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        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-        <dd>Boris Basic, Dan Carter, David Davis, Benjamin Krefetz, Ben Libert, Neil McGrory, Chris Neilson, Stelio Passaris, Timothy Pederick, Martin Ryland, Peter Smyth, Jason Thomas, Christopher Turner, Jaime Wawra, Arthur Yin</dd>
+        <dd>Boris Basic, Dan Carter, David Davis, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Ben Libert, Neil McGrory, Chris Neilson, Stelio Passaris, Timothy Pederick, Martin Ryland, Peter Smyth, Jason Thomas, Christopher Turner, Jaime Wawra, Arthur Yin</dd>
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     </section>
       <p>After a while you notice long streamers of greasy yellow moss hanging from cracks in the tunnel roof. Between them are spread festering fungi of varying hues, all cankerous and vile to the eye. You are passing beneath these growths when suddenly, as if triggered by a silent command, they burst open and shower you with great clouds of sticky, mote-like spores.</p>
       <p>At once your body senses that the spores are highly poisonous and, as a subconscious reflex, your Magnakai Curing skills activate and counter the deadly toxins that have found their way into your lungs. Your chest is wracked with pain but you sustain no serious injury: lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
       <p>The sticky, foul-smelling spore cloud is so thick that you have difficulty moving forwards. It feels as if you are wading through a tunnel of mud. Your Kai skills have neutralized the poisonous spores, but there is now hardly any air left to breathe. Fear wells up in your stomach as you feel your strength beginning to ebb.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect277">If you possess some Baylon<ch.apos/>s Fungi, <link-text>turn to 277</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect277">If you possess some Baylon<ch.apos/>s Bough Fungi, <link-text>turn to 277</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect136">If you do not possess this item, <link-text>turn to 136</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
       <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener<ch.apos/>s evil plan</quote> with <quote>Ceners<ch.apos/> evil plan</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ruel war-dogs</quote> with <quote>Ruel War-dogs</quote>. Replaced <quote>wag dogs</quote> with <quote>war-dogs</quote>. Replaced <quote>charge</quote> with <quote>charges</quote> in the illustrations caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>arching</quote> with <quote>arcing</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>sub-conscious</quote> with <quote>subconscious</quote>. Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect16">16</a>) Replaced <quote>sub-conscious</quote> with <quote>subconscious</quote>. Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>. Replaced <quote>Baylon<ch.apos/>s Fungi</quote> with <quote>Baylon<ch.apos/>s Bough Fungi</quote> as this is how you are told to record it in (cf. <bookref series="lw" book="11tpot"><cite>The Prisoners of Time</cite></bookref> <bookref series="lw" book="11tpot" section="sect146">Section 146</bookref>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>perpetuated</quote> with <quote>perpetrated</quote>. Replaced <quote>mid-air, then</quote> with <quote>mid-air, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Backpack item</quote> with <quote>Backpack Item</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote>another, then</quote> with <quote>another, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Replaced <quote>discoloration</quote> with <quote>discolouration</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect117">117</a>) Replaced <quote>divination</quote> with <quote>Divination</quote>. Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect119">119</a>) Replaced <quote>If you already possess Cener Robes</quote> with <quote>If you are already wearing a Cener Robe</quote> as all other references to the Cener Robe in this book are in the singular. Replaced <quote>one, or neither</quote> with <quote>one or neither</quote>.</p> 
-      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>tail, ridged</quote> with <quote>tail ridged</quote>.</p>
+<!--      <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>tail, ridged</quote> with <quote>tail ridged</quote>.</p>-->
       <p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>pit agarashi<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>Pit Agarashi<ch.apos/>s</quote>. Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect122">122</a>) Replaced <quote>seek council</quote> with <quote>seek counsel</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>inlayed</quote> with <quote>inlaid</quote>. Replaced <quote>antechamber, however</quote> with <quote>antechamber; however</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>breath, then</quote> with <quote>breath, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>ridge, then</quote> with <quote>ridge, and then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>hunch of maggoty</quote> with <quote>haunch of maggoty</quote>. Replaced <quote>shoulder, and</quote> with <quote>shoulder and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>hunch of maggoty</quote> with <quote>haunch of maggoty</quote>.</p>
+      <!--<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>shoulder, and</quote> with <quote>shoulder and</quote>.</p>-->
       <p>(<a idref="sect247">247</a>) Replaced <quote>Sloat</quote> with <quote>sloat</quote>. Replaced <quote>ante-rooms</quote> with <quote>anterooms</quote>. Replaced <quote>ante-room</quote> with <quote>anteroom</quote>. Replaced <quote>exposed heart, then</quote> with <quote>exposed heart; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect249">249</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>death cry</quote> with <quote>death-cry</quote>. Replaced <quote>steps, then</quote> with <quote>steps, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect273">273</a>) Replaced <quote>another, then</quote> with <quote>another, and then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>use it</quote> with <quote>use them</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect277">277</a>) Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>. Replaced <quote>stength</quote> with <quote>strength</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Split the choice about the two tunnels into two paragraphs, replaced <quote>you can investigate either the east tunnel (turn to 118)</quote> with <quote>you can investigate the east tunnel by turning to 118.</quote>, and replaced <quote>or the west tunnel (turn to 189)</quote> with <quote>Or you can investigate the west tunnel by turning to 189</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Split the choice about the two tunnels into two paragraphs, replaced <quote>you can investigate either the east tunnel (turn to 118)</quote> with <quote>you can investigate the east tunnel by <!--link-text-->turning to 118<!--/link-text-->.</quote>, and replaced <quote>or the west tunnel (turn to 189)</quote> with <quote>Or you can investigate the west tunnel by <!--link-text-->turning to 189<!--/link-text--></quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect285">285</a>) Replaced <quote>Sloat</quote> with <quote>sloat</quote>. Replaced <quote>spreadeagled</quote> with <quote>spread-eagled</quote>. Replaced <quote>Quarlen</quote> with <quote>Quarlen or the ruins of Maaken</quote> in the first choice. Replaced <quote>Quarlen</quote> with <quote>either of these locations</quote> in the second choice. Replaced <quote>jars and</quote> with <quote>jars, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect286">286</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> with <quote>remember to record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Backpack Item</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect18">Section 18</a>).</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect288">288</a>) Replaced <quote>Cener druid</quote> with <quote>Cener Druid</quote>. Replaced <quote>draw nearer, then</quote> with <quote>draw nearer; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>