Corrected "Pantano Wash" to "Pantona Wash" in FW3, FW4, and the Map for FW4

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@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>Collision with the barrier has damaged Mad Dog<ch.apos/>s car: a section of the front fender is buckled against the wheel, slowing it considerably. In your deadly duel, his supercharged car no longer has the advantage of speed. However, even though it is damaged, it still possesses enough power to enable him to catch you.</p>
 
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       <p>Collision with the barrier has damaged Mad Dog<ch.apos/>s car: a section of the front fender is buckled against the wheel, slowing it considerably. In your deadly duel, his supercharged car no longer has the advantage of speed. However, even though it is damaged, it still possesses enough power to enable him to catch you.</p>

-      <p>In the distance a bridge is fast approaching. It crosses a channelled drainageway, fed by the Pantona Wash. An Amcorp Landcruiser, one of the colony<ch.apos/>s vehicles, has broken down and been abandoned on its approach ramp. The bus blocks two lanes of the freeway, leaving just enough room for one vehicle to pass.</p>
+      <p>In the distance a bridge is fast approaching. It crosses a channelled drainageway, fed by the Pantano Wash. An Amcorp Landcruiser, one of the colony<ch.apos/>s vehicles, has broken down and been abandoned on its approach ramp. The bus blocks two lanes of the freeway, leaving just enough room for one vehicle to pass.</p>

       <p>The two of you speed towards this narrow gap, neck and neck, each determined to be the first to get across. Desperate to beat you, Mad Dog brings his speedster dangerously close. You are three seconds away from the gap when he rams your door.</p>
       <p>Add your Driving skill total to your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score. Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> and add it to your total.</p>
       <choice idref="sect220">If your total score is 21 or less, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>
       <p>The two of you speed towards this narrow gap, neck and neck, each determined to be the first to get across. Desperate to beat you, Mad Dog brings his speedster dangerously close. You are three seconds away from the gap when he rams your door.</p>
       <p>Add your Driving skill total to your current <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points score. Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> and add it to your total.</p>
       <choice idref="sect220">If your total score is 21 or less, <link-text>turn to 220</link-text>.</choice>


@@ -3499,7 +3499,7 @@
       <p>You are five miles out of Benson when you notice in your driving mirror a cloud of dust rising in the distance. You tell Kate and she turns around to take a look.</p>
       <p><quote>Clan scouts, a pack of them,</quote> she reports. <quote>Looks like twenty bikes, but they<ch.apos/>re not on their own. They<ch.apos/>re tailin<ch.apos/> a car. Well, I think it<ch.apos/>s a car<ch.emdash/>it<ch.apos/>s got four wheels.</quote> She continues to stare into the distance for several minutes; then she says: <quote>I don<ch.apos/>t like the look of it, Cal. Let<ch.apos/>s not hang around to say hi to these dudes, OK?</quote></p>
       <p>You respond by flooring the gas pedal until the roadster<ch.apos/>s speedometer registers 100 miles an hour. <quote>The pack<ch.apos/>s dropping back,</quote> shouts Kate, her voice barely audible above the noise of the rushing wind. <quote>But that car is gaining on us.</quote></p>
       <p>You are five miles out of Benson when you notice in your driving mirror a cloud of dust rising in the distance. You tell Kate and she turns around to take a look.</p>
       <p><quote>Clan scouts, a pack of them,</quote> she reports. <quote>Looks like twenty bikes, but they<ch.apos/>re not on their own. They<ch.apos/>re tailin<ch.apos/> a car. Well, I think it<ch.apos/>s a car<ch.emdash/>it<ch.apos/>s got four wheels.</quote> She continues to stare into the distance for several minutes; then she says: <quote>I don<ch.apos/>t like the look of it, Cal. Let<ch.apos/>s not hang around to say hi to these dudes, OK?</quote></p>
       <p>You respond by flooring the gas pedal until the roadster<ch.apos/>s speedometer registers 100 miles an hour. <quote>The pack<ch.apos/>s dropping back,</quote> shouts Kate, her voice barely audible above the noise of the rushing wind. <quote>But that car is gaining on us.</quote></p>

-      <p>You are speeding over a girder bridge, across a water-course known locally as the Pantona Wash, when you see the car in your mirror. It is black and bullet-shaped, with an enclosed driver<ch.apos/>s compartment and a roaring lion<ch.apos/>s head emblazoned on the hood. It accelerates to within twenty yards of your trunk, and you catch sight of the driver<ch.apos/>s snarling face. A shiver runs down your spine when you recognize the manic features of Mad Dog Michigan.</p>
+      <p>You are speeding over a girder bridge, across a water-course known locally as the Pantano Wash, when you see the car in your mirror. It is black and bullet-shaped, with an enclosed driver<ch.apos/>s compartment and a roaring lion<ch.apos/>s head emblazoned on the hood. It accelerates to within twenty yards of your trunk, and you catch sight of the driver<ch.apos/>s snarling face. A shiver runs down your spine when you recognize the manic features of Mad Dog Michigan.</p>

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@@ -4673,7 +4673,7 @@
 
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       <p>You and Kate enter the Tucson stronghold to receive a hero<ch.apos/>s welcome. The colony is overjoyed; they feared they would never see either of you alive again. They are saddened to hear your account of how Captain Frankland, Sergeant Haskell, and Marine Knott met their deaths, yet they draw comfort from the knowledge that their memory will live on in the hearts of the colonists. If it were not for their ultimate sacrifice, the colony would never have reached Tucson intact.</p>
 
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       <p>You and Kate enter the Tucson stronghold to receive a hero<ch.apos/>s welcome. The colony is overjoyed; they feared they would never see either of you alive again. They are saddened to hear your account of how Captain Frankland, Sergeant Haskell, and Marine Knott met their deaths, yet they draw comfort from the knowledge that their memory will live on in the hearts of the colonists. If it were not for their ultimate sacrifice, the colony would never have reached Tucson intact.</p>

-      <p>After celebrating your successful return, the colony leaders set about planning the last stage of the journey to California, confident that now Mad Dog Michigan is no longer around, his army will be disinclined to continue the pursuit of the convoy. But a nagging doubt remains in your mind. Did Mad Dog Michigan really meet his doom at the Pantona Bridge?</p>
+      <p>After celebrating your successful return, the colony leaders set about planning the last stage of the journey to California, confident that now Mad Dog Michigan is no longer around, his army will be disinclined to continue the pursuit of the convoy. But a nagging doubt remains in your mind. Did Mad Dog Michigan really meet his doom at the Pantano Bridge?</p>

       <p>For you, Cal Phoenix, the answer to that question<ch.emdash/>and the final part of your exodus to California<ch.emdash/>await you in book four of the Freeway Warrior series, entitled:</p>
       <p><cite><bookref series="fw" book="04cc">California Countdown</bookref></cite></p>
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       <p>For you, Cal Phoenix, the answer to that question<ch.emdash/>and the final part of your exodus to California<ch.emdash/>await you in book four of the Freeway Warrior series, entitled:</p>
       <p><cite><bookref series="fw" book="04cc">California Countdown</bookref></cite></p>
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@@ -5252,6 +5252,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>head over heals</quote> with <quote>head over heels</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>. Altered the brackets around <quote>Note: If your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score is low and you are heavily encumbered, it may be advisable to discard some of your Backpack Items in order to increase your Stealth skill level.</quote> to parentheses.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>antispetics</quote> with <quote>antiseptics</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>. Replaced <quote>units or</quote> with <quote>units, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Knife [2]</quote> with <quote>Knife (2)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hammer [2]</quote> with <quote>Hammer (2)</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Replaced <quote>head over heals</quote> with <quote>head over heels</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>. Altered the brackets around <quote>Note: If your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> score is low and you are heavily encumbered, it may be advisable to discard some of your Backpack Items in order to increase your Stealth skill level.</quote> to parentheses.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>antispetics</quote> with <quote>antiseptics</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack items</quote> with <quote>Backpack Items</quote>. Replaced <quote>units or</quote> with <quote>units, or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Knife [2]</quote> with <quote>Knife (2)</quote>. Replaced <quote>Hammer [2]</quote> with <quote>Hammer (2)</quote>.</p>

+      <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>Pantona Wash</quote> with <quote>Pantano Wash</quote>.</p>

       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>nearby, then</quote> with <quote>nearby; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>plateau, towards</quote> with <quote>plateau towards</quote>. Replaced <quote>plateau, under</quote> with <quote>plateau under</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>over, then</quote> with <quote>over, and then</quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>nearby, then</quote> with <quote>nearby; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>plateau, towards</quote> with <quote>plateau towards</quote>. Replaced <quote>plateau, under</quote> with <quote>plateau under</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>over, then</quote> with <quote>over, and then</quote>. Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>.</p>


@@ -5367,7 +5368,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>binouclars</quote> with <quote>binoculars</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>flash, then</quote> with <quote>flash, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>a handful of faded family photographs stands</quote> with <quote>a handful of faded family photographs stand</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>binouclars</quote> with <quote>binoculars</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>flash, then</quote> with <quote>flash, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>a handful of faded family photographs stands</quote> with <quote>a handful of faded family photographs stand</quote>.</p>

-      <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Replaced <quote>machine gunfire</quote> with <quote>machine gun fire</quote>. Replaced <quote>minutes, then</quote> with <quote>minutes; then</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect252">252</a>) Replaced <quote>machine gunfire</quote> with <quote>machine gun fire</quote>. Replaced <quote>minutes, then</quote> with <quote>minutes; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pantona Wash</quote> with <quote>Pantano Wash</quote>.</p>

       <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>torchbeam</quote> with <quote>torch<ch.apos/>s beam</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>spins, then</quote> with <quote>spins, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>torchbeam</quote> with <quote>torch<ch.apos/>s beam</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>spins, then</quote> with <quote>spins, and then</quote>.</p>


@@ -5423,7 +5424,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>attack, then</quote> with <quote>attack, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>commotion (erase</quote> with <quote>commotion. (Erase</quote>. Replaced <quote>fire).</quote> with <quote>fire.)</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>come to a flight of stairs that descends to a fire exit</quote> with <quote>come to a fire exit</quote> as you can only reach this section by <em>not</em> climbing the stairs in <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>. Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect341">341</a>) Replaced <quote>attack, then</quote> with <quote>attack, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>commotion (erase</quote> with <quote>commotion. (Erase</quote>. Replaced <quote>fire).</quote> with <quote>fire.)</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect346">346</a>) Replaced <quote>come to a flight of stairs that descends to a fire exit</quote> with <quote>come to a fire exit</quote> as you can only reach this section by <em>not</em> climbing the stairs in <a idref="sect298">Section 298</a>. Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>.</p>

-      <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Haskell and</quote> with <quote>Haskell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>CALIFORNIA COUNTDOWN</quote> with <quote><cite><bookref series="fw" book="04cc">California Countdown</bookref></cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>question, and the final part of your exodus to California, await</quote> with <quote>question<ch.emdash/>and the final part of your exodus to California<ch.emdash/>await</quote>. Replaced <quote>colony are</quote> with <quote>colony is</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Haskell and</quote> with <quote>Haskell, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>CALIFORNIA COUNTDOWN</quote> with <quote><cite><bookref series="fw" book="04cc">California Countdown</bookref></cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>question, and the final part of your exodus to California, await</quote> with <quote>question<ch.emdash/>and the final part of your exodus to California<ch.emdash/>await</quote>. Replaced <quote>colony are</quote> with <quote>colony is</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pantona Bridge</quote> with <quote>Pantano Bridge</quote>.</p>

 
       <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross-refer</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>Combat Results Table</quote> with <quote>Close Combat Results Table</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero ENDURANCE points, this</quote> with <quote>zero ENDURANCE points or below; this</quote>.</p>
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       <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross-refer</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>Combat Results Table</quote> with <quote>Close Combat Results Table</quote>. Replaced <quote>zero ENDURANCE points, this</quote> with <quote>zero ENDURANCE points or below; this</quote>.</p>
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