From: Jonathan Blake Date: Mon, 7 May 2007 22:53:23 +0000 (+0000) Subject: special thanks, errata fixes, and fixing illustration dimensions X-Git-Tag: 20121028~15 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=a3ba2f22e4b7d59a05035adc1f33bc409ef0599b;p=project-aon.git special thanks, errata fixes, and fixing illustration dimensions git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@218 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/xml/01fftd.xml b/xml/01fftd.xml index 6642b10..da20727 100755 --- a/xml/01fftd.xml +++ b/xml/01fftd.xml @@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.8 2007/05/07 22:53:23 jonathan.blake +special thanks, errata fixes, and fixing illustration dimensions + Revision 1.7 2007/03/17 00:08:34 jonathan.blake Updating footnote markup @@ -109,7 +112,7 @@ Todo: &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw; Project Aon - 2006126 + 200757

You are the sole survivor of a devastating attack on the monastery where you were learning the skills of the Kai Lords. You swear vengeance on the Darklords for the massacre of the Kai warriors, and with a sudden flash of insight you know what you must do. You must set off on a perilous journey to the capital city to warn the King of the terrible threat that faces his people: For you are now the last of the Kai you are now Lone Wolf.

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Coordination
Jonathan Blake
Special Thanks
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Pedro Almeida, Laurence OToole
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Pedro Almeida, Tony Lenzo, Laurence OToole
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  • 0 = Dagger
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  • @@ -385,8 +388,8 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - - + +
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  • 7 = Quarterstaff (Weapons)

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  • 0 = Broadsword (Weapons)

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    You are in the presence of a great evil. Your mind is being probed by a powerful and timeless being and you must shield yourself. The struggle has begun and your sanity is at stake. It is a long and tortuous ordeal, during which you experience many fantastic and terrible apparitions that tempt and appal you. After this you must lose 4 ENDURANCE points and stagger towards the tunnel.

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    You are in the presence of a great evil. Your mind is being probed by a powerful and timeless being and you must shield yourself. The struggle has begun and your sanity is at stake. It is a long and torturous ordeal, during which you experience many fantastic and terrible apparitions that tempt and appal you. After this you must lose 4 ENDURANCE points and stagger towards the tunnel.

    Turn to 104.     @@ -4001,7 +4004,7 @@ Todo:

    You have followed this twisting track for about twenty minutes when you hear the beating of wings high above the trees. Looking up you see a large Kraan approaching from the north, its huge black wings casting a gigantic shadow on the trees below.

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    On its back are two creatures armed with long spears. They are Mountain Giakssmall ugly creatures full of hatred and malice. Many centuries ago, their ancestors were used by the Darklords to build the infernal city of Helgedad, which lies in the volcanic wastelands beyond the Durncrag mountain range. The construction of the city was long and tortuous, and only the strongest of the creatures survived the heat and poisonous atmosphere of Helgedad.

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    On its back are two creatures armed with long spears. They are Mountain Giakssmall ugly creatures full of hatred and malice. Many centuries ago, their ancestors were used by the Darklords to build the infernal city of Helgedad, which lies in the volcanic wastelands beyond the Durncrag mountain range. The construction of the city was long and torturous, and only the strongest of the creatures survived the heat and poisonous atmosphere of Helgedad.

    Quickly you dive for the shelter of a large fern tree as the Kraan passes overhead. With heart pounding, you pray that your quick reactions have saved you from being spotted.

    Pick a number from the Random Number Table.

    If the number you have picked is 04, turn to 345. @@ -4829,7 +4832,7 @@ Todo: 342 -

    As your voice echoes through the trees, the stranger slowly turns to face you. Your heart pounds and your bloods freezes as you realize that the stranger is not human. It is a Vordak, a hideous lieutenant of the Darklords and one of the undead. A piercing scream fills your ears, and the creature raises a huge black mace above its head and charges at you. Frozen with horror, you can also feel the Vordak attacking you with the force of its mind.

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    As your voice echoes through the trees, the stranger slowly turns to face you. Your heart pounds and your blood freezes as you realize that the stranger is not human. It is a Vordak, a hideous lieutenant of the Darklords and one of the undead. A piercing scream fills your ears, and the creature raises a huge black mace above its head and charges at you. Frozen with horror, you can also feel the Vordak attacking you with the force of its mind.

    JC Alvarez @@ -5533,6 +5536,7 @@ Todo:

    (144) Added or if you have no Backpack Items to the second paragraph. Replaced one Item is stolen with one item is stolen.

    (151) Added If you wish to remove the pin, turn to 337. This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands, but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from Section 23.

    (154) Replaced head first with head-first.

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    (166) Replaced tortuous with torturous.

    (167) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

    (172) Moved the second choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position.

    (175) Moved the last choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position. Replaced border rangers with Border Rangers.

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    (267) Capitalized message in the second sentence of the second paragraph, since that is how retrievable items are supposed to be represented, and to be consistent with the first time the item is mentioned in this section.

    (268) Replaced wary with weary. We hardly think Lone Wolf would be wary among the Kings soldiers.

    (272) Replaced wood-smoke with wood smoke.

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    (275) Replaced tortuous with torturous.

    (277) Replaced Turn 113 to Turn to 113.

    (284) Replaced both occurrences of Graveweed with graveweed.

    (311) Moved the last choice (about Camouflage) into the first position.

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    (334) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position, and move the first choice (that leads to Section 162) into the last position.

    (336) Replaced unsheath with unsheathe.

    (341) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.

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    (342) Replaced bloods with blood.

    (349) Vonatar, from the seventh paragraph, is spelled Vonotar in later Lone Wolf books. Replaced magicians guild of Toran with Magicians Guild of Toran.

    (Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference.

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    Only the first occurrence of each secondary illustration is cited.