From 50e168e2359a94dc53fb383c4d72c6f6e174aff6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 21:44:51 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Books 8-12 updated (illustration caption data) git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@285 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- 08tjoh.xml | 98 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------- 09tcof.xml | 99 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------- 10tdot.xml | 98 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------- 11tpot.xml | 109 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------- 12tmod.xml | 92 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------- 5 files changed, 395 insertions(+), 101 deletions(-) diff --git a/08tjoh.xml b/08tjoh.xml index 99b22a5..ac69da0 100755 --- a/08tjoh.xml +++ b/08tjoh.xml @@ -747,7 +747,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - They shriek with malice and leap forward clutchingweapons of black steel. + + They shriek with malice and leap forward + clutching weapons of black steel. + @@ -964,7 +967,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A soldier bleeding from a wound to his head rides pastshouting: Turn back! + + A soldier bleeding from a wound to his + head rides past shouting: Turn back! + @@ -1489,7 +1495,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - Trosts face has become a mass of horrible eruptingboils. + + Trosts face has become a mass + of horrible eruptingboils. + @@ -1767,7 +1776,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The bronze-helmeted warrior lord yells his battle-cry:Shaag Drakkarim! + + The bronze-helmeted warrior lord yells + his battle-cry: Shaag Drakkarim! + @@ -1907,7 +1919,9 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - It is the Lorestone of Ohrido. + + It is the Lorestone of Ohrido. + @@ -2184,7 +2198,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A pair of green, spindly limbed creatures sit on thecauseway, sniffing the stinking cloud with delight. + + A pair of green, spindly limbed creatures sit on the + causeway, sniffing the stinking cloud with delight. + @@ -2490,7 +2507,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The young woman shows you her maps and withsadness tells of her fathers death. + + The young woman shows you her maps and + with sadness tells of her fathers death. + @@ -2965,7 +2985,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A black-bearded dwarf, with an equally black patchcovering his right eye, stands behind the counter. + + A black-bearded dwarf, with an equally black patch + covering his right eye, stands behind the counter. + @@ -3122,7 +3145,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A strange image takes shape resembling the head of amonstrous fly. + + A strange image takes shape resembling + the head of a monstrous fly. + @@ -3260,7 +3286,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The creature gives a strange snickering cry as it edgesnearer. + + The creature gives a strange snickering + cry as it edges nearer. + @@ -3485,7 +3514,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A scar-faced rogue leaps out of the shadows andattacks you with a pick-axe handle. + + A scar-faced rogue leaps out of the shadows + and attacks you with a pick-axe handle. + @@ -3659,7 +3691,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - Monks in hooded brown robes are lowering a coffininto one of several freshly dug graves. + + Monks in hooded brown robes are lowering a coffin + into one of several freshly dug graves. + @@ -3842,7 +3877,9 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - You are faced by a monstrous reptile. + + You are faced by a monstrous reptile. + @@ -3991,7 +4028,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The hairy abomination scuttles towards you, its venomousmaw poised to bite. + + The hairy abomination scuttles towards + you, its venomous maw poised to bite. + @@ -4020,7 +4060,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - An old man wearing an odd assortment of antiquearmour shuffles across your path. + + An old man wearing an odd assortment of + antique armour shuffles across your path. + @@ -4273,7 +4316,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The other passengers cackle and sneer, their facesgrowing larger and more grotesque. + + The other passengers cackle and sneer, their + faces growing larger and more grotesque. + @@ -4334,7 +4380,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - Suddenly the great head of a silver swamp pythonbursts through the rotting creepers. + + Suddenly the great head of a silver swamp + python bursts through the rotting creepers. + @@ -4446,7 +4495,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - The man is wearing the uniform of the Tharrogarrison. + + The man is wearing the uniform + of the Tharro garrison. + @@ -4615,7 +4667,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - Tadia wears a circlet of jet inlaid with runes andmystic symbols. + + Tadia wears a circlet of jet inlaid + with runes and mystic symbols. + @@ -4812,7 +4867,10 @@ add foreign tags Gary Chalk - A Ghagrim lopes towards you fixing you with aghastly stare. + + A Ghagrim lopes towards you fixing + you with a ghastly stare. + diff --git a/09tcof.xml b/09tcof.xml index a35b77d..8034068 100755 --- a/09tcof.xml +++ b/09tcof.xml @@ -851,7 +851,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - A group of reptilian creatures are stroking a largeleathery egg and speaking in a low hissing language. + + A group of reptilian creatures are stroking a large + leathery egg and speaking in a low hissing language. + @@ -1115,7 +1118,9 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - The Roctopus uncoils its long, slimy tentacles. + + The Roctopus uncoils its long, slimy tentacles. + @@ -1275,7 +1280,9 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Two reptilians kneel in the corridor ahead. + + Two reptilians kneel in the corridor ahead. + @@ -1645,7 +1652,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - In the doorway stand the grey-haired aristocratic figureof Chiban, and your companion Banedon. + + In the doorway stand the grey-haired aristocratic + figure of Chiban, and your companion Banedon. + @@ -1742,7 +1752,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - You are in combat with a deadly predator of theAnarian plain, the Anarian Sky-snake. + + You are in combat with a deadly predator of the + Anarian Plain, the Anarian Sky-snake. + @@ -1939,7 +1952,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - The Zaaryx Ghoul stares down at you with grim,inhuman eyes. + + The Zaaryx Ghoul stares down at you + with grim, inhuman eyes. + @@ -2219,7 +2235,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Two Giak scouts are loading their booty on to theback of a Kraan. + + Two Giak scouts are loading their booty + on to the back of a Kraan. + @@ -2355,7 +2374,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - The glistening form of the Cave Leekhon slinks intoview. + + The glistening form of the Cave Leekhon + slinks into view. + @@ -2587,7 +2609,9 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - You are set upon by the snarling Giak horde. + + You are set upon by the snarling Giak horde. + @@ -2923,7 +2947,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Two massive statues of dragons flank the wide avenuethat leads from the archway to the city. + + Two massive statues of dragons flank the wide + avenue that leads from the archway to the city. + @@ -3018,7 +3045,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Seated on the threadbare carpet is a scrawny old mandressed completely in feathers. + + Seated on the threadbare carpet is a scrawny + old man dressed completely in feathers. + @@ -3263,7 +3293,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - At your approach, the dais glows with a crimson lightand pulses like a living heart. + + At your approach, the dais glows with a crimson + light and pulses like a living heart. + @@ -3506,7 +3539,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Red-cloaked Drakkarim assault-troopers pour throughthe ragged gap in the gate. + + Red-cloaked Drakkarim assault-troopers pour + through the ragged gap in the gate. + @@ -3776,7 +3812,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - Kad-dul da-nar Li-ook! he breathes, and a vividgreen flame engulfs the sparkling jewel. + + Kad-dul da-nar Li-ook! he breathes, and a vivid + green flame engulfs the sparkling jewel. + @@ -3974,7 +4013,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - A Defender attacks him, driving his spear through thecold blue flames. + + A Defender attacks him, driving his spear + through the cold blue flames. + @@ -4293,7 +4335,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - The enemy begin bombarding the wall with hugestone balls fired from catapults. + + The enemy begin bombarding the wall with + huge stone balls fired from catapults. + @@ -4440,7 +4485,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - President Toltuda occupies a seat in the centre of thehall and presides over a heated discussion. + + President Toltuda occupies a seat in the centre of + the hall and presides over a heated discussion. + @@ -4654,7 +4702,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - The advancing guards drop what they are carryingand draw their swords. + + The advancing guards drop what they are + carrying and draw their swords. + @@ -4748,7 +4799,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - An old man with long grey hair and beard halts atthe top step and points his finger at you. + + An old man with long grey hair and beard halts + at the top step and points his finger at you. + @@ -4892,7 +4946,10 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications Brian Williams - he creatures dragon-like eyes blaze with angerand a deep growl rumbles from its cavernous mouth. + + he creatures dragon-like eyes blaze with anger + and a deep growl rumbles from its cavernous mouth. + @@ -5665,7 +5722,7 @@ Remove section and rule clarifications

(76) Replaced city and with city, and.

(77) Replaced attention they with attention, they and her and with her, and. Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech. Replaced female, she with female; she.

(81) Replaced fatigue your with fatigue, your.

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(82) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(82) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced Anarian plain with Anarian Plain in the illustrations caption.

(83) Removed the quotation marks from the telepathic speech.

(85) Replaced growl he with growl, he.

(86) Replaced throat but with throat, but and You wish with If you wish.

diff --git a/10tdot.xml b/10tdot.xml index 2046801..037f835 100755 --- a/10tdot.xml +++ b/10tdot.xml @@ -764,7 +764,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The grim city-fortress of Torgar + + The grim city-fortress of Torgar. + @@ -1005,7 +1007,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Suddenly ghoulish, dome-shaped heads rise from the river + + Suddenly ghoulish, dome-shaped heads rise from the river. + @@ -1260,7 +1264,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A massive man steps forward, with thick read hair and
a beard that cascades over his wolfskin cloak + + A massive man steps forward, with thick read hair and + a beard that cascades over his wolfskin cloak. + @@ -1545,7 +1552,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The black bear wrenches one snarling hound from your leg
and another is torn to shreds by its razor-sharp claws + + The black bear wrenches one snarling hound from your leg + and another is torn to shreds by its razor-sharp claws. + @@ -1680,7 +1690,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Ragged columns of slaves stumble along the passages,
beaten, cursed and whipped by their Drakkarim guards + + Ragged columns of slaves stumble along the passages, + beaten, cursed and whipped by their Drakkarim guards. + @@ -1965,7 +1978,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Meet your doom, Eruan scum! he sneers,
his fearsome axe raised to strike + + Meet your doom, Eruan scum! he sneers, + his fearsome axe raised to strike. + @@ -2007,7 +2023,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A huge, sabre-toothed jackal with cream-coloured
skin regards them with disdain + + A huge, sabre-toothed jackal with cream-coloured + skin regards them with disdain. + @@ -2127,7 +2146,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Krorn pack shuffle towards you on short bow legs,
their gnarled skin shiny like knotted leather + + The Krorn pack shuffle towards you on short bow legs, + their gnarled skin shiny like knotted leather. + @@ -2386,7 +2408,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A Drakkarim Death Knight draws back his weapon
and prepares to strike at your neck + + A Drakkarim Death Knight draws back his weapon + and prepares to strike at your neck. + @@ -2664,7 +2689,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The scaly Gorodon lumbers towards you + + The scaly Gorodon lumbers towards you. + @@ -2859,7 +2886,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Taintor Wolf howls as it anticipates sinking its
great yellow fangs into your unprotected throat + + The Taintor Wolf howls as it anticipates sinking its + great yellow fangs into your unprotected throat. + @@ -3084,7 +3114,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The man curses as he pulls free his studded
leather Bullwhip and lashes out + + The man curses as he pulls free his studded + leather Bullwhip and lashes out. + @@ -3341,7 +3374,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - At the point where the rods meet, the Lorestones
of Nyxator hang suspended + + At the point where the rods meet, the Lorestones + of Nyxator hang suspended. + @@ -3508,7 +3544,11 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - On a detailed map of the town, the Prince and the King mark the
places where their regiments will assemble and attack the enemy + + On a detailed map of the town, the Prince and the King + mark the places where their regiments will assemble + and attack the enemy. + @@ -3614,7 +3654,11 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Drakkarim warrior thrusts the stave of iron at your
chest and a blast of white flame scorches your arm + + The Drakkarim warrior thrusts the stave of + iron at your chest and a blast of white + flame scorches your arm. + @@ -3945,7 +3989,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Battle of Cetza: Troop positions at dawn + + The Battle of Cetza: Troop positions at dawn. + @@ -4207,7 +4253,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A massive hole is torn in the iron plate and the spearpoint
of Adamass army surges towards the ruined gate + + A massive hole is torn in the iron plate and the spearpoint + of Adamass army surges towards the ruined gate. + @@ -4250,7 +4299,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The head of a ghastly worm-like creature with
huge clacking mandibles is exposed + + The head of a ghastly worm-like creature with + huge clacking mandibles is exposed. + @@ -4698,7 +4750,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The three remaining warriors brandish their swords
and axes and come thundering towards you + + The three remaining warriors brandish their swords + and axes and come thundering towards you. + @@ -4750,7 +4805,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A Drakkarim officer appearsthe most repugnant
human being you have ever seen + + A Drakkarim officer appearsthe most repugnant + human being you have ever seen. + diff --git a/11tpot.xml b/11tpot.xml index d379ca7..f400b10 100755 --- a/11tpot.xml +++ b/11tpot.xml @@ -1034,7 +1034,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - The Agtah flee in panic before the fierce onslaught ofLorkon Ironhearts army. + + The Agtah flee in panic before the fierce + onslaught of Lorkon Ironhearts army. + @@ -1185,7 +1188,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Meledorians flee at the dreadful sight of the Chaos-master looming thirty feet above them. + + Meledorians flee at the dreadful sight of the + Chaos-master looming thirty feet above them. + @@ -1304,7 +1310,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - From your perch on the dragonmount you feast youreyes on the shining City of Yanis. + + From your perch on the dragonmount you feast + your eyes on the shining City of Yanis. + @@ -1412,7 +1421,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - As Serocca takes a seat at the table opposite you, youcannot help but admire her beauty. + + As Serocca takes a seat at the table opposite + you, you cannot help but admire her beauty. + @@ -1711,7 +1723,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - The five notorious criminals raise their swords and step forwardto challenge you, exposing the sixth member of their group. + + The five notorious criminals raise their + swords and step forward to challenge you, + exposing the sixth member of their group. + @@ -1812,7 +1828,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Cradled in the arms of a Yoacor guard lies theloathsome, stunted form of the Beholder. + + Cradled in the arms of a Yoacor guard lies + the loathsome, stunted form of the Beholder. + @@ -2097,7 +2116,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Vonotar the Traitor screams a curse and a jet of coldfire from his ring lances your chest. + + Vonotar the Traitor screams a curse and a jet + of cold fire from his ring lances your chest. + @@ -2333,7 +2355,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - A huge, worm-like monstrosity swoops down to attackyou with its sword-sharp fangs. + + A huge, worm-like monstrosity swoops down + to attack you with its sword-sharp fangs. + @@ -2513,7 +2538,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Grotesque Agtah monsters stagger from the trees onboth sides of the bridge. + + Grotesque Agtah monsters stagger from + the trees on both sides of the bridge. + @@ -2725,7 +2753,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Carefully you peel away the metal sheeting to discoverthat the statue is no more than a tangle of mouldering bones. + + Carefully you peel away the metal sheeting + to discover that the statue is no more than + a tangle of mouldering bones. + @@ -2835,7 +2867,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - You are in mortal combat against a huge, swarmingmass of Chaos-rats intent on stripping your flesh to the bone. + + You are in mortal combat against a huge, + swarming mass of Chaos-rats intent on + stripping your flesh to the bone. + @@ -3000,7 +3036,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - With dread, you watch the scarlet warrior reach out tograb the golden Lorestones. + + With dread, you watch the scarlet warrior + reach out to grab the golden Lorestones. + @@ -3286,7 +3325,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - The old crone draws patterns in the air with a crookedfinger and mutters to herself about the three cards laidbefore her. + + The old crone draws patterns in the air with + a crooked finger and mutters to herself about + the three cards laid before her. + @@ -3389,7 +3432,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - You study the map, noting with dismay the great distancewhich separates the Nahgoth Forest from the city of Haagadar. + + You study the map, noting with dismay the + great distance which separates the Nahgoth + Forest from the city of Haagadar. + @@ -3528,7 +3575,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - As you reach the great door, you are confronted bythree tentacled horrors, the fearsome Octagtah. + + As you reach the great door, you are confronted + by three tentacled horrors, the fearsome Octagtah. + @@ -3795,7 +3845,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - What you see before you is a tableau of our worlds: theuniverse of Aon and the Daziarn Plane, says the Beholder. + + What you see before you is a tableau + of our worlds: the universe of Aon and the + Daziarn Plane, says the Beholder. + @@ -3928,7 +3982,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Behind the huge black bird, the scarlet warriorswinged steed, lies the temple of the Sandai, guarded by twoarmour-clad creatures. + + Behind the huge black bird, the scarlet warriors + winged steed, lies the temple of the Sandai, guarded by + two armour-clad creatures. + @@ -4099,7 +4157,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Five chariots driven by a score of Ookor guardscharge out of the city and come thundering across thegrassland towards you. + + Five chariots driven by a score of Ookor guards + charge out of the city and come thundering + across the grassland towards you. + @@ -4315,7 +4377,11 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - Let us toast the success of your treasure hunt, saysLorkon Ironheart, raising his glass on high. + + Let us toast the success of your + treasure hunt, says Lorkon + Ironheart, raising his glass on high. + @@ -4471,7 +4537,10 @@ label language of foreign tags Brian Williams - The Haagadar Sewer Snake rears up from the narrowtunnel and fixes you with its burning yellow eyes. + + The Haagadar Sewer Snake rears up from the narrow + tunnel and fixes you with its burning yellow eyes. + diff --git a/12tmod.xml b/12tmod.xml index 4b0f2f2..b8c76c9 100755 --- a/12tmod.xml +++ b/12tmod.xml @@ -899,7 +899,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - A Drakkar Marine stabs atyour neck with his sword. + + A Drakkar Marine stabs atyour neck with his sword. + @@ -1135,7 +1137,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Plaak springs from the floor towards your face. + + The Plaak springs from the floor towards your face. + @@ -1509,7 +1513,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The ghastly form of Darklord Gnaag emerges from ashadowy archway. + + The ghastly form of Darklord Gnaag + emerges from a shadowy archway. + @@ -1672,7 +1679,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Xargath rises up from the
sea and lunges at theship. + + The Xargath rises up from the + sea and lunges at the ship. + @@ -1988,7 +1998,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Before you stands a magnificent warrior, theSlavemaster. + + Before you stands a + magnificent warrior, the Slavemaster. + @@ -2167,7 +2180,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - As the two men raise their heads, you recognizeBanedon and Lord Rimoah. + + As the two men raise their heads, you + recognize Banedon and Lord Rimoah. + @@ -2422,7 +2438,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Scores of men hurl themselves over the ships rail intothe Kaltesee. + + Scores of men hurl themselves over the + ships rail into the Kaltesee. + @@ -2704,7 +2723,8 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Darkland ironclads surge towards the Intrepid. + + The Darkland ironclads surge towards the Intrepid. @@ -3123,7 +3143,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Death Knight stabs viciously at your midriff. + + The Death Knight stabs viciously at your midriff. + @@ -3315,7 +3337,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Two misshapen Helgedad Ghouls
loom out of thedarkness. + + Two misshapen Helgedad Ghouls + loom out of the darkness. + @@ -3527,7 +3552,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - An orange-skinned reptilian and a blue-skinnedhumanoid step into the gore-stained pit. + + An orange-skinned reptilian and a blue-skinned + >humanoid step into the gore-stained pit. + @@ -4036,7 +4064,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Darklord Kraagenskl draws his sword. + + Darklord Kraagenskl draws his sword. + @@ -4178,7 +4208,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Ictakkos tendril skims your shoulder. + + The Ictakkos tendril skims your shoulder. + @@ -4669,7 +4701,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Lajakeka waits at the edge of the quarrys crater. + + The Lajakeka waits at the edge + of the quarrys crater. + @@ -4733,7 +4768,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The huge, shaggy Egorgh gets ready to leap at yourchest. + + The huge, shaggy Egorgh gets ready + to leap at your chest. + @@ -4962,7 +5000,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The room is filled with colossal glass tanks and tubesall bubbling with sorcerous fluids. + + The room is filled with colossal glass tanks + and tubes all bubbling with sorcerous fluids. + @@ -5206,7 +5247,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - Inside the harbour square you stop and stare at amonstrous ironclad juggernaut. + + Inside the harbour square you stop and stare + at a monstrous ironclad juggernaut. + @@ -5567,7 +5611,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - You have found what you have been looking for:The Tower of the Damned. + + You have found what you have been looking for: + The Tower of the Damned. + @@ -5804,7 +5851,9 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The sea-scavenger darts towards you. + + The sea-scavenger darts towards you. + @@ -5880,7 +5929,10 @@ Initial revision Brian Williams - The Xaghash advances towards you, its axe poised tostrike you down. + + The Xaghash advances towards you, its + axe poised to strike you down. + -- 2.34.1