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-       <p>In the Mongoose Publishing edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.</p>
+       <p>In the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition, you lose only your Weapons and the Seal of Hammerdal here. You may choose to follow these instructions instead.</p>
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       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>food or</quote> with <quote>food, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed the <quote>1=, 2=,<ch.ellips/></quote> in the <quote>How to carry your equipment</quote> section. These were obviously carried over from <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd"><cite>Flight from the Dark</cite></bookref><ch.apos/>s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your total when swallowed</quote> with <quote>to your total, when swallowed</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed the <quote>1=, 2=,<ch.ellips/></quote> in the <quote>How to carry your equipment</quote> section. These were obviously carried over from <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd"><cite>Flight from the Dark</cite></bookref><ch.apos/>s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise</quote> with <quote>slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise</quote>. Replaced <quote>to your total when swallowed</quote> with <quote>to your total, when swallowed</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>failed Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote>failed, Lone Wolf</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>) Replaced <quote>Sir, requires</quote> with <quote>Sir requires</quote>. Replaced <quote>white pass</quote> with <quote>White Pass</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>risk drowning</quote> with <quote>you will surely drown</quote>, the wording in the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>risk drowning</quote> with <quote>you will surely drown</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>. Replaced <quote>enemies, eg Helghasts, in</quote> with <quote>enemies (e.g. Helghast) in</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Durenese or</quote> with <quote>Durenese, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>much preparation for</quote> with <quote>much to prepare for</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect80">80</a>) Replaced <quote>Seal, or</quote> with <quote>Seal or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>angry mob have</quote> with <quote>angry mob has</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>Durenor forest</quote> with <quote>Durenor Forest</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added <quote>if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it</quote> after <quote>add this to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> based on a similar change in the Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect103">103</a>) Added <quote>if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it</quote> after <quote>add this to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> based on a similar change in the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Added <quote>(The Magic Spear is a weapon-like Special Item. Remember that you only get a Weaponskill bonus in this fight against the Helghast if you have Weaponskill with Spear.</quote> to the end of the second paragraph.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>overboard, and</quote> with <quote>overboard and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>.</p>
       <p>Replaced <quote>Hammerdal mountains</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hammerdal range</quote> with <quote>Hammerdal Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spear, so</quote> with <quote>Spear so</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>Wanlo</quote> with <quote>wanlo</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>Daggers and</quote> with <quote>Daggers, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the</quote> with <quote>set about a quick search of these</quote> from the Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced <quote>whatever Items</quote> with <quote>whatever items</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect302">302</a>) Replaced <quote>climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the</quote> with <quote>set about a quick search of these</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>whatever Items</quote> with <quote>whatever items</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>score reaches zero</quote> with <quote>score reaches zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points to zero</quote> with <quote>points to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>to try and</quote> with <quote>to try to</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>Each dice</quote> with <quote>Each die</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect323">323</a>) Replaced <quote>to start to</quote> with <quote>and start to</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 113<!--/link-text--></quote> based in part on the Mongoose Publishing edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to <a idref="sect204">Section 204</a>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113</quote> with <quote>If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 113<!--/link-text--></quote> based in part on the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to <a idref="sect204">Section 204</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect331">331</a>) Replaced <quote>Dagger and</quote> with <quote>Dagger, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>these Items</quote> with <quote>these items</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>This creature is immune to Mindblast.</quote> to the end of the final paragraph. Replaced <quote>forest, and</quote> with <quote>forest and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>