The Plague Lords of Ruel: Corrections
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Jonathan Blake
David Davis
Jeff Dougan
Ingo Klöcker
Christopher Lundgren
Simon Osborne
Jody Williams
Thomas Wolmer
Corrections
The Story So Far . . . #4: left-handed and Old Kingdom magic -> Left-handed and Old Kingdom magic
as in lw14-16
. . . Disciplines #3: COMBAT SKILL is reduced -> ENDURANCE is reduced
Reported by majestic@cats.ucsc.edu
Improved . . . Disciplines #1: levels of Kai Grand Mastery you will -> levels of Kai Grand Mastery, you will [so: in harmony with the imprvdsc pages from books 14-18)
1 #1: Fryelund forest -> Fryelund Forest
48 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
76 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
76 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
77 #1:
It says 'discard one item' when it should be one to three items.
77 #2: and/or Robe -> and/or Robe.
missing period.
77 #3:
Carrying around vs. wearing the Cener Robe and Mask - logically, they shouldn't occupy space in your Backpack when you wear them. (Though 77/304 do tell you they do, even though you put them on immediately.)
I agree with you that this is nonsensical once you put them on.
87 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
87 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
99 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
104 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
133 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
137 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
145 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
158 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
160 #1: north-east -> northeast
176 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
199 #1: sun-sword -> Sun-sword
200 #1: gods -> Gods
maybe?
200 #2: baffle banners -> battle banners
ik
200 #3: alter -> altar
tw
209 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
209 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
215 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
217 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
217 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
221 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
225 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
225 #2: 'thok' -> thok
encode as onomatopoeia
227 #1:
The riddles would be more user-friendly if th footnotes contained a link to the Numbered Sections page
234 #1: potion. (e.g. ... Laumspur) -> potion (e.g. ... Laumspur).
affects footnotes 15 and 18.
239 #1:
The sections doesn't say what kind of Item the Copper Key is. Most readers would probably record it as a Special Item (most keys are) but in 18 where you also find a Copper Key it is a Backpack Item (and they are all used for the same purpose).
I think that keys turn out to be Backpack Items more often than not, but a footnote here is probably in order.
254 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
254 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
264 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
284 #1:
The last two choices look so ugly. Wouldn't it be better to move down the ellipsis to the beginning of the last choice?
I agree with Thomas.
286 #1:
The sections doesn't say what kind of Item the Copper Key is. Most readers would probably record it as a Special Item (most keys are) but in 18 where you also find a Copper Key it is a Backpack Item (and they are all used for the same purpose).
I think that keys turn out to be Backpack Items more often than not, but a footnote here is probably in order.
292 #1: puffing -> putting
Reported by Simon Williams.
303 #1:
In other books, we have replaced the 'add +<whatever> if you possess <discipline>' with something general about missile bonuses.
I don't think we'd really hit a consensus on this one - because there was some question as to the particular bonus that Grand Weaponmastery with a bow should grant.
304 #1:
Carrying around vs. wearing the Cener Robe and Mask - logically, they shouldn't occupy space in your Backpack when you wear them. (Though 77/304 do tell you they do, even though you put them on immediately.)
I agree with you that this is nonsensical once you put them on.
304 #2:
'one item(s)' look really ugly - it is one to three items (same as in 77).
307 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
317 #1: arrow -> Arrow
Maybe
319 #1: Assimilance and Grand Pathsmanship
emphasize 'and'
322 #1: goodly -> godly
Shouldn't 'goodly' here by 'godly'? 'goodly' looks silly to my eyes and the sword is supposedly forged by Kai...
Disagree, I think the original looks OK.
322 #2: sun-sword -> Sun-sword
326 #1: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
341 #1: potion. (e.g. ... Laumspur) -> potion (e.g. ... Laumspur).
affects footnotes 15 and 18.
346 #1:
'map' could be made into a link as in 326
346 #2:
You do not need to eat a meal if you possess Grand Huntmastery.
Questions