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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
    &inclusion.paul.bonner.bio.gs;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the Wizard Grey Star. You now face the tumultuous climax of your epic struggle to overthrow the evil Wytch-king Shasarak. His cruel empire is torn by war as the Freedom Fighters rebel against his corrupt dominion. Can you reach them in time to free mankind? Can you overcome the Wytch-king<ch.apos/>s ferocious soldiers and the supernatural hordes that are his to command? Your only hope lies in your Wizard<ch.apos/>s Staff. Guard it well<ch.emdash/>for it contains the might of the mystic Moonstone, the very essence of your Magical Powers.</p>
    <p><cite>The World of Lone Wolf</cite> is an exciting adventure series in which you are the hero, you make the decisions, and you fight the combats using the unique systems included in the book.</p>
@@ -2743,7 +2743,7 @@
        <illustration class="float">
         <meta>
          <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
-         <description>Unsuspecting the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
+         <description>Unsuspecting, the Shadakine warrior rides towards you.</description>
         </meta>
         <instance class="html" src="ill10.png" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/png"/>
         <instance class="html-compatible" src="ill10.gif" width="386" height="683"  mime-type="image/gif"/>
@@ -4745,6 +4745,7 @@
     <meta><title>The Shadakine Empire</title></meta>
 
     <data>
+    <!--Dagorlan [so: Please do not delete; this fixes a false-positive in checkerrata.pl.]-->
      <illustration>
       <meta>
        <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
@@ -5349,6 +5350,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>power of Physiurgy</quote> with <quote>Power of Physiurgy</quote>. Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>hills of Tilos</quote> with <quote>Hills of Tilos</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>higher magick</quote> with <quote>Higher Magick</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>Unsuspecting the</quote> with <quote>Unsuspecting, the</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Replaced <quote>blows and</quote> with <quote>blows, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>pain, then</quote> with <quote>pain, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Replaced <quote>for, indeed, I hate you</quote> with <quote>for indeed I hate you</quote>. Replaced <quote>breathes, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>breathes. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>. Replaced <quote>represent; the</quote> with <quote>represent: the</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes; colourless</quote> with <quote>eyes, colourless</quote>. Replaced <quote>feeling; like</quote> with <quote>feeling, like</quote>. Replaced <quote>powerful, I am</quote> with <quote>powerful; I am</quote>.</p>
@@ -5444,6 +5446,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect360">360</a>) Added a link to the <cite>Passing of the Shianti</cite> epilogue. Replaced <quote>The demon lord, Agarash</quote> with <quote>The Demonlord Agarash</quote>. Replaced <quote>comers</quote> with <quote>corners</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="passing">The Passing of the Shianti</a>) Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced <quote>as many foretold they would</quote> with <quote>as many foretold they would be</quote>. Replaced <quote>a magiocracy</quote> with <quote>a Magiocracy</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Added a fourth step <quote>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</quote> in the first step list. Replaced <quote>Turn to <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a></quote> with <quote>Turn to the <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Added label <quote>Dagorlan</quote> to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.</p> 
       </data>
      </section>