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         <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>. Replaced <quote>gases, corrosive</quote> with <quote>gases, and corrosive</quote>. Replaced <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in <em>two</em> of the weapons listed below.</quote> with <quote>When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> series (Books 13<ch.endash/>20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete <cite>The Plague Lords of Ruel</cite> and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>. Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced <quote>smell and</quote> with <quote>smell, and</quote>. Added <quote> If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.</quote> to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>battle wounds</quote> with <quote>battle-wounds</quote>. Added Brian Williams<ch.apos/> Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced <quote>will be of use</quote> with <quote>may be of use</quote>. Added <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote> from the <a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a> section. Replaced <quote>Kai and Magnakai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Kai <ch.ampersand/> Magnakai Disciplines</quote> for consistency with later books. Replaced <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> Grand Master</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite></quote>. Replaced <quote>the next Grand Master adventure</quote> with <quote>the next <cite>Lone Wolf Grand Master</cite> adventure</quote>. Replaced <quote>darkness, and have</quote> with <quote>darkness and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>plants, and have</quote> with <quote>plants and have</quote>. Replaced <quote>Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase</quote> with <quote>Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase</quote>.</p>
 
-       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the <ch.plus/>5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Deleted <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed <quote>(see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> or <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the <ch.plus/>5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>. Replaced <quote>eg,</quote> with <quote>e.g.</quote>. Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai monastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Monastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>a sword or an axe</quote> with <quote>a Sword or an Axe</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapons</quote> with <quote>Weapons</quote>. Replaced <quote>weapon</quote> with <quote>Weapon</quote>. Removed <quote>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</quote>. Replaced <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Weapons List</a></quote> with <quote>record these on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a></quote> for clarity. Added <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Added <quote>It cannot be used to increase <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points immediately prior to a combat.</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote>on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to <ch.plus/>8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>commotion, and your presence, has</quote> with <quote>commotion<ch.emdash/>and your presence<ch.emdash/>has</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar guard</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim guard</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>the Sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>Banedon, then</quote> with <quote>Banedon; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect18">18</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote><em><ch.lsquot/>Detect Evil<ch.rsquot/></em></quote> with <quote><spell>Sense Evil</spell></quote>. Replaced <quote>Telegnosis, and</quote> with <quote>Telegnosis and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Discipline, or</quote> with <quote>Discipline or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>Huntmastery, and have</quote> with <quote>Huntmastery and have</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>statuette</quote> with <quote>Statuette</quote>. Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replaced <quote>jewel encrusted bones and</quote> with <quote>jewel-encrusted bones, and</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>statuette</quote> with <quote>Statuette</quote>. Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replaced <quote>jewel encrusted bones and</quote> with <quote>jewel-encrusted bones, and</quote> in the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>torch-lit</quote> with <quote>torchlit</quote>. Replaced <quote>not over, it</quote> with <quote>not over; it</quote>. Replaced <quote>mechanism, then</quote> with <quote>mechanism, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>tells you</quote> with <quote>tell you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect42">42</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect43">43</a>) Replaced <quote>pin-point</quote> with <quote>pinpoint</quote>. Replaced <quote>dead end, then</quote> with <quote>dead end; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect105">105</a>) Replaced <quote>Bandedon</quote> with <quote>Banedon</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Replaced <quote>Spell of <spell>Holding</spell></quote> with <quote>spell of <spell>Holding</spell></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect106">106</a>) Replaced <quote>god</quote> with <quote>God</quote>. Replaced <quote>draperies and</quote> with <quote>draperies, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>) Replaced <quote>out-run</quote> with <quote>outrun</quote>. Replaced <quote>discipline</quote> with <quote>Discipline</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>) Replaced <quote>not, or</quote> with <quote>not or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect113">113</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect115">115</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>spyhole</quote> with <quote>spy-hole</quote>. Replaced <quote>safe, then</quote> with <quote>safe; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>If you wish to keep this Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, mark it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item which you keep in your Backpack. If your Backpack is full you need not discard an item in its favour</quote> with <quote>If you wish to keep this Statuette of Sl<ch.ucirc/>tar, mark it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item. If you already carry the maximum number of items allowed, you will have to discard one in its favour</quote>. Replaced <quote>a Liganim</quote> with <quote>a Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect179">179</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replace <quote>sawdusted</quote> with <quote>sawdust-covered</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect180">180</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion. Replace <quote>sawdusted</quote> with <quote>sawdust-covered</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect181">181</a>) Replaced <quote>turn to the page</quote> with <quote>turn to the entry</quote> for clarity and consistency.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect185">185</a>) Replaced <quote>embellishment save</quote> with <quote>embellishment, save</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect186">186</a>) Replaced <quote>Hurriedly you dispose of the Drakkar uniform and move</quote> with <quote>Hurriedly you move</quote> as you may not be wearing the Drakkarim uniform (cf. <a idref="sect347">Section 347</a>). Replaced <quote>If, in</quote> with <quote>If in</quote>. Replaced <quote>adventure, you</quote> with <quote>adventure you</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Emphasized <quote>inflammable</quote> to mirror <a idref="sect192">Section 192</a>. Replaced <quote>clear oily</quote> with <quote>clear, oily</quote>. Replaced <quote>clear oily <em>inflammable</em></quote> with <quote>clear, oily, <em>inflammable</em></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect244">244</a>) Replaced <quote>cursing, then</quote> with <quote>cursing; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>louder, then</quote> with <quote>louder; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect245">245</a>) Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect246">246</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect248">248</a>) Replaced <quote>eeks</quote> with <quote>ekes</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>zig-zag</quote> with <quote>zigzag</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>road, by</quote> with <quote>road by</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect251">251</a>) Replaced <quote>fiery arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect304">304</a>) Replaced <quote>magician<ch.apos/>s guild</quote> with <quote>Magicians<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar sentry</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim sentry</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect305">305</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect307">307</a>) Replaced <quote>Its sheer size and strength enables</quote> with <quote>Its sheer size and strength enable</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect308">308</a>) Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect309">309</a>) Replaced <quote>impregnable, then</quote> with <quote>impregnable; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect310">310</a>) Replaced <quote>avoid him</quote> with <quote>avoid it</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect311">311</a>) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect320">320</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect324">324</a>) Replaced <quote>new-found</quote> with <quote>newfound</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect325">325</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines or</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Deleted <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect326">326</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text. Removed <quote> which you keep in your Backpack</quote> to avoid confusion.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect328">328</a>) Replaced <quote>a Liganim</quote> with <quote>a Ligan</quote>. Replaced <quote>another liganim</quote> with <quote>another Ligan</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect329">329</a>) Replaced <quote>potholes</quote> with <quote>pot-holes</quote>. Replaced <quote>here, then</quote> with <quote>here; then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect330">330</a>) Replaced <quote>similar fate, then</quote> with <quote>similar fate; then</quote>.</p>