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    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
  </creator>
  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>the last Kai Master of Sommerlund<ch.emdash/>sworn avenger of your forefathers, the Kai Lords. To achieve your vow you must find the Lorestone of Ohrido, known to be hidden in the jungle-swamps of the Danarg. Guided by Lord Paido, warrior-magician of Dessi, you set off across the war-torn lands of Talestria on your vital secret mission. But your quest is soon endangered when your identity is discovered by agents of your mortal enemies<ch.emdash/>the Darklords of Helgedad. Can you survive the assassins of Gnaag, the armies of Warlord Zegron, and the Chaos-creatures of Agarash the Damned? Will you fall foul of their evil schemes, or will you defeat them and fulfil your destiny?</p>
  </description>
          </instance>
         </illustration>
         <p>The fact that you are skilled with three weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional weapon to your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a>.</p>
-        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Weaponmastery: +3 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and tick your chosen weapons on the <a idref="action">Weapons List</a>. You cannot carry more than two Weapons.</p>
+        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Weaponmastery: <ch.plus/>3 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>, and tick your chosen weapons on the <a idref="action">Weapons List</a>. You cannot carry more than two Weapons.</p>
        </data>
       </section>
 
        <meta><title>Curing</title></meta>
        <data>
         <p>The possessor of this skill can restore 1 lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point to his total for every numbered section of the book through which he passes, provided he is not involved in combat. (This can only be done after his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> has fallen below its original level.) This Magnakai Discipline also enables a Kai Master to cure disease, blindness, and any combat wounds sustained by others, as well as himself. Using the knowledge that mastery of this skill provides will also allow a Kai Master to identify the properties of any herbs, roots, and potions that may be encountered during the adventure.</p>
-        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Curing: +1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point for each section without combat</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
+        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Curing: <ch.plus/>1 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point for each section without combat</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
        </data>
       </section>
 
        <data>
         <p>This psychic skill enables a Kai Master to attack an enemy using the force of his mind. It can be used as well as normal combat weapons and adds 4 extra points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>.</p>
         <p>It is a powerful Discipline, but it is also a costly one. For every round of combat in which you use Psi-surge, you must deduct 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. A weaker form of Psi-surge called <cite>Mindblast</cite> can be used against an enemy without losing any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points, but it will add only 2 extra points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. (Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.) Psi-surge cannot be used if your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> falls to 6 points or below, and not all of the creatures encountered on your adventure will be affected by it; you will be told if a creature is immune.</p>
-        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Psi-surge: +4 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points but <ch.minus/>2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points per round</quote> and <quote>Mindblast: +2 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
+        <p>If you choose this skill, write <quote>Psi-surge: <ch.plus/>4 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points but <ch.minus/>2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points per round</quote> and <quote>Mindblast: <ch.plus/>2 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> points</quote> on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
        </data>
       </section>
 
          <dt>Food</dt>
           <dd><p>You will need to eat regularly during your adventure. If you do not have any food when you are instructed to eat a Meal, you will lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If you have chosen the Magnakai Discipline of Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</p></dd>
          <dt>Potion of Laumspur</dt>
-          <dd><p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potion during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p></dd>
+          <dd><p>This is a healing potion that can restore 4 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to your total when swallowed after combat. It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat. There is enough for one dose only. If you discover any other potion during the adventure, you will be informed of its effect. All potions are Backpack Items.</p></dd>
         </dl>
        </data>
       </section>
        <data>
         <dl>
          <dt>Circle of Fire</dt>
-          <dd>+1 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> +2 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
+          <dd><ch.plus/>1 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> <ch.plus/>2 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
          <dt>Circle of Light</dt>
-          <dd>0 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
+          <dd>0 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> <ch.plus/>3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
          <dt>Circle of Solaris</dt>
-          <dd>+1 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
+          <dd><ch.plus/>1 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> <ch.plus/>3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
          <dt>Circle of the Spirit</dt>
-          <dd>+3 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> +3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
+          <dd><ch.plus/>3 <typ class="attribute">CS</typ> <ch.plus/>3 <typ class="attribute">EP</typ></dd>
         </dl>
         <p>All bonus points that you acquire by completing a Lore-circle are additions to your basic <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> scores.</p>
        </data>
      <data>
       <p>Shafts of sunlight break through the slate-grey cloud, and the rain eases off and finally stops. You ride across the rolling valley floor towards the River Phoen until the track stops at a ramshackle house perched precariously on the river bank. An old wooden jetty juts out from the side of the house, its platform almost submerged in the rain-swollen river. A notice board standing in front of the house reads:</p>
       <signpost>
-       <p>FERRY HOUSE LANDING</p>
+       <p>Ferry House Landing</p>
        <p>
         <line>Passenger barges to Tharro<ch.emdash/>embark from this jetty.</line>
         <line>Barges to Phoena<ch.emdash/>embark from opposite bank.</line>
        </p>
-       <p>NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT</p>
+       <p><em>No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement.</em></p>
       </signpost>
       <choice idref="sect299">If you wish to wait here for a barge to Tharro, <link-text>turn to 299</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect130">If you wish to investigate the Ferry House, <link-text>turn to 130</link-text>.</choice>
 
      <footnotes>
       <footnote id="sect60-1-foot" idref="sect60-1">
-       <p>You should also turn to this number if you possess the Dagger of Vashna, the Jewelled Mace, or the Magic Spear. (See <bookref series="lw" book="14tcok"><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="14tcok" section="sect12">Section 12</bookref>.)</p>
+       <p>You cannot use the Dagger of Vashna, the Jewelled Mace, or the Magic Spear in lieu of the Sommerswerd to fight this Helghast because those weapons are not capable of protecting you from its impending attacks (cf. Sections <a idref="sect47">47</a> and <a idref="sect308">308</a>).</p>
       </footnote>
      </footnotes>
 
         <line>Renegade Shaman of Mogaruith.</line>
         <line>Leader of the forbidden sect of Dazudskul.</line>
        </p>
-       <p>It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of TEN THOUSAND LUNE is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.</p>
+       <p>It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of <em>Ten Thousand Lune</em> is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.</p>
        <p class="right">
         <line>By order of Queen Evaine of Talestria</line>
-        <line>MS 5060</line>
+        <line>MS<ch.nbsp/>5060</line>
       </p>
       </blockquote>
       <p><quote>This could be our chance to make a fortune,</quote> whispers Trost. <quote>Help me take him and we<ch.apos/>ll split the reward. Agreed?</quote></p>
      <meta><title>204</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
+      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>Temple of the Sword</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
       <p>Beyond the temple, a street ascends to a stone watchtower. It is built on the peak of a hill and dominates the town.</p>
       <choice idref="sect22">If you have a Map of Tharro, you may consult it before choosing any of the following options: <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect327">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 327</link-text>.</choice>
      <meta><title>230</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You fight to erect a mindshield to counter the searing pain of this psychic attack, but your defence is too weak to withstand the onslaught. You scream in agony as the assault cuts deep into the fabric of your mind: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+      <p>You fight to erect a Mindshield to counter the searing pain of this psychic attack, but your defence is too weak to withstand the onslaught. You scream in agony as the assault cuts deep into the fabric of your mind: lose 8 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <choice idref="sect60">If you are still alive, <link-text>turn to 60</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
     <section class="numbered" id="sect308">
      <meta><title>308</title></meta>
 
-     <footnotes>
-      <footnote id="sect308-1-foot" idref="sect308-1">
-       <p>You should not double any <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses inflicted upon the Helghast if you are wielding the Dagger of Vashna, the Jewelled Mace, or the Magic Spear.</p>
-      </footnote>
-     </footnotes>
-
      <data>
       <p>A cold blue fire burns at the tip of the Helghast<ch.apos/>s staff, but the chill of its icy flame is thawed by the golden fire of the sun-sword. Sword and staff collide with a deafening boom and a crackling web of energy surrounds you both, scorching the refectory walls with its blistering intensity.</p>
       <combat><enemy>Gnaag Helghast</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">38</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">48</enemy-attribute></combat>
-      <p>This creature is immune to Mindblast (but not Psi-surge). Unless you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> by 2 points at the beginning of every round you fight this creature. If you have completed the Lore-circle of the Spirit you may increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 2 points for the duration of the fight. Remember to double all <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses sustained by the enemy due to the power of the Sommerswerd.<footref id="sect308-1" idref="sect308-1-foot"/></p>
+      <p>This creature is immune to Mindblast (but not Psi-surge). Unless you possess the Magnakai Discipline of Psi-screen you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> by 2 points at the beginning of every round you fight this creature. If you have completed the Lore-circle of the Spirit you may increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 2 points for the duration of the fight. Remember to double all <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> point losses sustained by the enemy due to the power of the Sommerswerd.</p>
       <choice idref="sect195">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 195</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
    <meta><title>The Danarg Swamp</title></meta>
 
    <data>
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     <illustration>
      <meta>
       <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
      <meta>
       <creator>JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake</creator>
      </meta>
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       <p>(<a idref="title">Title Page</a>) Replaced <quote>jungle swamps</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamps</quote>. Replaced <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the words from the language of Dessi (i.e. <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">koura-tas-kai</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Ikar</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn</foreign>). Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>purpose and</quote> with <quote>purpose, and</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Deleted <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Deleted <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote> and corrected the surrounding punctuation. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote> and corrected the surrounding punctuation. Replaced <quote>(eg</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>with combat</quote> with <quote>without combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>as listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>in the list below</quote>. Replaced <quote>page 9</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Removed <quote>that appears on your Action Chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>swamp-jungle</quote> with <quote>jungle-swamp</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>additional Items</quote> with <quote>additional items</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Magnakai Training</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect8">8</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>ordeal and</quote> with <quote>ordeal, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hidden but</quote> with <quote>hidden, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>identities and</quote> with <quote>identities, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>thought but</quote> with <quote>thought, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>skill you</quote> with <quote>skill, you</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>258</quote> with <quote>158</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in six rounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts longer than five rounds, <!--link-text-->turn to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> with <quote>If the combat lasts seven rounds or longer, do not continue with the combat but <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>258</quote> with <quote>158</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>If you win the combat in four rounds</quote> with <quote>If you win the combat in six rounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>If combat lasts longer than five rounds, <!--link-text-->turn to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> with <quote>If the combat lasts seven rounds or longer, do not continue with the combat but <!--link-text-->turn immediately to 158<!--/link-text-->.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>watch-tower, and</quote> with <quote>watchtower and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>hand and</quote> with <quote>hand, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Unfortunately with</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, with</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>answer and, at</quote> with <quote>answer, and at</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect21">21</a>) Replaced <quote>sets you</quote> with <quote>sets, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>tide and, during</quote> with <quote>tide, and during</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect22">22</a>) Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>return but</quote> with <quote>return, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>eastwards</quote> with <quote>northwards</quote> since Syada is roughly northwest of Tharro. Replaced <quote>Syada and</quote> with <quote>Syada, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>men, women and children</quote> with <quote>men, women, and children</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>shouting</quote> with <quote>shouting:</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect24">24</a>) Replaced <quote>eastwards</quote> with <quote>northwards</quote> since Syada is roughly northwest of Tharro. Replaced <quote>Syada and</quote> with <quote>Syada, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>men, women and children</quote> with <quote>men, women, and children</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>shouting</quote> with <quote>shouting:</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>vibrating and, what</quote> with <quote>vibrating, and what</quote>. Replaced <quote>are vibrating</quote> with <quote>is vibrating</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>inn and slowly</quote> with <quote>inn, and slowly</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>legs and</quote> with <quote>legs, and</quote>. Moved the Divination choice into the first position.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Switched the sections to which the choices lead to make them work correctly with Special Item and Discipline bonuses. Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>4 or lower</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>9</quote> with <quote>5 or higher</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd.</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd.)</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect28">28</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Switched the sections to which the choices lead to make them work correctly with Special Item and Discipline bonuses. Replaced <quote>0<ch.endash/>4</quote> with <quote>4 or lower</quote>. Replaced <quote>5<ch.endash/>9</quote> with <quote>5 or higher</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd.</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd.)</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>Oxydine, or Oede</quote> with <quote>Oxydine or of Oede</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>gallop and</quote> with <quote>gallop, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>and, not</quote> with <quote>and not</quote>. Replaced <quote>gate, do</quote> with <quote>gate do</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>feet first</quote> with <quote>feet-first</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>glueing</quote> with <quote>gluing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>hides and</quote> with <quote>hides, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow, and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect39">39</a>) Switched the order of the choices for clarity. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>me and</quote> with <quote>me, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>lord of the sun-realm</quote> with <quote>Lord of the Sun-realm</quote>. Replaced <quote>skarn</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn,</foreign></quote>. Added <quote>If you are infected with the korovax bacillus, you may use the Tincture of Oxydine to cure yourself.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Replaced <quote>me and</quote> with <quote>me, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>lord of the sun-realm</quote> with <quote>Lord of the Sun-realm</quote>. Replaced <quote>skarn</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn,</foreign></quote>. Added <quote>If you are infected with the korovax bacillus, you may use the Tincture of Oxydine to cure yourself.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect44">44</a>) Replaced <quote>Unfortunately she</quote> with <quote>Unfortunately, she</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect46">46</a>) Replaced <quote>dead but</quote> with <quote>dead, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect47">47</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect48">48</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect49">49</a>) Replaced <quote>or you</quote> with <quote>or if you</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect50">50</a>) Replaced <quote>others many</quote> with <quote>others, many</quote>. Replaced <quote>apart and, as</quote> with <quote>apart, and as</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect51">51</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect53">53</a>) Replaced <quote>ago this</quote> with <quote>ago, this</quote>. Replaced <quote>luxurious but</quote> with <quote>luxurious, but</quote> and  <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>rope and</quote> with <quote>rope, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect54">54</a>) Replaced <quote>desperation one</quote> with <quote>desperation, one</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline</quote> with <quote>Disciplines</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud and</quote> with <quote>cloud, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>river-bank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>noticeboard</quote> with <quote>notice board</quote>. Replaced <quote>CARAVANS OR</quote> with <quote>CARAVANS, OR</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect55">55</a>) Replaced <quote>cloud and</quote> with <quote>cloud, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>river-bank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>. Replaced <quote>noticeboard</quote> with <quote>notice board</quote>. Replaced <quote>FERRY HOUSE LANDING</quote> with <quote>Ferry House Landing</quote>. Replaced <quote>NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT</quote> with <quote><em>No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement.</em></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect56">56</a>) Replaced <quote>korlinium and</quote> with <quote>korlinium, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>signals it</quote> with <quote>signals, it</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect57">57</a>) Replaced <quote>confusion you</quote> with <quote>confusion, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>ribcage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect58">58</a>) Replaced <quote>light you</quote> with <quote>light, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>Divination, or</quote> with <quote>Divination or</quote>. Moved the Divination/Tutelary choice into the first position.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>) Replaced <quote>market place</quote> with <quote>marketplace</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lodge but</quote> with <quote>Lodge, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Replaced <quote>sword and</quote> with <quote>sword, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>barn and</quote> with <quote>barn, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>weapons or</quote> with <quote>Weapons, or</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Added <quote> The monks of Talestria are infamous for their gluttony. Tales of their thirty-course meals and week-long banquets are well known throughout Magnamund. However, despite their voluminous robes, you cannot help but notice how emaciated these monks appear to be.</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Added <quote> The monks of Talestria are infamous for their gluttony. Tales of their thirty-course meals and week-long banquets are well known throughout Magnamund. However, despite their voluminous robes, you cannot help but notice how emaciated these monks appear to be.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect77">77</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect78">78</a>) Replaced <quote>gaj</quote> with <quote>Gaj</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect79">79</a>) Replaced <quote>out-numbered</quote> with <quote>outnumbered</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect83">83</a>) Replaced <quote>hand but</quote> with <quote>hand, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>returns and</quote> with <quote>returns, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>pain, as</quote> with <quote>pain as</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-power</quote> with <quote>psi-power</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>face but</quote> with <quote>face, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Added <quote>(in this instance, 0 = 10)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>bow but</quote> with <quote>Bow, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>silver bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Silver Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>crash and</quote> with <quote>crash, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle cry</quote> with <quote>battle-cry:</quote>. Replaced <quote>bronze-helmeted</quote> with <quote>bronze-helmed</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Horselord</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Horselord</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect89">89</a>) Replaced <quote>Ghorkas</quote> with <quote>ghorkas</quote>. Replaced <quote>a-piece</quote> with <quote>apiece</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>choose.</quote> with <quote>choose?</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect153">153</a>) Replaced <quote>around your</quote> with <quote>around, your</quote>. Replaced <quote>tap but, instead</quote> with <quote>tap, but instead</quote>. Replaced <quote>click and</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia>, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect154">154</a>) Replaced <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>herb the</quote> with <quote>herb, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Oxydene</quote> with <quote>Oxydine</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess either the Tincture or the herb, you may use it immediately to cure the korovax infection.)</quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect156">156</a>) Replaced <quote>herb the</quote> with <quote>herb, the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Oxydene</quote> with <quote>Oxydine</quote>. Added <quote>(If you possess either the Tincture or the herb, you may use it immediately to cure the korovax infection.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect157">157</a>) Replaced <quote>deadly and</quote> with <quote>deadly, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>We made extensive changes to the choices presented at the end of the section. The original reads as follows.</p>
       <blockquote>
       <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>explodes and</quote> with <quote>explodes, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect165">165</a>) Replaced <quote>aside but</quote> with <quote>aside, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>him but</quote> with <quote>him, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>inside and</quote> with <quote>inside, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Bor-musket</quote> with <quote>Bor musket</quote>. Replaced <quote>trigger and</quote> with <quote>trigger, and</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Dazudskul</quote> with <quote>Dazudskul.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortune whispers</quote> with <quote>fortune,<ch.rsquot/> whispers</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>) Replaced <quote>Dazudskul</quote> with <quote>Dazudskul.</quote>. Replaced <quote>fortune whispers</quote> with <quote>fortune,<ch.rsquot/> whispers</quote>. Replaced <quote>TEN THOUSAND LUNE</quote> with <quote><em>Ten Thousand Lune</em></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect168">168</a>) Replaced <quote>counter and</quote> with <quote>counter, and</quote>. Put dashes between each item on the list and its price. Replaced <quote>arrows and</quote> with <quote>arrows, and</quote>. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>bowstrings and</quote> with <quote>bowstrings, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>finger and wrist</quote> with <quote>wrist and finger</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote>duck and</quote> with <quote>duck, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>clawed skeletal</quote> with <quote>clawed, skeletal</quote>. Added <quote>If you win the combat against the Vordak you are able to retrieve the Weapon and keep it noted on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</quote> as clarified by the <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987</cite>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>him and</quote> with <quote>him, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect178">178</a>) Replaced <quote>chest you</quote> with <quote>chest, you</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>book but</quote> with <quote>book, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect182">182</a>) Replaced <quote>pain it</quote> with <quote>pain, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>you and</quote> with <quote>you, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>aim and</quote> with <quote>aim, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-screen you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lore-Circle of the Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Lore-circle of the Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect183">183</a>) Replaced <quote>Psi-screen you</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lore-Circle of the Spirit you</quote> with <quote>Lore-circle of the Spirit, you</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect184">184</a>) Replaced <quote>true but</quote> with <quote>true, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>wound but</quote> with <quote>wound, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>clothing and</quote> with <quote>clothing, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>harrass</quote> with <quote>harass</quote>. Replaced <quote>chase, they</quote> with <quote>chase; they</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>. Replaced <quote>eyes you</quote> with <quote>eyes, you</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>bang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>bang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>aside and</quote> with <quote>aside, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>glowing silvery</quote> with <quote>glowing, silvery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tan-ash-oka, Nadoknar Gnaag!</quote> with <quote><foreign xml:lang="x-giak">Tan-ash-okja Nadoknar Gnaag!</foreign></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>remains and</quote> with <quote>remains, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>robes presumably</quote> with <quote>robes, presumably</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced <quote>options;</quote> with <quote>options:</quote>. Replaced <quote>building. Constructed</quote> with <quote>building constructed</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect204">204</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>watch-tower</quote> with <quote>watchtower</quote>. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced <quote>options;</quote> with <quote>options:</quote>. Replaced <quote>building. Constructed</quote> with <quote>building constructed</quote>. Replaced <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> with <quote>Temple of the Sword</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect206">206</a>) Replaced <quote>bow and</quote> with <quote>Bow and</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow or do</quote> with <quote>Bow, or if you do</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect208">208</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect209">209</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect220">220</a>) Replaced <quote>symmetry confront</quote> with <quote>symmetry, confront</quote>. Replaced <quote>stratas</quote> with <quote>strata</quote>. Replaced <quote>sapphire and</quote> with <quote>sapphire, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>subsides but</quote> with <quote>subsides, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect229">229</a>) Replaced <quote>north-western</quote> with <quote>northwestern</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect230">230</a>) Replaced <quote>mindshield</quote> with <quote>Mindshield</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect232">232</a>) Replaced <quote>dwarf. They<ch.apos/>re</quote> with <quote>dwarf. <ch.lsquot/>They<ch.apos/>re</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect233">233</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect234">234</a>) Replaced <quote>dexterity and</quote> with <quote>dexterity, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Changed the first choice to read in part <quote>If you have a bow and <em>two</em> Arrows, and wish to use them,<ch.ellips/></quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect306">306</a>) Replaced <quote>chair and</quote> with <quote>chair, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>staff but</quote> with <quote>staff, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Replaced <quote>staff but</quote> with <quote>staff, but</quote>. Replaced <quote>Psi-shield</quote> with <quote>Psi-screen</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ></quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ></quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>side steps</quote> with <quote>sidesteps</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Replaced <quote>revolting jelly-like</quote> with <quote>revolting, jelly-like</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>the Laumspur</quote> with <quote>the potion</quote>. Replaced <quote>wall and tip</quote> with <quote>wall, and tip</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>spoke and</quote> with <quote>spoke, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magnamund and</quote> with <quote>Magnamund, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>book 9</quote> with <quote>Book 9</quote>.</p>
 
+      <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Dwyin<ch.apos/>s Track</quote> with <quote>Dwyvin<ch.apos/>s Track</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
      </data>
     </section>
     <section class="backmatter" id="errstat">
      <meta><title>Note on Adjusted Combat Statistics</title></meta>
       <data>
-       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Mongoose Publishing edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
+       <p>Some enemies in this book have had their statistics altered in accordance with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition to balance the game. Here is a table to show which enemies have been altered.</p>
         <table>
          <tr>
           <th colspan="4" scope="colgroup">Revised combat statistics</th>
           <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Section</th>
           <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Enemy</th>
           <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Original</th>
-          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Mongoose</th>
+          <th colspan="1" scope="colgroup">Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition</th>
          </tr>
          <tr>
           <td><a idref="sect183">183</a></td>