From: Simon Osborne Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 16:59:43 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Books 1-4 updated (minor updates: see Errata List pages) X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f12b514d4df06758ac321d14ac426074a1187200;p=project-aon.git Books 1-4 updated (minor updates: see Errata List pages) git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@283 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/01fftd.xml b/01fftd.xml index 5ba8591..5e2a674 100755 --- a/01fftd.xml +++ b/01fftd.xml @@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.15 2007/02/07 17:40:00 Simon Osborne +Periods added to Illustration captions. + Revision 1.14 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne A couple of minor Errata fixed. @@ -178,8 +181,8 @@ Todo: -

I would be especially pleased if my granting of the rights to distribute my books in this way was seen as my millennium gift to all those devoted readers who have kept the Kai flag flying high, through all the good times, and the not-so-good. It would make me very proud indeed if this enterprise laid the foundations of a lasting legacy, securing the longevity of Lone Wolf by making my creation freely and readily accessible to current and future online generations. For them, for us, for Sommerlund and the Kai. Joe Dever

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Project Aon would first like to thank Joe Dever for making this generous offering of the books that we have all loved from the beginning. We would also like to acknowledge the following members of Project Aon for their diligent work:

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Credits @@ -232,7 +235,7 @@ Todo: - +
@@ -691,7 +694,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - From here you can see the magnificent view
of the rooftops and spires of Holmgard + + From here you can see the magnificent view + of the rooftops and spires of Holmgard. + @@ -899,7 +905,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - An ornate pin appears to lock the door, but
there is also a keyhole in the lockplate + + An ornate pin appears to lock the door, but + there is also a keyhole in the lockplate. + @@ -1036,7 +1045,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - A terrible apparition in red robes swoops down
from the sky on the back of a Kraan + + A terrible apparition in red robes swoops down + from the sky on the back of a Kraan. + @@ -1128,7 +1140,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The Giak leader orders five of his troops
to open fire at you with their bows + + The Giak leader orders five of his troops + to open fire at you with their bows. + @@ -1243,7 +1258,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The log wall has collapsed in several places
where the Darklords are attacking + + The log wall has collapsed in several places + where the Darklords are attacking. + @@ -1391,7 +1409,7 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The wild old man is screaming at you + The wild old man is screaming at you. @@ -1813,7 +1831,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The clash of steel and the cries of men
and beasts echo through the forest + + The clash of steel and the cries of men + and beasts echo through the forest. + @@ -2114,7 +2135,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - Perched on his outstretched arm is the
black raven that you saw earlier + + Perched on his outstretched arm is the + black raven that you saw earlier. + @@ -2239,7 +2263,9 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - A young theurgist of the Magicians Guild of Toran + + A young theurgist of the Magicians Guild of Toran. + @@ -2512,7 +2538,9 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The herbalist offers you a selection of special potions + + The herbalist offers you a selection of special potions. + @@ -2745,7 +2773,9 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - It is a Burrowcrawler and it is trying to strangle you + + It is a Burrowcrawler and it is trying to strangle you. + @@ -3101,7 +3131,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - You notice a large merchants caravan
in the centre of the dusty turnpike + + You notice a large merchants caravan + in the centre of the dusty turnpike. + @@ -3252,7 +3285,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - A tall man dressed in white robes stands
before you, a bowl of herbs in his hands + + A tall man dressed in white robes stands + before you, a bowl of herbs in his hands. + @@ -3673,7 +3709,11 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - He laughs menacingly and pulls
back the hood of his cloak. He is
a Drakkar and you must fight him + + He laughs menacingly and pulls + back the hood of his cloak. He is + a Drakkar and you must fight him. + @@ -3928,7 +3968,9 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - Opening the bag, you find a message + + Opening the bag, you find a message. + @@ -4134,7 +4176,11 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - Your passage through the Graveyard is not
easy, the ground is broken and
covered with thorny graveweed. + + Your passage through the Graveyard is not + easy, the ground is broken and + covered with thorny graveweed. + @@ -4409,7 +4455,11 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - Pushing open the treehouse door,
you see an old hermit huddled in
the corner of the small cabin + + Pushing open the treehouse door, + you see an old hermit huddled in + the corner of the small cabin. + @@ -4747,7 +4797,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - You can see on the track above four soldiers and their
officer wearing the uniform of the Kings army + + You can see on the track above four soldiers and their + officer wearing the uniform of the Kings army. + @@ -4834,7 +4887,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The guards do not believe your story
and refuse to let you enter + + The guards do not believe your story + and refuse to let you enter. + @@ -4957,7 +5013,10 @@ Todo: Gary Chalk - The faces of the King and his closest advisers
are lined with worry and concentration + + The faces of the King and his closest advisers + are lined with worry and concentration. + @@ -5522,20 +5581,25 @@ Todo:

(Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book .

(1) Replaced Sommerlund with Sommlending and made the last choice (about using Sixth Sense) the first.

(4) Moved the last choice (about the Tracking Discipline) into the first position.

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(7) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(17) Changed the last choice that led to Section 331 to lead to Section 316 instead in order to parallel Section 89. It doesnt make sense to skip the section describing the tumble downhill.

(18) Moved the choice about the Camouflage Discipline into the first position.

(19) Moved the choice about the Tracking Discipline into the first position and replaced Gallowbrush with gallowbrush: you can't pick it up.

(20) Replaced Jala with jala and dagger with Dagger. The original versions of this book had this section lead to Section 272, which is incorrect. We are using the correct section, 273, as used in more recent editions.

(21) The text is unchanged but we have concatenated some of the paragraphs for the dice rolls for clarification.

(22) Added a comma after 04 in the first choice.

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(23) Reordered the choices. The choice that was originally first (about removing the pin) is now last. The choice about the Golden Key was originally last and is now first. Also added and wish to use it after Golden Key.

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(23) Reordered the choices. The choice that was originally first (about removing the pin) is now last. The choice about the Golden Key was originally last and is now first. Also added and wish to use it after Golden Key. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(32) Replaced unmistakeable with unmistakable.

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(34) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(36) Added a comma after 4 or lower in the first choice.

(37) Added a blank line before the decisions and reversed their order.

(38) Replaced both occurrences of woodsmoke with wood smoke.

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(41) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(46) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

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(51) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(58) Made the choice that led to Section 286 to lead to Section 251 instead. Many readers have realized that there was an error here but assumed that the original numbers for the choices should simply be reversed, giving Lone Wolf a chance at survival for hiding and certain death for riding on. Actually, there is no certain death possibility here. Hiding is supposed to grant you certain survival. The proof of this correction is that there is no other path to Section 251, and it works perfectly.

(62) Replaced crossbow had with crossbow has.

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(63) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(67) Made the choice that led to Section 140 to lead to Section 252 instead. If you read Section 222, youll notice that the choice leading to Section 252 is the east track. Indeed, only Section 140 may lead you to the bear of which Tracking is supposed to warn you in this section.

(69) Replaced Gallowbrush with gallowbrush: you can't pick it up.

(70) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

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(83) Added another s after posses in the last choice and moved that choice into the first position.

(87) Replaced Graveweed with graveweed.

(91) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

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(97) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(105) Replaced jet black with jet-black and skill, with skill or do not wish to use it,.

(112) Replaced cavemouth with cave mouth.

(119) Replaced Gallowbrush with gallowbrush: you can't pick it up.

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(121) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(122) Split the first sentence which was actually two independent clauses into two sentences to fix it.

(125) Moved the last choice (about the Tracking Discipline) into the first position.

(128) Replaced border ranger with Border Ranger.

(131) Replaced Magicians Guild of Toran with Magicians Guild of Toran.

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(144) Added or if you have no Backpack Items to the second paragraph. Replaced one Item is stolen with one item is stolen.

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(144) Added or if you have no Backpack Items to the second paragraph. Replaced one Item is stolen with one item is stolen. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(151) Added If you wish to remove the pin, turn to 337. This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands, but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from Section 23.

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(152) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(154) Replaced head first with head-first.

(166) Replaced tortuous with torturous.

(167) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

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(170) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(172) Moved the second choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position.

(175) Moved the last choice (about the Camouflage Discipline) into the first position. Replaced border rangers with Border Rangers.

(197) Deleted a superfluous space after the word wish at the very end of the second sentence.

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(200) Reversed the order of the choices.

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(200) Reversed the order of the choices. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(201) Changed the choice that led to Section 215 to lead to Section 15 instead. The original choice appears to make sense, but does not work out in a map. The indication that the correct section is really 15 is the fact that it is not otherwise accessible (though Section 215 is) and 15 leads back to Section 201 when taking the opposite direction.

(211) Moved the second choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

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(212) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(218) Replaced war cries with war-cries.

(221) Replaced rough hewn with rough-hewn.

(222) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.

(226) Replaced head first with head-first.

(235) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.

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(246) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(260) Replaced spreadeagled with spread-eagled.

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(267) Capitalized message in the second sentence of the second paragraph, since that is how retrievable items are supposed to be represented, and to be consistent with the first time the item is mentioned in this section.

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(267) Capitalized message in the second sentence of the second paragraph, since that is how retrievable items are supposed to be represented, and to be consistent with the first time the item is mentioned in this section. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(268) Replaced wary with weary. We hardly think Lone Wolf would be wary among the Kings soldiers.

(272) Replaced wood-smoke with wood smoke.

(275) Replaced tortuous with torturous.

(277) Replaced Turn 113 to Turn to 113.

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(284) Replaced both occurrences of Graveweed with graveweed.

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(284) Replaced both occurrences of Graveweed with graveweed. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(307) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(311) Moved the last choice (about Camouflage) into the first position.

(315) Replaced Items with items.

(319) Replaced death cry with death-cry, fnd with find, and half way with halfway.

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(323) Replaced jet black with jet-black.

(326) Replaced Graveweed with graveweed.

(333) Replaced tortuous with torturous.

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(334) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position, and move the first choice (that leads to Section 162) into the last position.

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(334) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position, and move the first choice (that leads to Section 162) into the last position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(336) Replaced unsheath with unsheathe.

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(341) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position.

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(341) Moved the last choice (about Tracking) into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(342) Replaced bloods with blood.

(349) Vonatar, from the seventh paragraph, is spelled Vonotar in later Lone Wolf books. Replaced magicians guild of Toran with Magicians Guild of Toran.

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(350) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below.

diff --git a/02fotw.xml b/02fotw.xml index 99862ff..4b45860 100755 --- a/02fotw.xml +++ b/02fotw.xml @@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.52 2007/02/07 17:40:00 Simon Osborne +Periods added to Illustration captions. + Revision 1.51 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne A couple of minor Errata fixed. @@ -731,8 +734,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk - The Kings Tower, a magnificent - structure of glass and stone + The Kings Tower, a magnificentstructure of glass and stone. @@ -949,8 +951,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk - Twisted and disfigured though he is, - you recognize Captain Kelman + Twisted and disfigured though he is,you recognize Captain Kelman. @@ -1096,7 +1097,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk - Inside the coach, it is warm and dry + Inside the coach, it is warm and dry. @@ -1308,7 +1309,7 @@ To do: -

Tis a fine blade, wrought of Durenese steel. It can be yours for only 12 Gold Crowns.

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Tis a fine blade, wrought of Durenese steel. It can be yours for only 12 Gold Crowns.

If you wish to purchase this Broadsword, mark it on your Action Chart.

If you leave this shop by the front door, turn to 347. If you leave by the rear door, turn to 3. @@ -1473,7 +1474,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff - and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip + and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip. @@ -1621,7 +1622,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk At that moment the true power of the - Sommerswerd is revealed to you + Sommerswerd is revealed to you. @@ -1892,7 +1893,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you, - a huge ram protruding from its black prow + a huge ram protruding from its black prow. @@ -2135,8 +2136,8 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The strange creature is wearing a splendid - jacket of patched leather and carrying - what appears to be a spear + jacket of patched leather and carrying + what appears to be a spear. @@ -2328,7 +2329,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk You find yourself staring into the - glowing eyes of a Helghast + glowing eyes of a Helghast. @@ -2453,7 +2454,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured - cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you + cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you. @@ -2748,7 +2749,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk Soldiers leap from the deck, their - clothes and hair in flames + clothes and hair in flames. @@ -2883,7 +2884,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they - let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch + let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch. @@ -3203,7 +3204,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The others are all seated at a large table - awaiting your appearance + waiting your appearance. @@ -3469,7 +3470,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and - a large charred earthenware jug drops out + a large charred earthenware jug drops out. @@ -3691,7 +3692,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk An attractive young woman spins a black dish - divided into ten sections marked 09 + divided into ten sections marked 09. @@ -3844,7 +3845,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk You chat with your fellow travellers - and learn about their backgrounds + and learn about their backgrounds. @@ -4096,7 +4097,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk You turn to see three harbour thugs - advancing towards you + advancing towards you. @@ -4304,7 +4305,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander - of King Alins personal bodyguard + of King Alins personal bodyguard. @@ -4696,7 +4697,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The innkeeper, a thin old man with only - one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food + one eye, is is carrying a tray of hot food. @@ -4838,8 +4839,8 @@ To do: Gary Chalk The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior - is advancing towards you, a large - broadsword raised + is advancing towards you, a large + broadsword raised. @@ -5153,7 +5154,7 @@ To do: Gary Chalk There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword - is unleashed in a searing white beam + is unleashed in a searing white beam. @@ -5705,74 +5706,83 @@ To do:

(Levels of Kai Training) The Levels of Kai Training section did not originally appear in this book, but has been added for the readers information.

(Kai Wisdom) Removed on the back cover of the book and replaced LONE WOLF with Lone Wolf.

(4) Replaced Sandsnake with sandsnake.

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(9) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(12) Replaced agreeing a wager with agreeing to a wager.

(16) Replaced razor sharp with razor-sharp.

(23) Replaced torch-lit with torchlit.

(24) Replaced Fox He with Fox. He.

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(26) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(27) Capitalized wildlands.

(31) Replaced both occurrences of Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant. Replaced lord-lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant.

(34) Replaced on to with onto.

(35) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

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(37) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(38) Replaced rib-cage with rib cage.

(40) Replaced Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant.

(50) Replaced the first word The with A. This is the first time you meet the priestthe introduction to the other coach members comes later.

(63) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position.

(64) Replaced it, their with it. Their. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

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(69) Replaced staffbearer with staff-bearer and Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant.

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(69) Replaced staffbearer with staff-bearer and Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(75) Replaced Sir, requires with Sir requires.

(78) Replaced on to with onto.

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(79) Replaced both occurrences of Kai lord with Kai Lord, and enemies, eg Helghasts, in with enemies (e.g. Helghast) in.

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(79) Replaced both occurrences of Kai lord with Kai Lord, and enemies, eg Helghasts, in with enemies (e.g. Helghast) in. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(84) Replaced leatherbound with leather-bound.

(88) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position.

(95) Moved the choice to heal the wounded man into the first position.

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(100) Replaced on to with onto.

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(100) Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(102) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(113) Replaced magicians guild with Magicians Guild.

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(118) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position.

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(118) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(122) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position and replaced Pick with If not, pick.

(123) Replaced kings with Kings.

(126) Replaced Vonatar with Vonotar, and jail with gaol.

(131) Replaced If you have no Weapon, deduct with Deduct since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.

(132) Moved the paragraph about keeping the Magic Spear before the choices.

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(134) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(140) Replaced well-known with well known.

(141) Replaced on to with onto.

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(144) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(146) Replaced on to with onto.

(150) Replaced marshbird with marsh-bird.

(151) Replaced succesful with successful.

(152) Replaced warfleet with war fleet.

(164) Replaced rockface with rock-face. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

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(166) Replaced on to with onto.

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(166) Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(169) Replaced gaming house with gaming-house.

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(176) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced despatch with dispatch in the illustrations caption. Replaced Hammerdal mountains with Hammerdal Mountains, and kings with Kings.

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(176) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced despatch with dispatch in the illustrations caption. Replaced Hammerdal mountains with Hammerdal Mountains, and kings with Kings. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(181) Useful in the last sentence of the first paragraph didnt need to be capitalized.

(184) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord.

(192) Replaced sommersaults with somersaults.

(193) Replaced ill-omen with ill omen.

(194) Replaced on to with onto.

(195) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

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(200) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(202) Replaced Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant.

(203) Replaced housemice with house mice.

(204) Replaced magicians guild with Magicians Guild.

(209) Replaced kings with Kings and Lord-Lieutenant with Lord-lieutenant.

(213) Replaced assasinates with assassinates.

(217) Replaced says in a cynical voice. with says in a cynical voice:.

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(222) Replaced on to with onto.

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(222) Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(223) There was a superfluous comma between dreadful and significance in the first paragraph.

(228) Replaced distance to left with distance to the left.

(231) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced on to with onto.

(232) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(234) Replaced on to with onto.

(237) Replaced on to with onto.

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(238) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(241) he has now been capitalized.

(242) Replaced (eg with (e.g..

(243) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord.

(244) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

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(249) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(254) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(255) Replaced weaponskill with Weaponskill.

(258) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(261) Replaced person with people to agree in number to the second choice.

(265) Replaced warfleet with war fleet. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(267) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord. Replaced on to with onto.

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(268) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(274) Replaced first floor with first-floor.

(276) It makes sense to restore your ENDURANCE points to the total you had before the match regardless of whether you win or lose. We changed this to be more clear. The original read:

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(277) Replaced staffbearer with staff-bearer.

(279) Replaced Hammerdal mountains with Hammerdal Mountains.

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(284) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(289) Replaced Jala with jala. Replaced seal with Seal.

(298) Replaced If you do not have a Weapon, you with You since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.

(Section 299) The original edition of this book reads: If you wish to give him your Magic Spear, so that he can defend the tunnel entrance, turn to 102. If you do not possess a Magic Spear, or do not wish to give it to Rhygar, turn to 118. Later editions came out reversing these two choices (i.e. the first choice leads to Section 118, the second choice to Section 102). Both of these versions are very problematic to game flow and inspired a controversy among the members of Project Aon. The version that you see in our text is a mixed scenario intended to most closely match the authors surmised original intention, even though it does not appear in either previously published version.

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(306) Replaced score reaches zero with score reaches zero or below. Replaced points to zero with points to zero or below.

(308) Replaced Each dice with Each die.

(312) Replaced rainswept with rain-swept. Replaced on to with onto.

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(314) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.

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(314) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(315) Moved the Mind Over Matter choice into the first position.

(321) Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord.

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(326) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(332) Added This creature is immune to Mindblast. to the end of the final paragraph.

(333) Replaced blood-stained with bloodstained.

(334) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced pot-holes with potholes

(337) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.

(345) Replaced jet black with jet-black.

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(350) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains. Replaced air, continually with air continually.

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(350) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains. Replaced air, continually with air continually. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below.

 diff --git a/03tcok.xml b/03tcok.xml index a4ba676..5651895 100755 --- a/03tcok.xml +++ b/03tcok.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.12 2007/02/07 17:40:00 Simon Osborne +Periods added to Illustration captions. + Revision 1.11 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne A couple of minor Errata fixed. @@ -648,7 +651,7 @@ fix illustration captions Gary Chalk - Two men in ragged clothes are huddled together beside a small fire + Two men in ragged clothes are huddledtogether beside a small fire. @@ -843,7 +846,7 @@ fix illustration captions Gary Chalk - His grip falters and he plummets backwards into the gaping void + His grip falters and he plummetsbackwards into the gaping void. @@ -991,8 +994,7 @@ fix illustration captions Gary Chalk - The statue rises slowly from the altar and advances -towards you + The statue rises slowly from thealtar and advances towards you. @@ -1309,7 +1311,7 @@ towards you Gary Chalk - My name is Loi-Kymar. I am an elder of the Magicians Guild of Toran, + My name is Loi-Kymar. I am an elderof the Magicians Guild of Toran. @@ -1562,8 +1564,7 @@ towards you Gary Chalk - A shadow to your right betrays the Baknar as it lopes -towards you + A shadow to your right betrays theBaknar as it lopes towards you. @@ -1705,7 +1706,7 @@ towards you Gary Chalk - The two-headed serpent slithers along the ledge + The two-headed serpentslithers along the ledge. @@ -1893,8 +1894,7 @@ towards you Gary Chalk - The three Baknar jump from the ice wall and land with a -crash on the sledges + The three Baknar jump from theice wall and land with acrash on the sledges. @@ -2055,7 +2055,7 @@ crash on the sledges

The gale dies away during the night and dawn arrives calm and still. On the horizon to the far north, you can see Ikaya, the ice fortress. The huge crystal-towered stronghold is a wondrous sight, made all the more marvellous because it appears to hover upside down upon a large cloud. Kalte mirage, says Dyce. Theres no dust in the air herethe land is reflected in the clouds. Thats Ikaya, but the real fortress is over the horizon. It cannot be more than forty miles away now. Dyce grabs a spade and starts to dig out the Kanu-dogs that have been buried by snow. You wake the others and eat a Meal before setting off once more.

It is midday when you reach the edge of a deep gorge. It is over forty feet wide, and there appears to be no way of crossing it. You are forced to travel along the gorge to the east. Eventually, after three miles, you discover a narrow ice bridge. However, the centre of the bridge is frighteningly thin and narrow: it looks incapable of supporting the weight of a loaded sledge.

- + Gary Chalk @@ -2161,8 +2161,7 @@ crash on the sledges Gary Chalk - Suddenly you see a large black shape pass close to the -surface of the ice + Suddenly you see a large blackshape pass close to thesurface of the ice. @@ -2405,8 +2404,7 @@ surface of the ice Gary Chalk - At the foot of the stairs, still upright and in armour, -are the skeletal remains of an ancient tomb keeper + At the foot of the stairs, stillupright and in armour, are the skeletalremains of an ancient tomb keeper. @@ -2478,8 +2476,7 @@ are the skeletal remains of an ancient tomb keeper Gary Chalk - You have released an Ice Demon and it is intent on your -destruction + You have released an Ice Demon andit is intent on your destruction. @@ -2769,8 +2766,7 @@ destruction Gary Chalk - From out of the dark slithers a huge ghoulish green -monster over which Vonotar has control + From out of the dark slithers a hugeghoulish green monster overwhich Vonotar has control. @@ -3254,8 +3250,7 @@ monster over which Vonotar has control Gary Chalk - Each Ice Barbarian scout is carrying a backpack -containing a child armed with a bone bow + Each Ice Barbarian scout iscarrying a backpack containing achild armed with a bone bow. @@ -3493,8 +3488,7 @@ containing a child armed with a bone bow Gary Chalk - You arrive at a massive ice hall full of crystal -stalagmites and stalactites + You arrive at a massive icehall full of crystal stalagmitesand stalactites. @@ -3684,8 +3678,7 @@ stalagmites and stalactites Gary Chalk - In an instant, the hunchback wizard is engulfed in a -tangle of vines + In an instant, the hunchbackwizard is engulfed in a tangleof vines. @@ -3843,8 +3836,7 @@ tangle of vines Gary Chalk - This strange creature is a Crystal Frostwyrm and you must -fight it to the death + This strange creature is aCrystal Frostwyrm and you must fightit to the death. @@ -4154,8 +4146,7 @@ fight it to the death Gary Chalk - This hall is a place of great evil, a nightmare -laboratory + This hall is a place of great evil,a nightmare laboratory. @@ -4325,7 +4316,7 @@ laboratory Gary Chalk - They have already started to skin the dead Baknar + They have already started toskin the dead Baknar. @@ -4501,8 +4492,7 @@ laboratory Gary Chalk - The Ice Barbarians circle around you but they dare not -attack while you hold one of their children as hostage + The Ice Barbarians circle around youbut they dare not attack while youhold one of their children as hostage. @@ -4670,8 +4660,7 @@ attack while you hold one of their children as hostage Gary Chalk - A hidden panel opens near the right stave and inside is a -beautiful glowing crystal + A hidden panel opens near theright stave and inside is abeautiful glowing crystal. @@ -4858,7 +4847,7 @@ beautiful glowing crystal Gary Chalk - Vonotar is led away to the deepest chamber of the Guildhall wherein lies the Daziarn: the door of an eternal prison from which there can be no escape + Vonotar is led away to the deepest chamberof the Guildhall wherein lies the Daziarn:the door of an eternal prison from whichthere can be no escape. @@ -5415,17 +5404,20 @@ beautiful glowing crystal

(Levels of Kai Training) Replaced LONE WOLF with Lone Wolf.

(Kai Wisdom) Removed at the front of the book. Replaced ice-fortress with ice fortress.

(1) Replaced pack ice with pack-ice. Replaced the word becoming with become in the fourth paragraph. Removed at the front of the book. Replaced Anskavern with Anskaven.

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(5) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(13) Replaced both occurrences of spyhole with spy-hole.

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(19) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(21) Replaced on to with onto.

(26) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(27) Replaced rock face with rock-face.

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(31) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(33) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced on to with onto.

(34) Replaced cretaure with creature and home-coming with homecoming.

(40) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(44) Replaced spyhole with spy-hole. Replaced mystery to me, I have with mystery to me. I have.

(49) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(52) Replaced ice-creature with ice creature.

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(56) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML. Replaced Magicians Guild with Magicians Guild. Replaced wretch is responsible with wretch, is responsible.

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(56) Added a quotation mark at the end of the fourth paragraph due to technical limitations in our XML. Replaced Magicians Guild with Magicians Guild. Replaced wretch is responsible with wretch, is responsible. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(58) Replaced on to with onto.

(59) Replaced on to with onto.

(62) Made the last sentence its own paragraph to better fit our format for the choices.

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(70) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(72) Replaced firesphere with Firesphere.

(76) Replaced spyhole with spy-hole.

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(78) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(85) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

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(88) Split the word anytime into any time in the fourth paragraph.

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(88) Split the word anytime into any time in the fourth paragraph. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(103) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(105) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(110) Replaced dimly-lit with dimly lit.

(114) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.

(116) Replaced Vial of Laumspur with vial of Laumspur. Replaced on to with onto.

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(125) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position.

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(125) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(134) Replaced on to with onto.

(137) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(145) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(146) Replaced as crevasse with as the crevasse.

(148) Replaced death blow with death-blow.

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(150) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position.

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(150) Moved the Firesphere choice into the second position. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(151) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(155) Replaced rock face with rock-face.

(160) Moved the choice regarding leaving the tent into the last position. Replaced breed are with breed is.

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(168) Replaced on to with onto.

(170) Replaced My thanks Kai Lord with My thanks, Kai Lord.

(171) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(173) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(180) Switched the order of the choices.

(182) Replaced ice-wall with ice wall.

(190) Replaced out distance with outdistance.

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(209) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(210) Added the before Kai Discipline in the first link.

(211) Replaced -3 to 3 with -33.

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(216) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(220) Replaced on to with onto.

(232) Replaced much-deserved with much deserved.

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(235) Replaced pack ice with pack-ice.

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(235) Replaced pack ice with pack-ice. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(247) Replaced matts with mats.

(248) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(250) Replaced visited the Graveyard of the Ancients with visited the Graveyard of the Ancients and survived.

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(252) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(254) Replaced spyhole with spy-hole.

(262) Split the first paragraph into two paragraphs and moved the Sixth Sense choice between the two. Replaced posses with possess and Pick with Otherwise, pick.

(263) Moved the choice regarding lost ENDURANCE points into the first position.

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(265) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(272) Replaced its tip with the rods tip.

(273) Replaced well-suited with well suited. Replaced breed are with breed is.

(276) Moved the Hunting or Tracking choice into the first position.

(284) Replaced fast flowing with fast-flowing.

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(292) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(298) Replaced fingerbones with finger-bones.

(301) Replaced on to with onto.

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(303) Added the choice If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, turn to 127, to parallel the same situation in Section 326.

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(303) Added the choice If you have the Kai Discipline of Sixth Sense, turn to 127, to parallel the same situation in Section 326.

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(305) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(314) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

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(320) Replaced something- with something.

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(320) Replaced something- with something. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(325) Replaced warlike with war-like. Replaced on to with onto.

(326) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(332) Moved the Sixth Sense or Hunting choice into the first position.

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(334) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(335) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(336) Replaced dirt encrusted with dirt-encrusted.

(337) Replaced vicious looking with vicious-looking.

(339) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(342) Removed at the front of the book.

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(350) Replaced LONE WOLF of the last paragraph with Lone Wolf and replaced both occurrences of Captain with captain. Replaced Magicians Guild with Magicians Guild. Replaced his crimes and it is you with his crimes, and it is you. Replaced Vonotar the traitor with Vonotar the Traitor. Replaced Anskavern with Anskaven. Replaced Anskavern with Anskaven.

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(350) Replaced LONE WOLF of the last paragraph with Lone Wolf and replaced both occurrences of Captain with captain. Replaced Magicians Guild with Magicians Guild. Replaced his crimes and it is you with his crimes, and it is you. Replaced Vonotar the traitor with Vonotar the Traitor. Replaced Anskavern with Anskaven. Replaced Anskavern with Anskaven. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference. Replaced fall to 0 with fall to 0 or below.

 diff --git a/04tcod.xml b/04tcod.xml index fb24818..ceaa7c4 100755 --- a/04tcod.xml +++ b/04tcod.xml @@ -15,6 +15,9 @@ $Id$ $Log: 04tcod.xml,v $ +Revision 1.62 2007/02/07 17:40:00 Simon Osborne +Periods added to Illustration captions. + Revision 1.61 2007/01/07 19:11:00 Simon Osborne A couple of minor Errata fixed. @@ -715,7 +718,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - Your target is a formidable Bandit Warrior + Your target is a formidable Bandit Warrior. @@ -868,7 +871,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The Stoneworm slithers towards youat a terrifying pace + The Stoneworm slithers towards youat a terrifying pace. @@ -1011,7 +1014,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The little fat man spins around and tumbles to the ground + The little fat man spins aroundand tumbles to the ground. @@ -1371,7 +1374,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - Razor-sharp discs of steel whistle down to claim their victims + Razor-sharp discs of steel whistledown to claim their victims. @@ -1609,7 +1612,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The stars foretold our meeting long ago, Lone Wolf + The stars foretold our meetinglong ago, Lone Wolf. @@ -1791,7 +1794,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - A procession of red-cloaked priestsenter the temple + A procession of red-cloaked priestsenter the temple. @@ -2101,7 +2104,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - A mantlet is being pushed across the battleground towards the barricade + A mantlet is being pushed across thebattleground towards the barricade. @@ -2340,7 +2343,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The crypt door is guarded by two Vassagonian warriors + The crypt door is guarded bytwo Vassagonian warriors. @@ -2422,7 +2425,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - A Vassagonian herald breaks free from the battle and sounds the retreat + A Vassagonian herald breaks free fromthe battle and sounds the retreat. @@ -2669,7 +2672,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - Dull, satanic eyes follow your every move + Dull, satanic eyes follow your every move. @@ -2980,7 +2983,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The snarling Warhounds bound towards the barricade + The snarling Warhounds bound towards the barricade. @@ -3189,7 +3192,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - He spits out his battle-cry and spurs his horse towards you once more + He spits out his battle-cry andspurs his horse towards you once more. @@ -3374,7 +3377,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - Astride the creature sits a warrior wreathed in iron and steel + Astride the creature sits a warriorwreathed in iron and steel. @@ -3694,7 +3697,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - You have spotted the leader of the bandit cavalry + You have spotted the leader ofthe bandit cavalry. @@ -3815,7 +3818,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The bandits are wandering idly up the track towards you + The bandits are wandering idly upthe track towards you. @@ -4013,7 +4016,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - You see a group of wagons on the highway ahead + You see a group of wagons onthe highway ahead. @@ -4218,7 +4221,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - You stare in horror as a deluge of blazing oil rains down + You stare in horror as a delugeof blazing oil rains down. @@ -4456,7 +4459,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - A loud hissing fills your ears,like steam escaping from a geyser + A loud hissing fills your ears,like steam escaping from a geyser. @@ -4583,7 +4586,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - He has lost everythinghis castle, his land, his town and his family... + He has lost everythinghis castle, his land, his town,and his family... @@ -4888,7 +4891,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - The rangers are dragged down into the bubbling depths + The rangers are dragged downinto the bubbling depths. @@ -4970,7 +4973,7 @@ Initial Revision. Gary Chalk - Barrakas men flee from King Ulnar and the army of Sommerlund + Barrakas men flee from King Ulnarand the army ofSommerlund @@ -5530,16 +5533,17 @@ Initial Revision.

(11) Replaced rockface with rock-face and saddle and with saddle, and.

(12) Replaced mission for with mission, for.

(13) Replaced end and with end, and.

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(14) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(18) Replaced tracks and with tracks, and.

(20) Replaced You reach the barricade and a wagon is pulled aside and you are carried in through the gap. with You reach the barricade, a wagon is pulled aside, and you are carried in through the gap. and Captain with captain.

(21) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(25) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

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(26) Replaced feet away, and with feet away and.

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(26) Replaced feet away, and with feet away and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(27) Added a period to the end of the first paragraph.

(32) Replaced river, is with river is. Replaced now your brave company with now that your brave company.

(33) Replaced ahead, and with ahead and.

(34) Changed the choice which led to Section 270 to point to Section 183. Section 270 is further back in the story than Section 34.

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(37) Replaced force, that with force that, Eshnar but with Eshnar, but, and dancing. with dancing..

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(37) Replaced force, that with force that, Eshnar but with Eshnar, but, and dancing. with dancing.. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(38) Replaced black and with black, and.

(40) Replaced Tracking and with Tracking, and. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(45) Replaced Gnadurn with gnadurn.

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(61) Replaced side-step with sidestep and foot and with foot, and.

(63) Replaced down but with down, but.

(66) Replaced counter-charge with countercharge and mid-air and with mid-air, and.

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(67) Replaced razor sharp with razor-sharp.

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(67) Replaced razor sharp with razor-sharp. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(69) Replaced away and with away, and.

(70) Replaced the middle choice If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, with If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by turning to 159. and moved it to the bottom. Also changed duties and with duties, and and tracks and tracks, and.

(71) Replaced spreadeagled with spread-eagled.

@@ -5561,7 +5565,7 @@ Initial Revision.

(76) Replaced him, than with him than.

(78) Replaced neckchains with neck-chains.

(79) Replaced excavation and with excavation, and.

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(84) Replaced interior you with interior, you and robe and with robe, and.

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(84) Replaced interior you with interior, you and robe and with robe, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(85) Replaced weapon but with weapon, but and hard unyielding with hard, unyielding.

(86) Replaced Ruanon, and with Ruanon and. Replaced on to with onto.

(87) Moved the Sixth Sense or Tracking choice into the first position.

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(92) Replaced town, and with town and. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(94) Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of automatic formatting.

(96) Replaced air and with air, and.

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(100) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(101) Replaced river and with river, and.

(104) Replaced stamina you with stamina, you.

(107) Replaced out and with out, and.

@@ -5582,6 +5587,7 @@ Initial Revision.

(118) Replaced locked. But with locked, but.

(121) Replaced stolid but with stolid, but.

(123) Replaced dreams but with dreams, but.

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(124) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(126) Replaced Pike and with Pike, and.

(128) Replaced trapdoor but with trapdoor, but.

(129) Split the two sentences of the last paragraph into separate paragraphs for the sake of automatic formatting.

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(136) Replaced action; for with action, for.

(137) Replaced foe but with foe, but, Captains with captains, and both occurrences of Captain when not part of Captain DVals name with captain.

(139) Replaced action; for with action, for.

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(142) Replaced death cry with death-cry, rainswept with rain-swept, warriors, and with warriors and, and possibilities; a crypt with possibilities: a crypt.

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(148) Replaced Captain with captain.

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(142) Replaced death cry with death-cry, rainswept with rain-swept, warriors, and with warriors and, and possibilities; a crypt with possibilities: a crypt. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(148) Replaced Captain with captain. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(150) Replaced floor and with floor, and

(153) Replaced leader; but with leader, but, wall and with wall, and and bow but with bow, but.

(154) Replaced battle, the with battle; the.

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(163) Replaced Vassagonian, but with Vassagonian but.

(166) Replaced here, and with here and and hard pressed with hard-pressed.

(167) Made the last paragraph its own sentence for the sake of automatic formatting.

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(168) Replaced Dull satanic with Dull, satanic and move and with move, and

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(168) Replaced Dull satanic with Dull, satanic and move and with move, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(169) Replaced him and with him, and and long curved with long, curved. Replaced on to with onto.

(171) Replaced mile you with mile, you and journey, and with journey and. Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

(172) Replaced beyond and with beyond, and.

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(186) Replaced back and with back, and, oily black with oily, black and head, leaps with head leaps. Replaced on to with onto.

(189) Replaced the ranger with a ranger in the second sentence. At this point, there are still several rangers left in the company. Also replaced air and with air, and.

(192) Replaced serated with serrated and chest and with chest, and.

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(193) Added or if you have won in the first two rounds, to the choice. Also replaced risen you with risen, you.

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(193) Added or if you have won in the first two rounds, to the choice. Also replaced risen you with risen, you. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(195) Replaced back and with back, and, horses and with horses, and, shutters and with shutters, and and tonight, and with tonight and.

(196) Replaced on to with onto.

(197) Replaced gasp and with gasp, and.

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(206) Replaced returned and with returned, and.

(207) Replaced wall, and with wall and.

(208) Replaced rockface with rock-face, dead-end with dead end, tunnel; a with tunnela and excavated and with excavated, and.

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(209) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry in the illustration caption. Replaced on to with onto.

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(209) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry in the illustration caption. Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(211) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

(212) Replaced well for with well, for.

(214) Replaced lights, make with lights make.

(219) Replaced effort, do with effort do. Replaced shute with chute.

(221) Replaced here and with here, and and stairs, by with stairs by.

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(223) Replaced on to with onto.

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(223) Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(224) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(225) Replaced burst but with burst, but, sweat and with sweat, and, small pink with small pink and leg and with leg, and.

(226) Replaced tree-trunks with tree trunks.

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(243) Replaced counter-charge, and with countercharge and.

(246) Replaced dull satanic with dull, satanic.

(247) Replaced elite with lite, highway and with highway, and, firewood and with firewood, and and incident and with incident, and.

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(249) Replaced thin chiselled with thin, chiselled, cavalry; a tall with cavalrya tall and tall dark-skinned with tall, dark-skinned.

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(249) Replaced thin chiselled with thin, chiselled, cavalry; a tall with cavalrya tall and tall dark-skinned with tall, dark-skinned. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(251) Replaced treeline with tree-line.

(253) Replaced them and with them, and.

(254) Replaced scouts but with scouts, but.

(255) Replaced Captain, and with captain and and Ruanon, and with Ruanon and.

(256) Replaced bridge, but with bridge but.

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(258) Replaced the middle choice If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, with If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by turning to 159. and moved it to the bottom. Also replaced crops you with crops, you.

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(258) Replaced the middle choice If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, with If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by turning to 159. and moved it to the bottom. Also replaced crops you with crops, you. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(260) Added or if you have won in the first three rounds, to the choice.

(262) Replaced strike but with strike, but and head and with head, and.

(263) Replaced trees you with trees, you.

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(269) Replaced rockface with rock-face.

(270) Replaced approach and with approach, and.

(272) Replaced sommersaulted with somersaulted and wounds, and with wounds and.

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(273) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(275) Replaced ground and with ground, and and you and with you, and.

(276) Replaced Stoneworm and with Stoneworm, and.

(277) Replaced pounce and with pounce, and.

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(282) Replaced stiff but with stiff, but, gives and with gives, and and terror into with terror, into.

(283) Replaced face and with face, and and fire and with fire, and.

(285) Replaced bolts and with bolts, and and bolts and with bolts, and..

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(289) Replaced deluge and with deluge, and, Captains with captains, help the Captain with help the captain, and ablaze and with ablaze, and. Moved the Warmarn choice into the first position. Replaced on to with onto.

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(289) Replaced deluge and with deluge, and, Captains with captains, help the Captain with help the captain, and ablaze and with ablaze, and. Moved the Warmarn choice into the first position. Replaced on to with onto. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(292) Replaced blade and the semi-circles with blade, and the semicircles.

(294) Replaced gantry and with gantry, and.

(296) Took out the second choice, which read If you have a Flask of Holy Water, turn to 283. and replaced the bottom choice If you do not possess either, with If you do not possess this Special Item,. With this choice removed, Section 274 is no longer redundant.

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(305) Replaced slovenlinesss with slovenliness.

(306) Replaced voice and with voice, and.

(307) Replaced pace and with pace, and and Ruanon but with Ruanon, but.

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(308) Replaced ground, its with ground; its and combat and with combat, and.

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(308) Replaced ground, its with ground; its and combat and with combat, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(309) Replaced minutes you with minutes, you. Replaced each of the ramps are guarded with each of the ramps is guarded.

(310) Replaced spear-haft with spear haft and thrust, and with thrust and.

(312) Replaced horses and with horses, and.

(313) Replaced leg, and with leg and.

(314) Replaced duties and with duties, and and window and with window, and.

(315) Replaced damp and with damp, and. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

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(318) Replaced war-lord with warlord and dead and with dead, and.

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(318) Replaced war-lord with warlord and dead and with dead, and. Replaced town and with town, and in the illustrations caption.

(322) Replaced Torch you with Torch, you.

(323) Replaced arrow and with arrow, and and bandit-leader with Bandit Leader.

(324) Replaced both occurrences of first floor with first-floor. Replaced on to with onto.

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(340) Replaced spin and with spin, and.

(341) Replaced clean and with clean, and.

(342) Replaced teeth you with teeth, you, hard unyielding with hard, unyielding, floor you with floor, you, and discard it or with discard it, or. Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of automatic formatting.

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(343) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(346) Replaced left hand with left-hand.

(347) Replaced escape but with escape, but, trapdoor, desperately with trapdoor desperately and back; but with back, but..

(348) Replaced the the with the.

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(350) Replaced Maakengorge; for with Maakengorge, for. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series.

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(350) Replaced Maakengorge; for with Maakengorge, for. Replaced Lone Wolf series with Lone Wolf series. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced cross reference with cross-reference, top of chart with top of the chart and fall to 0 with falls to 0 or below.