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-       <p>Your mastery of mental power enables you to shield your mind from the psychic probe emanating from the box-like device that the guard is using to check your identity. Because of your effective mindshield, he is unable to detect any hostile psychic signals. Satisfied that it is safe to allow you to pass, he orders his fellow guard to open the steel door and let you into the subterranean levels of the Imperial Sector.</p>
+       <p>Your mastery of mental power enables you to shield your mind from the psychic probe emanating from the box-like device that the guard is using to check your identity. Because of your effective Mindshield, he is unable to detect any hostile psychic signals. Satisfied that it is safe to allow you to pass, he orders his fellow guard to open the steel door and let you into the subterranean levels of the Imperial Sector.</p>
        <p>Beyond the door is a vast hall filled with row upon row of fearsome weapons. It is the Imperial Armoury of Helgedad.</p>
        <choice idref="sect40">If you possess a Black Cube, <link-text>turn to 40</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect320">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 320</link-text>.</choice>
 
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        <p>Your curiosity is aroused by the pouch of herbs you have discovered in the belt pouch of the dead Drakkarim officer.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect145">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Curing or have reached the Kai rank of Principalin or higher, <link-text>turn to 145</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect201">If you do not possess this skill or have yet to attain this level of Magnakai training, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect145">If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Curing <em>or</em> have reached the Kai rank of Principalin or higher, <link-text>turn to 145</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect201">If you do not possess this skill <em>and</em> have yet to attain this level of Magnakai training, <link-text>turn to 201</link-text>.</choice>
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       <creator>JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake</creator>
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        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect138">138</a>) Replaced <quote>youself</quote> with <quote>yourself</quote>. Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>face, then</quote> with <quote>face, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>service, and</quote> with <quote>service and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect140">140</a>) Replaced <quote>leave, then</quote> with <quote>leave, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect141">141</a>) Replaced <quote>mindshield</quote> with <quote>Mindshield</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect142">142</a>) Replaced <quote>gold braided</quote> with <quote>gold-braided</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect143">143</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect144">144</a>) Replaced <quote>Mentora or more</quote> with <quote>Mentora or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>Animal Control, and</quote> with <quote>Animal Control and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>wavers, then</quote> with <quote>wavers; then</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>withdraw, then</quote> with <quote>withdraw, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>wall, then</quote> with <quote>wall, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>bow skill</quote> with <quote>bow-skill</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect187">187</a>) Added <quote>The Zejar-dulaga occupies the same space in your Quiver as a normal Arrow. If you have 6 Arrows, you may discard one in favour of the Zejar-dulaga.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Curing, or</quote> with <quote>Curing or</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect188">188</a>) Replaced <quote>Principalin or more</quote> with <quote>Principalin or higher</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar officer</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim officer</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Curing, or</quote> with <quote>Curing <em>or</em></quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill <em>and</em></quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect189">189</a>) Replaced <quote>elite</quote> with <quote><ch.eacute/>lite</quote>. Replaced <quote>imposter</quote> with <quote>impostor</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar warrior</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim warrior</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect190">190</a>) Replaced <quote>Sommerswerd, and</quote> with <quote>Sommerswerd and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Item, or</quote> with <quote>Item or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect191">191</a>) Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai training</quote> with <quote>Magnakai training</quote>.</p>