Changes made to regularise Item names (hat tip: David Kubecka) and to fix problems...

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 09tcof.xml

diff --git a/en/xml/09tcof.xml b/en/xml/09tcof.xml
index 50e5e94..bbf30a8 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/09tcof.xml
+++ b/en/xml/09tcof.xml
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-        <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, Neil McGrory, Dewi Morgan, Sam Seaver, Brian Thompson, Denis Vald, Robert Wellock</dd>
+        <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Neil McGrory, Dewi Morgan, Sam Seaver, Brian Thompson, Denis Vald, Robert Wellock</dd>
       </dl>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -4289,7 +4289,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>The icy water clogs your nose and throat and numbs you to the bone. Desperately you fight to control the panic gnawing at your insides as your air-starved lungs fill your chest with an agonizing pain.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect25">If you have a Vial of Blue Pills, <link-text>turn to 25</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect25">If you possess some Sabito, <link-text>turn to 25</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect329">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -5776,6 +5776,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>cream-coloured</quote> with <quote>cream coloured</quote>. Replaced <quote>instantly but</quote> with <quote>instantly, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>you he</quote> with <quote>you, he</quote>. Replaced <quote>emporiums</quote> with <quote>emporia</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect289">289</a>) Replaced <quote>have a Vial of Blue Pills</quote> with <quote>possess some Sabito</quote> since you are told to record the pills as Sabito in <a idref="sect29">Section 29</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect290">290</a>) Replaced <quote>arrest!</quote> with <quote>arrest,</quote>. Replaced <quote>spying.</quote> with <quote>spying!</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect291">291</a>) Replaced <quote>Curing, and have</quote> with <quote>Curing and have</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect293">293</a>) Replaced <quote>chase but</quote> with <quote>chase, but</quote>. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>Vanta</quote> with <quote>Varta</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>