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<div class="ce"><a href="title.htm">Title Page</a> #1: THE WORLD OF LONE WOLF -> <cite>The World of Lone Wolf</cite><div class="cm jb">Make that <cite></div><div class="cm tw">ok!</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="acknwldg">acknwldg</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="acknwldg.htm">Acknowledgements</a> #1: frontmatter -> front matter <div class="cm ik">as in gs01, gs03, lw05, lw06, lw08-lw12</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="coming">coming</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="coming.htm">Of the Coming of Grey Star</a> #1: new found -> newfound <div class="cm so">In 1st paragraph. Currently reads new-found. Does this also need changing in Books 1-3?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="tssf">tssf</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="tssf.htm">The Story So Far . . .</a> #1: Kleasa -> Kleasá <div class="cm ik">7x</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="gamerulz">gamerulz</a></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="gamerulz.htm">The Game Rules</a> #6: Endurance Points paragraph <div class="cm dd">Argh! Again, the sentance "Add *any* ENDURANCE points gained from playing previous Grey Star *adventures* {plural} to your initial score of 30..." is rather problematic. I can't possibly see how it would make sense to add EPs from all three of the previous Grey Star books! Surely it must mean the *last* successfully completed book? (So why use the phrasing as printed, then?). Also, it's standard practice in the Lone Wolf rules to restore your EPs to their original total when carrying them over (Dever explicitly endorses this in a Lone Wolf Club Newsletter) ... but I would hazard a guess that this isn't intended here. (Although the phrase "...points GAINED from playing previous...adventures" certainly doesn't clarify this - the phrase "left over from" would surely be the intended meaning?) ... Adding your restored EP total would just be too much of a bonus, I feel, and spoil gameplay. Hows about the following footnote: "The most likely interpretation of the rules here is that the player can take their final ENDURANCE points total from the end of their last successfully completed Grey Star adventure, and add 30 to this figure. Note that in the rules for the Lone Wolf books, it is standard practice to restore one's ENDURANCE points to their original total when carrying them across from one adventure to the next, but this does not appear to be appropriate here in this scenario with the Moonstone."</div><div class="cm jb">The original intent of the author was most likely that the player should add 30 to their final ENDURANCE score from the end of their last successfully completed <cite>World of Lone Wolf</cite> adventure. In the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series, it is standard practice to restore one's ENDURANCE points to their original total when carrying them over from one adventure to the next, but the power of the Moonstone seems to change those rules in this case.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="gamerulz.htm">The Game Rules</a> #7: Willpower paragraph <div class="cm dd">I find the sentence "If you possess unused WILLPOWER points from earlier Grey Star adventures, add them to the 50 WILLPOWER points which possession of the the Moonstone grants you" a bit problematic - it clearly says "adventures", plural - but surely it can only mean the *last* adventure you successfully completed? And of course, there's the whole "what WP score do I actually use - your initial total? the score you had at the end of the book?........... on balance, I'd suggest the following footnote: "The most likely interpretation of the rules here is that the player can take their final WILLPOWER total from the end of their last successfully completed Grey Star adventure, and add 50 to this figure."</div><div class="cm jb">The original intent of the author was most likely that the player should add 50 to their final WILLPOWER score from the end of their last successfully completed <cite>World of Lone Wolf</cite> adventure.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="gamerulz.htm">The Game Rules</a> #8: Combat Skill paragraph <div class="cm dd">Proposed footnote: "This implies that you must pick a new COMBAT SKILL from the Random Number Table even if have already completed previous Grey Star adventure(s). This conflicts with the rules for the Lone Wolf books, where you can carry over your score from a successfully completed previous adventure. For the sake of consistency, players may wish to carry over their existing CS score from the last Grey Star book they completed."</div><div class="cm jb">It is implied that you must pick a new COMBAT SKILL from the Random Number Table even if have already completed previous one or more <cite>World of Lone Wolf</cite> adventures. This conflicts with the rules for the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books where you carry over your score from a previous successfully completed adventure. For the sake of consistency, players may wish to carry over their existing score from the last <cite>World of Lone Wolf</cite> book they completed.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
+<div class="cf"><a href="gamerulz.htm">The Game Rules</a> #9: <p>There are sections of this book that describe how you use a Magical Power and how many WILLPOWER points you spend, without giving you a choice and without taking into account that you may not have the required number of WILLPOWER points left. Section 175 contains one such case of mandated use of magic, but it also provides a method for resolving this problem: If you do not have enough WILLPOWER points then you must use ENDURANCE points at a rate of 2 ENDURANCE points for every 1 WILLPOWER point you lack (i.e. 2 ENDURANCE points = 1 WILLPOWER point).</p> <p>You may wish to use this method to resolve this problem in similar situations. If your ENDURANCE score falls to zero, you are dead and the adventure is over.</p> <p>Note that you may not <em>choose</em> to use a Magical Power or your Wizard's Staff if you do not have sufficient WILLPOWER points. This method also cannot be used in cases where you lose WILLPOWER points for a reason other than using magic, for instance as a result of mental or magical attacks. In these cases, you may end up with a negative WILLPOWER score.</p></div>
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<div class="section"><a name="powers">powers</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #1: physiurgy -> Physiurgy</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #15: alchemy -> Alchemy<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #16: divination -> Prophecy<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #17: Add a footnote about choosing Powers similar to in 03btng: "The wording of this section of the rules seems to indicate--if read literally--that you may choose your set of Lesser Magicks again if you have completed a previous adventure. This is without precedent in other books. In order to preserve consistency with other books, you should not choose your Lesser Magicks again. If you have currently mastered five Lesser Magicks, you may choose one additional Lesser Magick from the list. If you have already mastered six Lesser Magicks, you keep these. If you choose Alchemy as a new Lesser Magick, or you have not mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy but you have selected the Higher Magick of Theurgy, you also receive a Herb Pouch with contents, as detailed in the Equipment section." <div class="cm tw">damn, this got a bit longwinded.</div><div class="cm jb">For the footnote, change "currently master" to "have currently mastered", "already master" to "have already mastered", and "do not master" to "have not mastered".</div><div class="cm tw">OK fixed above.</div></div>
-<div class="
u"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #18: COMBAT SKILL If -> COMBAT SKILL. If</div>
+<div class="
cn"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #18: COMBAT SKILL If -> COMBAT SKILL. If</div>
<div class="cf"><a href="powers.htm">Magical Powers</a> #19: If your WILLPOWER falls to zero or below, you will not be able to use the magical properties of your Wizard's Staff until your score is again above zero. You can still use your Wizard's Staff in combat as a normal weapon, but you must deduct 6 points from your COMBAT SKILL. <div class="cm tw">A cut-down version of the footnote from Game Rules.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="equipmnt">equipmnt</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #1: Add "Mark these 4 items in your Action Chart." below the Alchemny equipment list. <div class="cm tw">add to Errata!</div><div class="cm tw">Done!</div></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #5: Add a bookmark about the Herb Pouch similar to in 03btng: "If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy or the Higher Magick of Theurgy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack."</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #6: If you have chosen Alchemy -> If you have chosen Alchemy or Theurgy</div>
<div class="cn"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #7: Un-paragraph the Alchemy equipment list</div>
-<div class="e"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #8: It counts as 1 item -> It counts as one item</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="equipmnt.htm">Equipment</a> #8: It counts as 1 item -> It counts as one item</div>
<div class="section"><a name="cmbtrulz">cmbtrulz</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="cmbtrulz.htm">Rules for Combat</a> #1: Remove " on the inside back cover of the book".</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="cmbtrulz.htm">Rules for Combat</a> #2: on the page after the Random Number Table -> in the back of this book</div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #2: speaking to you. -> speaking to you.' <div class="cm tw">add to Errata!</div><div class="cm tw">There is no such fault! See new addition instead.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #3: Wytch-king, Shasarak. -> Wytch-king, Shasarak.' <div class="cm tw">add to Errata!</div><div class="cm tw">Done!</div></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #4: Kamali -> Karnali</div>
-<div class="ce"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #5: speak again. -> speak again.' <div class="cm tw">Already added to errata.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #5: speak again. -> speak again.' <div class="cm tw">Already added to errata.</div><div class="cm tw">Incorrect change! Deal with through XSL trick.</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect1.htm">1</a> #6: Grey Star &ellips; -> Grey Star&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect2">sect2</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect2.htm">2</a> #1: life force -> life-force <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect3">sect3</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect6.htm">6</a> #1: satety -> safety</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect7">sect7</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect8">sect8</a></div>
+<div class="u"><a href="sect8.htm">8</a> #1: empty vial -> empty Vial</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect9">sect9</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #1: If you have versed -> If you are versed<div class="cm so">Errata - surprisingly.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #3: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #4: <div class="cm so">Should the links be reordered with the Higher Magick options together at the bottom?</div><div class="cm tw">If there was any standard order we'd have, I think it should be: 1) Higher Magicks 2) Lesser Magicks 3) Items 4) Wizard's Staff 5) Nothing (i.e. spend no WP). But I think Jon's latest command was to not change unless really needed for some reason?</div><div class="cm jb">It seems that Ian Page made deliberate choices about how to order certain choices sometimes seeming to place the rash, bad choices first, or I could just be seeing patterns where there are none. If there is no such order in this case - I leave that judgment to you - go ahead and reorder according to the scheme mentioned by Thomas. So let it be written, so let it be done.</div><div class="cm tw">I'll go through the book and see how many changes this scheme would require... (and then there's all the other books... but I remember on of the two first actually adhering to this scheme already).</div><div class="cm tw">I propose changing. See new errata item.</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #5: Move the first two choices to the last positions, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #5: Move the first two choices to the last positions, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect10">sect10</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect10.htm">10</a> #1: Theurgey -> Theurgy</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect10.htm">10</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect19">sect19</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect19.htm">19</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect19.htm">19</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect19.htm">19</a> #3: delete 4 WILLPOWER points from your WILLPOWER score -> deduct 4 WILLPOWER points from your total <div class="cm so">Or similar</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect20">sect20</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect20.htm">20</a> #1: life-less -> lifeless <div class="cm ik">as in all other books</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect21">sect21</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect25">sect25</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #1: <div class="cm so">Remove all occurrences of '1' from the equipment list.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #2: (1) coil of Rope -> Coil of Rope <div class="cm tw">also</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #3: Tinder box -> Tinderbox <div class="cm tw">As everywhere else.</div><div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #3: Tinder box -> Tinderbox <div class="cm tw">As everywhere else.</div><div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #4: What about those sheaths? In 02tfc we added this footnote: "If you wish to take the Sheath, record it as a Special Item on your Action Chart."<div class="cm jb">Sounds good to me.</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #5: 1 Torch counts as 1 Backpack Item -> each Torch counts as one Backpack Item</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect25.htm">25</a> #5: 1 Torch counts as 1 Backpack Item -> each Torch counts as one Backpack Item</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect26">sect26</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect27">sect27</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect28">sect28</a></div>
+<div class="u"><a href="sect28.htm">28</a> #1: evade combat turn -> evade combat, turn</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect29">sect29</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #1: Item-slung -> Item&emdash;slung</div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #2: Item-hung -> Item&emdash;hung</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #3: <div class="cm so">Also, remove all instances of '1' in the equipment list x6</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #4: high magick -> Higher Magick<div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #4: high magick -> Higher Magick<div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect30">sect30</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect31">sect31</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect32">sect32</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #10: Demeril root -> Demeril Root</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #11: vials -> Vials</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #12: The Pestle and Mortar are Backpack Items -> The Pestle and Mortar and the Tinderbox are Backpack Items, <div class="cm tw">Seems odd that everything except the Tinderbox is accounted for.</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #13: 1 Pestle and Mortar -> Pestle and Mortar <div class="cm tw">Note, keep numbers of the vials as they are, for contrast and in consistency with the Equipment section.</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #14: 1 Tinderbox -> Tinderbox</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #13: 1 Pestle and Mortar -> Pestle and Mortar <div class="cm tw">Note, keep numbers of the vials as they are, for contrast and in consistency with the Equipment section.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect34.htm">34</a> #14: 1 Tinderbox -> Tinderbox</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect35">sect35</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect36">sect36</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect36.htm">36</a> #1: Tanith have -> Tanith has<div class="cm tw">Wait here, neither ... nor can be followed by both singular and plural, right?</div><div class="cm jb">I recently found out that, formally, "neither" and "either" both take singular verbs. So, formally speaking, this correction should be made.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect38.htm">38</a> #3: warior -> warrior</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect38.htm">38</a> #4: mightly -> mighty</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect38.htm">38</a> #5: feet away. The home -> feet away. 'The home <div class="cm tw">add to Errata!</div><div class="cm tw">Done!</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect38.htm">38</a> #6: Wytchking -> Wytch-king</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect39">sect39</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #1: lIke -> like</div>
+<div class="u"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?</div>
+<div class="u"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash <div class="cm tw">With or without comma?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect40">sect40</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect41">sect41</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect42">sect42</a></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="sect47.htm">47</a> #3: The term <cite>Agarashi</cite> is not used in any other place in the <cite>Worls of Lone Wolf</cite> books, but it is used elsewhere for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned. <div class="cm tw">That footnote really sucks. Better ideas anyone?</div><div class="cm so">How about: "The term Agarashi is not found elsewhere in the World of Lone Wolf series. However, in the more recent Lone Wolf books, Dever has used the term to denote any monstrous servant of Agarash the Damned." Still not that great, though.</div><div class="cm jb">Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used in anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used elsewhere as the collective name for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm jb">I meant: Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used in other books as the collective term for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect48">sect48</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect49">sect49</a></div>
+<div class="u"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #1: empty vials -> empty Vials <div class="cm tw">I think...?</div></div>
+<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may <div class="cm tw">Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.</div></div>
+<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect50">sect50</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect50.htm">50</a> #1: Intinctively -> Instinctively</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect50.htm">50</a> #2: this power -> this Power<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect55">sect55</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect56">sect56</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect57">sect57</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect57.htm">57</a> #1: leave.' 'I <div class="cm so">New paragraph after "leave.' "</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect58">sect58</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect58.htm">58</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect58.htm">58</a> #2: your power -> your Power <div class="cm tw">??</div><div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect58.htm">58</a> #3: Move the 3rd choice up to the 1st position, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect58.htm">58</a> #3: Move the 3rd choice up to the 1st position, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect59">sect59</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect60">sect60</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect60.htm">60</a> #1: Tanith have -> Tanith has<div class="cm tw">See sect36 #1!</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect82.htm">82</a> #1: reptillian -> reptilian</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect83">sect83</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect84">sect84</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect84.htm">84</a> #1: empty vial -> empty Vial</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect85">sect85</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect86">sect86</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect86.htm">86</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect91">sect91</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect91.htm">91</a> #1: clutches at it's clawed hand -> clutches at its clawed hand</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect91.htm">91</a> #2: strenghtening -> strengthening</div>
-<div class="ce"><a href="sect91.htm">91</a> #3: sorcery -> Sorcery <div class="cm tw">Is it the Power of Sorcery or sorcery in general?</div><div class="cm so">Errata. Don't know whether to change this or not.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect91.htm">91</a> #3: sorcery -> Sorcery <div class="cm tw">Is it the Power of Sorcery or sorcery in general?</div><div class="cm so">Errata. Don't know whether to change this or not.</div><div class="cm tw">This change shall be reverted! You have actully not chosen to use Sorcery here, but Thaumathurgy.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect92">sect92</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect93">sect93</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect93.htm">93</a> #1: materialzed -> materialized</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect94">sect94</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect95">sect95</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect96">sect96</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect96.htm">96</a> #1: again &ellips; -> again&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect97">sect97</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect97.htm">97</a> #1: semi-circle -> semicircle <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect98">sect98</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect98.htm">98</a> #1: moments &ellips; -> moments&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect99">sect99</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect99.htm">99</a> #1: fast flowing -> fast-flowing<div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div><div class="cm jb">I assume that there was a "fast-flowing" at the other end of that arrow. :)</div><div class="cm tw">Fixed.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect100">sect100</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect103">sect103</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect104">sect104</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #1: crowd of demons are -> crowd of demons is</div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect105">sect105</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect106">sect106</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect107">sect107</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect110">sect110</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect111">sect111</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect112">sect112</a></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect112.htm">112</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect113">sect113</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect113.htm">113</a> #1: magical Power -> Magical Power<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect114">sect114</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect128">sect128</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect129">sect129</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect129.htm">129</a> #1: life force -> life-force <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect129.htm">129</a> #2: Come &ellips; -> Come&ellips;</div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect129.htm">129</a> #3: arch enemy -> archenemy <div class="cm so">Maybe? Or arch-enemy?</div> <div class="cm ik">arch-enemy</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect130">sect130</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect131">sect131</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect132">sect132</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect136">sect136</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect137">sect137</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect137.htm">137</a> #1: group of demons are rushing -> group of demons is rushing</div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect137.htm">137</a> #2: Move the illustration to Section 139 where it actually fits the text of the section!<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect137.htm">137</a> #2: Move the illustration to Section 139 where it actually fits the text of the section!<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect138">sect138</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect139">sect139</a></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #1: Move illustration 8 here, and give it the new caption "Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal."<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #1: Move illustration 8 here, and give it the new caption "Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal."<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #2: The horde stop -> The horde stops</div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect140">sect140</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect141">sect141</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect141.htm">141</a> #1: large, reptilian -> large reptilian</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect143">sect143</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect144">sect144</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect145">sect145</a></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect145.htm">145</a> #1: You are never asked to deduct the 1 WP that section 92 required of you to have to get here. Footnote?</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect146">sect146</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect147">sect147</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect147.htm">147</a> #1: small, black -> small black</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect156">sect156</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect157">sect157</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect158">sect158</a></div>
+<div class="n"><a href="sect158.htm">158</a> #1: Who? &ellips; Who? &ellips; -> Who?&ellips; Who?&ellips; <div class="cm tw">Or... shall the spaces remain there?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect159">sect159</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect159.htm">159</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect159.htm">159</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect160">sect160</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect161">sect161</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect161.htm">161</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect161.htm">161</a> #2: Link to 178 is missing <div class="cm tw">ne - the '1' is an 'l' so the XML encoder script missed it.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect162">sect162</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect162.htm">162</a> #1: power of Prophecy -> Power of Prophecy<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect163">sect163</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect166">sect166</a></div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect166.htm">166</a> #1: clawed feet tells -> clawed feet tell<div class="cm tw">Wait - note that it says "The scratch and scuffle of clawed feet tells ...". I disagree, even though it's "scratch and scuffle".</div><div class="cm jb">Agreed, er... vetoed - the change that is. "tells"</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect167">sect167</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect167.htm">167</a> #1: Demon lord -> Demon Lord <div class="cm so">or Demonlord</div> <div class="cm jb">Demonlord</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect168">sect168</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect169">sect169</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect169.htm">169</a> #1: WILLPDWER -> WILLPOWER</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect173">sect173</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect174">sect174</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect175">sect175</a></div>
-<div class="
u"><a href="sect175.htm">175</a> #1: <div class="cm jb">This raises an interesting precedent. Could this be an alternative rule for negative WP scores?</div><div class="cm dd">I'd definately vote that we draw attention to it in the general Rules section where we discuss the possibility of "negative willpower". It still doesn't quite do away with the fact that the text in places has said "if your willpower has fallen to zero OR LESS" (am I remembering that correctly?) but it seems a good workable way to deal with the issue, and I think we'd do well to commend it to players as a rules suggestion.</div><div class="cm tw">I don't know if we should include it in the rules sections, but we could add footnotes in the places where you are told to use WP for a spell with no option to abstain. I don't think it's too many places actually; most are probably in the second half of 02tfc. Note that by only allowing it in these places, it is still possible to get negative WP when faced with Kleasas or Mother Magris.</div><div class="cm jb">I seem to remember that Grey Star the Wizard had many such situations also. I lean toward one footnote in the rules. It might be kind to the reader to add a reminder footnote for each situation that we recognize, but with one footnote in the rules section, they have no excuse to be confused when it happens even if we neglect to put it in the section. We can do both if that helps everyone sleep better at night. *smile*</div></div>
-<div class="ce"><a href="sect175.htm">175</a> #2: ie 2 -> i.e. 2</div>
+<div class="
rn"><a href="sect175.htm">175</a> #1: <div class="cm jb">This raises an interesting precedent. Could this be an alternative rule for negative WP scores?</div><div class="cm dd">I'd definately vote that we draw attention to it in the general Rules section where we discuss the possibility of "negative willpower". It still doesn't quite do away with the fact that the text in places has said "if your willpower has fallen to zero OR LESS" (am I remembering that correctly?) but it seems a good workable way to deal with the issue, and I think we'd do well to commend it to players as a rules suggestion.</div><div class="cm tw">I don't know if we should include it in the rules sections, but we could add footnotes in the places where you are told to use WP for a spell with no option to abstain. I don't think it's too many places actually; most are probably in the second half of 02tfc. Note that by only allowing it in these places, it is still possible to get negative WP when faced with Kleasas or Mother Magris.</div><div class="cm jb">I seem to remember that Grey Star the Wizard had many such situations also. I lean toward one footnote in the rules. It might be kind to the reader to add a reminder footnote for each situation that we recognize, but with one footnote in the rules section, they have no excuse to be confused when it happens even if we neglect to put it in the section. We can do both if that helps everyone sleep better at night. *smile*</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect175.htm">175</a> #2: lack. (ie 2 -> lack (i.e. 2</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect176">sect176</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect176.htm">176</a> #1: Demon lord -> Demon Lord <div class="cm so">or Demonlord</div> <div class="cm jb">Demonlord</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect177">sect177</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect178">sect178</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect179">sect179</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect190">sect190</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect191">sect191</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect191.htm">191</a> #1: that of hate, for, indeed, I hate you, -> that of hate, for indeed I hate you,<div class="cm jb">Talks, like, William,... Shatner.</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect191.htm">191</a> #2: long &ellips; -> long&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect192">sect192</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect193">sect193</a></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect193.htm">193</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect194">sect194</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect200.htm">200</a> #1: shuffling column reach -> shuffling column reaches</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect200.htm">200</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect201">sect201</a></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect201.htm">201</a> #1: shore', he says -> shore,' he says<div class="cm tw">This is already correct in the XML file?</div><div class="cm so">This is definitely Errata and still present. " 'I witnessed your struggle with the demons from the shore', he says."</div><div class="cm tw">Duh. Yes, sorry.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect201.htm">201</a> #1: shore', he says -> shore,' he says<div class="cm tw">This is already correct in the XML file?</div><div class="cm so">This is definitely Errata and still present. " 'I witnessed your struggle with the demons from the shore', he says."</div><div class="cm tw">Duh. Yes, sorry.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect201.htm">201</a> #2: great host of Masbaté warriors wait. -> great host of Masbaté warriors waits.</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect201.htm">201</a> #3: wariors -> warriors</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect201.htm">201</a> #4: you ashore. I am -> you ashore. 'I am <div class="cm tw">add to Errata!</div><div class="cm tw">Done!</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect208">sect208</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect208.htm">208</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect208.htm">208</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect208.htm">208</a> #3: Magical Power of Thaumaturgy -> Higher Magick of Thaumaturgy <div class="cm tw">Higher Magicks are otherwise always noted as such.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect208.htm">208</a> #3: Magical Power of Thaumaturgy -> Higher Magick of Thaumaturgy <div class="cm tw">Higher Magicks are otherwise always noted as such.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect209">sect209</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect210">sect210</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect211">sect211</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect229">sect229</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect229.htm">229</a> #1: Half-way -> Halfway</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect230">sect230</a></div>
+<div class="e"><a href="sect230.htm">230</a> #1: Pin-points -> Pinpoints <div class="cm so">as per PAMoS</div><div class="cm tw">Wait a minute... Is the PAMoS entry valid for the noun as well as for the verb?</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect231">sect231</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect232">sect232</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect233">sect233</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect252">sect252</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect253">sect253</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect254">sect254</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect254.htm">254</a> #1: He comes &ellips; the Grey One comes &ellips; -> He comes&ellips; the Grey One comes&ellips;</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect254.htm">254</a> #2: the key &ellips; the Masterstone &ellips; our -> the key&ellips; the Masterstone&ellips; our</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect255">sect255</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect255.htm">255</a> #1: sorcery -> Sorcery <div class="cm tw">??</div><div class="cm so">I think this should be changed, yes.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect256">sect256</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect258">sect258</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect259">sect259</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect260">sect260</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect260.htm">260</a> #1: Wytchking -> Wytch-king</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect260.htm">260</a> #2: Wytches &ellips; and -> Wytches&ellips; and</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect261">sect261</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect262">sect262</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect263">sect263</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect265">sect265</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect266">sect266</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect267">sect267</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect267.htm">267</a> #1: halt &ellips; -> halt&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect268">sect268</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect268.htm">268</a> #1: miles lies -> miles lie</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect269">sect269</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect280.htm">280</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect280.htm">280</a> #3: the above powers -> the above Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect280.htm">280</a> #4: Choice #4's link to 59 is obviously wrong. 175 is the right target (and this section is otherwise an orphan).</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect280.htm">280</a> #5: time &ellips; no -> time&ellips; no</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect281">sect281</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect282">sect282</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect282.htm">282</a> #1: crosed -> crossed</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect293.htm">293</a> #2: battle cry -> battle-cry <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect294">sect294</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect294.htm">294</a> #1: backpack -> Backpack<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect294.htm">294</a> #2: empty vial -> empty Vial<div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect294.htm">294</a> #2: empty vial -> empty Vial<div class="cm so">This is Errata.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect295">sect295</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect296">sect296</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect297">sect297</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect298">sect298</a></div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect298.htm">298</a> #1: over Tanith imperils -> over Tanith imperil<div class="cm tw">Disagree. I read "Mother Magri and her power over Tanith" as a unity. Is there a clear rule for this?</div><div class="cm dd">Absolutely - the original text is fine & correct.</div><div class="cm jb">I don't know that there's a clear rule for this one, but I would chalk it up to Mother Magri and her power acting as one.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect298.htm">298</a> #2: magical powers -> Magical Powers <div class="cm tw">Does GS refer to the "game term" or...?</div><div class="cm so">I would leave this alone since it isn't referring to a specific Magical Power.</div><div class="cm jb">I vote to change it because it refers to Grey Star's powers which are the Magical Powers not generic magical powers.</div><div class="cm dd">yup</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect298.htm">298</a> #3: new-found -> newfound</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect298.htm">298</a> #4: Who &ellips; who -> Who&ellips; who</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect299">sect299</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect299.htm">299</a> #1: lies -> lie</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect300">sect300</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect314">sect314</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect315">sect315</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect316">sect316</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect316.htm">316</a> #1: cannot . . -> cannot . . .</div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect316.htm">316</a> #2: demon lord -> Demon Lord <div class="cm so">or Demonlord</div> <div class="cm jb">Demonlord</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect317">sect317</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect317.htm">317</a> #1: fomation -> formation</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect317.htm">317</a> #2: Combat last -> Combat lasts</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect321">sect321</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect321.htm">321</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect322">sect322</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect322.htm">322</a> #1: demon lord -> Demon Lord <div class="cm so">or Demonlord</div> <div class="cm jb">Demonlord</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect323">sect323</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect324">sect324</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect324.htm">324</a> #1: war horn -> war-horn <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect325">sect325</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect326">sect326</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect326.htm">326</a> #1: see &ellips; -> see&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect327">sect327</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect328">sect328</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect328.htm">328</a> #1: Shadkine -> Shadakine</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect330">sect330</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect331">sect331</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #1: six items -> eight items</div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #2: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect332">sect332</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect332.htm">332</a> #1: tree-tops -> treetops <div class="cm ik">as in gs02, gs03, lw11, lw15 (2x)</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect333">sect333</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #3: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #4: hail of arrows that fly -> hail of arrows that flies</div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #5: Move the 1st choice to the last position, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #5: Move the 1st choice to the last position, according to the "qualified before non-qualified" rule.</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect338">sect338</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect339">sect339</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect340">sect340</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect343.htm">343</a> #1: superstitous -> superstitious</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect344">sect344</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect345">sect345</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect345.htm">345</a> #1: arch enemy -> archenemy <div class="cm so">Maybe? Or arch-enemy?</div> <div class="cm ik">arch-enemy</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect346">sect346</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect347">sect347</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect347.htm">347</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect348">sect348</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect349">sect349</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect350">sect350</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect350.htm">350</a> #1: demon lord -> Demon Lord <div class="cm so">or Demonlord</div> <div class="cm jb">Demonlord</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect351">sect351</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect352">sect352</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect352.htm">352</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #3: This section is missing a choice for what to do if you do not have any of the Magical Powers! However, 280 has one: "If you do not possess any of the above Powers, you must attack the bridge with your Staff; turn to 175."<div class="cm jb">Again, I'm good with adding this.</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #4: magnificent &ellips; -> magnificent&ellips;</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #5: time &ellips; no -> time&ellips; no</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect354">sect354</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect355">sect355</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect356">sect356</a></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect356.htm">356</a> #1: not &ellips; -> not&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect357">sect357</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect358">sect358</a></div>
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-<div class="e"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #1: 'The demon lord, Agarash -> 'The demon lord Agarash</div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #2: Add a simple link to The Passing of the Shianti. <div class="cm tw">Shall the explanatory footnote be here or in 'Passing...'?</div><div class="cm tw">Link added, in the meantime.</div></div>
+<div class="re"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #1: 'The demon lord, Agarash -> 'The demon lord Agarash<div class="cm tw">Replaced by #3</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #2: Add a simple link to The Passing of the Shianti. <div class="cm tw">Shall the explanatory footnote be here or in 'Passing...'?</div><div class="cm tw">Link added, in the meantime.</div><div class="cm jb">Explanatory note should probably be in the Passing section.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #3: demon lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #4: Passing oof the Shianti -> The Passing of the Shianti</div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect360.htm">360</a> #5: The portal &ellips; Agarash &ellips; is he &ellips;? -> The portal&ellips; Agarash&ellips; is he&ellips;?</div>
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+<div class="ce"><a href="ill8.htm">Illustration VIII</a> #1: You hurl a cascading rain of magical fire on to the head of the demonic horde below. -> Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal.</div>
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<div class="cn"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #1: Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen <div class="cm ik">just like Wytch-king</div><div class="cm so">(Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen) This is Errata.</div><div class="cm jb">Approved. I think this can be considered "ne".</div></div></div>
+<div class="Ce"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #2: artifacts -> artefacts <div class="cm so">Except it was in the Newsletter, so I don't think it counts as Errata.</div> <div class="cm jb">erratum</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #3: This epilogue to the <cite>Grey Star</cite> series was included in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 7</cite>.</div>
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