fixing errata in 03tcok, section 227 reported by Benjamin Krefetz

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 03tcok.xml

diff --git a/en/xml/03tcok.xml b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
index 34c68dd..14caa41 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/03tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
@@ -3359,10 +3359,10 @@
       <meta><title>227</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The stone buttons rise less than an inch above the smooth altar surface. You notice that they are each surrounded by strange, barely perceptible, hieroglyphs, eroded by the passage of time. You now have to decide in which sequence you will press the buttons. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, you can depress the buttons without actually touching them.</p>
+       <p>The stone buttons rise less than an inch above the smooth altar surface. You notice that they are each surrounded by strange, barely perceptible hieroglyphs, eroded by the passage of time. You now have to decide in which sequence you will press the buttons. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, you can depress the buttons without actually touching them.</p>
        <choice idref="sect102">If you decide to press the left button and then the right, <link-text>turn to 102</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect334">If you decide to press the right button and then the left, <link-text>turn to 334</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect299">If you decided to press them both together, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect299">If you decide to press them both together, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
 
@@ -5500,7 +5500,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect221">221</a>) Replaced <quote>shards and</quote> with <quote>shards, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>1 Item</quote> with <quote>1 item</quote>. Replaced <quote>them, and</quote> with <quote>them and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>sledge and</quote> with <quote>sledge, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Meal</quote> with <quote>meal</quote> since this is not referring to a Meal noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>button then</quote> with <quote>button and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>If you decided to press them both together</quote> with <quote>If you decide to press them both together</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>button then</quote> with <quote>button and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>much-deserved</quote> with <quote>much deserved</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>pack ice</quote> with <quote>pack-ice</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>locks or</quote> with <quote>locks, or</quote>.</p>