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<p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Added periods to the sentences describing the Helmet and Chainmail Waistcoat.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment: How to use your equipment</a>) Added a period to the second from last sentence in the Weapons subsection. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment: How to use your equipment</a>) Added a period to the second from last sentence in the Weapons subsection. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
<p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed a superfluous period in the second paragraph of the first example. Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>) Replaced <quote>border ranger</quote> with <quote>Border Ranger</quote>. Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>) Replaced <quote>Magicians Guild of Toran</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild of Toran</quote>. Replaced <quote>area, and</quote> with <quote>area and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>sumptuous Meal</quote> with <quote>sumptuous meal</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>20 Gems</quote> with <quote>20 Tomb Guardian Gems</quote> and <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item</quote> based on changes made to the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect137">137</a>) Replaced <quote>20 Gems</quote> with <quote>20 Tomb Guardian Gems</quote> and <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>mark these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a single Backpack Item</quote> based on changes made to the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag range</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Range</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Added <quote> or if you have no Backpack Items</quote> to the second paragraph. Replaced <quote>one Item is stolen</quote> with <quote>one item is stolen</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Added <quote>If you wish to remove the pin, <!--link-text-->turn to 337<!--/link-text-->.</quote> This is the only other possible choice for what is a strangely one-sided option in the original text. More flavourful language might make more sense, such as <quote>If you still wish to remove the pin with your hands,</quote> but to best preserve the integrity of the text, we simply copied the choice from <a idref="sect23">Section 23</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Reversed the order of the choices. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Changed the choice that led to <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> to lead to <a idref="sect15">Section 15</a> instead. The original choice appears to make sense, but does not work out in a map. The indication that the correct section is really <a idref="sect15">15</a> is the fact that it is not otherwise accessible (though <a idref="sect215">Section 215</a> is) and <a idref="sect15">15</a> leads back to <a idref="sect201">Section 201</a> when taking the opposite direction.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Added <quote>(You must now erase all Weapons and Backpack Items from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> based on the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect205">205</a>) Added <quote>(You must now erase all Weapons and Backpack Items from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Moved the second choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect212">212</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect218">218</a>) Replaced <quote>war cries</quote> with <quote>war-cries</quote>.</p>
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