From 7e4fb46c8f1fa7e2caa07b960ea69cbca8801702 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2005 23:23:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Minor updates and illustration corrections. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@82 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- xml/01gstw.xml | 7 +++++-- xml/02tfc.xml | 5 ++++- xml/03btng.xml | 5 ++++- xml/04wotw.xml | 19 ++++++++++++++++--- 4 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/xml/01gstw.xml b/xml/01gstw.xml index 3bccffe..971f9e4 100755 --- a/xml/01gstw.xml +++ b/xml/01gstw.xml @@ -20,6 +20,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.9 2005/08/12 23:23:51 jonathan.blake +Minor updates and illustration corrections. + Revision 1.8 2005/08/10 18:42:03 jonathan.blake Added small illustration 8 to Section 148. @@ -234,8 +237,8 @@ Change Log:
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JC Alvarez (action charts)
Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)
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diff --git a/xml/02tfc.xml b/xml/02tfc.xml index 511eb0b..4589fd9 100755 --- a/xml/02tfc.xml +++ b/xml/02tfc.xml @@ -20,6 +20,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.9 2005/08/12 23:23:51 jonathan.blake +Minor updates and illustration corrections. + Revision 1.8 2005/08/10 20:04:22 jonathan.blake Fixed a number of issues centering on the Black Rod and also Section 103. @@ -191,7 +194,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield
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diff --git a/xml/04wotw.xml b/xml/04wotw.xml index bc01e81..ff56f3a 100755 --- a/xml/04wotw.xml +++ b/xml/04wotw.xml @@ -20,6 +20,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.11 2005/08/12 23:23:51 jonathan.blake +Minor updates and illustration corrections. + Revision 1.10 2005/07/14 17:42:59 jonathan.blake Removed spurious CR-CR line terminations @@ -144,8 +147,8 @@ Initial revision
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@@ -4523,7 +4526,7 @@ Heralding battle, to regain our hearts.

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We are only able to send you to the Lissan Plain, the north-western province of the Shadakine Empire (see the map at the beginning of the book). This was once the domain of the Masbaté tribe, warrior nomads of great prowess and strength. It was Shasarak who brought doom to these once-great people, when the Shadakine Empire was first won. In a terrible war, hordes of Shadakine warriors pursued the Masbaté across the plains in their great war chariots, led by the Wytch-king himself. The Masbaté were able to resist the Shadakine, despite overwhelming odds, until Shasarak summoned the demon plague. Faced with such an assault, the Masbaté were unable to resist and an entire race was wiped from the face of the world. The demons still roam the plains, and no one dares go there. The vast expanse of the Lissan Plain was once rich and fertile. Now, none may benefit from it, save for the scavenging packs of hell beasts that roam there.

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We are only able to send you to the Lissan Plain, the north-western province of the Shadakine Empire (see the map). This was once the domain of the Masbaté tribe, warrior nomads of great prowess and strength. It was Shasarak who brought doom to these once-great people, when the Shadakine Empire was first won. In a terrible war, hordes of Shadakine warriors pursued the Masbaté across the plains in their great war chariots, led by the Wytch-king himself. The Masbaté were able to resist the Shadakine, despite overwhelming odds, until Shasarak summoned the demon plague. Faced with such an assault, the Masbaté were unable to resist and an entire race was wiped from the face of the world. The demons still roam the plains, and no one dares go there. The vast expanse of the Lissan Plain was once rich and fertile. Now, none may benefit from it, save for the scavenging packs of hell beasts that roam there.

His voice has begun to grow very faint.

Turn to 326. @@ -4702,6 +4705,15 @@ Heralding battle, to regain our hearts.

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(343) Replaced superstitous with superstitious.

(345) Replaced arch enemy with arch-enemy.

(347) Replaced beleagured with beleaguered. Replaced higher magick with Higher Magick.

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(348) Deleted at the beginning of the book.

(350) Replaced demon lord with Demonlord.

(352) Replaced higher magick with Higher Magick.

(353) Replaced all occurrences of higher magick with Higher Magick. Added a fourth choice If you do not possess any of the above Powers, you must attack the bridge with your Staff; turn to 175. (cf. Section 280).

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