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   &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
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  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
  <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>last of the Kai Lords. A voyage to Vassagonia promises an end to the shadow of war. But hopes are soon shattered upon your arrival at Barrakeesh<ch.emdash/>a city full of treachery and death.</p>
  <p>In <strong><cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite></strong>, you are the quarry of a sinister foe, determined to kill you at all costs. Choose your skills and your weapons carefully. They can help you survive and aid you in the quest for a lost Sommlending treasure<ch.emdash/>a treasure that contains the secret of your destiny.</p>
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       <p>A search of the baskets crowding the little boat uncovers a beautifully hand-tooled leather case. You flick open the brass catch and discover that the case contains a Jakan<ch.emdash/>a hunting bow used by the coastal fishermen of Vassagonia. (You may record the Jakan Bow as a Weapon on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. You must possess an Arrow in order to use this Weapon.) You are elated by your find but disappointed to discover that the case contains only one Arrow.</p>
 
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       <p>Across the harbour square, close to Maouk<ch.apos/>s carriage, you notice a small, white-walled shop where a row of green glass flagons line a balcony on the first floor. You draw the bowstring to your lips and take careful aim; it is a difficult shot, and you have only one chance.</p>
       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess the Kai Discipline of Weaponskill (any weapon), add 2 to the number you have picked.</p>
       <choice idref="sect7">If your total is now 0<ch.endash/>3, <link-text>turn to 7</link-text>.</choice>
       <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Replaced <quote>lit but</quote> with <quote>lit, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>head or feet first</quote> with <quote>head- or feet-first</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>explore, and</quote> with <quote>explore and</quote>. Replaced <quote>face and</quote> with <quote>face, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>catch of lavacrabs lie</quote> with <quote>catch of lavacrabs lies</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a id="err236" idref="sect236">236</a>) Deleted the second sentence <quote>When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold.</quote> (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>pen, and</quote> with <quote>pen and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a id="err236" idref="sect236">236</a>) Removed the second sentence <quote>When you strike, the guard is still on his knees, picking up his scattered gold.</quote> (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>pen, and</quote> with <quote>pen and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect237">237</a>) Replaced <quote>smells, and after</quote> with <quote>smells and, after</quote>. Replaced <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>crack and</quote> with <quote>crack, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Tracking and</quote> with <quote>Tracking, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Guardian</quote> with <quote>Guardian or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sentry</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sentry</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect339">339</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect342">342</a>) Replaced <quote>half-way</quote> with <quote>halfway</quote>. Replaced <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>behind you but</quote> with <quote>behind you, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of this book </quote>. Replaced <quote>Dahir pass</quote> with <quote>Dahir Pass</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect343">343</a>) Replaced <quote>behind you but</quote> with <quote>behind you, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Dahir mountains</quote> with <quote>Dahir Mountains</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of this book </quote>. Replaced <quote>Dahir pass</quote> with <quote>Dahir Pass</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect344">344</a>) Replaced <quote>yellow and</quote> with <quote>yellow, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>herb, and</quote> with <quote>herb and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>) Replaced <quote>hand, and</quote> with <quote>hand and</quote>. Replaced <quote>is another arch and a staircase</quote> with <quote>are another arch and a staircase</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>below but</quote> with <quote>below, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect353">353</a>) Replaced <quote>Cryptspawn</quote> with <quote>Crypt Spawn</quote>. Replaced <quote>fire but</quote> with <quote>fire, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect354">354</a>) Replaced <quote>deck but</quote> with <quote>deck, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect355">355</a>) Replaced <quote>If the fight lasts longer</quote> with <quote>If you win and the fight lasts longer</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a id="err357" idref="sect357">357</a>) Deleted the words <quote>forgets about his scattered gold and</quote> from the third sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a id="err357" idref="sect357">357</a>) Removed the words <quote>forgets about his scattered gold and</quote> from the third sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect361">361</a>) Replaced <quote>boomsail</quote> with <quote>boom-sail</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect362">362</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Jala</quote> with <quote>jala</quote>. Replaced <quote>Jala, or</quote> with <quote>jala or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect366">366</a>) Replaced <quote>drawbolt</quote> with <quote>bolt</quote>. Replaced <quote>death blow</quote> with <quote>death-blow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect384">384</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect385">385</a>) Replaced <quote>seering</quote> with <quote>searing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect386">386</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.</p>
-      <p>(<a id="err389" idref="sect389">389</a>) Deleted the words <quote>forgets about his gold and</quote> from the second sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>pen, combat</quote> with <quote>pen; combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a id="err389" idref="sect389">389</a>) Removed the words <quote>forgets about his gold and</quote> from the second sentence. (See the <a idref="err295">erratum for section 295</a>.) Replaced <quote>pen, combat</quote> with <quote>pen; combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect388">388</a>) Replaced <quote>Armourer<ch.apos/>s Quarter</quote> with <quote>Armourers<ch.apos/> Quarter</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect389">389</a>) Replaced <quote>combat, and</quote> with <quote>combat and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect390">390</a>) Replaced <quote>flame, is</quote> with <quote>flame is</quote>.</p>