From: Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Date: Sat, 4 Aug 2007 11:31:56 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Book 18:
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Book 18:
(ne) Equipment: Backpack items -> Backpack Items
(er) 286, 312: mindforce -> Mindforce

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diff --git a/18dotd.xml b/18dotd.xml
index b3ff80c..c9a4770 100644
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@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@
       <data>
        <p>Before you set off on your long journey to Sommerlund you take with you a <a idref="map">map of Northern Magnamund</a> and a pouch of gold. To find out how much gold is in the pouch, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> and add 20 to the number you have picked. The total equals the number of Gold Crowns inside the pouch, and you should now enter this number in the <quote>Gold Crowns</quote> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
        <p>If you have successfully completed any of the previous <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> adventures (Books 1<ch.endash/>17), you may add this sum to the total sum of crowns you already possess. Fifty Crowns is the maximum you can carry, but additional Crowns can be left in safekeeping at your monastery.</p>
-       <p>You can take four items from, the list below, again adding to these, if necessary, any you may already possess from previous adventures (remember, you are still limited to two weapons, but you may now carry a maximum of ten Backpack items).</p>
+       <p>You can take four items from, the list below, again adding to these, if necessary, any you may already possess from previous adventures (remember, you are still limited to two weapons, but you may now carry a maximum of ten Backpack Items).</p>
        <ul class="paragraphed">
         <li><p>Quarterstaff (Weapons)</p></li>
         <li><p>Bow (Weapons)</p></li>
@@ -4479,7 +4479,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>You feel your psychic powers burrowing through Naar<ch.apos/>s ethereal barrier. You have almost penetrated this shield when suddenly you sense the presence of the Dark God himself; he is pouring the essence of his Evil into the breach, repairing the damage you have inflicted.</p>
-      <p>Immediately you cease your telegnosis. You are mortally afraid of allowing Naar the opportunity of locating and attacking your mindforce, for if he was to do so, you risk losing not only your sanity but also your soul!</p>
+      <p>Immediately you cease your telegnosis. You are mortally afraid of allowing Naar the opportunity of locating and attacking your Mindforce, for if he was to do so, you risk losing not only your sanity but also your soul!</p>
       <choice idref="sect136"><link-text>Turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -4789,7 +4789,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>You sense your psychic powers burrowing through Naar<ch.apos/>s ethereal barrier. You have almost penetrated this shield when suddenly you feel the presence of the Dark God himself; he is pouring the essence of his Evil into the breach, repairing the damage you have inflicted.</p>
-      <p>Immediately you cease your telegnosis for fear of allowing Naar the opportunity of locating and attacking your mindforce. If he was to do so, you would risk losing not only your sanity but also your soul! You succeed in severing the telepathic link, but the abrupt cessation leaves you in psychic shock: lose S <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+      <p>Immediately you cease your telegnosis for fear of allowing Naar the opportunity of locating and attacking your Mindforce. If he was to do so, you would risk losing not only your sanity but also your soul! You succeed in severing the telepathic link, but the abrupt cessation leaves you in psychic shock: lose S <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <choice idref="sect136">To continue, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -6067,6 +6067,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect279">279</a>) Replaced <quote>lording</quote> with <quote>lordling</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>Alema trail</quote> with <quote>Alema Trail</quote>. Replaced <quote>treeline</quote> with <quote>tree-line</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>mindforce</quote> with <quote>Mindforce</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>the Gate</quote> with <quote>the Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Gate</quote> with <quote>the Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect292">292</a>) Replaced <quote>salute, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>salute. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>.</p>
@@ -6077,6 +6078,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Deleted <quote>at the beginning of this book</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>says, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>says. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>. Replaced <quote>candlemakers</quote> with <quote>candle-makers</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai healing</quote> with <quote>Kai Healing</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote>mindforce</quote> with <quote>Mindforce</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>camp fire</quote> with <quote>campfire</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect318">318</a>) Replaced <quote>an startling</quote> with <quote>a startling</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect319">319</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai tracking</quote> with <quote>Kai Tracking</quote>.</p>