Added James Murray's text replacement for the map

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 12tmod.xml

diff --git a/en/xml/12tmod.xml b/en/xml/12tmod.xml
index 8d804c9..252a9d0 100644 (file)
--- a/en/xml/12tmod.xml
+++ b/en/xml/12tmod.xml
@@ -34,15 +34,12 @@
    <p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
   </description>
   <rights class="copyrights">
-   <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1988 Joe Dever.</line>
-   <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1988 Brian Williams.</line>
+   <line>Text <ch.copy/> 1988 Joe Dever.</line>
+   <line>Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1988 Brian Williams.</line>
   </rights>
   <rights class="license-notification">
-   <p>
-    <line>Text copyright <ch.copy/> 1988 Joe Dever.</line>
-    <line>Illustrations copyright <ch.copy/> 1988 Brian Williams.</line>
-    <line>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</line>
-   </p>
+   <p>Text <ch.copy/> 1988 Joe Dever. Illustrations <ch.copy/> 1988 Brian Williams.</p>
+   <p>Distribution of this Internet Edition is restricted under the terms of the <a idref="license">Project Aon License</a>.</p>
   </rights>
  </meta>
 
@@ -1279,7 +1276,7 @@
        <p>Drawing on your advanced Magnakai skills, you cause your facial characteristics to become harder and more brutal in appearance.</p>
        <p><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><quote>Loga ok okak sheg!</quote></foreign> (Free me you dog!) you growl in Giak, mimicking the Drakkarim accent to perfection. In the confines of the corridor, your assailant is easily deceived into thinking that he has assaulted one of his fellow marines by mistake. The moment he releases his grip, you spin around and attack with your bare but deadly hands.</p>
        <combat>
-        <enemy>Drakkar <em><em>(surprise attack)</em></em></enemy>
+        <enemy>Drakkar <em>(surprise attack)</em></enemy>
         <enemy-attribute class="combatskill">12</enemy-attribute>
         <enemy-attribute class="endurance">26</enemy-attribute>
        </combat>