<dt>Coordination</dt>
<dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
<dt>Special Thanks</dt>
- <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Alfred Hailey, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Dewi Morgan, Eric Rossing, Keith Sheldon, Wayne Stubbs, Denis Vald, Arthur Yin</dd>
+ <dd>Ricardo Amaro, Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Alfred Hailey, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Dewi Morgan, Eric Rossing, Keith Sheldon, Wayne Stubbs, Denis Vald, Arthur Yin</dd>
</dl>
</data>
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<p>(<a idref="discplnz">Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Italicised <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>.
Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Capitalized the list of items rather than setting them in all capital letters. Replaced <quote>fireseeds</quote> with <quote>Fireseeds</quote>. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of<quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>number of weapons</quote> with <quote>number of Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>.
Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Magnakai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect90">90</a>) Replaced <quote>touch and</quote> with <quote>touch, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>that Magnakai</quote> with <quote>the Magnakai</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill or</quote> with <quote>skill nor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Platinum Amulet</quote> with <quote>Kazan-Oud Platinum Amulet</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nexus, or</quote> with <quote>Nexus or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote>side and</quote> with <quote>side, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>screams and sounds</quote> with <quote>screams, and sounds</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>difficult that</quote> with <quote>difficult than</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sticky rope-like</quote> with <quote>Sticky, rope-like</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>Then gurgling</quote> with <quote>Then, gurgling</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>Then gurgling</quote> with <quote>Then, gurgling</quote>. Replaced <quote>The warrior beings</quote> with <quote>The warrior begins</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>mouth and</quote> with <quote>mouth, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Replaced <quote>wall but</quote> with <quote>wall, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>ceiling and</quote> with <quote>ceiling, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>has, and</quote> with <quote>has and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect102">102</a>) Replaced <quote>accord and</quote> with <quote>accord, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>can but</quote> with <quote>can, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Replaced <quote>cracks but</quote> with <quote>cracks, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect312">312</a>) Replaced <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia> and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Deleted the instruction to choose an unused random number.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect313">313</a>) Removed the instruction to choose an unused random number.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>rapidly and</quote> with <quote>rapidly, and</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>climb and</quote> with <quote>climb, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect316">316</a>) Replaced <quote>simultaneously and</quote> with <quote>simultaneously, and</quote>.</p>
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