Added James Murray's text replacement for the map

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 03tcok.xml

diff --git a/en/xml/03tcok.xml b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
index 14caa41..4d92a8f 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/03tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/03tcok.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>last of the Kai Lords. Shocking news has just reached your homeland that Vonotar the Traitor still lives and now rules over the Ice Barbarians of Kalte.</p>
   <p>The King has vowed to your people that Vonotar will be brought to justice for his crimes. But it is a promise that only you can fulfil.</p>
@@ -35,15 +35,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1984 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1984 Gary Chalk.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -1582,7 +1579,7 @@
       <meta><title>82</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.nbsp/>.<ch.nbsp/>. animal noises.</p>
+       <p>The cave is cold and slopes very steeply away into the darkness. You have covered sixty yards before you notice a light in the distance. As you get nearer, you hear noises.<ch.ellips/> animal noises.</p>
        <choice idref="sect329">If you have the Kai Discipline of Animal Kinship, <link-text>turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect138">If you wish to draw your weapon and charge, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect107">If you want to try to creep closer and spy on whatever is there, <link-text>turn to 107</link-text>.</choice>