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       <p>(<a idref="title">Title Page</a>) Replaced <quote>jungle swamps</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamps</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the words from the language of Dessi (i.e. <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">koura-tas-kai</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Ikar</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn</foreign>). Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>purpose and</quote> with <quote>purpose, and</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Deleted <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Deleted <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote> and corrected the surrounding punctuation. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote> and corrected the surrounding punctuation. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>with combat</quote> with <quote>without combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>as listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>in the list below</quote>. Replaced <quote>page 9</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Removed <quote>that appears on your Action Chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Magnakai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>sets you</quote> with <quote>sets, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>tide and, during</quote> with <quote>tide, and during</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>return but</quote> with <quote>return, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>eastwards</quote> with <quote>northwards</quote> since Syada is roughly northwest of Tharro. Replaced <quote>Syada and</quote> with <quote>Syada, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>men, women and children</quote> with <quote>men, women, and children</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>shouting</quote> with <quote>shouting:</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>eastwards</quote> with <quote>northwards</quote> since Syada is roughly northwest of Tharro. Replaced <quote>Syada and</quote> with <quote>Syada, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>men, women and children</quote> with <quote>men, women, and children</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>shouting</quote> with <quote>shouting:</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrating and, what</quote> with <quote>vibrating, and what</quote>. Replaced <quote>are vibrating</quote> with <quote>is vibrating</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>inn and slowly</quote> with <quote>inn, and slowly</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and</quote> with <quote>legs, and</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>