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<publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2012</year><month>10</month><day>28</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2018</year><month>2</month><day>15</day></date>
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<p>You are the Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Kai Grand Master of Sommerlund. After the demise of the Darklords of Helgedad, the fearsome city-fortress of Kaag became a refuge for the remains of their broken armies. Defeated and powerless, these minions seemed doomed to live in bitter isolation from the rest of Magnamund. But now a new evil is stirring deep within the dungeons of Kaag<ch.ellips/></p>
<p>In <strong><cite>The Captives of Kaag</cite></strong>, you must venture alone into the black heart of Kaag, to free your friend from the forces which imprison him against his will. Will you succeed? Or will you and Banedon fall victim to the evil power which commands this fortress of nightmares?</p>
<p>The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the <a href="&link.rh;">Readers<ch.apos/> Handbook</a> for details.</p>
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- <p>If you have completed the previous <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure, remember to choose an additional Grand Master Discipline and add
+1 to your basic <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and +2 to your basic <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> (cf. <a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>).</p>
+ <p>If you have completed the previous <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure, remember to choose an additional Grand Master Discipline and add
<ch.plus/>1 to your basic <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <ch.plus/>2 to your basic <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> (cf. <a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>).</p>
</footnote>
</footnotes>
<footnotes>
<footnote id="discplnz-1-foot" idref="discplnz-1">
<p>Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>).</p>
- <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the +2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
- <p>Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.</p>
+ <p>If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of <bookref book="12tmod" section="imprvdsc">Mentora</bookref>, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a <quote>hidden loyalty bonus</quote> (cf. <a href="http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/NewsletterExcerpts#lwcn28">Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28</a>). In view of this, the <ch.plus/>2 Mentora bonus is therefore <em>not</em> cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.</p>
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</footnotes>
<p>Subtract the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of your enemy from this total. The result is your Combat Ratio. Enter it on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
<p>Example</p>
<p>Lone Wolf (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 27) is attacked by a pack of Doomwolves (<typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> 30). He is taken by surprise and is not given the opportunity of evading their attack. Lone Wolf has the Grand Master Discipline of Kai-surge to which the Doomwolves are not immune, so Lone Wolf adds 8 points to his <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>, giving him a total <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of 35.</p>
- <p>He subtracts the Doomwolf pack<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> from his own, giving a Combat Ratio of
+5. (35-30 = +5). +5 is noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as the Combat Ratio.</p>
+ <p>He subtracts the Doomwolf pack<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> from his own, giving a Combat Ratio of
<ch.plus/>5. (35-30 = <ch.plus/>5). <ch.plus/>5 is noted on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as the Combat Ratio.</p>
</li>
<li><p><a id="stage3">When you have your Combat Ratio</a>, pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</p></li>
<li>
<p>Turn to the <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a>. Along the top of the chart are shown the Combat Ratio numbers. Find the number that is the same as your Combat Ratio and cross-reference it with the random number that you have picked (the random numbers appear on the side of the chart). You now have the number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points lost by both Lone Wolf and his enemy in this round of combat. (E represents points lost by the enemy; LW represents points lost by Lone Wolf.)</p>
<p>Example</p>
- <p>The Combat Ratio between Lone Wolf and the Doomwolf Pack has been established as
+5. If the number picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> is a 2, then the result of the first round of combat is:</p>
+ <p>The Combat Ratio between Lone Wolf and the Doomwolf Pack has been established as
<ch.plus/>5. If the number picked from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> is a 2, then the result of the first round of combat is:</p>
<ul>
<li>Lone Wolf loses 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points (plus an additional 1 point for using Kai-surge).</li>
<li>Doomwolf Pack loses 7 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</li>
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<p>You swiftly catch up with the fleeing Vordak and draw your weapon in readiness to cut it down. The creature glances over its shoulder and, as you strike out at its skull-like head, it raises an iron mace in an attempt to parry the blow. It manages to deflect your attack, but you quickly raise your weapon to strike again.</p>
<combat><enemy>Vordak</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">22</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">28</enemy-attribute></combat>
+ <p>Remember to apply all the appropriate bonuses whilst using the Sommerswerd against this undead enemy.</p>
<choice idref="sect79">If you win this combat in three rounds or less, <link-text>turn to 79</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect284">If you win and the combat lasts four rounds or longer, <link-text>turn to 284</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the
+5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the
<ch.plus/>5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to <ch.plus/>8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="levels">Levels of Grand Mastership</a>) Replaced <quote>rank and titles</quote> with <quote>ranks and titles</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>commotion, and your presence, has</quote> with <quote>commotion<ch.emdash/>and your presence<ch.emdash/>has</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar guard</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim guard</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>the Sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote><em><ch.lsquot/>Detect Evil<ch.rsquot/></em></quote> with <quote><spell>Sense Evil</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>statuette</quote> with <quote>Statuette</quote>. Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replaced <quote>jewel encrusted bones and</quote> with <quote>jewel-encrusted bones, and</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>statuette</quote> with <quote>Statuette</quote>. Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replaced <quote>jewel encrusted bones and</quote> with <quote>jewel-encrusted bones, and</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>. Replaced <quote>not over, it</quote> with <quote>not over; it</quote>. Replaced <quote>mechanism, then</quote> with <quote>mechanism, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>tells you</quote> with <quote>tell you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>pin-point</quote> with <quote>pinpoint</quote>. Replaced <quote>dead end, then</quote> with <quote>dead end; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Bandedon</quote> with <quote>Banedon</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Replaced <quote>Spell of <spell>Holding</spell></quote> with <quote>spell of <spell>Holding</spell></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>god</quote> with <quote>God</quote>. Replaced <quote>draperies and</quote> with <quote>draperies, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>out-run</quote> with <quote>outrun</quote>. Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>not, or</quote> with <quote>not or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect116">116</a>) Replaced <quote>god</quote> with <quote>God</quote>. Replaced <quote>master of all evil</quote> with <quote>Master of all Evil</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect118">118</a>) Added <quote>Remember to apply all the appropriate bonuses whilst using the Sommerswerd against this undead enemy.</quote> as a reminder that the Vordak is an undead opponent.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect120">120</a>) Replaced <quote>surface then,</quote> with <quote>surface; then,</quote>. Replaced <quote>flickers, then</quote> with <quote>flickers, and then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect121">121</a>) Replaced <quote>semi-circular</quote> with <quote>semicircular</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>bridge, then</quote> with <quote>bridge, and then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe, then</quote> with <quote>safe; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>If you wish to keep this Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, mark it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item which you keep in your Backpack. If your Backpack is full you need not discard an item in its favour</quote> with <quote>If you wish to keep this Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, mark it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item. If you already carry the maximum number of items allowed, you will have to discard one in its favour</quote>. Replaced <quote>a Liganim</quote> with <quote>a Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replace <quote>sawdusted</quote> with <quote>sawdust-covered</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replace <quote>sawdusted</quote> with <quote>sawdust-covered</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>turn to the page</quote> with <quote>turn to the entry</quote> for clarity and consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>embellishment save</quote> with <quote>embellishment, save</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>Hurriedly you dispose of the Drakkar uniform and move</quote> with <quote>Hurriedly you move</quote> as you may not be wearing the Drakkarim uniform (cf. <a idref="sect347">Section 347</a>). Replaced <quote>If, in</quote> with <quote>If in</quote>. Replaced <quote>adventure, you</quote> with <quote>adventure you</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Emphasized <quote>inflammable</quote> to mirror <a idref="sect192">Section 192</a>. Replaced <quote>clear oily</quote> with <quote>clear, oily</quote>. Replaced <quote>clear oily <em>inflammable</em></quote> with <quote>clear, oily, <em>inflammable</em></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>cursing, then</quote> with <quote>cursing; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>eeks</quote> with <quote>ekes</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zag</quote> with <quote>zigzag</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>road, by</quote> with <quote>road by</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>fiery arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sentry</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sentry</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>Its sheer size and strength enables</quote> with <quote>Its sheer size and strength enable</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>impregnable, then</quote> with <quote>impregnable; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>avoid him</quote> with <quote>avoid it</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>a Liganim</quote> with <quote>a Ligan</quote>. Replaced <quote>another liganim</quote> with <quote>another Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>. Replaced <quote>here, then</quote> with <quote>here; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>similar fate, then</quote> with <quote>similar fate; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>cursing, then</quote> with <quote>cursing; then</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-screen, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Replaced <quote>Dajdokritzaga</quote> with <quote>Dajdokriitzaga</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>. Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
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