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  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>the last Kai Master of Sommerlund. Your search for the mystical Lorestones of your ancestors leads to the grim city-fortress of Torgar, a stronghold of the Darklords.</p>
   <p>In <strong><cite>The Dungeons of Torgar</cite></strong>, your mission is to recapture the last remaining Lorestones from the clutches of your enemy<ch.emdash/>the evil Darklord Gnaag. But be warned! Every turn of the page presents a new and deadly challenge as you battle through the depths of a fantastic and terrifying fortress in search of your destiny<ch.ellips/>or your doom!</p>
    <meta><title>Ghatan and Surrounding Territories</title></meta>
 
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       <creator>Brian Williams</creator>
 
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Magnakai Disciplines</a>) Added <quote>The fact that you are skilled with three Weapons does not mean that you begin the adventure carrying any of them. However, you will have opportunities to acquire Weapons during your adventure. For every <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> book that you complete in the Magnakai series, you may add an additional Weapon to your list.</quote> to the description of Weaponmastery. This text is taken directly from the Weaponmastery section found in <bookref series="lw" book="06tkot"><cite>The Kingdoms of Terror</cite></bookref>. Added <quote>(Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.)</quote> to the description of Psi-surge. Replaced <quote>knowledge mastery</quote> with <quote>knowledge that mastery</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>weapons list</quote> with <quote><a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>blindness and</quote> with <quote>blindness, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>roots and</quote> with <quote>roots, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf Magnakai</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Magnakai</cite></quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>currency of Anari</quote> with <quote>currency of Eru</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Gold Crown</quote> with <quote>one Gold Crown</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Elder Magi give you</quote> with <quote>the Senate of Tahou give you</quote> to agree with <a idref="sect1">Section 1</a>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>Potion of Alether (Backpack Items) This potion of strength will increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by <ch.plus/>2 points when swallowed immediately prior to a combat. It lasts for the duration of one combat only. There is enough for one dose.</quote> to the list of items you may choose from in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced <quote>currency of Anari</quote> with <quote>currency of Eru</quote>. Replaced <quote>1 Gold Crown</quote> with <quote>one Gold Crown</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced all three occurrences of <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>Weaponmastery with a bow</quote> with <quote>Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced <quote>two weapons</quote> with <quote>two Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>your list</quote> with <quote>your <a idref="action">Weaponmastery Checklist</a></quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you choose from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Elder Magi give you</quote> with <quote>the Senate of Tahou give you</quote> to agree with <a idref="sect1">Section 1</a>. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>Potion of Alether (Backpack Items) This potion of strength will increase your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by <ch.plus/>2 points when swallowed immediately prior to a combat. It lasts for the duration of one combat only. There is enough for one dose.</quote> to the list of items you may choose from in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       
       <p>(<a idref="kaiwisdm">Magnakai Wisdom</a>) Replaced <quote>The restoration of the Kai and the future of your homeland depends</quote> with <quote>The restoration of the Kai and the future of your homeland depend</quote>.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>mid-summer<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>midsummer<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-publicized</quote> with <quote>much publicized</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Deleted <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Capitalised both occurrences of <quote>prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>tavern and</quote> with <quote>tavern, and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>mid-summer<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>midsummer<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>much-publicized</quote> with <quote>much publicized</quote>. Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Removed <quote>at the front of the book</quote>. Capitalised both occurrences of <quote>prince</quote>. Replaced <quote>tavern and</quote> with <quote>tavern, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tutelary or more</quote> with <quote>Tutelary or higher</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Magnakai rank</quote> with <quote>Kai rank</quote> for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced <quote>skills, or</quote> with <quote>skills or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Drakkar fortress</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim fortress</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>. Replaced <quote>briefly, then</quote> with <quote>briefly, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>shadow gate</quote> with <quote>Shadow Gate</quote>. Replaced <quote>book 11</quote> with <quote>Book 11</quote>.</p>
 
+      <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Added the label <quote>BLACKSHROUD</quote> to the unnamed city marked on the map.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
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