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diff --git a/en/xml/03btng.xml b/en/xml/03btng.xml
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--- a/en/xml/03btng.xml
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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
    &inclusion.paul.bonner.bio.gs;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
    &inclusion.paul.bonner.bio.gs;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>

-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>

   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the Wizard Grey Star, chosen hero of an ancient magical race<ch.emdash/>the Shianti. To find the Moonstone, source of all Shianti wisdom, you must venture <strong>Beyond the Nightmare Gate</strong>.</p>
    <p>Dare you enter a realm of mystery, a world of gods and demons? For somewhere in this twilight region is the secret of the Moonstone. Only you can find it and with its power throw down the evil Shasarak and save mankind. Your journey will take you across the grey plains of the Neverness, past the dark enchantments of the Crystal Tower, and on towards perils undreamed of. Armed only with the Wizard<ch.apos/>s Staff and the magical spells of the Shianti, you must step into a nightmare world where only the bravest will survive!</p>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the Wizard Grey Star, chosen hero of an ancient magical race<ch.emdash/>the Shianti. To find the Moonstone, source of all Shianti wisdom, you must venture <strong>Beyond the Nightmare Gate</strong>.</p>
    <p>Dare you enter a realm of mystery, a world of gods and demons? For somewhere in this twilight region is the secret of the Moonstone. Only you can find it and with its power throw down the evil Shasarak and save mankind. Your journey will take you across the grey plains of the Neverness, past the dark enchantments of the Crystal Tower, and on towards perils undreamed of. Armed only with the Wizard<ch.apos/>s Staff and the magical spells of the Shianti, you must step into a nightmare world where only the bravest will survive!</p>


@@ -1879,7 +1879,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>

-         <description><quote>Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors</quote></description>
+         <description><quote>Allow me to introduce Crabkey, one of our most ingenious inventors.</quote></description>

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@@ -4919,6 +4919,7 @@
     <meta><title>The Shadakine Empire</title></meta>
 
     <data>
     <meta><title>The Shadakine Empire</title></meta>
 
     <data>

+    <!--Dagorlan [so: Please do not delete; this fixes a false-positive in checkerrata.pl.]-->

      <illustration>
       <meta>
        <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
      <illustration>
       <meta>
        <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>


@@ -5468,7 +5469,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Chaos-Master</quote> with <quote>Chaos-master</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>beasts and</quote> with <quote>beasts, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>elessin</quote> with <quote>Elessin</quote>. Replaced <quote>guards but</quote> with <quote>guards, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>west and</quote> with <quote>west, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Chaos-Master</quote> with <quote>Chaos-master</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>beasts and</quote> with <quote>beasts, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>elessin</quote> with <quote>Elessin</quote>. Replaced <quote>guards but</quote> with <quote>guards, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>west and</quote> with <quote>west, and</quote>.</p>

-       <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Crabkey, is</quote> with <quote>Crabkey is</quote>. Replaced <quote>embarassed</quote> with <quote>embarrassed</quote>. Replaced <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you Crabkey</quote> with <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you, Crabkey</quote>. Replaced <quote>well<ch.ellips/>.</quote> with <quote>well<ch.ellips/></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Crabkey, is</quote> with <quote>Crabkey is</quote>. Replaced <quote>embarassed</quote> with <quote>embarrassed</quote>. Replaced <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you Crabkey</quote> with <quote>aren<ch.apos/>t you, Crabkey</quote>. Replaced <quote>well<ch.ellips/>.</quote> with <quote>well<ch.ellips/></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>strength and</quote> with <quote>strength, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>statue</quote> with <quote>Guardian</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>strength and</quote> with <quote>strength, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>cloud plane</quote> with <quote>cloud plain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>statue</quote> with <quote>Guardian</quote>.</p>


@@ -5599,6 +5600,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>anticipation you</quote> with <quote>anticipation, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>recognition at</quote> with <quote>recognition, at</quote>. Replaced <quote>titled</quote> with <quote>entitled</quote>.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>anticipation you</quote> with <quote>anticipation, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>recognition at</quote> with <quote>recognition, at</quote>. Replaced <quote>titled</quote> with <quote>entitled</quote>.</p>
 

+       <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Added label <quote>Dagorlan</quote> to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.</p> 

        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Added a fourth step <quote>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</quote> in the first step list. Replaced <quote>Turn to <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
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        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Added a fourth step <quote>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</quote> in the first step list. Replaced <quote>Turn to <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
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      </section>