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        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
 
        <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 

-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>

 
 

-       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>

 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Magnakai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Magnakai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 


@@ -5708,7 +5708,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>can but</quote> with <quote>can, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>cracks but</quote> with <quote>cracks, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia> and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>can but</quote> with <quote>can, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>cracks but</quote> with <quote>cracks, but</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia> and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>

-       <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Deleted the instruction to choose an unused random number.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Removed the instruction to choose an unused random number.</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>rapidly and</quote> with <quote>rapidly, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>climb and</quote> with <quote>climb, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>simultaneously and</quote> with <quote>simultaneously, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>rapidly and</quote> with <quote>rapidly, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>climb and</quote> with <quote>climb, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>simultaneously and</quote> with <quote>simultaneously, and</quote>.</p>