Changes made to regularise Item names (hat tip: David Kubecka) and to fix problems...

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@@ -3155,7 +3155,7 @@
      <meta><title>204</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building  constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
+      <p>You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words <quote>TEMPLE OF THE SWORD</quote> engraved along the blade.</p>
       <p>Beyond the temple, a street ascends to a stone watchtower. It is built on the peak of a hill and dominates the town.</p>
       <choice idref="sect22">If you have a Map of Tharro, you may consult it before choosing any of the following options: <link-text>turn to 22</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect327">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, <link-text>turn to 327</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5582,7 +5582,7 @@
        <p>Or you can hide among the pews by turning to 198.</p>
        <p>Or you can stand in the central aisle and await your pursuers by turning to 305.</p>
       </blockquote>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>dead writhing</quote> with <quote>dead, writhing</quote>. Replaced <quote>pulpit<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pulpit, turn</quote>. Replaced <quote>pews<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pews, turn</quote>. Replaced <quote>pursuers<ch.emdash/>turn</quote> with <quote>pursuers, turn</quote>. Added <quote><ch.emdash/></quote> to the beginning of the last three choices.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect160">160</a>) Replaced <quote>dead writhing</quote> with <quote>dead, writhing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect161">161</a>) Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect162">162</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar Horselord</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Horselord</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced <quote>explodes and</quote> with <quote>explodes, and</quote>.</p>