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<line>Simon Osborne</line>
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<meta><title>86</title></meta>
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<p>Taking Shan<ch.apos/>s arm, you break into a trot, pulling him after you, though he seems to need little encouragement. Unfortunately your sudden movement attracts the attention of the Quoku, and a chorus of loud and rapid croaking fills the evening air.</p>
<p>The Wall of Azakawa is still many miles away and you pray that you will be able to outdistance the Quoku. Even if you should be able to reach the cliff-face, you know no way of crossing beyond the wall into the Azanam. With a growing dread, you fear that your run will be in vain. Unless you can find somewhere to hide, or think of a swift way of scaling the cliff once you reach it, you will be caught. But despite your doubt, you keep running: you have no choice.</p>
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<p>One stall in particular catches your eye. A sign reads:</p>
<signpost>
- <line>MADAM TARLAS<ch.emdash/>HERBAL CURES <ch.ampersand/> REMEDIES</line>
- <line>APOTHECARY TO NOBLEMEN <ch.ampersand/> KINGS</line>
+ <line>Madam Tarlas<ch.emdash/>Herbal Cures <ch.ampersand/> Remedies</line>
+ <line>Apothecary to Noblemen <ch.ampersand/> Kings</line>
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<p>The narrow street widens and grows lighter. The source of the light is the window of a grim, stone building at the end of the street which opens on to the market square. Above the doorway of the building hangs a sign which reads:</p>
- <signpost>INN OF THE LAUGHING MOON</signpost>
+ <signpost>Inn of the Laughing Moon</signpost>
<p>You decide that you must try to find some information from the Suhnese inhabitants. Perhaps you can pick up some clues about the whereabouts of the Lost Tribe of Lara.</p>
<choice idref="sect157">If you wish to try to gain this information in the market square, <link-text>turn to 157</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect82">If you would rather enter the Inn of the Laughing Moon, <link-text>turn to 82</link-text>.</choice>
<p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>jailer<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Gaoler<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>or would</quote> with <quote>or if you would</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>elemental plane</quote> with <quote>Elemental Plane</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Removed the line of periods from the first item. Replaced <quote>1 jar of Ezeran crystals</quote> with <quote>1 Jar of Ezeran Crystals</quote>. Replaced <quote>with sulphur)</quote> with <quote>with sulphur).</quote>. Replaced <quote>A Pestle and Mortar</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 bottle of Naptha</quote> with <quote>1 Bottle of Naphtha</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 vial of Graveweed essence</quote> with <quote>1 Vial of Graveweed Essence</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 vial of Alether</quote> with <quote>1 Vial of Alether</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 bundle of dried Azawood leaves</quote> with <quote>1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves</quote>. Replaced <quote>seeds</quote> with <quote>Seeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Removed the line of periods from the first item. Replaced <quote>1 jar of Ezeran crystals</quote> with <quote>1 Jar of Ezeran Crystals</quote>. Replaced <quote>with sulphur)</quote> with <quote>with sulphur).</quote>. Replaced <quote>A Pestle and Mortar</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 bottle of Naptha</quote> with <quote>1 Bottle of Naphtha</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 vial of Graveweed essence</quote> with <quote>1 Vial of Graveweed Essence</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 vial of Alether</quote> with <quote>1 Vial of Alether</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 bundle of dried Azawood leaves</quote> with <quote>1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves</quote>. Replaced <quote>seeds</quote> with <quote>Seeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>. Replaced <quote>MADAM TARLAS<ch.emdash/>HERBAL CURES <ch.ampersand/> REMEDIES</quote> with <quote>Madam Tarlas<ch.emdash/>Herbal Cures <ch.ampersand/> Remedies</quote>. Replaced <quote>APOTHECARY TO NOBLEMEN <ch.ampersand/> KINGS</quote> with <quote>Apothecary to Noblemen <ch.ampersand/> Kings</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>cliff face</quote> with <quote>cliff-face</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>away hoping</quote> with <quote>away, hoping</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>tortuous</quote> with <quote>tortured</quote>. Replaced <quote>visited</quote> with <quote>been arrested at</quote>. Replaced <quote>Jailer</quote> with <quote>Gaoler</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Changed the second choice to lead to <a idref="sect314">Section 314</a> instead of <a idref="sect150">Section 150</a> and the third choice to lead to <a idref="sect288">Section 288</a> instead of <a idref="sect320">Section 320</a>. These sections were unreachable in the original and make much more sense in the context of the story. Replaced <quote>astral plane, and</quote> with <quote>Astral Plane and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect193">193</a>) Replaced <quote>A Pestle and Mortar</quote> with <quote>Pestle and Mortar (Backpack Item)</quote>. Replaced <quote>A packet of Ezeran crystals</quote> with <quote>Packet of Ezeran Crystals</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 jar of Yabari ointment</quote> with <quote>Jar of Yabari Ointment</quote>. Replaced <quote>seeds</quote> with <quote>Seeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Items</quote> with <quote>the items</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect194">194</a>) Replaced <quote>waist, with</quote> with <quote>waist with</quote>. Replaced <quote>closer and</quote> with <quote>closer, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Shan but, overwhelmed</quote> with <quote>Shan, but overwhelmed</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>street, which</quote> with <quote>street which</quote>. Replaced <quote>sign, which reads.:</quote> with <quote>sign which reads:</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>street, which</quote> with <quote>street which</quote>. Replaced <quote>sign, which reads.:</quote> with <quote>sign which reads:</quote>. Replaced <quote>INN OF THE LAUGHING MOON</quote> with <quote>Inn of the Laughing Moon</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>power</quote> with <quote>Power</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced all instances of <quote>alley-ways</quote> with <quote>alleyways</quote>. Added the following choice: <quote>If you have the Magical Power of Prophecy and wish to use it, <a idref="sect64">turn to 64</a>.</quote> This is to parallel <a idref="sect40">Section 40</a>.</p>
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