From 60a2fefb32b70cd13abb2035d3b41eed5b9b5464 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2007 18:12:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Books 5-7: updated illustration captions. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@284 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- 05sots.xml | 125 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------- 06tkot.xml | 89 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------- 07cd.xml | 100 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------- 3 files changed, 250 insertions(+), 64 deletions(-) diff --git a/05sots.xml b/05sots.xml index 40c3590..363403e 100755 --- a/05sots.xml +++ b/05sots.xml @@ -701,7 +701,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - You are in underwater combat with a deadly salt water,scavenger. + + You are in underwater combat with + a deadly salt water scavenger. + @@ -802,7 +805,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The warrior tries to trample you beneath the hooves of hisstartled horse. + + The warrior tries to trample you beneath + the hooves of his startled horse. + @@ -1221,7 +1227,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Impaled upon the sharp iron pole is the head of the,Vassagonian envoy. + + Impaled upon the sharp iron pole is + the head of the Vassagonian envoy. + @@ -1363,7 +1372,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The huge bulk of a Kwaraz emerges from out of the dark. + + The huge bulk of a Kwaraz emerges + from out of the dark. + @@ -1684,7 +1696,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - A man in a white robe sits near a door in the far wall, readinga scroll. + + A man in a white robe sits near a door + in the far wall, reading a scroll. + @@ -1896,7 +1911,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The courier unsheathes his sword and attacks before youhave a chance to stand up. + + The courier unsheathes his sword and attacks + before you have a chance to stand up. + @@ -2096,7 +2114,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The officer, a bull-necked warrior with a flat nose, elbowsthe others aside and attacks. + + The officer, a bull-necked warrior + with a flat nose, elbows the + others aside and attacks. + @@ -2248,7 +2270,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - One of Maouks men looms out of the darkness, his facecovered by a pad of herbs. + + One of Maouks men looms out of the darkness, + his face covered by a pad of herbs. + @@ -2354,7 +2379,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The alley is transformed into a rush of shocked andscreaming people, all scrambling to avoid the deluge of burningfilth. + + The alley is transformed into a rush of shocked + and screaming people, all scrambling to avoid + the deluge of burning filth. + @@ -2608,7 +2637,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Suddenly a wave of fear engulfs you as something crawls upyour forearm. + + Suddenly a wave of fear engulfs you as + something crawls up your forearm. + @@ -2789,7 +2821,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Three Sharnazim wade out of the dark sewer, naked to thewaist. + + Three Sharnazim wade out of the dark + sewer, naked to the waist. + @@ -2936,7 +2971,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The giant armourer raises a massive hammer and stridesforward. + + The giant armourer raises a massive + hammer and strides forward. + @@ -3253,7 +3291,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - His ranting begins to stir the crowd to fever pitch. + + His ranting begins to stir the + crowd to fever pitch. + @@ -3340,7 +3381,9 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - A deadly flood of horror hurtles from his hand. + + A deadly flood of horror hurtles from his hand. + @@ -3712,7 +3755,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - A green whorl of vapour is forming slowly into the shape ofa glistening, serpent-like monster. + + A green whorl of vapour is forming + slowly into the shape of a glistening, + serpent-like monster. + @@ -3831,7 +3878,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The Vordak lands behind you, astride the Itikars back, itsskeletal fingers sunk deep into your mounts feathered flesh. + + The Vordak lands behind you, astride the Itikars + back, its skeletal fingers sunk deep into your + mounts feathered flesh. + @@ -4079,7 +4130,9 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - In a flash of light the Drakkar is gone. + + In a flash of light the Drakkar is gone. + @@ -4322,7 +4375,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Pirate roll! he shouts to the fighting dwarves. + + Pirate roll! he shouts + to the fighting dwarves. + @@ -4537,7 +4593,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The smoke clears to reveal the grinning face of a dwarf atthe cabin window. + + The smoke clears to reveal the grinning + face of a dwarf at the cabin window. + @@ -4789,7 +4848,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - You catch a glimpse of the Drakkar, his death-mask slashedin two, pitched from the landing platform. + + You catch a glimpse of the Drakkar, his + death-mask slashed in two, pitched + from the landing platform. + @@ -4918,7 +4981,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - You raise the Sommerswerd, willing the blade todischarge a bolt of power at Haakon. + + You raise the Sommerswerd, willing the blade + to discharge a bolt of power at Haakon. + @@ -5183,7 +5249,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - The other guard has drawn a steel mace and runs at youwith hatred blazing in his dark eyes. + + The other guard has drawn a steel mace and + runs at you with hatred blazing + in his dark eyes. + @@ -5244,7 +5314,11 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Perched upon the huge rocky columns are Kraan, theirDrakkar riders scouring the valley with telescopes. + + Perched upon the huge rocky columns are + Kraan, their Drakkar riders scouring the + valley with telescopes. + @@ -5483,7 +5557,10 @@ added a few instances of the tag Gary Chalk - Set on a pedestal, the book lies open, its secrets revealedto your eyes alone. + + Set on a pedestal, the book lies open, its + secrets revealed to your eyes alone. + diff --git a/06tkot.xml b/06tkot.xml index 673ef19..3e7b9b8 100755 --- a/06tkot.xml +++ b/06tkot.xml @@ -826,7 +826,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The town of Eula has been turned into a huge armyencampment. + + The town of Eula has been turned + into a huge army encampment. + @@ -1056,7 +1059,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Altan wields a longbow of orange toa wood. + + Altan wields a longbow of orange toa wood. + @@ -1341,7 +1346,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - One of them is wearing a spiked knuckleduster. + + One of them is wearing a spiked knuckleduster. + @@ -1553,7 +1560,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The path to Castle Taunor is steep and slippery. + + The path to Castle Taunor is steep and slippery. + @@ -1663,7 +1672,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - He is determined to fight you to the death. + + He is determined to fight you to the death. + @@ -1778,7 +1789,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - You rush to protect the captain from the snarling pirateberserkers. + + You rush to protect the captain from + the snarling pirate >berserkers. + @@ -2114,7 +2128,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The ancient city of Varetta. + + The ancient city of Varetta. + @@ -2334,7 +2350,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Supper time, Goregasher! cries the Kloon gleefully. + + Supper time, Goregasher! cries the Kloon gleefully. + @@ -2520,7 +2538,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The elderly men are poring over their books and starcharts. + + The elderly men are poring over + their books and star charts. + @@ -2863,7 +2884,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Are you a believer or an unbeliever? + + Are you a believer or an unbeliever? + @@ -3064,7 +3087,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - From within the closed helm of black steel a voice shouts outDie Northlander! + + From within the closed helm of black steel + a voice shouts out Die Northlander! + @@ -3384,7 +3410,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - On a charger as black as midnight sits a scar-faced youngman. + + On a charger as black as midnight + sits a scar-faced young man. + @@ -3832,7 +3861,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The lordling kicks back his chair and towers over thewretch. + + The lordling kicks back his chair + and towers over the wretch. + @@ -4027,7 +4059,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Youre in luck, my friend, we have one room left. + + Youre in luck, my friend, we have one room left. + @@ -4406,7 +4440,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Without warning, the warrior pulls the trigger of hiscrossbow. + + Without warning, the warrior pulls + the trigger of his crossbow. + @@ -4573,7 +4610,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - You are thrown into the arms of the waking dead. + + You are thrown into the arms of the waking dead. + @@ -4699,7 +4738,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - You enter the tavern in time to witness a spectacular event. + + You enter the tavern in time to + witness a spectacular event. + @@ -4814,7 +4856,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The pirates hand is drawn back ready to throw. + + The pirates hand is drawn back ready to throw. + @@ -5310,7 +5354,10 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - The chamber reeks with the pungent smell of preservativesand dead bodies. + + The chamber reeks with the pungent smell + of preservatives and dead bodies. + @@ -5682,7 +5729,9 @@ Initial revision Gary Chalk - Time has at last caught up with this ancient terror. + + Time has at last caught up with this ancient terror. + diff --git a/07cd.xml b/07cd.xml index 7cd77a2..fb40d58 100755 --- a/07cd.xml +++ b/07cd.xml @@ -820,7 +820,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - Halfway down the stairs you disturb a colony of bats nestingin the ceiling. + + Halfway down the stairs you disturb a + colony of bats nesting in the ceiling. + @@ -978,7 +981,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - A shadowy figure with flaming red eyes is hovering in the sky,its hand gripping a great spiked ball and chain. + + A shadowy figure with flaming red eyes is hovering in the + sky, its hand gripping a great spiked ball and chain. + @@ -1191,7 +1197,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - You dig your heels into the wet sand and face the seethingtide of rats. + + You dig your heels into the wet sand + and face the seething tide of rats. + @@ -1398,7 +1407,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - You turn to see a mass of slimy, twisting serpents hatchingfrom the eggs. + + You turn to see a mass of slimy, twisting + serpents hatching from the eggs. + @@ -1571,7 +1583,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The Hound of Death slams into your chest, ramming youto the ground with the weight of its massive body. + + The Hound of Death slams into your chest, ramming you + to the ground with the weight of its massive body. + @@ -1831,7 +1846,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - You enter a chamber where a tall bronze statue stands: it isa Zakhan, a ruler of Vassagonia. + + You enter a chamber where a tall bronze statue stands: + it is a Zakhan, a ruler of Vassagonia. + @@ -1952,7 +1970,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - Four warriors, dark and grim, march into the halltheycannot possibly be human. + + Four warriors, dark and grim, march into + the hallthey cannot possibly be human. + @@ -2337,7 +2358,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The Beastman Gaoler, a grim-faced creature armed withan axe, guards the staircase. + + The Beastman Gaoler, a grim-faced creature + armed with an axe, guards the staircase. + @@ -2628,7 +2652,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The colossal, wedge-shaped head of a gigantic snake rearsup before you. + + The colossal, wedge-shaped head of a + gigantic snake rears up before you. + @@ -2650,7 +2677,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - Scores of seated creatures crowd the tiers, staring at you,their eyes like pinpoints of fire. + + Scores of seated creatures crowd the tiers, staring + at you, their eyes like pinpoints of fire. + @@ -3020,7 +3050,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The hand is a predatorit can only survive by consuminglive human brain. + + The hand is a predatorit can only survive + by consuming live human brain. + @@ -3087,7 +3120,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - You are clinging to the body of a deadly Lekhor that ispoised to strike. + + You are clinging to the body of a deadly + Lekhor that is poised to strike. + @@ -3295,7 +3331,9 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - A great toad-like face stares unblinkingly into your eyes. + + A great toad-like face stares unblinkingly into your eyes. + @@ -3631,7 +3669,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - Snickering with evil delight, the Dhax stalk closer andcloser. + + Snickering with evil delight, the + Dhax stalk closer and closer. + @@ -3808,7 +3849,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - You plunge your weapon into the monstrous eye andgouts of a luminous jelly-like substance pour from the wound. + + You plunge your weapon into the monstrous eye and gouts + of a luminous jelly-like substance pour from the wound. + @@ -3976,7 +4020,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - Tavig is barely visible inside the massive fist that isretreating down the tunnel. + + Tavig is barely visible inside the massive + fist that is retreating down the tunnel. + @@ -4135,7 +4182,11 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The body of a dead man is lying in the fireplace; behindhim, a panel is wedged open and you can just make out somestairs disappearing into the darkness. + + The body of a dead man is lying in the fireplace; + behind him, a panel is wedged open and you can just + make out some stairs disappearing into the darkness. + @@ -4384,7 +4435,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The entire corridor shakes with the violence of a series oferuptions that tears rock and iron with ease. + + The entire corridor shakes with the violence of a series + of eruptions that tears rock and iron with ease. + @@ -4695,7 +4749,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - The sphere halts in mid-air: it looks like a huge, blackhuman brain studded with large, hairy warts. + + The sphere halts in mid-air: it looks like a huge, + black human brain studded with large, hairy warts. + @@ -4807,7 +4864,10 @@ WOLM what still missing: errata in the backmatter, the secondary illustrations, Gary Chalk - We are forever in your debt, Lone Wolf, says Lord Ardan,as he shakes your hand warmly. + + We are forever in your debt, Lone Wolf, says + Lord Ardan, as he shakes your hand warmly. + -- 2.34.1