @@ -5625,7 +5628,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(2) Replaced noon but with noon, but.

(3) Replaced blow but with blow, but.

(5) Capitalised all Items on the list.

-

(11) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced lose 6 ENDURANCE points with lose 3 ENDURANCE points for each Meal missed.

+

(11) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced lose 6 ENDURANCE points with lose 3 ENDURANCE points for each Meal missed.

(12) Replaced yellow-flanged with yellow-fanged and mercy but with mercy, but.

(13) Altered list so that only the first letters of each item are capitalised.

(14) Replaced wall and with wall, and.

@@ -5636,14 +5639,14 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(29) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(30) Replaced secure you with secure, you.

(31) Replaced narrow but with narrow, but and of milky with of a milky.

-

(32) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(32) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(33) Replaced life you with life, you.

(36) Replaced attack and with attack, and. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(39) Replaced despatched with dispatched.

(40) Replaced west bank with east bank.

(42) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Replaced Guildhouse with Guild-house.

(43) Replaced flames forcing with flames, forcing, creamy-coloured with cream-coloured and water and with water, and.

-

(46) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(46) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(47) Replaced years the with years, the. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(50) Replaced correct and with correct, and.

(52) Replaced stand and with stand, and and awful and with awful, and.

@@ -5658,11 +5661,11 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(69) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(71) Replaced above an with above, an.

(74) Replaced sight Ill with sight, Ill and that he with that, he.

-

(75) Replaced later it with later, it and freedom but with freedom, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(75) Replaced later it with later, it and freedom but with freedom, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(76) Replaced city and with city, and.

(77) Replaced attention they with attention, they and her and with her, and. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced female, she with female; she.

(81) Replaced fatigue your with fatigue, your.

-

(82) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(82) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(83) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.

(85) Replaced growl he with growl, he.

(86) Replaced throat but with throat, but and You wish with If you wish.

@@ -5671,7 +5674,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(92) Replaced doomwolves with Doomwolves.

(94)

(95) Replaced bow-strings with bowstrings.

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(97) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(97) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(101) Replaced Psi-shield with Psi-screen.

(102) Replaced direction, with direction. and desperation one with desperation, one.

(104) Replaced hollow a with hollow, a.

@@ -5680,11 +5683,11 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(113) Replaced city but with city, but.

(115)

(119) Replaced skin but with skin, but.

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(120) Replaced air but with air, but and punches but with punches, but. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(120) Replaced air but with air, but and punches but with punches, but. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(122) Replaced Kai skill with Magnakai skill.

(123) Replaced doomwolves with Doomwolves.

(125) Replaced fire but with fire, but.

-

(129) Replaced tunnel a with tunnel, a. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(129) Replaced tunnel a with tunnel, a. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(131) Replaced Kraan and with Kraan, and.

(133) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(137) Replaced you and with you, and and bound you with bound, you.

@@ -5695,7 +5698,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(144) Replaced silently pillar by pillar until with silently, pillar by pillar, until.

(145) Replaced grass land with grassland, suprisingly with surprisingly and Guyuk the tavern owner greets with Guyuk, the tavern owner, greets. Replaced four Gold Crowns with three Gold Crowns.

(146) Replaced you seemingly with you, seemingly. Replaced camp fires with campfires.

-

(148) Replaced terror his with terror, his and doomwolf with Doomwolf. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(148) Replaced terror his with terror, his and doomwolf with Doomwolf. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(150) Replaced new-found with newfound.

(154) Replaced hunting with Hunting.

(155) Replaced TWO MEALS with 2 Meals and capitalised all items on the list.

@@ -5706,12 +5709,12 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(170) Replaced exit but with exit, but.

(172) Capitalised all Items on the list.

(174) Replaced suicidal and with suicidal, and .

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(175) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(175) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(176) Replaced them and with them, and.

(177) Capitalised all Items on the list.

(178) Replaced on to the with on the.

(179) Replaced wall a with wall, a.

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(180) Replaced Inside a with Inside, a and respond and with respond, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(180) Replaced Inside a with Inside, a and respond and with respond, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(182) Replaced condition you with condition, you.

(183) Replaced doomwolves with Doomwolves.

(185) Replaced jet black with jet-black, pirazin with Pirazin, ohere with o here and offer but with offer, but.

@@ -5722,7 +5725,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(195) Replaced grip and with a scream of anguish you with grip, and with a scream of anguish, you and cold wet with cold, wet.

(196) Replaced dismount and with dismount, and.

(197) Replaced narrow and with narrow, and and worse the with worse, the.

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(200) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(200) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(201) Replaced special items with Special Items.

(202) Replaced key and with key, and.

(204) Replaced I and with I, and. Replaced plains farmer with plains farmers.

@@ -5733,7 +5736,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(211) Replaced life it with life, it.

(213) Replaced both instances of Kai with Magnakai.

(218) Replaced exhausted and with exhausted, and.

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(220) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(220) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(223) Replaced confusion you with confusion, you.

(224) Replaced descend you with descend, you, Pathmanship with Pathsmanship and or Divination with or of Divination.

(226) Replaced shaft and with shaft, and.

@@ -5744,13 +5747,13 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(240) Replaced identities but with identities, but and sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

(241) Replaced silver and with silver, and and button a with button, a.

(242) Replaced here and with here, and.

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(243) Replaced ante-chamber with antechamber and Psi-shield with Psi-screen. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(243) Replaced ante-chamber with antechamber and Psi-shield with Psi-screen. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(244) Replaced scalp but with scalp, but, doomwolves with Doomwolves and both occurrences of doomwolf with Doomwolf.

(245) Replaced camp fires with campfires.

(251) Replaced sight, as with sight as and stygian with Stygian.

(256) Replaced softens, as with softens as. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.

(257) Replaced doomwolves with Doomwolves.

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(258) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

+

(258) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(259) Replaced discovered but with discovered, but and capitalised all Items on the list.

(260) Replaced yell he with yell, he.

(262) Replaced both instances of Kai with Magnakai.

@@ -5762,26 +5765,26 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(274) Replaced approach a with approach, a.

(282)

(283) Replaced cream-coloured with cream coloured, instantly but with instantly, but.

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(286) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(286) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(288) Replaced you he with you, he.

(289)

(290) Replaced arrest! with arrest, and spying. with spying!.

(291) Replaced Kai with Magnakai.

(293) Replaced chase but with chase, but and both occurrences of Vanta with Varta.

(299) Replaced him he with him, he.

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(300) Replaced finished the with finished, the and arches and with arches, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(300) Replaced finished the with finished, the and arches and with arches, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(302) Replaced mind stranger with mind, stranger.

(305) Replaced willingly and with willingly, and.

(306) Replaced doomwolf with Doomwolf.

(307) Replaced beyond a with beyond, a.

(309) Replaced yells Take with yells, Take.

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(316) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced You must deduct 4 points from your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon. with Make the proper adjustments to your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon..

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(316) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced You must deduct 4 points from your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon. with Make the proper adjustments to your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon..

(321) Replaced as Special with as a Special.

-

(323) Replaced wrong-doers with wrongdoers. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

+

(323) Replaced wrong-doers with wrongdoers. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series.

(326) Replaced key with key,. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.

(329)

(335) Replaced woodsmoke with wood smoke.

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(336) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(336) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(337) Replaced Kai with Magnakai and direction you with direction, you.

(340) Replaced hill a with hill, a.

(342) Replaced both instances of Kai with Magnakai.

diff --git a/10tdot.xml b/10tdot.xml index 86039ae..2046801 100755 --- a/10tdot.xml +++ b/10tdot.xml @@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ $Id$ $Log: 10tdot.xml,v $ +Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + Revision 1.5 2007/06/28 10:51:28 Simon Osborne Fixed many Errata and Non-errata issues. Updated to version 0.12. @@ -5332,22 +5335,22 @@ Initial revision

(1) Replaced mid-summers with midsummers and elite with lite. Removed at the front of the book. Capitalised both occurrences of prince.

(4) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

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(6) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(6) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(9) Replaced battle smoke with battle-smoke.

(18) Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

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(28) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(28) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(43) Replaced backpack with Backpack.

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(51) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(51) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(54) Replaced rock face with rock-face.

(56) Replaced death cry with death-cry.

(60) Replaced hornets nest with hornets nest.

(73) Replaced battle smoke with battle-smoke.

(75) Placed the choice leading to Section 102 first in the list.

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(77) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(77) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(78) Placed the choice leading to Section 14 first in the list.

(79) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(87) Replaced shield wall with shield-wall.

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(88) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(88) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(93) Replaced Cener druids with Cener Druids.

(94) Replaced elite with lite.

(96) Replaced bonuses with missile bonuses.

@@ -5355,59 +5358,59 @@ Initial revision

(106) Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(107) Replaced elite with lite.Placed the choice leading to Section 139 first in the list.

(109) Replaced Elite with lite.

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(113) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(113) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(114) Replace crosslegged with cross-legged.

(115) Replaced horses hooves with horses hooves. Replaced melee with mle.

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(116) Replaced creamy-coloured with cream-coloured. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(116) Replaced creamy-coloured with cream-coloured. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(120) Replaced zig-zags with zigzags.

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(126) Replaced pack move with pack moves. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(126) Replaced pack move with pack moves. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(127) Replaced north a with north, a and Kraagenskul with Kraagenskl.

(131) Replaced quiver with Quiver.

(134) Replaced Bolas with bolas.

(140) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(142) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(145) Changed the list of items to initial capitals.

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(148) Replaced battle smoke with battle-smoke, elite with lite, and battle frenzy with battle-frenzy. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(148) Replaced battle smoke with battle-smoke, elite with lite, and battle frenzy with battle-frenzy. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(150) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(159) Replaced blood-stains with bloodstains.

(169) Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained.

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(172) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(172) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(176) Replaced woodsmoke with wood smoke.

(177) Changed the list of items to initial capitals.

(179) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(181) Replaced water-course with watercourse and inky-black with inky black. Replaced forego with forgo.

(185) Placed the choice leading to Section 302 first in the list.

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(187) Replaced the fight last with the fight lasts. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(187) Replaced the fight last with the fight lasts. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(193) Replaced Imposter! with Impostor!. Replaced hornets nest with hornets nest.

(198) Replaced unmistakeable with unmistakable.

(200) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(206) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

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(208) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(208) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(209) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(211) Replaced battle frenzy with battle-frenzy, war horns with war-horns, and shield wall with shield-wall.

(214) Replaced elite with lite.

(219) Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced lifeforce with life-force. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(222) Replaced you, he with you; he.

(224) Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

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(230) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(230) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(240) Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(242) Replaced blood-lust with bloodlust and curled-up with curled up. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

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(244) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(244) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(250) Replaced forego with forgo.

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(252) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(252) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(260) Replaced crosslegged with cross-legged.

(261) Replaced elite with lite.

(265) Replaced toll of your with toll on your.

(271) Changed the list of items to initial capitals. Replaced their muscular bodies with his muscular body.

(273) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(277) Replaced backpack items or weapons with Backpack Items or Weapons.

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(280) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(280) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(284) Replaced war horn with war-horn.

(293) Replaced bonuses with missile bonuses and . If you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery, with and.

(298) Replaced Cenerese druids with Cenerese Druids. Replaced new-found with newfound.

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(301) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(301) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(303) Replaced Cener druids with Cener Druids.

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(304) Replaced rockface with rock-face. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(304) Replaced rockface with rock-face. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(306) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(317) Replaced backpack and weapons with Backpack and Weapons.

(320) Replaced Elite with lite.

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(328) Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(330) Replaced heads with tails.

(341) Replaced zig-zag with zigzags.

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(344) Replaced Zaggonozod with Zagganozod. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(344) Replaced Zaggonozod with Zagganozod. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(345) Replaced out-distance with outdistance.

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(348) Replaced half-way with halfway. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(348) Replaced half-way with halfway. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(350) Replaced shadow gate with Shadow Gate and book 11 with Book 11.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference, top of chart with top of the chart and fall to 0 with falls to 0 or below. Replaced Kai Disciplines with Magnakai Disciplines.

diff --git a/11tpot.xml b/11tpot.xml index c375ec8..d379ca7 100755 --- a/11tpot.xml +++ b/11tpot.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log: 11tpot.xml,v $ +Revision 1.51 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + Revision 1.5 2007/06/27 18:18:51 Simon Osborne Fixed many Errata and Non-Errata issues. Updated to version 0.12. @@ -5308,32 +5311,32 @@ safe do you stop to catch your breath and check your equipment. To your dismay y

(17) Replaced handweapon with hand weapon. Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(20) Replaced Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(25) Changed the presentation of the candidate sequence completions to fit our technologies. This includes changing the label of each sequence completion from the corresponding section to a letter and adding choices below the illustration which read, for example, If you believe A completes the sequence, turn to 216.

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(27) Replaced army are with army is and jubliant with jubilant. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(27) Replaced army are with army is and jubliant with jubilant. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(33) Replaced handrail with hand-rail.

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(40) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(40) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(41) Replaced lances, then with lances; then.

(42) Replaced Discipline of with Disciplines of.

(45) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(48) Replaced Kai with Magnakai. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

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(50) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(50) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(56) Replaced dragon-mount with dragonmount. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced warrior, I with warrior; I.

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(58) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(58) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(63) Italicised en route.

(65) Replaced Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

(69) Replaced lurking ready with lurking, ready.

(73) Replaced prevent with prevents.

(83) Replaced re-united with reunited.Replaced new-found with newfound.

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(84) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(84) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(86) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(88) Replaced Kai with Magnakai. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

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(93) Replaced the skill with this skill. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(93) Replaced the skill with this skill. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(98) Replaced Zhamin plateau with Zhamin Plateau.

(107) Replaced steps confident with steps, confident.

(109) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(113) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(117) Replaced village the with village, the and Kai with Magnakai. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(118) Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher. Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

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(120) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(120) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(122) Replaced co-ordinates with coordinates.

(123) Replaced death cry with death-cry.

(125) Replaced Kai with Magnakai. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

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(136) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(137) Since Section 332 was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of Section 299. Since Section 299 involves a greater loss of ENDURANCE, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.

(138) Replaced much-needed with much needed.

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(141) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(141) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(147) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(150) Italicised en route.

(153) Replaced monolith so with monolith, so.

(155) Replaced paws, then with paws. Then.

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(158) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(158) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(161) Replaced Kai with Magnakai. Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(165) Replaced Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training.

(167) Replaced invisibility with Invisibility.

(171) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(175) Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery.

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(177) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(187) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(177) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(187) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(194) Replaced imposter with impostor.

(195) Replaced drawbolts with bolts.

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(200) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(200) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(202) Replaced Zhenga with Zhengha and turn 157 with turn to 157.

(212) Replaced symetrically with symmetrically and Pathmanship with Pathsmanship.

(215) Replaced Pathmanship with Pathsmanship.

(218) Replaced guide, then with guide; then.

(228) Replaced birdsong with bird song, Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training.

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(224) Replaced spread before with laid before in the Illustration caption. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(224) Replaced spread before with laid before in the illustrations caption. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(228) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

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(233) Replaced see illustration XIV with see the accompanying illustration. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(233) Replaced see illustration XIV with see the accompanying illustration. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(236) Replaced Zhamin plateau with Zhamin Plateau.

(237) Replaced parapet you with parapet, you and Lorestone but with Lorestone, but.

(239) Replaced cliff face with cliff-face.

(244) Replaced half-way with halfway. Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

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(246) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(246) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(247) Replaced Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(249) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(250) Replaced resist, the with resist; the.

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(264) Replaced Rylaan noorma with Rylaan noorna (cf. Section 64).

(266) Since Section 332 was originally unreachable, we changed the choice involving leaping from the chariot to point there instead of Section 299. Since Section 299 involves a greater loss of ENDURANCE, we reasoned that it should only be accessible after the chariot is out of control.

(267) Capitalised the list of items.

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(268) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(268) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(274) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(275) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(276) Replaced much-needed with much needed.

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(279) Replaced flag-stoned with flagstoned and hands and with hands, and. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(279) Replaced flag-stoned with flagstoned and hands and with hands, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(287) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(289) Replaced hard pressed with hard-pressed. Replaced monster, then with monster; then.

(292) Replaced borehole with bore-hole.

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(294) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(294) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(298) Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

(305) Replaced much-improved with much improved.

(309) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

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(314) Replaced cheekbones with cheek-bones. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(314) Replaced cheekbones with cheek-bones. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(315) Changed the presentation of the candidate sequence completions to fit our technologies. This includes changing the label of each sequence completion from the corresponding section to a letter and adding choices below the illustration which read, for example, If you believe A completes the sequence, turn to 14. Also replaced directly below with below.

(319) Replaced Discipline of Hunting with Discipline of Huntmastery.

(320) Replaced thunder, then with thunder; then.

(322) Added as well as any other missile bonuses to the end of the second paragraph.

(326) Replaced chain-mail with chainmail. Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

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(327) Replaced collosal with colossal. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(327) Replaced collosal with colossal. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(340) Replaced drawbolt with bolt.

(347) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.

(348) Replaced Kai rank with rank and Kai training with Magnakai training. Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

diff --git a/12tmod.xml b/12tmod.xml index ed0e7bb..4b0f2f2 100755 --- a/12tmod.xml +++ b/12tmod.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log: 12tmod.xml,v $ +Revision 1.52 2007/07/02 15:30:00 Simon Osborne +Minor rewording of a repeated Erratum for consistency. + Revision 1.51 2007/07/01 22:50:07 Simon Osborne A minor Erratum fixed. @@ -6567,44 +6570,44 @@ Initial revision

(2) Replaced shoulder, then with shoulder; then.

(5) Replaced bow string with bowstring and three rounds or less with four rounds or less. Replaced Weapons list with Weapons List. Replaced this weapon with this Weapon.

(6) Replaced Sommerswerd had with Sommerswerd has.

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(7) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(7) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(10) Replaced throughfares with thoroughfares. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(11) Replaced half-closed with half closed.

(14) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(15) Replaced elite with lite.

(17) Replaced Tok with tok.

(22) Reordered the first and second choices at the end of the section.

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(23) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(23) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(24) Replaced north-by-north west with north by northwest.

(14) Replaced Scion-kai or more with Scion-kai or higher.

(42) Replaced boomsail with boom-sail.

(46) Replaced Discipline with Disciplines.

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(50) Replaced crystalizes with crystallizes. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(50) Replaced crystalizes with crystallizes. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(51) Replaced bosun with bosun.

(52) Changed the option that lead to Section 97 to lead to 297.

(53) Replaced side-stepping with sidestepping.

(57) Replaced hard pressed with hard-pressed.

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(60) Replaced awe-struck with awestruck, balista with ballista, and balistas with ballistas. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(60) Replaced awe-struck with awestruck, balista with ballista, and balistas with ballistas. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(61) Replaced lop-sided with lopsided.

(68) Replaced Bosun with Bosun.

(74) Replaced boomsail with boom-sail. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(77) Replaced Tutelary or more with Tutelary or higher.

(80) Replaced semi-circular with semicircular.

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(81) Replaced Aye! with Aye!. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(81) Replaced Aye! with Aye!. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(86) Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(92) Replaced Dsicipline with Discipline. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

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(94) Replaced nadziranim with Nadziranim and Helgenag with Helenag. Replaced new-found with newfound. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(94) Replaced nadziranim with Nadziranim and Helgenag with Helenag. Replaced new-found with newfound. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(100) Replaced deserted, then with deserted; then.

(101) Replaced Kaltese with Kaltesee. Replaced new-found with newfound.

(102) Replace Plain with Plane.

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(110) Replaced war horn with war-horn. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(110) Replaced war horn with war-horn. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(111) Replaced both occurrences of disciplines with Disciplines.

(119) Replaced Shez dot got! with Shez dok tot! as the original does not seem to make any sense.

(120) Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

(124) Replaced blood-lust with bloodlust.

(125) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(128) Replaced Shez dot got! with Shez dok tot! as the original does not seem to make any sense.

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(129) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(129) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(138) Replaced youself with yourself and backpack with Backpack.

(142) Replaced gold braided with gold-braided.

(143) Replaced semi-circular with semicircular.

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(150) Replaced fireswept with fire-swept.

(154) Replaced backpack with Backpack.

(157) Replaced wind- with wind. Replaced watertight with water tight. Replaced zig-zags with zigzags.

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(158) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(158) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(159) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(160) Replaced imposter with impostor.

(162) Reordered the choices at the end of the section.

(166) Replaced hard pressed with hard-pressed. Replaced god Kai with God Kai. Replaced freelands with Freelands.

(168) Replaced Scion-kai or more with Scion-kai or higher.

(169) Replaced Pathmanship with Pathsmanship.

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(170) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(170) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(174) Replaced watertight with water tight. Replaced zig-zags with zigzags.

(176) Replaced sword, Helshezag, and with sword Helshezag and and Zejar-deluga with Zejar-dulaga.

(177) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(181) Replaced Pathmanship with Pathsmanship.

(183) Replaced icy-cold with icy cold and gulley with gully. Replaced throughly with thoroughly.

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(184) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(184) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(185) Replaced wavers, then with wavers; then.

(188) Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

(189) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced imposter with impostor.

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(200) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher. Replaced Scion-kai or more with Scion-kai or higher.

(206) Merged the second and third paragraph. Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(210) Replaced eventaully with eventually. Replaced Principalin or more with Principalin or higher.

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(216) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(216) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(217) Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained.

(221) Reordered the choices at the end of the section.

(222) Replaced Scion-kai or more with Scion-kai or higher.

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(226) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(226) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(229) Replaced gods with Gods.

(232) Replaced death cry with death-cry. Replaced Shez dot got! with Shez dok tot! as the original does not seem to make any sense.

(233) Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

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(253) Replaced melee with mle.

(255) Replaced meet, then with meet; then.

(257) Replaced Archmaster or more with Archmaster, since this is the highest rank it is possible to be when attempting this adventure.

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(260) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced drawbolt with bolt. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

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(260) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced drawbolt with bolt. Replaced Mentora or more with Mentora or higher.

(263) Replaced semi-circular with semicircular.

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(264) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(264) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(273) Replaced Pathmanship with Pathsmanship.

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(278) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(278) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(282) Replaced swordbelt with sword belt.

(286) Replaced Shadow shapes with Shadow-shapes.

(289) Replaced elite with lite.

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(295) Replaced queuing with queueing. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(295) Replaced queuing with queueing. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(300) Replaced north-western with northwestern.

(300) Replaced north-western with northwestern.

(306) Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery.

(307) Replaced fatique with fatigue and backpack with Backpack. Replaced open, so with open; so.

(310) Replaced SPEAR with Spear. Replaced AXE with Axe. Replaced DAGGER with Dagger. Replaced 60 KIKA with 60 Kika. Replaced BOTTLE OF WINE with Bottle of Wine. Replaced POUCH OF TOBACCO with Pouch of Tobacco. Replaced PIPE with Pipe. Replaced IRON KEY with Iron Key. Replaced ENOUGH FOOD FOR 1 MEAL with Enough food for 1 Meal.

(317) Replaced 3 SWORDS with 3 Swords. Replaced 2 AXES with 2 Axes. Replaced 2 DAGGERS with 2 Daggers. Replaced 1 BOW with Bow. Replaced 4 ARROWS with 4 Arrows. Replaced 1 ROPE with Rope. Replaced 1 POUCH OF HERBS with Pouch of Herbs.

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(320) Replaced imposter with impostor. Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption. Replaced freelands with Freelands.

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(320) Replaced imposter with impostor. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced freelands with Freelands.

(321) Replaced side-stepping with sidestepping.

(324) Replaced bow string with bowstring and weapon skill with missile. Replaced quiver with Quiver.

(327) Replaced clifff with cliff. Replaced Primate or more with Primate or higher.

(328) Replaced drawbolt with bolt.

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(337) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(337) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(339) Replaced north-by-north west with north by northwest.

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(342) Added a period to the end of the Illustration caption.

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(342) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(343) Replaced creaturess with creatures.

(348) Replaced imposter with impostor.

(350) Replaced backpack with Backpack.