Add a period to the caption for Illustration 12 in Grey Star Book 2.

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@@ -2406,7 +2406,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
-         <description>The Deathgaunts come no further but remain outside the reach of the spell, whispering</description>
+         <description>The Deathgaunts come no further but remain outside the reach of the spell, whispering.</description>
         </meta>
         <instance class="html" src="ill11.png" width="386" height="646"  mime-type="image/png"/>
         <instance class="html-compatible" src="ill11.gif" width="386" height="646"  mime-type="image/gif"/>
@@ -4955,7 +4955,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>asks</quote> with <quote>asks.</quote>. Replaced <quote>out-sized</quote> with <quote>outsized</quote>. Replaced <quote>shoulder:</quote> with <quote>shoulder;</quote>. Replaced <quote>ears;</quote> with <quote>ears:</quote>. Replaced <quote>long range</quote> with <quote>long-range</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Switched the section numbers given for the two choices, to avoid unreasonable consequences of high <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> and <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> scores.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>If you have the Black Rod of Shasarak and wish to use it</quote> with <quote>If you wish to use the Black Rod of Shasarak</quote>. Replaced <quote>Astral plane</quote> with <quote>Astral Plane</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>spell whispering</quote> with <quote>spell, whispering</quote> in the caption for the illustration. Replaced <quote>some Azawood leaves</quote> with <quote>an Azawood Leaf or a portion from a Bundle of Azawood Leaves</quote> as there is confusion over the number of Azawood Leaves a player might be carrying. In <bookref series="gs" book="01gstw" section="sect183"><cite>Grey Star the Wizard</cite> Section 183</bookref> you may buy <quote>1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves (a base constituent that will charm up to 4 magical potions)</quote> from Madame Tarlas; however, in <a idref="sect216">Section 216</a> of this book, you may <quote>break off three of these leaves and place them in your Herb Pouch</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect145">145</a>) Replaced <quote>spell whispering</quote> with <quote>spell, whispering</quote> in the caption for the illustration. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>some Azawood leaves</quote> with <quote>an Azawood Leaf or a portion from a Bundle of Azawood Leaves</quote> as there is confusion over the number of Azawood Leaves a player might be carrying. In <bookref series="gs" book="01gstw" section="sect183"><cite>Grey Star the Wizard</cite> Section 183</bookref> you may buy <quote>1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves (a base constituent that will charm up to 4 magical potions)</quote> from Madame Tarlas; however, in <a idref="sect216">Section 216</a> of this book, you may <quote>break off three of these leaves and place them in your Herb Pouch</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect146">146</a>) Replaced <quote>7<ch.endash/>12</quote> with <quote>6<ch.endash/>12</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect149">149</a>) Replaced <quote>Kiro will</quote> with <quote>Kiro, will</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyebow</quote> with <quote>eyebrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>trader<ch.apos/>s city</quote> with <quote>traders<ch.apos/> city</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>and as</quote> with <quote>and, as</quote>. Replaced <quote>you, then</quote> with <quote>you, and then</quote>.</p>