From: Jonathan Blake Date: Thu, 9 Aug 2007 00:06:21 +0000 (+0000) Subject: forgot to save before committing X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=b44b1168f1b0fa6ce015d037bf2b1ba16764344b;p=project-aon.git forgot to save before committing git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@447 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/05sots.xml b/05sots.xml index 87a60b1..4c5092d 100755 --- a/05sots.xml +++ b/05sots.xml @@ -4185,7 +4185,7 @@ 291 -

You learn that the dwarves were once the crew of a more conventional vessel, a merchantman that sailed the Tentarias of southern Magnamund. The Tentarias is a vast expanse of lakes and land-locked seas, which connect to form a continuous canal stretching over a thousand miles. They were created, as was the Rymerift of Durenor, by a massive landslide. Three years ago, the dwarves former captain, a dwarf named Quan, lost his ship, cargo and crew whilst gambling at cards; it seems the unfortunate captain was unaware of Banedons true profession until it was far too late. As a result Banedon became the dwarves captain, and ever since they have adventured with him across the lands and skies of Southern Magnamund. The Skyrider itself was given to Banedon by the Magicians of Dessi, in return for his help in defeating the Gagadotha monstrous creature that terrorized their land, over which their own sorcery could not prevail.

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You learn that the dwarves were once the crew of a more conventional vessel, a merchantman that sailed the Tentarias of southern Magnamund. The Tentarias is a vast expanse of lakes and land-locked seas, which connect to form a continuous canal stretching nearly three thousand miles. They were created, as was the Rymerift of Durenor, by a massive landslide. Three years ago, the dwarves former captain, a dwarf named Quan, lost his ship, cargo, and crew whilst gambling at cards; it seems the unfortunate captain was unaware of Banedons true profession until it was far too late. As a result, Banedon became the dwarves captain, and ever since they have adventured with him across the lands and skies of Southern Magnamund. The Skyrider itself was given to Banedon by the Magicians of Dessi, in return for his help in defeating the Gagadotha monstrous creature that terrorized their land, over which their own sorcery could not prevail.

The Skyrider was travelling from Dessi on its way to Barrakeesh when you appeared. The dwarves have overheard your talk with Banedon and are excited by the prospects of a new adventure. They seem undaunted by the deadly dangers that it will certainly involve.

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(282) Replaced However for with However, for.

(285) Replaced hand, and with hand and and muzzle-first with muzzle first. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(289) Replaced surface and with surface, and and gutteral with guttural. Italicised crack.

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(291) Replaced Tentarias are with Tentarias is.

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(291) Replaced Tentarias are with Tentarias is. Replaced over a thousand miles with nearly three thousand miles. Replaced cargo and with cargo, and. Replaced result Banedon with result, Banedon.

(295) Added the sentences, When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold. Your attack is silent and deadly. These are copied from 236. Turn to 236 is now replaced with If you wish to search the guards body, turn to 207. If you decide to ignore the body, hurry into the Itikars pen and turn to 224. This retains the text for the Mind Over Matter option, while fixing the out-of-place wording if you never untied the guards money pouch. (See also the errata for sections 236, 357, and 389.) Perhaps Joe Dever originally intended for there to be a Random Number pick even when you used Mind Over Matter and then made Mind Over Matter an automatic victory against the sentry but he seems to have forgotten to change the wording for the Random Number pick.

(296) Replaced Zakhan, others with Zakhan. Others.

(297) Replaced alive, and with alive and.