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       <p>(<a idref="tssf">The Story So Far<ch.ellips/></a>) Replaced <quote>freelands of Talestria</quote> with <quote>Freelands of Talestria</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the words from the language of Dessi (i.e. <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">koura-tas-kai</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Ikar</foreign>, <foreign xml:lang="x-dessi">Skarn</foreign>). Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>armies, others</quote> with <quote>armies; others</quote>. Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>purpose and</quote> with <quote>purpose, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>would each come</quote> with <quote>would both come</quote>. Replaced <quote>chances of your completing your</quote> with <quote>chances of you completing your</quote>. Replaced <quote>Darklord armies</quote> with <quote>Darkland armies</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>you you</quote> with <quote>you</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Deleted <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>fall to zero</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. (ie, if</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (i.e. if</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced <quote>you you</quote> with <quote>you</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie,</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Removed <quote>that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied</quote>. Removed <quote>on the last page of this book</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Placed <quote>or below</quote> after <quote>fall to zero</quote>. Replaced <quote>Chart (you</quote> with <quote>Chart. (You</quote>. Replaced <quote>Items).</quote> with <quote>Items.)</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. (ie, if</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (i.e. if</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Deleted <quote>that appears on page 9</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Removed <quote>that appears on page 9</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Deleted <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>eg</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>Xulun mountains</quote> with <quote>Xulun Mountains</quote>. Replaced <quote>giaks</quote> with <quote>Giaks</quote>. Replaced <quote>cavalry and</quote> with <quote>cavalry, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>noon but</quote> with <quote>noon, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>blow but</quote> with <quote>blow, but</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Deleted <quote>Spyglass</quote> from the list of items in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Capitalised all items on the list. Removed <quote>Spyglass</quote> from the list of items in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Added <quote>(Erase the Rope from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.)</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>