Footnote updates (Books 8 and 9); "thing--is" changes (LW1, 19; FW3, 4)

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      <meta><title>99</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>Those responsible for looting Eloy did a very thorough job of cleaning out the gun store. Virtually every item of stock has been taken, including a collection of animal trophies that were once displayed around the walls. The only thing displayed there now are crude skull-and-crossbones motifs, daubed on with shiny black paint.</p>
+      <p>Those responsible for looting Eloy did a very thorough job of cleaning out the gun store. Virtually every item of stock has been taken, including a collection of animal trophies that were once displayed around the walls. The only things displayed there now are crude skull-and-crossbones motifs, daubed on with shiny black paint.</p>
       <p>You sift through the debris-covered floor, but it is not until you look in the basement that you discover some items of practical value:</p>
       <ul>
        <li>Two rounds of 9mm ammunition</li>
@@ -5812,7 +5812,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>bus, and</quote> with <quote>bus and</quote>. Replaced <quote>or are</quote> with <quote>or if you are</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>stability, then</quote> with <quote>stability, and then</quote>. Added <quote>Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Added <quote>(Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.)</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>ammuntion</quote> with <quote>ammunition</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>ammuntion</quote> with <quote>ammunition</quote>. Replaced <quote>The only thing displayed</quote> with <quote>The only things displayed</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>hesitates, then</quote> with <quote>hesitates, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>lucky, I</quote> with <quote>lucky; I</quote>. Replaced <quote>water that unless</quote> with <quote>water that, unless</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>take two Drinks or lose 6 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>take two Drinks or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points per drink missed</quote>. Replaced <quote>the pain and the trembling subsides</quote> with <quote>the pain and the trembling subside</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>your Strength skill</quote> with <quote>your Stealth skill</quote>.</p>