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         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, Neil McGrory, Peter Smyth, Christopher Turner, Simon Williams</dd>
+         <dd>Jan Charv<ch.aacute/>t, Benjamin Krefetz, David Kubecka, Neil McGrory, Peter Smyth, Christopher Turner, Simon Williams</dd>
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      </section>
        <p><quote>Show this relic,</quote> commands the warrior to your right.</p>
        <p>Hesitantly you reach into the satchel and fumble with the buckle, stalling for time.</p>
        <p><quote>Be quick,</quote> warns the other guard, reaching for a dagger with his free hand, <quote>or I shall open it for you.</quote></p>
-       <choice idref="sect61">If you possess either a Statue of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, the Dagger of Vashna, or Helshezag, <link-text>turn to 61</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect61">If you possess either a Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, the Dagger of Vashna, or Helshezag, <link-text>turn to 61</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect137">If you do not possess any of these Special Items, <link-text>turn to 137</link-text>.</choice>
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      </section>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Replaced <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 40<!--/link-text--></quote> with <quote><!--link-text-->turn to 40<!--/link-text-->.</quote>. Replaced <quote>approach, then</quote> with <quote>approach, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkarim handlers</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Handlers</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect94">94</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow in your quiver</quote> with <quote>Arrow in your Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>specially vulnerable</quote> with <quote>especially vulnerable</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lantern, a Torch, or a Tinderbox</quote> with <quote>Lantern, or a Torch <em>and</em> a Tinderbox</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect100">100</a>) Italicized the speech of the disembodied voice and removed the quotation marks. Replaced <quote>Zargarna</quote> with <quote>Zagarna</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect101">101</a>) Replaced <quote>your shoulders, then</quote> with <quote>your shoulders; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced <quote>moments, then</quote> with <quote>moments, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons and</quote> with <quote>weapons, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>that once comprised</quote> with <quote>that were once part of</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>irresistable</quote> with <quote>irresistible</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect238">238</a>) Replaced <quote>corpse, then</quote> with <quote>corpse; then</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>the sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>. Replaced <quote>conversation, then</quote> with <quote>conversation, and then</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>the sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>. Replaced <quote>conversation, then</quote> with <quote>conversation, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Statue of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar</quote> with <quote>Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar</quote> as everywhere else in this book (e.g. <a idref="sect176">Section 176</a>).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-surge</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen</quote>. <a idref="sect184">Section 184</a> speaks of <quote>powerful mind defences</quote>. Replaced <quote>see nothing, then</quote> with <quote>see nothing; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>wand-wielding liganim</quote> with <quote>wand-wielding Liganim</quote>. Replaced <quote>the escaping liganim</quote> with <quote>the escaping Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Emphasized <quote>inflammable</quote> to mirror <a idref="sect192">Section 192</a>. Replaced <quote>clear oily</quote> with <quote>clear, oily</quote>. Replaced <quote>clear oily <em>inflammable</em></quote> with <quote>clear, oily, <em>inflammable</em></quote>.</p>