From: Simon Osborne Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2015 15:37:06 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Very minor Caption issues in Grey Star Books 3 and 4 X-Git-Tag: 20150901~31 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=ee1fc91cf9f1cf6acb8c464ed1d89f9d8afabc82;p=project-aon.git Very minor Caption issues in Grey Star Books 3 and 4 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2448 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/03btng.xml b/en/xml/03btng.xml index 794d061..00c1d50 100644 --- a/en/xml/03btng.xml +++ b/en/xml/03btng.xml @@ -1879,7 +1879,7 @@ Paul Bonner - Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors + Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors. @@ -5469,7 +5469,7 @@

(94) Replaced each occurrence of Chaos-Master with Chaos-master. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced beasts and with beasts, and.

(99) Replaced elessin with Elessin. Replaced guards but with guards, but.

(100) Replaced west and with west, and.

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(105) Replaced Crabkey, is with Crabkey is. Replaced embarassed with embarrassed. Replaced arent you Crabkey with arent you, Crabkey. Replaced well. with well.

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(105) Replaced Crabkey, is with Crabkey is. Replaced embarassed with embarrassed. Replaced arent you Crabkey with arent you, Crabkey. Replaced well. with well. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(109) Replaced cloud plane with cloud plain.

(112) Replaced strength and with strength, and. Replaced cloud plane with cloud plain.

(115) Replaced statue with Guardian.

diff --git a/en/xml/04wotw.xml b/en/xml/04wotw.xml index 17ad691..a8a1d11 100644 --- a/en/xml/04wotw.xml +++ b/en/xml/04wotw.xml @@ -2743,7 +2743,7 @@ Paul Bonner - Unsuspecting the Shadakine warrior rides towards you. + Unsuspecting, the Shadakine warrior rides towards you. @@ -5350,6 +5350,7 @@

(181) Replaced power of Physiurgy with Power of Physiurgy. Replaced higher magick with Higher Magick.

(182) Replaced hills of Tilos with Hills of Tilos.

(184) Replaced higher magick with Higher Magick.

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(186) Replaced Unsuspecting the with Unsuspecting, the in the illustrations caption.

(187) Replaced blows and with blows, and.

(190) Replaced pain, then with pain, and then.

(191) Replaced for, indeed, I hate you with for indeed I hate you. Replaced breathes, I with breathes. I. Replaced represent; the with represent: the. Replaced eyes; colourless with eyes, colourless. Replaced feeling; like with feeling, like. Replaced powerful, I am with powerful; I am.