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        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>scent, and</quote> with <quote>scent and</quote>. Replaced <quote>points, and</quote> with <quote>points and</quote>. Replaced <quote>danger, or</quote> with <quote>danger or</quote>. Removed all extraneous spaces between a number and its sign (e.g. replaced <quote><ch.plus/> 3</quote> with <quote><ch.plus/>3</quote>). Set the list of items in initial capital letters instead of all capitals. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Replaced <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Removed <quote> (see front inside cover)</quote>. Replaced <quote>pouch and</quote> with <quote>pouch, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>notes but</quote> with <quote>notes, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>effect it</quote> with <quote>effect they</quote>. Replaced <quote>TINDERBOX carried</quote> with <quote>Tinderbox<ch.emdash/>carried</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>to evade combat, but</quote> with <quote>to evade combat but</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>heart and</quote> with <quote>heart, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>knuckleduster and</quote> with <quote>knuckle-duster, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>knuckleduster</quote> with <quote>knuckle-duster</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Replaced <quote>spluttering wall torch</quote> with <quote>sputtering wall torch</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Deleted a period in the middle of the second sentence.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Removed a period in the middle of the second sentence.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect52">52</a>) Replaced <quote>neck and</quote> with <quote>neck, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) In the first choice, replaced <quote>Unless you have already done so, if you wish to approach the merchant</quote> with <quote>If you wish to approach the merchant</quote>. It is actually impossible to have already approached the merchant at this point.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>men and</quote> with <quote>men, and</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect195">195</a>) Replaced <quote>peril and</quote> with <quote>peril, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>points), and</quote> with <quote>points) and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Deleted a period after <quote>He asks</quote> in the last sentence. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Removed a period after <quote>He asks</quote> in the last sentence. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>open and, as</quote> with <quote>open, and as</quote>. Replaced <quote>chill stale</quote> with <quote>chill, stale</quote>. Replaced <quote>key but</quote> with <quote>key, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Silver Key</quote> with <quote>Small Silver Key</quote> (see errata entry for <a idref="sect158">Section 158</a> for reasoning).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>If the combat</quote> with <quote>If you win and the combat</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>. Replaced <quote>equipment and then collect</quote> with <quote>equipment, and then collect</quote>. Replaced <quote>shabby and bare</quote> with <quote>shabby, and bare</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect295">295</a>) Replaced <quote>charge but</quote> with <quote>charge, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect296">296</a>) Replaced <quote>target but</quote> with <quote>target, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect297">297</a>) Replaced <quote>plunder but</quote> with <quote>plunder, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>mercenaries but</quote> with <quote>mercenaries, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>gleefully,</quote> with <quote>gleefully.</quote>. Replaced <quote>main mast</quote> with <quote>mainmast</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>the Jakan will break</quote> with <quote>the Jakan will break and become unusable</quote>. Deleted <quote>If this happens during the tournament at any stage, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 335<!--/link-text-->.</quote> as <a idref="sect26">Section 26</a> has been rewritten to incorporate the link to <a idref="sect335">Section 335</a>, in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>this adventive number</quote> with <quote>this number</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect298">298</a>) Replaced <quote>the Jakan will break</quote> with <quote>the Jakan will break and become unusable</quote>. Removed <quote>If this happens during the tournament at any stage, <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 335<!--/link-text-->.</quote> as <a idref="sect26">Section 26</a> has been rewritten to incorporate the link to <a idref="sect335">Section 335</a>, in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>this adventive number</quote> with <quote>this number</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect299">299</a>) Replaced <quote>you but</quote> with <quote>you, but</quote>. Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect300">300</a>) Replaced <quote>city you</quote> with <quote>city, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>hall there</quote> with <quote>hall, there</quote>. Replaced <quote>gold and pink</quote> with <quote>gold, and pink</quote>. Replaced <quote>library and</quote> with <quote>library, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Tower of the King and marks</quote> with <quote>the Tower of the King and it marks</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect301">301</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>shrieks,</quote> with <quote>shrieks.</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>his sword and cloak</quote> with <quote>his cloak</quote> since Roark clearly does not deposit his sword with the innkeeper (cf. <a idref="sect219">Section 219</a>).</p>