(er) 06tkot 88: a honest -> an honest [so: (cf. Section 34 and everywhere else in...

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@@ -2011,7 +2011,7 @@
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-       <p>Your speedy dispatch of the robbers has earned you 5 Gold Crowns, which you find in the pockets of the dead men, and the respectful glances of several mercenary captains. One in particular is so impressed by your fighting prowess that he approaches you and offers to buy you a drink. You sense that it is a honest gesture of friendship without any hidden threat and gratefully accept his offer.</p>
+       <p>Your speedy dispatch of the robbers has earned you 5 Gold Crowns, which you find in the pockets of the dead men, and the respectful glances of several mercenary captains. One in particular is so impressed by your fighting prowess that he approaches you and offers to buy you a drink. You sense that it is an honest gesture of friendship without any hidden threat and gratefully accept his offer.</p>
        <choice idref="sect211"><link-text>Turn to 211</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -6422,7 +6422,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>you have a bow</quote> with <quote>you have a Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>do not have a bow</quote> with <quote>do not have a Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>chase, and turn to 39.</quote> with <quote>chase. <!--link-text-->Turn to 39<!--/link-text-->.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>done and</quote> with <quote>done, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>devotion and</quote> with <quote>devotion, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>battle skill</quote> with <quote>battle-skill</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>threat, and</quote> with <quote>threat and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>threat, and</quote> with <quote>threat and</quote>. Replaced <quote>a honest</quote> with <quote>an honest</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect34">Section 34</a> and everywhere else in the books).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>Cyrilus your</quote> with <quote>Cyrilus, your</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>huge lumbering</quote> with <quote>huge, lumbering</quote>. Replaced <quote>thick twisted</quote> with <quote>thick, twisted</quote>. Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>vault and</quote> with <quote>vault, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>slumber but</quote> with <quote>slumber, but</quote>.</p>