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@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@
       <footnotes>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-1-foot" idref="equipmnt-1"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
       <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
       </footnote>
      </footnotes>
 
@@ -4381,6 +4381,7 @@
     <meta><title>The Shadakine Empire</title></meta>
 
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+    <!--Dagorlan [so: Please do not delete; this fixes a false-positive in checkerrata.pl.]-->
      <illustration>
       <meta>
        <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
@@ -4965,7 +4966,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>swordman</quote> with <quote>swordsman</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>this power</quote> with <quote>this Power</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>magical Power</quote> with <quote>Magical Power</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Deleted <quote> that lies within the chest</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take the Black Rod and use it to open the magic-locked door</quote> with <quote>If you wish to use the Black Rod to open the magic-locked door</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Removed <quote> that lies within the chest</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you wish to take the Black Rod and use it to open the magic-locked door</quote> with <quote>If you wish to use the Black Rod to open the magic-locked door</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect171">171</a>) Replaced <quote>your Current</quote> with <quote>your current</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>one Item</quote> with <quote>one item</quote>. Replaced <quote>berries and</quote> with <quote>berries, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>Magical power</quote> with <quote>Magical Power</quote>. Replaced <quote>Astral plane</quote> with <quote>Astral Plane</quote>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>Azawood leaves</quote> with <quote>Azawood leaf</quote>. Replaced <quote>You have two Azawood leaves remaining.</quote> with <quote>You have used one Azawood leaf.</quote>, as you did not necessarily have three leaves to begin with.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect303">303</a>) Replaced <quote>staff</quote> with <quote>Staff</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Deleted <quote> or keep it in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item</quote>, in order to avoid rules ambiguities.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Removed <quote> or keep it in your Backpack where it will count as a Backpack Item</quote>, in order to avoid rules ambiguities.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>staff</quote> with <quote>Staff</quote>. Replaced <quote>Samu, <ch.lsquot/>I<ch.apos/>ve</quote> with <quote>Samu. <ch.lsquot/>I<ch.apos/>ve</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>elementals</quote> with <quote>Elementals</quote>. Replaced <quote>Elemental plane</quote> with <quote>Elemental Plane</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>Beyond The Shadow Gate</quote> with <quote>Beyond the Nightmare Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>series entitled</quote> with <quote>series, entitled</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
 
+       <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Added label <quote>Dagorlan</quote> to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.</p> 
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Added a fourth step <quote>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</quote> in the first step list. Replaced <quote>of chart</quote> with <quote>of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random</quote> with <quote>to the random</quote>. Replaced <quote>to 0</quote> with <quote>0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>to <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote> with <quote>to the <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
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